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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    They're a little more sophisticated than that.
    Thank you, corrected.
     
  2. Sockmonkey

    Sockmonkey I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Yeah, I imagine it's just something that can reset your circadian rhythms.
     
  3. Z3r0Sama

    Z3r0Sama Not too sore, are you?

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    This. Grayvens seemed more realistic to me personally due to crossed wires and breakdown.
     
  4. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    That should say 'thought'.
     
  5. theaceoffire

    theaceoffire Versed in the lewd.

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    This is a warm and fuzzy moment, full of tenderness and good feeling.

    ...I am now terrified and paranoid!

    Bro, knock on all the wood everywhere! Or you/she/the planet/reality is going to die!
     
  6. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  7. BR549

    BR549 This is filth! FILTH!!

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    Counterpoint: Reed Richards and Susan Storm, who had their 47th anniversary this past year...
     
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  8. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    [​IMG]
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  9. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    Reading that last panel is a good reminder that not all the writers felt the same way about the Civil War plot.
     
  10. rkyeun

    rkyeun Cabbitus Maximus

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    It helps to want it.
    You can feel more than one emotion at once, after all.
     
  11. jasonh23761

    jasonh23761 Not too sore, are you?

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    Ok you see, this just ends up reminding me how unlikable Tony Stark can be without Robert Downey Jr.
     
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  12. Gantradies

    Gantradies Not too sore, are you?

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    You know,
    I came across a theory a while back, that believably postulated that stark spent the entire duration of civil war (and a fair time before) legally not in his right mind/mentally compromised-which would fit with how badly his clone/post-neural backup restore stark took finding out about civil war/killing one of his oldest friends…

    there was allegedly an incident involving him and several other supers and a freaky Friday-flip/morality inversion incident shortly before the arc started,
    and apparently he was never shown being cured/reverting on-page…
     
  13. Bud-E

    Bud-E Stand up so I can push you down!

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    Great Ceasers Ghost! I forgot how awful Reed was portrayed in Civil War... Not to say Reed has never been an awful husband & father cause he's skirted the line from abusive to villainous on multiple occasions. But to not be able to tell your children apart who are of different genders and ages and forgetting how many you have when you are around them constantly is so neglectful it's criminal.
     
  14. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Just to be clear, that's from a parody comic. Not actual Civil War.
     
  15. Sojiko

    Sojiko Getting sticky.

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    Shouldn't that be "the longest road"?
     
  16. Galacticplumber

    Galacticplumber Not too sore, are you?

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    Probably being treated as a direct noun in common dialect for those who play the game.
     
  17. Xmaster3000

    Xmaster3000 Know what you're doing yet?

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    Why are the two "e"s in italics?
     
  18. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    Oh, hey, Frank Miller's Civil War.
     
  19. Threadmarks: Past Participant (part 4)
    Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    16th September 2012
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    I can't help but smile as I look down on the Earth. Sure, Jade had to go to work, so we didn't really have time to discuss things in detail, but… Yeah, feeling good. I-.

    There's a near-hurricane force wind, and then New Kara is floating in front of me.

    "Hey, Paul! How's Kara doing?"

    "Which one?"

    Her eyes widen. "Is Demongirl talking?"

    "Ah, yes, but she's not responding to external stimuli."

    She tilts her head to the left. "So how do you know her name's Kara?"

    "Basic pattern recognition. She's not just a Supergirl, she's a kryptonian Supergirl. Based on all of the examples I have, those are called 'Kara'. But, yes, technically I don't know for certain."

    She smiles, tilting her head back proudly.

    "Then I'm technically right, and that's the best kind of right!"

    "Sure. I don't know that her name's 'Kara'. The other Kara is recovering."

    "So are you two going to date now?"

    "No. Still dating Jade."

    She looks at me uncertainly. "Are you dating Jade? I was starting to think she was Canadian."

    "Yes, and after a brief talk about our relationship, we're going to be moving in together in the Darkstars barracks."

    She blinks. "Are her parents okay about that?"

    "Ah… Her mother is? … Did you want something?"

    "Yes. I… Kinda need a job? Or something?"

    "Oh, right."

    "I've got plenty of qualifications but none of them of them are for Earth and… All my referees are dead. I could probably stay in High Admiral Har-Zod's asteroid, but it wasn't really designed for long-term habitation."

    "Your Zor-El didn't send you with a device to seed your own Fortress of Solitude?"

    "I would still need somewhere to put it, and everywhere is owned by someone."

    "Not everywhere. Plenty of space in Bir Tawil. The sand should be enough for your c-."

    Uh! Crushing!

    "I can move in with you?! Thank you!"

    There's a little more meat on this Kara than on Old Kara, and it's currently pressed against me as she celebrates her new residency. Alright, use the rings.

    "While you can live in the trade post if you want, it's more that I was offering you somewhere to plant your crystals."

    "I can live there while it grows?"

    "Certainly. It'll add visual interest."

    She leans back, grinning.

    "So we'll be roomies?!"

    "Ah-. No, as I said, I'll be living with Jade in the Darkstar barracks, so you'll… Pretty much have the place to yourself."

    "Oh." She sinks in the air, mood subdued. "That sounds lonely. Are there any cute animals?"

    "No, not really. There's basically nothing there; that's why no country actually wants it. You could.. always build a habitat?"

    "Then I could have all the animals I want!"

    "All the animals you can look after, certainly. Ah… Kara." I frown. "I've been meaning to ask: I don't seem to be able to see your emotions. You sound very upbeat, but if you're feeling-."

    "Torquasm." She nods. "Uncle Jor was a huge fan of ancient Kryptonian society, and Grandpa Seyg actually let him study things like that, so he really encouraged us to learn it. It'll be fun to work on it with Angelika!"

    "I'll be nice for her to have access to someone who could study the original texts. Ah, I don't.. really have anything that needs my attention right now, so I can help-"

    "Connection made to monitored phone line."

    "-you… Move in. Sorry. Answer?"

    "Hey. Paul."

    Truggs.

    "Nice. Trick. With. Super. Hearing. Have. To. Use. Voice. Modulator. And. Even. Better. Sound. Proofing."

    "Why are you phoning me, Truggs?"

    "I'm. Explaining. My. Plan. We."

    "I'm not interested in listening to you w-."

    I glance at Kara.

    "Pleasure yourself to the sound of your own voice, Truggs. I'd put up with it if I thought there was any chance of you turning your back on the Light, but that's clearly not going to happen."

    "Demon. Supergirl. There. Are. More. Where. She. Came. From."

    "Obviously."

    "They. Know. We. Took. Her. And. They. Know. Where. We. Are."

    "Why am I not surprised?"

    "Supervillain."

    I could ask 'why?', but I don't suppose that it matters at this stage. There are plenty of reasons for travelling between parallel universes, and I can't check his motivation.

    "You. Could. Send. Her. Back."

    "I'll check with an expert or two, but I really doubt that Demon Earth will just give up like that. If they can reach us, we'll become their next expansion target. It's not worth trying to give them anything to delay things."

    "Your. Choice."

    "No, it's not, and I'll be warning the Justice League."

    "Thank. You. For. Getting. Rid. Of. The. Legion. Not. Thank. You. For-."

    "Just go away, Truggs. End."
     
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  20. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Because that's how the character is enunciating it.
     
  21. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    You're right even if you're not fully right.

    An easy mistake to make.

    Her mother probably is.

    If her father isn't, then she's all the more likely to do it.

    Paul, you really need to stop getting close to teenage girls.

    Well she can help the other Kryptonian, or part Kryptonians, get more powerful.

    Angelika is helping them but she only has partial knowledge of Kryptonian martial arts.

    'interested in'
     
  22. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    So, Earth 16 and Earth 10 will team up against Demon Earth? Or will more parallel universes be involved in this?
     
  23. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Or it could just be Earth 16 for now and all those Nazi World snippets are kinda like teasers for another potential crisis.
     
  24. FeepingCreature

    FeepingCreature Not too sore, are you?

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    I think the scenario here is more "teenage girls getting close to him and also they're superstrong so nobody can stop them" aaand I realize as I'm writing this that this isn't actually less creepy, is it.

    Well maybe a bit.
     
  25. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    Was Truggs only purpose here to warn of Demon Earth?

    I think part of it was to prove to Paul he isn't scared and can adapt to his methods. Me thinks he wants Paul impressed of him.

    So be careful to not show too much disdain Paul, or he will go all yandere on your ass
     
  26. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    I think he's already done that.
     
  27. mastermenthe

    mastermenthe Mint Thistle

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    Isn't that the driving plot device of Tenshi Muyo?
     
  28. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  29. King of Frost

    King of Frost Wishing I was somewhere colder no doubt.

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    This version of Kara is a real treat. Her boundless enthusiasm meshes nicely with OL's more calculated way of talking.

    Her golden/silver age ways of thinking and expressing herself are being communicated nicely. And I'm genuinely going to miss her once this Crisis of Infinite Supergirls or whatever is gonna happen is over.
     
  30. SaltyWaffles

    SaltyWaffles I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Yeah, I fully agree with this. The story increasingly feels like a string of isolated episodes with little to nothing bridging them together.
     
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