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Recent content by Ash Craig

  1. On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    Is this supposed to say "the bridge of her nose" instead? I'm sorry, what. As someone unfamiliar with most of the setting, I enjoy these little hints towards details I don't yet see. Also, I didn't realize your comment about Air Groove's trauma was serious rather than a joke, which is...

  2. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    Wasn’t Salem’s father a madman who locked her in a tower?

  3. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    First of all, thank you so much for your compliments, it really means a lot, especially since you were the original writer of the snippet! As for your comments on my ideas, for the Yang abandoning her post, I thought that making her responsible for her team might force her to not just chase...

  4. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    So, this snippet has stuck in my head, and I want to see more of it. What would the teams look like? As for Ruby's partner, Weiss won't work since unlike in canon neither of them will be trying to make a connection, Yang is an awful idea since Ruby needs a degree of separation from her family...

  5. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    The idea of Blake being the only sane* one is just too hilarious to not love. *Relatively sane I'm going to be honest, my first reaction to the bottom right one was "Why does Madeline have a gun?!?!"

  6. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    Beware of Chicken. Why? Just… why? You had so much potential for characters, but you use the same set for everything, almost never explore how characters outside the main cast influence the characters or world, and seem to believe that you're limited to Monty's original set of characters for...

  7. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    The first thing any Huntsmas is taught is that their semblance is a unique expression of their soul. But what does that mean? Is a semblance something you are born with, based on an aspect of your being that will never change, or is the soul something more mutable, defined by the circumstances...

  8. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    That is… deeply disturbing, and it just makes me more uncomfortable the more I think about it. Perhaps he is bound by his nature as a destroyer, and simply cannot understand humanity? The Grimm were an attempt at a gift to humanity, a way to purge the world of negativity, not understanding how...

  9. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    That's cute. I like the idea that Salem and Ozma still have the things that made them fall in love the first time, and it was just Salem and Oz's differing stances on new humanity that broke them apart the first time, and the deaths of their daughters salting the earth, so to speak. (My...

  10. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    This gives me an amusing idea based on that. Basically, at some point before the dance, Jaune does something that makes Weiss reevaluate him, and she starts to get interested. Pyrrha is extremely displeased, but Weiss thinks it's because Pyrrha holds a grudge for her treatment of Pyrrha's...

  11. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    I also like the idea that Jaune just didn't realize they were dating, and literally everyone else thought they were a couple. Blake was taking it very slow due to past relationship trauma, and didn't realize Jaune wasn't on the same page as her, so it's not like they were kissing in the...

  12. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    At what point does everyone admit that the reason they haven't stopped this is because they want it to be real? Or are these snips secretly prequels to This snip? I like the idea of Ozpin as a carrier of legacies, someone who collects information and cultures so that they will never be truly...

  13. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    I’d say keep it subtle in the big cities, and mainly have it out in the countryside, so Blake can keep her idealized version of Menagerie. (She was what, twelve when she was last there?) I’m not saying Menagerie has to be bad, but it would only make sense if Blake’s perception of it was tinted...

  14. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    There would also definitely be an aspect of wanting to be like her parents in there, having grown up on stories of the injustice they fought against, which would only compound the guilt and shame at losing her way. Also, she was a kid at the time, and she grew up knowing that the White Fang was...

  15. [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    I understand that he’s not actually using genetics, which is why I found the silver eyes notable. If he has silver eyes, it means that someone else with silver eyes tried this, and there were either enough of them or a particularly influential one for that to manifest over other possible. I...
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