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    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    take hold ((Also, as a Canadian, American cheese is fine. I don't like it on sandwiches, but for sauce it's great.))
  2. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    information from my
  3. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Lords of Hell, (or possibly) Compared to any Lord of Hell,
  4. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    my face
  5. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Her clothing
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    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    jog past
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    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    rods - or
  8. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Missing capital.
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    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    meeting room.
  10. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Missing capitalisation after the ellipses.
  11. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    I frown as
  12. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Missing punctuation after occupied. His looping evasive pattern glancing hit to throws up with his mouth-. (Or 'throws up with his mouth sealed.') Also, the lack of any punctuation on OL's 'dialogue' is ever so slightly jarring. Might want to consider single quotes or italics or something.
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    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    followed my pheromone
  14. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Extra quotation mark at the end.
  15. FuzzyZergling

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Since nobody quoted your post so you might've missed the answer: his name is Paul, which no Paul-the-MC can say, including Grayven.
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