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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    I like him. I don't agree with him, but I like him.
     
  2. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Because I am sure nobody has tried molecular disruption before either. :rolleyes:
     
  3. Mquz

    Mquz Versed in the lewd.

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    Not molecular disruption - he’s literally melting through the walls with extreme temperature. Still won’t do much good, but helps.
     
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  4. Gantradies

    Gantradies Not too sore, are you?

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    ... you know, if he's capable of hearing, i wonder if extreme-power sonic weapons would have any effect, assuming the room hasnt depressurized yet-
    i mean, its been proven irl (by one of Nazi Germany's MANY wunderwuffre programs that failed to make a field-useable product- it was too slow to effect a target that wasn't restrained AND hilariously fragile ) that you can literally shake someone apart with focused sound- even if it'd just cause tempory disorientation, it could be useful...
     
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  5. Buggy123

    Buggy123 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    A simple lesson: If at first it doesn't work, use more. A philosophy best paired with kinetics, but it probably works just fine with molecular disruption, too.
     
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  6. Sordid Snake

    Sordid Snake (Verified Viper)

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    That is gridfire, only expressed in DC cosmology, isn't it?
     
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  7. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Is gridfire purple?
     
  8. BR549

    BR549 This is filth! FILTH!!

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    Blinding white light. Although the principle is exactly the same: 'admit energy from the Grid/the Bleed to the normal universe to blow stuff up real good'.
     
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  9. l---erddad---l

    l---erddad---l Wait, google can see this?

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    I'm pretty sure that Bleed power-generation technology functions by using the Bleed to create an area where physics doesn't work right, so it's possible to get more energy out of some processes than you put in, hence unlimited energy.
     
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  10. Buggy123

    Buggy123 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    It's sort of similar, I'd say:

    Gridfire takes advantage of the multidimensional physics of the universe to extract energy from higher dimensions, in a extremely destructive manner.

    Bleed-based energy-actualization takes advantage of the metaphysics of the multiverse (the Bleed) to temporarily alter physics to create energy from nothing, in a extremely destructive manner.

    Pretty similar, but I think there's still a important distinction in that Gridfire is just taking energy from somewhere else while obeying the (true) laws of physics of the universe, while Bleed-actualization is making energy using metaphysics, because energy isn't a metaphysical property in DC so you can alter/make it to your hearts content once you're toying with metaphysics.

    Don't forget, the Culture universe actually has a multiverse, of which we see like a 3-4 sentence glimpse that describes nothing. All the messing about they do with dimensions (FTL, gridfire, 4 dimensional construction, etc) is all just taking advantage of one single universe, without actually getting into the physics between universes (metaphysics).
     
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  11. Baladar

    Baladar Know what you're doing yet?

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    And the new guy bursts in like the Kool-Aid Man!
     
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  12. dxdragon

    dxdragon Experienced.

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    Okay, I like him. He seems like a guy Paul and....the time travelling villain rival?.....could talk to about stuff, instead of just another face puncher.

    You know, one would think that Paul would run through his mind all the giant armors that can't be scanned in his head that exist in DC. Anti-Monitor seems the most likely.
     
  13. Siskulous

    Siskulous Know what you're doing yet?

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    It's been a while since Paul's had any comic book inspired revelations. I'm beginning to wonder if he's forgotten where he came from. I mean, Grayven certainly has.
     
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  14. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    What was the Bleed again?
     
  15. Navi-Hank

    Navi-Hank An engine fuled by spite

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    Space between realities. It doesn't have any rules, so you can make your own.
     
  16. Someguy Somewhere

    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    No No No No.

    The LAST time we had a multiple Lantern universal Exit plan we ended up with this:
    [​IMG]
     
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  17. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Dude....Larfleeze would swallow up the entire Federation so fast it would make the Borg look like baby toys in comparison.
     
  18. l---erddad---l

    l---erddad---l Wait, google can see this?

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    That's the thing, as I understand it there isn't any metaphysics involved: The idea is that the area between universes doesn't follow the physical laws of any universe, except that the closer you are to a universe the more you follow those physical laws. Because of that, Bleed Generators work by creating a confined area of space which {either acts as if it is or is actually} far enough away from the universe that the laws of physics are different. Because of that, you can use the altered physics to do something that would usually not produce extra energy, because you can't create energy from nothing, that does because of the altered physics.

    Also, funny enough, Grammerly tried to tell me that "can't create energy from nothing" is actually either "can't create energy from anything" or "can create energy from nothing", which was kind of weird. Lol
     
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  19. Enochi

    Enochi Having way to much fun with AI.

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    Okay I want more banter from this guy. He is much better at it then most.
     
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  20. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    And in DC comics, as shown in Superman Beyond, apparently literally blood, or fairly close.

    The Monitors are space vampires, and they drink the Bleed.

    So the Bleed is like an ocean that the universes float in like islands.

    Not without a power source, the lanterns showed up with their rings and the clothes on of their backs in Star Trek/Green Lantern.

    Which means the only way to increase charge was the blue power rings' perpetual motion benefit, which was expanded to being able to recharge rings of other colors than green.

    This was before DC made Larfleeze his own lantern.

    That is until they discovered the remains of a native manhunter, which revealed that the Star Trek universe has its own Oa. The native Guardians had yet to get around to making a Green Lantern Corps though. The second story ended with Hal deciding that it would be a good idea to check out the coordinates of Krypton to see if there was a planet about to explode.
     
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  21. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I'm just hearing a lot of Blah, Blah.

    The U.S.S God-damn-it-nothing-fucking-works, that can't scan because "Radiation" (The shit space is full of), breaks every other day, and operates under a doctrine of "Kick my ass for a while" isn't going to do jack shit against a Lantern. Let alone Larfleeze. He'd probably eat half the Federation just looking for a recharge source.

    And you just know crews trained in the "Dipshit's R Us" academy would poke him the second they came across some "Strange light."

    I mean, the thinking of your usual Federation captain and crew tends to go.

    "Captain! We appear to have found some shit!"

    "Well, scan that shit."

    "It's no good Sir. The area seems to be filled with Fuck you Radiation."

    "Damn it! Space is full of that! Oh if only we had known when we built our ships."

    "Well, what should we do?"

    "It isn't clear? Fly into that shit!"

    *Ass kicking commences*

    "Captain! The shit is trying to kill us!"

    "Well...fuck. Captain to engineering. Do we happen to have any leftover plot?"

    "You know we don't keep continuity Captain."

    "Yes....yes it was foolish to think something that had worked once, would ever work again."

    "Orders sir?"

    "Hmm....if we jibber-jab up the flibby-fuck....we might just..."

    "We'd have to reverse the inverse proton hadron collider slider."

    "Yes...yes...make it so."

    *Stupid shit occurs.*

    "Wow...that was close. Let's mark that in the log."

    *Later*

    "Captain! We've found some shit!"
     
  22. Buggy123

    Buggy123 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    And that's without even getting in to the more worrying aspects of the Federation. Need I mention the sentient holodeck characters/holographic doctors/androids/ship-computer-struck-by-space-lightning that seem to spring up from time to time, and the general reaction of "Damnit, it started philosophizing about the nature of existence again. La Forge! Get up here and reset the holodeck!".


    Or the mess that is the Prime Directive; sure, no interfering sounds good... except that planet is dying from a horrible disease, and that one is about to get hit by a giant meteor, and that one...

    Oh well, just wash our hands of it. I'm sure they'll be fine. And i'm sure that if they survive, when they reach space they definitely won't realize that we chose not to help, and definitely won't start a war over it.
     
  23. Someguy Somewhere

    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    Ah, but that comic is the Kelvin Timeline....so the '%^$# You Radiation' comes with blinding amounts of lens flair and bloom.

    I won't suffer the horrors of mixing Super Hero's with Star Trek....that way lies Madness.

    [​IMG]
     
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  24. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    I got both comics and the movel of that one. Crazy stuff and amusing moments like Picard/Xavier comparisons and the Beast/Bones moment.
     
  25. Threadmarks: Ways and Means (part 17)
    Mr Zoat

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    24th January
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    How did he even get-?

    Telekinetically-excited flame-flesh leaps for Devlos, who fires a purple bubble-beam at it. The purple energy blasts through with no visible effort and Mr van Wyck is forced to frantically dart aside.

    "Come to die, stranger?"

    No, no, this location was on charts. It got destroyed once. There are other places he could have found out about it. Interesting that he was able to bypass the interdiction fields, but hardly astonishing. There are so few faster than light telekines that there is a proportionate dearth of countermeasures. In fact, all of the ones on file involve getting more telekines on the other side to work against it.

    Mr van Wyck flits around to try and evade the purple beams. Devlos doesn't appear to be putting all that much effort into it, firing just enough to keep his foe in motion. Mr van Wyck attempts to block a shot with a flaming barrier, but that doesn't resist the purple bubbles of doom any better than his attack construct did.

    "Are you-? Are you a pirate?"

    And Mr van Wyck doesn't know what he's blundered into. Though I suppose that I should take it as a compliment that he attacked the other fellow rather than me. With the air drifting out of the station my attempt at a disease attack is now doomed to fail. Some diseases can cope with a vacuum but none of those are likely to be highly lethal to Devlos. And it looks like his armour is airtight anyway. Would a phasing-based attack work better? Phase through the armour and release the disease before he can trigger an anti-phasing defence?

    "I am Devlos Ungol the Traitor! Murderer of billions!"

    No, he said that he lived this long because of his armour. There are plenty of ways to integrate medical functions into armour, and most of them would neutralise it before it could kill him. It's sub-Ebola in terms of time-to-kill anyway, I just wanted to put him on a clock. Something that might kill him where the constructs of two veteran Green Lanterns clearly failed.

    "But are you a pirate?"

    Assuming there's a man in there, and it isn't just an AI patterned after him. Or a remote-controlled drone. The second would be out of character, but the first is a little more likely. And then there's whatever this force field is made of. In theory I should be able to FEED on it, but cocking about with the Bleed is one of those things I've been trying to avoid. Assuming that's even what is going on here.

    "Who are you?"

    "I'm Effigy."

    Devlos fires two more blasts, then turns his helmet my way. "Is this some sort of joke?"

    Beam singularities didn't work. But I can clearly see him. I generate a laser construct and fire it directly at his faceplate, but again there's no sign that any energy is actually being conveyed. I switch weapon, but the positron beam doesn't do any better.

    "I'm-"

    Vertigo inducers? Nothing. Sonic weapon? Nothing.

    "-undecided."

    Devlos negligently raises his left hand to destroy my gun construct. "What is this? A man already on fire and a Lantern who can barely make constructs? Has this region forgotten me?"

    Barely.. make..?

    I suppose he was beaten by people using the standard Green Lantern style. Maybe giant construct boxing gloves are the way to go?

    A ring of hydraulic ram constructs surrounds him as he traps Mr van Wyck against a wall, construct columns ramming inwards. He jerks a little, then spins his entirely unencumbered arms around and slashes my constructs to orange vapour.

    Hm. Did his armour just fail to absorb kinetic force? Or was he not paying attention, or..? Can it only absorb one form of energy at a time?

    My one surviving ram hammers down on him again and he raises his hands to destroy it, apparently ignoring the psi-shock grenade I deposit next to him. It detonates and I replace it with another, rapidly creating additional rams with which to strike him and dismissing the ones he blasts at before he can destroy them. His movements are… Slightly less coordinated, but I'm still not really getting the impression that I'm doing him significant harm.

    Mr van Wyck takes the opportunity to disengage, flying around the force field and the few remaining robotic arms to join me.

    "Who is this?"

    "Devlos Ungol."

    "I thought he was dead."

    "You and lots of other people. How did you find this place?"

    "I went to the old Green Lantern's homeworld. Research, like you said. It's public knowledge that he came here so I thought I'd check it out."

    Devlos glows purple, and all of my constructs around him fade.

    "Is he a pirate?"

    "He was the commander of the genocidal fleet the survivors of which became the pirates after he was apparently killed. I don't know what he's been doing since."

    "Close enough. How about we try hitting him together?"

    "His armour is absorbing everything and his blasts destroy any construct either of us send at him. Are you telepathic?"

    "No?"

    "Sometimes 'hit them really hard' isn't the solution. Can you make a hydraulic ram?"

    "I prefer spears."

    "Ragh!"

    Devlos unleashes another surge of purple energy, then points our way. Purple arcs shit! I press myself as close to the force field as I can without quite touching it, and Mr van Wyck's flame constructs flare as he tries to dart after me. The shots Devlos sent my way either expend themselves on the force field as they can't quite follow the curve of its surface, or fly past and punch more holes in the hull. Mr van Wyck-

    "Aagh!"

    -takes a couple of glancing hits, flaming wounds appearing on his right arm and the right side of his mask. Devlos takes the opportunity to try flying up around the force field to get a clear shot at us, the glow around his hands slowly building up again. A recharge time?

    "Effigy, move."

    I fly down, forming railguns loaded with crumbler rounds and sending a filament in the other direction to try and drop off a psi-shock grenade. Small jet constructs form on the sides of my railguns as he tries to curve shots around to shoot them and I have to thrust them out of the way, but I get a clear shot-

    "That fucking hurt!"

    Mr van Wyck flies backwards after me, sending sheets of flame around to strike at Devlos. Devlos waves his left hand in their direction to shred them, but that does make it harder for him to shoot my railguns. Filament in place

    I detonate the grenade and begin cycling in replacements even as I move my railguns into line of sight and fire! Crumbler rounds slam-.

    Right into a purple energy field.

    "A telepathic attack! I wondered what that was!"

    He turns his left hand towards my covert filament and destroys it with another purple beam.

    "I've adapted. My mind is stronger than your weak weapons! Now die!"

    I switch one of my railguns for a larger psi-shock grenade and detonate that.
     
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  26. gustyeagle

    gustyeagle Know what you're doing yet?

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    Anyone else think that OL should have got a thinking cap a long time ago?
     
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    Basically, fight fire with fire. Logical, I suppose.

    Mr van Wyck attempts to block a shot with a flaming barrier...

    Though I suppose that I should take it as a compliment that he attacked...

    Crud, that's a scary thought: an entire army of these guys, complete with Uberhax armor.

    "...Because it's not very funny..."

    ...no sign that any energy is actually being conveyed.

    ...That would be a weaksauce weakness. The uberhax super-soldier, who can be defeated by punching him. The challenge being getting close enough.

    Mid-combat experimentation time!

    I presume you meant 'psi-shock grenade I' here?

    ...dismissing the ones he blasts at before he can destroy them.

    ...You basically asked for directions? <facepalm> The height of investigative skills.

    "...So, is that a 'yes'?"

    I press myself as close to the force field as I can without quite touching it...

    Small jet constructs form on the sides of my railguns...

    ...and I have to thrust them out of the way, but I get a clear shot-

    Well, at least van Wyck is making himself useful as a distraction.

    Headache time.

    I'm guessing this one took a bit of work, looking at the errors, Mr Zoat? Still some good action.
     
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    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    I will admit I still get a chuckle about Logan walking into Ten Forward and ordering a 'Warrior's Drink' and Guinan give's him Worf's preferred beverage.
     
  29. Handlewithcare

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    Well, for some reason he never went the full Transhuman/One-person-Singularity route.

    Also, I think it's time for both of them to disengage.

    The Honden of Avarice sounds like a safer bet than this guy.
     
  30. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    should
     
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