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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    Apparently, I don't know, and probably by being better at killing than them.
     
  2. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    What episode did we see him working like this in? I can't remember anything like that.
     
  3. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    Excavation is probably the most direct reference -- LexCorp managing to have deniability about anything criminal. Cadmus was another example, with the questionable practices being completely off the books and Lex disavowing those actions when they came to light.

    EDIT: The way the Light hires thugs is another good example. Paid off the books by an anonymous party so the patsy can't tie anything back to him.
     
  4. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Off the lexcorp books doesn't mean that there's no trail that Paul in snake-mode using hyperscan can't find.
     
  5. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    Oh, sure. That doesn't change the fact that Lex OPERATES that way, it just means that there's a more powerful player in the game that can trump his defenses, given sufficient desire to do so.

    Reading through Excavation again, the mafia don tendencies are even more on display than I remembered:

     
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  6. Mquz

    Mquz Versed in the lewd.

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    Not necessarily admissible as actual evidence. As noted at the beginning of the last episode, when he’s talking to the police, a lot of evidence from superpowers is not admissible in court, since the justice system isn’t built for it. It’s also theoretically easy for him to fake evidence, which he refuses to do for moral reasons. At most, he can get evidence that would possibly allow an investigation due to suspicion, but there won’t be any evidence pointing directly to Luthor when the police come, and since Lex isn’t proving an immediate obvious threat to anyone’s safety, mind control/ truth magic is illegal, and asking questions pertaining to Luthor under mind control is also illegal, and weak evidence due to it being an eyewitness account.

    Luthor is getting off scot free unless they can catch him red handed, which he never is, or (and less definitely) with the paperwork in his office (and even that can be gotten out of).
     
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  7. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Not necessarily inadmissible. It's always surprising how some people can just deny possibilities like it's set in stone that it cannot be.
     
  8. Mquz

    Mquz Versed in the lewd.

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    True, but this is Murphy’s law, and the law of narrativium. It’s a much better possible story if Luthor survives. He actually makes sense as a realistic villain and has a chance of becoming a productive member of society. Basically, the way he’s written by Zoat, it’d take an act of author fiat to get rid of him.
     
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  9. Simonbob

    Simonbob Really? You don't say.

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    Nah, it simply requires a different group to hit him.

    The law, Lex can handle. Most supers? Them too.

    If something else hits him in the right way, he might go 'Squish'.


    There's also the idea of a 'Anti-Mafia' task force getting him, after a long investigation. That's possible too.
     
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  10. Ardy

    Ardy I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Wait, there was a second genocide??? The citadelians were one, but there was another?

    Damnit Paul, you were soo close, almost a whole 6 months without a mass murder!
     
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  11. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    The people whose religion/main god required women to be rendered blind when they reached marriage able age.
     
  12. Ganurath

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    That's not genocide, that's theocide.
     
  13. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Oh no. He killed their religion, and a vast majority of their adherents who performed the stuff, or wanted to fight for that stuff.
     
  14. Threadmarks: Doppelgängered (part 3)
    Mr Zoat

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    1st February
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    "Frederick, I think you should think very carefully about-."

    He fires the second barrel of his shotgun directly into Richard's chest, forcing him to brace himself slightly.

    "The fuck are you?!"

    "Now, Frederick, think it through. Why would the result-"

    He turns to run, then trips over one of his net-entrapped colleagues.

    "-be different the second time?"

    Richard steps forward and handcuffs Frederick's ankles together before he can get back on his feet.

    "You know, it used to be that when people shot at me I had to dodge."

    "If you really miss it I could clone you a new body?"

    He pantomimes thinking for a moment, then shakes his head. "Nah, I'm good."

    "Uh uh uh!"

    Frederick tries to get to his feet, trips, and-

    "Uuuughfuckin'idiot!"

    -thumps his bound colleague on the back, causing his face to smack into the pavement.

    Richard winces in sympathy. "Okay, I'm calling this a mercy arrest." He effortlessly pulls Frederick's arms behind his back and cuffs him there as well. "Now, can you lie still or do I have to gas you?"

    "Ah, excuse me?" A woman in Congregation uniform jogs down the road towards us. "Can I help?"

    Richard nods. "I think we're freaking them out. Could you sit on them until the police get here?"

    "Sure, I can do that! Just a sec." She closes her eyes and bows her head, then two other Congregationalists flash into being next to her. "Do they have any serious injuries?"

    "Fuckin'idiotbrokem'fuckin'nose!"

    "No, no they don't." I glance at Richard, but he doesn't appear concerned in any way. "Thank you for your assistance." I take a data stick out of subspace and put onto it a full recording of the period leading up to the 'fight', as well as the confrontation itself. "Please hand this over to the officer in charge."

    She takes it. "Can do!" I nod, smile, and-. "Ah..?"

    "Gotham police are well used to this sort of thing, it won't be-."

    Richard walks forward with pen in hand as she pulls out a small notebook and holds it out towards him. "Who do I make it out to?"

    "S-shannon?"

    "Sure." He signs it and then turns to me. "Oh El?"

    I take it, and… I've never been all that sure what to put on these. The few times a 'fan' gets me in a position where I feel obliged to do this I just sign 'Orange Lantern', but Shannon here is actually being a useful auxiliary. 'Thank you for your assistance, Illustres, Orange Lantern Corps'. I look at it for a moment. Yeah, that should do. I float the book and the data stick to Shannon and the pen back to Richard.

    "Thankyou!"

    I look over to Richard. "Want a lift-"

    He crouches and then leaps, easily passing the third floor and landing on the roof.

    "-up? Okay then."

    I fly up after him, following as he begins to parkour across the rooftops.

    "Are we expecting anything else to happen this evening?"

    "Nah, not really. To be honest, things have gotten a lot quieter lately."

    "Have they?"

    "Yeah. I mean, Batman broke up the old families-"

    "With a little help from Mr Dent."

    "They were going down anyway. And once that happened, it was only a matter of time until City Hall and the police got cleaned out. Right now, we're seeing record low unemployment, so street crime's way down. Most of the 'theme criminals' are either in Arkham or Belle Reve."

    "Not Blackgate?"

    "No, the warden agreed that putting gangs with their bosses wasn't a great idea."

    "Are the Congregation making themselves useful?"

    "Yeah. They're so popular in Gotham now that it's almost like having a city-wide surveillance system. And they trust the police enough to actually contact them when they hear about something."

    "No internal corruption?"

    "Nothing substantial substantiated." We come to the end of the block and he accelerates, easily leaping from one side of the road to the other.

    "You know you.. could just use a kinetic belt for that."

    He lands in a roll, then springs to his feet again. "Sure, if I wanted to take all the fun out of this."

    "How are things with your foster-mother?"

    "It's…" He slows to a jog, then stops completely. "Well, my Arabic's getting better. She's… More… I think she's trying to Mom me, but she comes off more like she's conducting an interrogation."

    "She did grow up in the League of Shadows. But I'm sure that your future brothers and/or sisters will be grateful to you for wearing down her rough edges."

    "I'll remind them." He looks over the city rooftops for a moment, then turns back to me. "So. Zatanna's birthday?"

    "Y.. es."

    "Are you… Going..?"

    "How is.. she.. doing?"

    "Not all of us have your empathic vision, Oh El." He sighs quietly. "She seems… Okay? She's been spending more time with her school friends, and… Working on her stage act. She's going to be joining Mister Zatara on his next residency."

    "That sounds… That sounds good?"

    "She knows it wasn't going to work out. With you." I nod. "Was it.. the Star Sapphire, making her act like that?"

    "No, it was Drakul Karfang making her act like that. But… No. I.. had some people check the wards on the staff. They weren't breached, and they were doing what they were meant to. But drawing on its power required that she focus on love. And she wasn't just doing that for the fight with Nabu, and she didn't stop afterwards. Every time she used magic, she was focusing on how much she.. loved me. Thinking about the things that made her love me."

    "Kinda like how I ended up bulletproof."

    "No, if.. she'd called the Predator, I'd be trapped in a block of violet crystal right now. But… Yes, it's a similar idea. The enchantments contained the corruption, not the normal psychological effects." I sigh. "But… I don't want her to think that she's completely alienated me. I still.. like her. I only-."

    "You're only staying away because you want her to get better."

    I nod. "I don't think… Maybe after the birthday party? Would that work?"

    "I think she'd appreciate it."

    "Then that's what I'll do. So… What's your uncle up to these days?"
     
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  15. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    ...Is there such a thing as a foster stepmother?
     
  16. DAT_NOOB

    DAT_NOOB Accused of writing in a far away land

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    does this mean we're not gonna get psycotic magical girl on a killing spree?
     
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  17. Z000

    Z000 If this is trash, then find me in the dumpster

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    yes

    not that weird

    something people who adopt kid do get marry, so foster-step parent are a thing
     
  18. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Ah, bulletproof Robin. Always a shock to the criminals.

    ...Bit too much in this case...

    Seriously, this guy does not give up...

    Oh yeah, these guys are a thing.

    So much handier than a simple bodycam.

    Dangit, OL, how did you miss that cue?

    I can just hear the squeeing fangirl tone of voice. :D

    Saves on bat-grapples, I suppose.

    So, Gotham is pretty close to cleaned up. Barring new loonies.

    And he's still doing the dumb word thing. Total teenage boy.

    Lack of motherly experience. She'll learn.

    ...Ulp.

    I'm guessing that's a tour run? Or like a Vegas casino show season?

    "No, it was Drakul Karfang making her act like that.


    It was always a bad idea. But it was a necessary bad idea.

    Yeah, hanging around would be rubbing it in her face. Or maybe like an itchy scab...

    Nice to see Robin again outside of the team missions. Good to see he's been getting used to powers.
     
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  19. Ace Dreamer

    Ace Dreamer Questioning The Nature of our Realities

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    I guess we're trying to figure-out who or what has been 'doppelgangered' while waiting for the other shoe to drop... One of the more interesting use of 'doppelganger' is the The Merchant Princes books by Charles Stross, where it is a means of stopping bypassing physical security by using travel from a parallel Earth. But, Mr Zoat is a lot more sneaky than that, so I doubt it is anything like as simple a reference. :)
     
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  20. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    Aww

    It would have been all like:

    "I am Sailor Moon!...ALL WILL LOVE ME AND DESPAIR!"
     
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  21. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Can you remind me again about the Alliance and the Congregation. Alliance = group of existing superheroes who were formed by a repentant former criminal. Congregation = group of people who train new heroes and are empowered by the Silver City or something? A bit of clarification please, if only because they seem like they will never be important later.
     
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  23. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    That's a reasonable summary of what the SI knows about them.

    In addition, a lot of the people signing up with the Alliance have very little experience.
     
  24. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    Foster means something other than what you think it means. It's a "I'm not your parent, but I'm raising you anyway." situation. Might be they don't have parents. Might be that they do have parents, but those parents are bad enough that the government decides the kids aren't safe with them. Might be that they have parents, and the government doesn't mind them, but the kid runs off to some neighbors anyway because the kid minds, and all the adults involved agree that the neighbors could do a better job of it.
     
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  25. Yog

    Yog Know what you're doing yet?

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    No, Paul, if Zatanna channeled Predator you wouldn't be in a crystal right now. The Earth would be a smoldering wreck after a fight between at least three (Predator, Best Snek and Ion) and possibly as many as five (Alan with the Blue and possibly the White Entity taking notice) Emotional Spectrum embodiments.
     
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    doug89 Versed in the lewd.

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    That's a bad habit to get into Dick.
     
  27. Ngamer11

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    If the Congregation is full of devout Christians, do any of them feel some animosity for OL because of the Silver City's declaration for his death?
     
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    If the angels restored him to life, that's good enough for most of them.
     
  29. Ardy

    Ardy I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I was just thinking that. The silver city never recanted their statements on Paul basically being the anti-Christ, so why TF are they, or most people in general, working with him now?
     
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    Nice to know that the religious people with superpowers are reasonable, unlike the religious fundamentalists that send OL hate mail. I think I remember a short thought OL had in the last two episodes about people sending him hate mail that said that he should go to hell or something.
     
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