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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Can someone please pick up the phone?
     
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  2. rkyeun

    rkyeun Cabbitus Maximus

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    Oh, it's worse than that. Far far worse. Check this.
    She's going to learn what mindset makes a good Orange Lantern. And then she's going to mass produce Orange Spiders.
     
  3. thepsyborg

    thepsyborg Not too sore, are you?

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    ...Shit.

    You're right. She's already demonstrated the ability to alter the mentality of her offspring in specific regards. This is totally a thing she could do.

    [​IMG]
     
  4. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    So she and paul still had babies?

    Dear lord. I hope he didn't leave any genetic material lying around.
     
  5. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Hit me.
    At that point, the SI doesn't know who was involved. As such, 'could' is correct.
    Ah, no. 'Push it back', as in, to a later date.
    Thank you, corrected.
    Maybe, but the full stop is in the correct place. The SI saw no advantage in giving himself periods.
    Thank you, corrected.
    Ring to ring communication. I seem to remember that it's happened on other occasions as well.
    Thank you, corrected.
    No, it's using the ship's communication system. John doesn't have a ring.
    No, not ring-com.
     
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  6. FeepingCreature

    FeepingCreature Not too sore, are you?

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    The problem with holding liberal values and also an orange power ring is it's incredibly hard to impossible to be hypocritical, even unconsciously. As such, I can only assume that what happened here is that Paul held a belief like "I don't want to be speciest" and his ring very enthusiastically provided the requisite brain surgery.

    That or his romantic denseness transcends all barriers of species, I guess.
     
  7. SirKaid

    SirKaid Know what you're doing yet?

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    Paul. Paul, stop. Paul, Spider Guild members eat sapient people. The last thing anyone wants is for them to get orange rings. Yeah, these ones have opted for the moral option and are cloning meat instead of eating people, but try telling that to the legions of people who aren't going to take that chance.

    I mean maybe it'll amount to nothing because the mental conditioning prevents them from being capable of mustering the required emotional state, but if it doesn't then this is a holy shit heebie jeebies bad idea.
     
  8. Greydragon

    Greydragon Making the rounds.

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    She already has samples; he obviously left skin cells behind in her reproductive tract when Paul gave her a 'massage'. I'm surprised we haven't seen any baby humans being grown on the production line to be used as Spider Guild 'masseurs'. Her current brood might also be related to Paul slightly, if she borrowed some human genes from his sample to improve them.
     
  9. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  10. edmantgoog

    edmantgoog Not too sore, are you?

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    is ist just me or was there a weird sexual tension in this chapter?
     
  11. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Hmm, I wonder if these bioengineering Spider Guild have any relation to the species that Insect Queen belongs to, or the race that altered Red Bee.

    Insect Queen worked on making Kryptonian hybrid insect warriors, Red Bee was going to breed a warrior caste fathered by Human Bomb.

    DC seems to have a thing for anthropodic aliens with immense mastery of biotechnology...
     
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  12. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    It's both, of course. It's more efficient to have one trip serve multiple purposes.
     
  13. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    An oversight on my part. It should say 'masseur'.
     
  14. Sceptic

    Sceptic Critical Irrationalist

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    A likely story.
     
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  15. Simonbob

    Simonbob Really? You don't say.

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    It's just you.


    So far.
     
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  16. DAT_NOOB

    DAT_NOOB Accused of writing in a far away land

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    Or maybe they pile into the reach with mass-produced orange lantern spiders
    It's not just him
     
  17. Simonbob

    Simonbob Really? You don't say.

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    You call'en me a liar? 'Squints dramaticly'
     
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  18. Gantradies

    Gantradies Not too sore, are you?

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    and yet was too dense to consider that if he had been rewritten, he wouldn't have considered it, or would have instantly been adjusted again when he refused.
    *kiphsighs* what is it with comic genius's and Dumping their WIS, anyway? >.<
     
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  19. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    Missed a correction.
     
  20. Lazurman

    Lazurman That Others May Fap

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    No. No, it’s not just you.

    Ya know, there’s a saying about sailors having a girl in every port...and as everyone knows, space is an ocean.
     
  21. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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  22. thebishop8

    thebishop8 Umm, ackchyually...

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    Ah yes. Well...you missed some spots.



    Right, but it usually appears orange, even when Paul did it with Lantern Stewart:


    What makes it different from this?:
    Onigar Ron's text is pure green even though she isn't using a ring.
     
  23. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    "Excellent. All goes according to plan. Now we will see who is mightier. The Reach's Scarabs, or my Spiders"

    "OL....did you rig up a way to mass produce shock troops to flood the territory of your stated enemy?"

    "......Maaaaaybe?"
     
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  24. Massgamer

    Massgamer I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    So basically they are a faction in Spider Guild that uses genetic modification more than rest of species and has unique leadership due to origins.

    Would be neat if Queen became OL from desire to improve people and could likely give her firepower to combat rest of Spider Guild if needed. Also the OL ring would help a lot in modifying herself and others at need and with less effort.

    I still can't help but get Drider image in my mind if she ever wanted to modify in that direction.
     
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  25. PDV

    PDV Revelation That Uncertainty Is Itself An Answer

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    It honestly makes sense. Hive insects already have low-grade bioengineering to maintain their caste structure; extrapolating that to sapients suggests they'd learn fine-grained control. And then comic book logic says they do everything with biotech.
     
  26. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Guy's preference settings.

    Other things corrected.
    They're not a hive. Spiders Guilders are all individually intelligent.
     
  27. Aeess

    Aeess I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    If the aim is to produce a lot of functional orange lanterns, then there is always assimilation function. And considering the amount of gordanians nobody wants, there seems to be a simple solution to both problems.
     
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  28. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    He's... Trying to move away from mass worse-than-death punishments.
     
  29. Aeess

    Aeess I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    We screw up our eyes. His conflicting desires.. doesn't.. what? "But you.. but you... You want the ends, why don't you want the means? We don't.. we don't..." We shake our head. He's clearly being irrational. Ignore him
     
  30. DrThoth

    DrThoth I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    The gestalt Paulphidian is un-enlightened in that scene, quite relevantly so given that Paragon’s enlightenment resulted from reconciling the very fact that was giving him/them such trouble here; desires conflict and interact together in incredibly complicated ways while still all being just part of him or anyone, and only comprise a complete being in conjunction with the rest of the spectrum.

    Now if they ever manage to reverse assimilation, that could be a potential course of action, though still something akin to complete mind-control (which people have argued both for and against in the threads, I know) or canon Young Justice’s depiction of the Anti-Life (would be interested to hear Mr Zoat’s thoughts on that).
     
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