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The Coward who Jumped (Jumpchain)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by InDeepFiction, Sep 1, 2019.

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  1. Threadmarks: Prologue: What is Needed to Jump
    InDeepFiction

    InDeepFiction Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    My name is Norville "Shaggy" Rogers.

    I'm for most part a friendly person who always did what was correct.

    I never harmed anyone, I have never stolen anything, I have never thrown food out of my plate to the trash.

    You could say that I ate a lot more than it was needed anyway, but still, nothing that could be considered bad.

    Being a detective of course, there was a lot of dangers, most of them were somewhat fun things we investigated, mostly people trying to pose as ghosts to make people go away from certain places with elaborated pieces of mechanical intricacies I myself am incapable of explaining as I am right now.

    We, the gang and I, got our enemies, just like a cop with a good arresting record, mainly because we were the same thing basically.

    They had reunited themselves and planned, and we were none the wiser.

    "Thou, who have spent your life discovering fake mysteries and running away from your problems, are faced with two options, the first is to leave everything behind and begin life anew, away from everything with the possibility to come back here for your unfinished business and the second is to lay dead as you are right now." Voices, millions of them, like a herd of spirits, whispered so closely to my ears that I couldn't stop the shivering sensation on my body.

    "Like... I-If that's what I'm needed to do so I can get my friends back." I told myself, them, the vacuum I was stuck into, to whatever I knew was listening to my words.

    "If that's the case, then just give in..." The whispers came along.

    "And Jump."
     
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    InDeepFiction

    InDeepFiction Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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  3. the DragonBard

    the DragonBard Creator of Worlds

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    Kind of rare to see a Jumpchain where a character is the Jumper rather than an SI.
    Be strange to see him without Scooby at minimum, let alone the rest of the gang.
     
  4. MasterOfDragonsGod

    MasterOfDragonsGod Connoisseur.

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    Interesting concept.
     
  5. PrinceJonathan

    PrinceJonathan Versed in the lewd.

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    Watched in hopes for Ultra Instinct Shaggy.
     
  6. Brenden1k

    Brenden1k Getting out there.

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    Some suggestions, I would have Benefactor intervene and pick the jumps and maybe lock some perks to force shaggy to move outside his comfort zone. Maybe benefactors can give goals, benefactor can send jumper back for being boring so that should put shaggy in a nice dilemma where the safe option is agressive.

    Five sessions is all you get is a good one, generic alien colonial marine is another jump by the same author. There is a Louise into jumpchain fic.

    I kind of see that happening if someone pushes shaggy way to far.

    ”is the little coward going to cry because I did expunged to all his friends, is he going to cry, ahh my spleen, the crazy stoner kid is punching me with my own spleen”.
     
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  7. Shooting Star

    Shooting Star Celestial Body

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    I have the distinct suspicion that's the entire point of this exercise :V

     
  8. Diver

    Diver Experienced.

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    Hahahahaha, this has promise. ALL the speed and food perks! Shaggy’s gonna becomes the Flash!
     
  9. Hidden One

    Hidden One Not the Boss. Possibly a Playa.

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    I think this must mean that Reborn is getting a new student. :cool:

    Watched.
     
  10. The Overlord

    The Overlord SCIENCE! both mad, mundane, and perverted

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    I did not know I needed this in my life till I found it, please sir do you have any more?
     
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  11. codeRR

    codeRR Heroic spirit unkown

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    Well then. I really can't wait to see where this goes now. I loved the intro with Shaggy talking to the voices...and the ending part
     
  12. WCR I

    WCR I Know what you're doing yet?

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    You, uh, … you guys do know that the author has abandoned this fic, right? They haven't been on in slightly over a month.
     
  13. Scholar of Time

    Scholar of Time Master of Lurking

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    So...technically not necromancy to keep hoping for it, right?
     
  14. InDeepFiction

    InDeepFiction Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    Okay, real quick, I'm not dead (I'm halfway there tho)

    I don't have much time on computer due to my work hours and is kinda hard to stay focused on writing when you're dealing with a lot of work (McDonalds is pretty pushy where I live)

    I AM trying to figure out a plot that does not involve 'lets just hop and shit around' but it may boil down to this because I'm not sure myself if I can create some kind of intricate plot with Jumpchains and all.
     
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