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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Ardy

    Ardy I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Are we going to see Zauriel hanging around Paul any time soon? Him commenting on every single one of Paul's actions, from premarital sex to supporting illegal vigilantes like the Alliance, promises to be hilarious.
     
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  2. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    When I asked how strong she is compared to Gabriel I meant when he was at full power.

    Is Zauriel going to involve himself in super heroics, and will he join the league?

    How is the world reacting after the angels invaded?
     
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  3. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Probably not.
    Zauriel doesn't actually care about a lot of stuff that religions that regard him as the agent of a morally superior power care about.
    Pass.
    Yes, not anytime soon.
    In lots of different ways.
     
  4. Grimnar

    Grimnar Versed in the lewd.

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    I wonder if Zatanna is ever going to get a replacement crystal.

    Early on when it was shown, OL described it as somewhat Lantern like in construction. If that's the case, given his ability to create Lanterns, is it possible for him to make his own version of the Star Sapphire with the Orange light, to integrate with Zatanna's channeling staff? They'd only have to rejig it with the Avarice symbol so not much work needed done.

    It's just that after so long and after spending so much time upgrading her shit, I just don't see Zatanna willingly going back to casting from her internal reserves alone. It's stupid. She knows she can do better than that now, she's used to it, and permanantly gimping herself is just... if she really need lean into OL's philosophy, there's no way on earth she isn't doing SOMETHING to get a magical source of energy to use.

    Which could be bad.
     
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  5. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I'm not super Familiar with this Robot, or at least don't think I am, but...wow, the damn thing seems almost ludicrously OP.
     
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  6. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Well worn.

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    The thing was bad for her mental health, so not any time soon?

    I.mean technically she could use something else but the closest thing qe know to a power ring power source that you can easily find or build on Earth is a Star Rod aka Starman staff thing. And that works on science.

    Unless she becomes some kind of technomage she isn't gonna use spells powered by stellar energy any time soon.
     
  7. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    [​IMG]

    At the moment it's a bit like fighting Superman in the outskirts of the sun.
     
  8. iamnuff

    iamnuff Connoisseur.

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    I assumed he was trying to wave off medical attention, but green rings don't heal so well as orange ones, and Paul is telling him that he can't tell if he's still irradiated.

    Mr Atom is firing real blasts of radiation in this training exercise.
    That hit could have done IRL damage.
     
  9. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    I'm trying to find a comic, set shortly after Superman 668, in which Kara Zor-El cooks dinner for the Kents using vegetables taken from Karsta Wor-Ul's farm. Anyone remember which it was?
     
  10. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Is Karsta going to show up in the paragon side?
     
  11. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Sort of. She left the planet a while ago after Superman found her, but her farm's still there.
     
  12. SIDoragon

    SIDoragon Dragon of Story and Song

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    I am really looking forward to the scathing review from Paul.
    Seriously, I would even encourage Mr Zoat to take an extra day and really make it through. I want to see detailed step by steps of what happened, when, to whom, and why.

    Keep up the great work.
     
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  13. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Where did she go, and will she have a run in with Amalac?

    What has Amalac been doing now with the whole spider queen and does he know that she can help him revive his race?
     
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  14. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Ah...

    I was kinda going to skip it, actually.
    Away, and probably not unless she actually goes to Vega. He's a bit busy there at the moment.
    He doesn't trust her anything like enough to try that. He's happy with the work she's doing on his behalf.
     
  15. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    We know Zoat....we all know.
     
  16. KillingYouNicely

    KillingYouNicely Meh.

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    ...I meant threats like Mirror Master's esoteric abilities, of which Flash is the only one with any experience.

    More importantly, radiation as a weapon in general. Barring the different colours of kryptonite, it isn't often that something as serious as actual radioactive material, and people who can control it, are tackled by the League. Not to mention the poisoning effect it has on the environment - if Agent Orange wasn't the one overseeing this and making sure the ramifications are immediately obvious, they'd might not remember or even bother cleaning up after a villain who sprays that sort of hazard around after they beat him.
     
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  17. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    AH, so not the character I was thinking of at all.

    A quick google shows I was thinking of the Atomic Skull I believe.
     
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    Mr Zoat

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    2nd March
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    Lex smiles in a mildly sinister way as he leans back in the command chair-.

    No, let's be honest. I've seen the specifications for the standard model and that isn't it. Command throne, Lex had them build him a command throne. It's just a mercy that it isn't gold and covered in skulls.

    His armour is gold-coloured with a purple undersuit -for reasons best known to Dr Metcalf- and looks.. more than a little like armour I remember the version of Lex Luthor from Earth 2 wearing. Which I suppose is better than the green and purple monstrosity he wears in the comics, but… Really?

    He glances my way as he steeples his fingers in front of his chest.

    "A little garish, I know, but I feel that it makes a strong impression."

    "I could make you something better."

    "Gray with glowing lines? Please." He holds his right hand out to the side. "Besides, the whole point of this ship is to show what humans can accomplish without aliens."

    "Which is a great and noble purpose to be sure, but this is a rush job with no media observers."

    "If I won't risk myself over a point of principle then I can hardly ask other people to do the same."

    I raise my left eyebrow very slightly, glancing at the members of the crew manning the other stations. This prototype destroyer is crewed exclusively by people Lex… Not 'owns' exactly, but skilled ex-military people who are loyal to him personally. Usually as a result of him arranging for them to be semi-legitimately aided in escaping an 'unfortunate' situation and then given a decent job. These are people he trusts. He could have said anything that he wanted and there wouldn't be any adverse consequence, so he's either getting into character, or… He actually believes it.

    Huh.

    I mean, I knew he had some sort of revelation after Truggs and I pointed out that we knew he was a paranoid… And he certainly isn't anything like as aggressively paranoid as some comic interpretations, but that's verging on heroic talk right there.

    Remarkable, really.

    Ultraa and crew are hanging back from Earth, probably trying to make sense of the place. It's a bit of a joke in some places, but it's actually quite hard for an observer to tell the difference between entertainment broadcasts and information broadcasts. In more advanced places where they still do broadcasts rather than just narrowcasts they actually mark the images with the alien version of 'all characters contained herein are fictional' for that very reason. And then you've got to work out the languages… Not a problem for them, they've clearly had a telepathic specialist sent to Earth to pick up at least English and load it into their brains.

    I could have gone after them myself. I mean, I'm a Lantern. Flying in space is part of the job, and Sazu could provide me with a pretty reasonable estimate of their ship's capacities. But then it occurred to me that I'm not meant to be defending the Earth against alien aggressors. That's hireling work, and I'm management these days. I'm supposed to arrange things so that a defence can take place.

    So, Lex. Who has a small number of completed ships that he was holding off launching until he could make an event out of it. And who doesn't like aliens and certainly doesn't like people invading the Earth. In other circumstances he might want to capture the Almeracians and their ship but since he's come over all homopuritan that seems to be less of a concern.

    The ship has cold guns and purple death rays for ordnance, all running off super-dense batteries of Dr Metcalf's design. It has a stealth system that renders it near-invisible to electromagnetic detection, 'almost' because the cosmic converters which power everything other than the weapons do actually need some access to solar radiation in order to work. But the near-invisibility is really good, even by galactic standards. There's even a counter-gravity system to defy gravity-based detection, telepathy scramblers and the final model of ship will have a duty mage to work an anti-magic system.

    Lex doesn't have any magicians he trusts enough to fulfil that role for this flight.

    I wonder what that says about me?

    "Mister Luthor?"

    He doesn't look around, instead calling up an image of the Almeracian ship on the holodisplay in front of him.

    "Yes, Mister Finch?"

    "We've got a weapon lock, and communication lag at this distance is next to nothing."

    "Are we able to confirm Mister Grayven's information about their defensive abilities?"

    "No, not with passive sensors. I can tell you how many weapons and defense turrets they've got-" He presses a button and they are immediately highlighted on the hologram. "-but until they actually start emitting energy, there's nothing to read. Same with the armour. Until we can see them try to accelerate we can't judge their mass." He shrugs. "And if they use telekinesis to mess around with gravity I can't see how we could do that reliably even then."

    "Fair point." He touches a button on his command throne. "Luthor to fleet. We are about to engage active scans. Prepare to take evasive action."

    A fleet of three ships, so 'squadron' would really be more appropriate, but... It would be churlish to point that out.

    The other two ships signal readiness, then Lex pushes the button that launches the similarly invisible sensor drones. Because when you're risking breaking stealth but have an undetectable communication system you'd be a fool to scan from your actual ship. So they're away…

    I'm feeling out of sorts. Apokoliptian management oversight is usually at least a little hands on. If this were an Apokoliptian ship I'd be channelling my spiritual power through the ship's systems. I'd probably feel the results of the scan before the sensor-operating minion did. I'm really only here as emergency backup in case things get radically out of hand. And because I'm the one who accepted the responsibility, so… I'm here.

    "Telemetry coming in, Mister Luthor. No sign they've spotted us."

    Lex quickly reviews the data on his personal throne-display.

    "Uh. It appears that your data was correct. At least as far as we can determine."

    I nod. "So. Naval option or telepathy?"

    "I think we should keep it simple. Hail them."

    The communication avenue we're using here is a bit on the simple side. We don't share a system, but their regular sensors should be able to pick up radio waves and we already know that they can speak English.

    "This is Lex Luthor. You are intruding in the home system of the human species. Explain yourself."

    Getting an answer might take a few moments, given that they're probably not set up for broadcasting radio waves.

    There's a chime-.

    "Pressure on the telepathic screens, Mister Luthor. They’re looking for us."

    "That won't do." He taps the hologram, bringing up the results of the life-energy scan. "That appears to be the bridge. Target it with the purple death rays, and… Point the cold guns at their exhausts."

    "Sir."

    "Lex Luthor to Almeracian ship. If you do not cease scanning and enter communications within thirty seconds, we will assume that you are hostile and treat you accordingly."

    He presses a button, and a thirty second timer appears next to the image of the ship. Then he turns to me.

    "That should be rude enough that they feel obliged to disobey, shouldn't it?"

    I nod.

    "I believe so."

    "And neither their shields nor their armour will protect them from the death rays." He presses another button, connecting him to the marine teleportation centre. "Mister Near, prepare to board on my signal."

    "Understood."

    Lex taps his right index finger twice, then waits patiently for the times to run down.

    Then he kills every living thing on their ship.
     
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  19. JamesEye

    JamesEye Not too sore, are you?

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    That last line was a bit chilling in how casual it seemed for Lex.

    thanks
     
  20. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Wait...wasn't Truggs off being vivisected in some lab somewhere in the Renegade timeline?
     
  21. Ardy

    Ardy I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Sweet mother of fuck when did this story get AWESOME?

    edit: No maxx, he originally was being vivisected to determine how his nanotech thing worked but when they first introduced the Starseeker it was revealed he got let out to work on the project.
     
  22. Chojin Patriarch

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    No, that's for later. Or if he declares himself Emperor of Mankind...

    Well, it certainly does that. Hopefully it's the impression he wants...

    Besides any lucky observers back on Earth. I doubt anyone would see more than flickers of light though.

    Let's hope he's improving.

    It's a rare case when a supervillian turns away from the 'dark side', so to speak.

    Heh. Imagine if they assume the colourfully dressed flying people are fiction...

    And the difference in technological paradigms might make the effort worthless anyway. It'd be like Prothean technology - most of it built for a race with senses humans don't have.

    Mages trained by Circe's school, no doubt? Lex would likely not trust Atlanteans enough for that.

    What, Lex's opinion of you? Likely cautious respect.

    Just a matter of the Almeracian ship being informed of such and them hopefully surrendering... Unlikely.

    So what he's saying is, the fleet needs much better sensors. I'm sure Lex can knock that out in an afternoon.

    Yes, just a bit. It will prove a good shakedown for the combat capabilities.

    Feeling a bit left out, Grayven? I thought you wanted humanity to be able to stand by itself without you.

    And now the Almeracians are getting a little panicked? Getting scanned by apparently no-one?

    Oh, boy. I've seen stories where this didn't go so well.

    Trying to find and kill them, or searching for them to reply, I wonder?

    Talk or be killed. simple and decisive.

    Setting them up to fail, and making a statement about Humans. Nice in a callous way.

    And it's done with no ceremony. I bet if the crew were communicating with home, they'd have quite the impression...

    "If it needs be done, let it be done quickly." Lex has quite the logic to his actions. Making a strong impression on the Almeracians, and setting up a reputation amongst the galactic population, once this gets out. Or it goes forgotten by history, like so many other such actions...:(
     
  23. Xmaster3000

    Xmaster3000 Know what you're doing yet?

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    will have a duty mage
    how many weapons and defense turrets
     
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  24. gustyeagle

    gustyeagle Know what you're doing yet?

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    Nah, he was a tech in some earlier part, I think the first space ship one.
     
  25. Mquz

    Mquz Versed in the lewd.

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    As mentioned, he helped point out that Luthor suffered paranoia to humans break him into realization. He was building an AI based on modeling the brainwave patterns of multiple people and picking and choosing - he specifically left out Lex’s paranoia.
     
  26. Twilight666

    Twilight666 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    He was being vivisected but then here we found out that he got out.
     
  27. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  28. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    Damn, we have to wait for the aftermath of the excercise.

    And is Grayven really cool with Luthor being so triggerhappy?

    Also, does Lex actually have the mandate to potentially start a war with an alien species? Does he speak for Earth?
     
  29. Gantradies

    Gantradies Not too sore, are you?

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    *shrugs*
    from a military perspective (viewing this as a military/PMC action as opposed to a superhero team),i think this was handled fairly well.

    they were lurking in system, refused to identify themselves, and responded to a fairly reasonable demand to identify themselves and the reasons for their presence with only silence and what could have as easily been a telepathic attack as a scan-a little ruthless/aggressive, but he gave them a chance to talk/walk away, which they seemingly responded with by starting an active targeting sweep....

    i mean, i know one of my 4X faction-leader personas would get...twitchy about finding a ship lurking in my home-system and refusing to respond to hails- had too much experience with Liir biowarefare in SOTS...
     
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  30. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    What? They flew in with a warship and refused to answer hails. Try sailing up to a US naval dock in a gunboat and seeing what happens.
    Does anyone else on Earth have an armed spaceship?
     
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