1. Due to issues with external spam filters, QQ is currently unable to send any mail to Microsoft E-mail addresses. This includes any account at live.com, hotmail.com or msn.com. Signing up to the forum with one of these addresses will result in your verification E-mail never arriving. For best results, please use a different E-mail provider for your QQ address.
    Dismiss Notice
  2. For prospective new members, a word of warning: don't use common names like Dennis, Simon, or Kenny if you decide to create an account. Spammers have used them all before you and gotten those names flagged in the anti-spam databases. Your account registration will be rejected because of it.
    Dismiss Notice
  3. Since it has happened MULTIPLE times now, I want to be very clear about this. You do not get to abandon an account and create a new one. You do not get to pass an account to someone else and create a new one. If you do so anyway, you will be banned for creating sockpuppets.
    Dismiss Notice
  4. If you wish to change your username, please ask via conversation to tehelgee instead of asking via my profile. I'd like to not clutter it up with such requests.
    Dismiss Notice
  5. Due to the actions of particularly persistent spammers and trolls, we will be banning disposable email addresses from today onward.
    Dismiss Notice
  6. A note about the current Ukraine situation: Discussion of it is still prohibited as per Rule 8
    Dismiss Notice
  7. The rules regarding NSFW links have been updated. See here for details.
    Dismiss Notice
  8. The testbed for the QQ XF2 transition is now publicly available. Please see more information here.
    Dismiss Notice

With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

Loading...
  1. Citizen

    Citizen Well worn.

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2016
    Messages:
    6,495
    Likes Received:
    14,334
    That wasn't very neigh-borly of them.
     
  2. FreeGod

    FreeGod If you see a God on the road fuck it!

    Joined:
    May 26, 2016
    Messages:
    8,526
    Likes Received:
    15,106
    So this is either nightmare night and he looks alot like a nightmare moon. Or he is big enough that ponies look like kids to him and these are actual guards.
     
  3. Belenus

    Belenus Versed in the lewd.

    Joined:
    Feb 24, 2015
    Messages:
    1,100
    Likes Received:
    28,912
    I wonder what kind of dentition Alicorn Grayven has.
     
  4. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    1,167
    Likes Received:
    7,077
    Those aren't foals, You are just huge in comparison to them Grayven.

    Considering the point of view and how he had trouble coming out of the mirror i would say Grayven is an evil alicorn bigger than Celestia.
     
  5. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

    Joined:
    Feb 6, 2019
    Messages:
    1,289
    Likes Received:
    12,971
    Okay, A) I knew he'd be an Alicorn! I'm guessing a Sombra (horn) slash Chrysalis (wings) variant?

    And B) OH SHIT IT'S NIGHTMARE NIGHT AND TWILIGHT IS MISSING AND NIGHTMARE MOON IS ABOUT TO RETURN!
     
  6. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    2,149
    Likes Received:
    33,425
    Ah, head rush? Understandable with transformative magic. Especially if only part has changed.

    Say it with me: "A Wizard Pony Did It!"

    A ballerina, she aint. That must sting a little.

    Feel Sunset's discomfort in reverse, Grayven, while she laughs!

    At least best Rings aren't gone.

    It's times like this that you remember Mr Zoat is a little bit Brony.

    The image of an eight-foot-tall man with grey skin balancing on his toes and fingers is hilarious.:D

    Huh, that's even more amusing. Also: "YEAH!"

    Honestly, you'd think Starswirl would have accounted for atypical body shapes when he made the mirror...

    At least you aren't sitting on your croup, or what Bronies call the 'Plot'.

    Fangasm later, Grayven. Business first.

    Heh, learning how to use body parts you never had before...

    So he rolled over his barrel?:V

    Or the rings could not show up as any kind of magic. That'd really creep out ponies.

    He has teeth. Presumably.

    She's taken the form of a cutie mark, hasn't she?x3

    Membranous wings? Oh, dear, he's not a giant changling, is he? Or a titanic Breezy?:p

    This whole sequence is hilarious...

    Presumably, Ponies put the handles low enough they can lift their leg comfortably. Which would put it damn low for Grayven...

    And there are always ever-glowing torch spells, no doubt.

    Yeah, who build their capital city hanging off the side of a mountain?

    Oh, buggeration.

    No, Ponies.

    Wow, I can just imagine how this looks to these guards...

    Quite understandable reaction, really.

    Preferably with the Mirror, Grayven. Don't forget why you came here.

    Well, he's ponified in a big way. Now to work out the details of his form. To Google and Wikipedia's list of equine monsters! As Chaoswind pointed out below me, he's basically a Nightmare... Er, Night Stallion? Gods only know what Celestia is going to make of this...
     
    Last edited: Feb 5, 2020
    Gilhelmi, BR549, nobodez and 17 others like this.
  7. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    1,167
    Likes Received:
    7,077

    Why would foals be dressed as guards inside the castle and doing patrol... Even if it is indeed nightmare moon (wiki checks) I don't think foals would be roaming the castles halls late in the night when every..pony is sleeping.
     
  8. Belenus

    Belenus Versed in the lewd.

    Joined:
    Feb 24, 2015
    Messages:
    1,100
    Likes Received:
    28,912
    Too early for that. The Nightmare Night where Luna returned, Twilight was in Ponyville, not sleeping in her bed in Canterlot.
     
  9. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    1,167
    Likes Received:
    7,077

    Evil Alicorns seem to fit the entire description, unless all those images on google are fanon nonsense.
     
  10. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    2,149
    Likes Received:
    33,425
    Evil Alicorn... So, basically a Nightmare. Or in this case, a Night Stallion? Explains why the guards ran when he smiled... All those fangs...
     
  11. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2016
    Messages:
    14,694
    Likes Received:
    728,896
    Thank you, corrected.
     
  12. thepsyborg

    thepsyborg Not too sore, are you?

    Joined:
    Sep 28, 2015
    Messages:
    428
    Likes Received:
    3,393
    I feel obligated to point out that these are in no way mutually exclusive.
     
  13. Alasnuyo

    Alasnuyo I am always here

    Joined:
    Nov 18, 2013
    Messages:
    70
    Likes Received:
    558
    Okay, this is a very important question that nobody had asked yet:

    Is he red and black all over?
     
  14. GamingPizza1998

    GamingPizza1998 Verified Pizza

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    1,194
    Likes Received:
    13,879
    *Adjusts Commissar Hat* "There is only one thing for miscreants such as you" *Fires Bolt Pistol*
     
  15. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    1,167
    Likes Received:
    7,077

    Isn't he gray? And his god armor should be something close to bronze?
     
    Zeroguard, Darko and DAT_NOOB like this.
  16. Sockmonkey

    Sockmonkey I trust you know where the happy button is?

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    579
    Likes Received:
    3,032
    This begs the question of if she actually knows just how fuckoff huge the actual sun is. Writers have no sense of scale, yada yada yada...
    Ponomicon. ;)

    So basically he looks like Sombra with batpony wings and is slightly bigger than Celestia.
    [​IMG]
     
    KaiKolo, Cuchulin, nobodez and 17 others like this.
  17. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

    Joined:
    Aug 18, 2014
    Messages:
    2,532
    Likes Received:
    20,675
    If the only response to an equine pun is to shoot the punster, you should use a Colt Single Action.
     
  18. Grimnar

    Grimnar Versed in the lewd.

    Joined:
    Sep 4, 2014
    Messages:
    2,114
    Likes Received:
    19,177
    There is no curse in the Elvish, Entish or the tongues of Men for this abomination.
     
  19. FreeGod

    FreeGod If you see a God on the road fuck it!

    Joined:
    May 26, 2016
    Messages:
    8,526
    Likes Received:
    15,106
    Then they need to expand their vocabulary.
     
  20. jaelin910

    jaelin910 habitual lurker

    Joined:
    Jan 10, 2015
    Messages:
    493
    Likes Received:
    3,184
    In case anyone missed it, this might not be what he looks like but....
     
  21. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

    Joined:
    Oct 1, 2016
    Messages:
    2,842
    Likes Received:
    15,028
    We've had fanart of Paul fucking Ophidian. I hope we get fanart of Grayven the Alicorn.
     
  22. ForeverShogo

    ForeverShogo Not too sore, are you?

    Joined:
    Sep 25, 2016
    Messages:
    453
    Likes Received:
    2,723
    Yeah. Ponies are pretty small.

    I think some people did some calculations that suggested the average adult Equestrian pony is about 3 feet tall. With Celestia herself being somewhere around 4'8 to 4'10" in height.

    Which, incidentally, is as tall as a pony can be before it's considered a horse. The only difference between a pony and a horse is how tall they are. 4'10" is the dividing line.

    Really, they're on the smaller side of Shetland ponies. So looking up images of Shetlands standing next to humans would let you get a feel for how tiny an Equestrian pony would be.
     
    Cuchulin, nobodez and Navi-Hank like this.
  23. AngelicKnight.

    AngelicKnight. Lewd demon of negotiable affection

    Joined:
    May 22, 2016
    Messages:
    662
    Likes Received:
    7,579
    What? Where is this? For research I mean.
     
    Jaron, Promenius, Darko and 1 other person like this.
  24. PrinceJonathan

    PrinceJonathan Versed in the lewd.

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    1,602
    Likes Received:
    16,667
    Here's another important question.

    If the Rings are on his ears, where is Mother Box? Or do we want to know?

    Maybe she's his Horn now cause she's a magical computer?
     
    Cuchulin and Navi-Hank like this.
  25. Dakkan Sall

    Dakkan Sall Random Encounter

    Joined:
    Apr 25, 2013
    Messages:
    386
    Likes Received:
    2,631
    There's the image links... or rather, links to posts with said images... back on the very first post of the thread under the "Fan Art" spoiler. Unfortunately, the picture(s) being referred to seem to be dead, as a quick glace at them seems to indicate that the hosting site has either deleted them or otherwise made them unavailable.
     
    AngelicKnight. and Navi-Hank like this.
  26. CTrees

    CTrees Chasing the ring

    Joined:
    Oct 18, 2018
    Messages:
    244
    Likes Received:
    1,186
    You and me both, Sinestro. You and me both.
     
    Caerwen, Jaron, FourthPear and 3 others like this.
  27. AngelicKnight.

    AngelicKnight. Lewd demon of negotiable affection

    Joined:
    May 22, 2016
    Messages:
    662
    Likes Received:
    7,579
    So I wont get to see this glorious image?
     
  28. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2016
    Messages:
    14,694
    Likes Received:
    728,896
    No, various shades of grey.
     
  29. Razorfloss

    Razorfloss I trust you know where the happy button is?

    Joined:
    Jun 24, 2019
    Messages:
    853
    Likes Received:
    13,628
    Well celestra is going to have a fucking panic attack when she sees grayvens pony form.
     
  30. Umbrella_merc

    Umbrella_merc Know what you're doing yet?

    Joined:
    Aug 31, 2014
    Messages:
    106
    Likes Received:
    1,035
    Not just the look but ponies are powered by friendship and Grayven is powered by Greed and Fear with the anti-life equation fragment in his soul adding some full on nihilism to the mix.
     
Loading...