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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Thank you, you beat me to it... Still reading the awesome... Let's not geek out here though.x3
     
  2. Doctor Blood

    Doctor Blood The horror! The horror! Moderator

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    Grayven: "Here, finally, I am able to indulge my true calling - a Saturday morning cartoon villian!"
    Sunset: "I always knew your special talent was being a gigantic ham."
     
  3. Grimnar

    Grimnar Versed in the lewd.

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    I think that was the worst chapter of anything I have ever read. And yes, that includes My Immortal.
     
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  4. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Eh, maybe you'll like tomorrow's better.
     
  5. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    That's the most adorable I've ever seen any version of OL.
     
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  6. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Ah yes tomorrow's episode is going to be in the He-Man universe, the birthplace of Saturday morning cartoon villains.

    Zoat are we going to see Yellow Lantern Paul in one of these alternate chapters?
     
  7. AngelicKnight.

    AngelicKnight. Lewd demon of negotiable affection

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    Hold up.... what is Gray,'s cutie mark?
     
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  8. TheEyes

    TheEyes Well worn.

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    [​IMG]
     
  9. Breadnaught

    Breadnaught Experienced.

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    Grayven: "Right. Let's see if I can just startle them into blasting me."

    Grayven: "Damn, that didn't work. Eh, fuck it, I'm in the world of My Little Pony hamming it up, I'm just going to have fun with it."
     
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  10. ForeverShogo

    ForeverShogo Not too sore, are you?

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    Just imagine if he ended up in the version of Equestria seen in Equestria at War.
     
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  11. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Yes.
    The Renegade doesn't know, as he's wearing armour.
    Equestria at War starts in... What, 1007? So none of that stuff would have started happening yet.
     
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  12. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    Equestria at war? Its that a fanfic or its that a movie starring King Sombrero?

    And I am not thrilled with switching to the He-man universe now when we are going to miss Grayven explaining to the mlp cast that he wants to be purified because his father the god of tyranny, bequeather of suffering, flayler of worlds, and destroyer of free will cursed him because he wasn't evil (enough) and he is slowly turning evil. Lulu would emphatize with him and the others would be a tad scared from someone that has done those things to hundreds of thousands of worlds.
     
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  13. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    A Hearts of Iron mod.
    There's a brief gap. Grayven will be back talking to the Mane Six on Wednesday.
     
  14. Ace Dreamer

    Ace Dreamer Questioning The Nature of our Realities

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    So, this is Twilight leaving the Palace...

    And, Grayven and Sunset stayed to hear about the Elements, then they went to where they worked-out Twilight was going. And, watch her arrive there.

    Have G+S time-travelled? Or, is the second Twilight flash-arrival one she uses after arriving at the Station, then standing, somewhere, and watching until her friends got off the train? Or, something even weirder?

    Alternatively, I'm confused. :)

    Help?
     
  15. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Twilight left the palace before the train arrived, then waited in the waiting room, then teleported after the train had stopped.
     
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  16. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Are we going to see an alternate version of Paul that has achieved emotional enlightenment in this and the following episode?

    Can Dr Mist use a power ring?
    He has white enlightenment and seeing as the white light is a combination of the seven other lights I was wondering if he could use all the rings except black?

    Did Dark Druid have a black power ring?
    If he did then what is Paul doing about it?
     
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  17. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Yes.
    Probably?
    No.
     
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  18. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    So Dark Druid was just tapping into the black light to power his magic without using a ring?

    Can Maltusians shapeshift in your story?
    I ask because of how the various factions, Guardian, Controller, Zamaron all seem to look a different way in order to state which faction they belong to.

    Aside from her ring what other powers does Ghi'ta have?
    Does she have those super bacteria the other Maltusians have?
    Can she move mountains like Maltusians in the comics can?
     
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  19. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Yes.
    Form comes from function.
    Some.
    Maybe?
    Perhaps? I haven't decided how powerful I want generic maltusians to be in this story.
     
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  20. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Well Maltusians seem to be able to terraform planets, though i'm pretty sure they mostly use technology for that, but maybe they use a bit of their powers.
    I am also pretty sure that renegade said the Guardians can destroy planets using nothing but their wills, but maybe they are just more powerful because they are connected to a Central Power Battery.
    The Controllers can probably also do something like that now, though maybe not as skillfully at utilising their light as the Guardians because they have been connected to the orange CPB for several months now unlike the Guardians who have been connected to their CPB for at least a million years. The Zamarons, don't remember if they were connected to the violet light and just didn't know how to make rings, but now they can connect to their own CPB if they have one and hadn't before.

    How long has Hinon been in her coma?

    Was it around 3 billion years?

    Can you elaborate on that 'form comes from function' about Maltusians and how they look?
     
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  21. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Mostly their powers, though it's not all that fast.
    It's a little longer than the Green Lantern Corps has existed in its modern form.
    Their appearance is based on their epistemology. Guardians have a look, zamarons have a look, things like that.
     
  22. Darko

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    So their appearance is more to show what they believe in and to distinguish them from their counterparts?
     
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  23. rdfox

    rdfox Know what you're doing yet?

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    You know, this one line has me thinking that Grayven is doing his best Dr. Weird impression here.


    Solution to that: Release them as a series of omake/deleted scenes. Perhaps on 1 April in realtime, for bonus humor!
     
  24. AtomicGeneral25

    AtomicGeneral25 Insert Creativity Here

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    This was just too hilarious!!!!!

    Isn't Graven kinda tipping his hand a bit here? He's never met these 6 before (and can't have learned about them from Sunset), and yet he knows exactly what they each enjoy most. Might back him into a bit of a corner if someone catches that.
     
  25. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    They are probably pretty famous now and think he just heard about them and what they like.
     
  26. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    I'm probably going to harvest them for parts.
     
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  27. kalugin88

    kalugin88 Getting sticky.

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    Give a link to the episode with Equity on April 1, please. I can’t find it myself.
     
  28. Jormuungaand

    Jormuungaand Out of work World Serpent

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    *POOF* Ring, remove armor over by butt for a moment. “Well. Um. A cartoon drawing of a ham. Somehow, I should have seen that coming.” Ring, replace armor. “Now, where was I? Ah yes. -Ahem- CONQUEST!”

    On the contrary, that was hilarious!
     
  29. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Who is Equity?
     
  30. zerofarad

    zerofarad Know what you're doing yet?

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    What a troll. The renegade is clearly having fun with this.
     
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