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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Sockmonkey

    Sockmonkey I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    With all the powerful individuals, entities, mystic forces, and whatnot throughout the DC universe, what we think of as "natural" evolution is barely a thing. It's why I can sorta live with there being so many humanoid species.
    I just hate it when stories without that excuse throw in so much crap that nature would never produce.
     
  2. webxro

    webxro Benevolent Bystander

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    Imagine a cliché scene with a father/rebellious-teen-daughter and him forbidding her to use power rings and stuff.
     
  3. SaltyWaffles

    SaltyWaffles I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    It’s whose, not who’s
     
  4. Fellow

    Fellow Know what you're doing yet?

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    Just so it's easier for Zoat to find. Good catch btw.
     
  5. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Not going to lie. If soulless OL, who did/does have the heart of the Opidian as a substitute, somehow sucked up this God of tech stuff into his void....I would be very amused.
     
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  6. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    So everyone there is okay with ripping someone apart while they feel everything? Uhm, why?
     
  7. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Some of them don't like him all that much, and some of them don't care all that much about him.

    They also need to do a thorough examination and this is probably the most thorough one they can do.
     
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  8. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    Because his ring is about a metre away, and if he really wanted to get out of it then the only one who could stop him is maybe Hinon.
     
  9. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Found an error in the story only. There shouldn't be an apostrophe there.
     
  10. edmantgoog

    edmantgoog Not too sore, are you?

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    not gonna lie I wish this was longer looks like it would be a fascinating read
     
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  11. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Yes, there should. It's in place of an 'i'.

    John pronounces it 'miss-uls' rather than 'miss-i-uls'.
     
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  12. BartlettMagic

    BartlettMagic peekaboo, you fucks you!

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    oh excitement! i've been looking forward to this.
     
  13. Joelseph14

    Joelseph14 Know what you're doing yet?

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    Damn imagine being so passive that the full power of avarice gives you baseline motivation
     
  14. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Well worn.

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    I don't think the problems are with his body but more with his soul and mind; and mind being defined as the Os and software instead of hardware.
     
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  15. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    They're examining his body to see how it has changed since he's remade it several times, as well as studying how his neurology has been affected by the orange light.

    The wizard is there to examine his soul and Hinon may also do that.
     
  16. transhumansage

    transhumansage Versed in the lewd.

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    pretty sure thats me.

    its been way past flashpoint, so does it still hold true, because there was a pretty serious reboot recently....
     
  17. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    The first time he made an actual effort, he conquered his home planet. While sitting on the throne with the magic book which let him do that, he looked at the next page and whined about it being hard. He read it anyway, commenting that that was literally the first time in his life he hadn't just given up when he found something difficult.
     
  18. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    So he embodies the trope of Brilliant, but Lazy.
     
  19. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Evolution happens through the morphogenetic field in DC.

    The morphogenetic field is the combined elemental kingdoms.

    So the Red is responsible for the evolution of all animal life, ditto the Green for plants, etc, etc.

    So natural evolution, I'd say, is not a thing at all in DC. Evolution is magic.

    Concepts such as parallel and convergent evolution aren't really applicable when every life form is magically connected to every other life form from the dawn of time to the heat death of the universe.

    Instead it's self-plagiarism.

    Not that much of a reboot. The past is still the same, I understand, people just remember their different pasts.

    So Nabu is still a lich who invented magic, I think, he's just a lich who invented magic who also remembers being made by God right after the birth of the universe too.

    I might be wrong, I admit.
     
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  20. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    I'm not that familiar with the recent comics.

    So the events of post Flashpoint are still there, but people remember the pre Flashpoint universe?
     
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  21. BlueMangoAdea

    BlueMangoAdea Alive. For now.

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    How's he doing now, with his ring boosting his avarice?
     
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  22. Steelplaza

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    I have a genuine point of confusion whenever Hinon talks about her age. Didn't she put herself into hibernation shortly after the Manhunter rebellion, after she created the original orange ring? So she hasn't actually experienced... however long it was since then?

    Or is it just that she's so old, even all that time is only a blip compared to how long she's been alive in total?
     
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  23. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    She was probably at least millions of years old before she went in a coma.
     
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  24. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Actually I believe they also remember their pre-crisis selves.

    There also were some apparent continuity changes- The infinite multiverse is back, Darkseid got a power up enough to slaughter the Quintessence like bugs underneath his boot, Roy Harper is alive with no stated reason, Babs is Oracle again, but it seems like a soft reboot instead of a clean slate.

    But it starts with the Quintessence offering Diana a place in the Quintessence for her sacrifice dealing with Mr Batman & Joker wank incarnate.
     
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  25. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    He's about normal, though the other Lanterns find his eyes a little off-putting.

    He's considering getting shades.
     
  26. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Well worn.

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    Eh magic ALWAYS has a price but A) The caster doesn't need to be the one paying it and B) You always know what the price will be beforehand unless you were really stupid and didn't read the instructions.

    For homo magi, like the Zatara family the price is simply speaking their spells bavkwards and using their own magic.

    Now if you are not a homo magi that means you have to use an external source of power and that is never free.

    Basically you pay for power.

    The price varies, a whole lot.

    Demons prey on the needy and the price always end your soul and the souls of others.

    Elementals don't think like humans so what they want is not what humans want.

    Rituals are the best if you are not in a hurry, as long as you meet the requirements anyone can cast them and you always know what you are paying.

    Unfortunately to be a combat wizards Rituals will never ever be enough.
     
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  27. Dur'id the Druid

    Dur'id the Druid Know what you're doing yet?

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    Finally get an update about Natu! I wasn't even sure she joined the OL or not!
     
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    Mr Zoat

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    2nd August 2012
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    "…back to the point we've been circling around since the Sheeda first appeared." Minister for National Defence Lukas Frangopoulos bangs a wad of papers against the cabinet table in barely suppressed frustration. "We just can't afford any of this. And we're not going to be able to afford it."

    I nod thoughtfully. It's been a while since I've been a cabinet minister, but with the previous office holder dead and the Sheeda running rampant across the Earth -and the global economy barely existing in any significant fashion- the Prime Minister recalled me to duty. I've made a point of looking a little older, just in case someone takes too close a look at one of the pictures decorating the walls from last time I held the office of Finance Minister. My return had a slight stabilising effect as a result of public confidence, but there are still limits to what I can do with so little to work with.

    Our sources of foreign revenue are tourists and agricultural exports. Tourists… Tourism itself barely exists any longer. Mercifully, the Sheeda didn't appear to have any interest in sites of historical significance so… Perhaps, in the fullness of time, things might recover.

    "We simply cannot afford the sort of super weapon research program that the Americans, Russians and Chinese can. We can't buy enough of their end products to make a difference. We can't hire any of the handful of individuals on the planet who could take up the burden of our defence. We can -slowly- rebuild our conventional forces, but at the moment the strongest military force in Greece is the Congregation's volunteers."

    "And Luthor's… Offer…" Frangopoulos shakes his head. "It's not even worth considering."

    The Prime Minister looks impassive.

    "His suits worked. We all saw them kill Sheeda invaders. And the dogs could bite through steel."

    Frangopoulos shakes his head again.

    "His power armour is combat effective for an hour at a time, requires highly specialised and expensive maintenance and it would leave us completely dependent on him for our defence. And the dogs have no supernatural abilities beyond their strength. They cannot fly, or find enemies hidden by magic." He looks around the room. "You have all had the same intelligence briefings that I have. That is not a man I would trust with my wallet, let alone the lives of everyone in Greece."

    The Prime Minister nods. "Professor Prokopios? Do you have anything?"

    I nod. "Nothing that will simply fix our problem, I am afraid. I have been in contact with the Orange Lantern." Hm. "Some time ago he purchased a British chocolate manufacturer, and has been improving their distribution network with Dolmen Gates. They are a type of magic portal; put something in one and they come out of another. His company are expanding their network in an effort to stimulate global trade, and I persuaded him to ensure that we were included."

    On the face of it, globalisation was entirely rational. Resources are extracted from where they are most readily available and transported to where they can best be used. Wars disrupt that, but unless your country was directly involved they could be worked around. And even if your country was directly involved, it was generally possible to see an attack coming and make appropriate preparations. The days of soldiers manning the ramparts because an unfamiliar sail was seen on the horizon are long past.

    And then the Sheeda attacked with little warning, and the whole brittle system came tumbling down. I hadn't properly accounted for the possibility of an attack of this sort. And now… We're a net exporter of foodstuffs. We aren't in danger of going hungry as people in some places are, but supplies of certain types of non-essential products are going to become rare. Price inflation is going to become a problem.

    "The practical upshot will be that it will become marginally easier for us to import and export at least a small volume of material. We will have to arrange-" I nod to the Minister for Foreign Affairs. "-the appropriate legislation and protocols for a small border inside our country, and of course someone will have to talk to the Archbishop of Athens about us accepting the public use of a magic artefact-."

    The Prime Minister nods, waving his right hand.

    "Don’t worry about that. They don't use demons or spirits of any kind. If it gets trade flowing again, we need it."

    I nod noncommittally. It's been a worry of mine for a while, but… "I am well aware that I am the only person at this table who did not swear his oath of office on a bible. And I am aware that people are understandably sensitive at this time."

    "I'll talk to the Archbishop."

    I nod, this time with more confidence. The Orthodox churches are less open minded about magic than the Catholic Church is, but generally more so than the Evangelical Protestants. So long as it is a purely mechanistic use of magic the Archbishop will probably accept it.

    "Otherwise, there is little for me to add. My Ministry's loan scheme for areas of proven economic demand but no local supply continues to be over-subscribed. We will never be entirely self-sufficient, but I believe that the shortages will ease within two years. On the matter of defence… I do have an idea, though I am not sure how palatable it will be."

    Frangopoulos shrugs. "We may as well hear it."

    "Themyscira was not troubled at all by the Sheeda. They-."

    The Minister for Shipping and Island Policy shakes her head.

    "The Old Gods might be prepared to bless a small island, but they will never do that to all of Greece. Unless you're suggesting that we abandon Christian-. You're a Hellenist."

    I nod.

    "Something like that. But that was not what I meant. I am aware that they have recently improved their ability to produce enchanted weapons; not to an industrial scale, but far more than they once had. As you are aware, their hoplite armour is proof against automatic weapon fire, and their swords can cut through sheet metal. And that is just their normal soldiers."

    Frangopoulos frowns. "You're not talking about Wonder Woma-. They have more like her?"

    "Not quite like her, but they have other demi-goddesses. Why do you think-" I point to a framed photograph on the wall behind him, prompting half the cabinet to look around. "-that the statue of Herakles was covered during Queen Hippolyta's last state visit?"

    "Because she thought it was a bad likeness?"

    "No, because he raped her and at least a hundred other Amazons, which is why they left the mainland in the first place. We were fortunate in that she did not appear to know what the hoarding concealed." It's a little surprising that they didn't know that, though I suppose the Amazons don't generally like to talk about it. "He has many daughters on Themyscira today. And there are a few others who claim descent from other gods. Since Themyscira is opening itself to the outside world, it may be that they would listen favourably to a request from the Greek government."

    The Prime Minister nods. "Amazon super soldiers."

    "They can have more than human abilities in a number of fields, but strength, agility and speed are common ones. They also have instinctive low level magic abilities, inherited from their… Ah, Olympian forebears."

    "Will they work for us?"

    "It is my understanding that Amazons are increasingly willing to leave their island. America has been a more popular destination than Greece, but I imagine that if we make an offer that at least some will accept."

    "And what will Queen Hippolyta want in return? I don't think that we.. want to offer her a throne."

    Now there's a thought. Of course, the position of king was ceremonial for a long time before finally being abolished, but it would be interesting to see Hippolyta in command of a modern nation.

    "I doubt that she will ask for much. A few small islands or a recognition of their territorial waters. Though if that is unpalatable, there is another option."

    "Yes?"

    "Demigods are the children of the gods. There is a young girl in America who is the daughter of Zeus, and a dryad has taken the Amazon Rainforest as her domain. If-."

    The Minister of the Interior frowns. "If we whore out Greek women to the demon gods of a dead religion, they may give birth to demon children."

    "Or men. The children of goddesses are just as powerful as the children of gods. It would cost a little more than hiring Amazons, but the resulting children would be Greek citizens familiar with the modern world."

    "If you think-!"

    "No." The Prime Minister shakes his head. "I will speak with Queen Hippolyta, but Greece is not in the business of… Eugenics. Do you have anything else to bring to our attention."

    I shake my head. "No."

    "Then onto the next item on the agenda."
     
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  29. Akshka

    Akshka Wait, am I lost?

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    he seems nice...oh did I say nice I meant asshole
     
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    Idkusername Versed in the lewd.

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    now -> how
     
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