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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Bud-E

    Bud-E Stand up so I can push you down!

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    All hail God-King Hephestus ruler of the forge and technology! I am curious how Hera would react to this she seemed to be on ok terms with Heph but according to mythology she treated like dirt for being ugly.
     
  2. LazySloth13

    LazySloth13 Versed in the lewd.

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    They actually seem to be on good term given the fact that after her divorce from Zeus she visited him, reorganized his workshop much to his annoyance, and recommended that he should divorce Aphrodite and hook up with one of his Amazonian followers. I figure she would give Paul her blessings to see Zeus get knocked off his throne, both metaphorically and literally, and nag Hephaestus to finding a proper queen.
     
  3. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    In some myths it was said that Zeus threw him off of Olympus for being ugly or trying to protect Hera, so maybe this is one of those versions.
     
  4. AR760

    AR760 Experienced.

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    Does anyone know how Godhood within the universe of With This Ring is supposed to track with a God having multiple domains? I mean, at least as far as the "Old Gods" a la Zeus or Athena go, they tend to have multiple domains within which they hold some kind of divine portfolio or power. However New Gods seem to have one main theme, maybe two at best, which doesn't seem equal.

    Like could a New God acquire multiple domains? Whether natural or awakened? If they could, would it require defeating another New God and essentially taking their mantle? Or would it involve developing enough skill and power in the area of power in question, a la a God of War learning and growing their Magical skill for that kind of development to take place?
     
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  5. Assblaster5000

    Assblaster5000 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    It seems to be an issue of where they get their divinity from as far as I'm aware. New Gods have a direct tap into The Source whereas the more typical ones arise from The Dreaming and get their power from there.

    What, exactly, the particulars of all that are hasn't ever been mentioned (again, as far as I know), but a half decent guess is that the gestalt belief of any given species gives rise to multifaceted gods akin to Zeus and so on from The Dreaming based off of what people think their gods ought to be. The Source meanwhile seems to hand some defining concept out and all but says "This is what you are."

    No clue if it's intentional or not but it honestly feels a bit like a parallel to the living mythologies of groups like the ancient Greeks vs the more "static" ones like most of the modern Abrahamic religions. One group is a living story, the other gets defined and has to operate within that ruleset.
     
  6. AR760

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    The odd thing though is the most recent chapter essentially calls Gods the terminals of the Titans. Meant to be a layer of abstraction built upon the underlying primal force to better allow them to interact with humanity and/or other forms of complex life.

    So Zeus is originally linked with Aether, so you would think theoretically should be limited to the boundaries of Aether's domain. But Zeus has elements completely outside of Aether like Justice.

    Meanwhile you would think that even if the Source worked the way you are describing, a person could embody more than one domain given how complex beings are usually complex. Sure, it might be difficult for two seemingly mutually exclusive domains, like Tyranny or Freedom (Which arguably have their own links so they're not necessary two complete opposites either), but I see no reason why a Domain like Nature or Conquest couldn't also be embodied by a God of Magic.

    We even see mortals getting the New God upgrade here in the fic in areas which arguably will inevitably end up touching upon one another. What happens when there are two ascended New Gods of Magic? And we know there can be multiple Gods of Conquest running around a la Grayvern and Paul. So that adds another layer of confusion onto it all imo.
     
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  7. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    He's literally putting together a plan that involves sacrificing an unborn child to power up a god...

    There is no world that isn't evil...
     
  8. Daniel Lowe

    Daniel Lowe Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    what was that called if you don't mind me asking?
     
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  9. Michael Vonica

    Michael Vonica Know what you're doing yet?

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    Vaermina response.

    This unborn child is less a person and more a fundamental force of nature, like sunlight or ocean currents. While it may one day develop a consciousness, it is currently no more than a representation of technology. What is technology? Items designed and built to serve a purpose. Taking this nascent being and crafting it into a tool would not be some gross injustice. The act isn't even that far from this being's domain. I doubt that there would be much suffering on the technology titan's part. And leaving the creature to its own natural birth holds the risk of uncontrollable devastation. Much better to take part in the act and ensure that all goes well. As far as anyone can tell, no one suffers, a good god gets a well deserved gift, and danger is prevented.
     
  10. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Assimilation, most likely. It's a slow starter, but stick with it, it gets good.
     
  11. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    I think Zoat once mentioned that New Gods can only have one domain.

    One of the best YJ fics out there.

    The MC is a great character and the romance between him and Kori was just incredibly sweet.
     
  12. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    It's still sacrificing an unborn child...

    Now, maybe maybe you could excuse that if the power boost was needed to stop say, Darkseid. But Lawful Evil Paul wants it to punish a guy for giving a friend of his a shit job after she refused to sleep with him.

    That's like... Not even Constantine would do something like that...
     
  13. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    John Constantine killed the newly born Anti-Christ with an axe. He'd be all for doing something like this if he thought it was worth it.
     
  14. Radix

    Radix I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    So is contraception. I am not going to touch an abortion debate here. But it basically is.

    Paragon is by no measure a good person, but at worst he operates on a very blue-orange morality. Quite literally. And it at least open about how his morality is focused on "his" as opposed to a form od common good. He has no issue with stuff that Zeus or Nabu does whrn other people do it as long as they don't do it to his friends. He has excused far worse than what Zeus has done here. Not just excused, but he even has activrly enabled some behavior worse.
     
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  15. rkyeun

    rkyeun Cabbitus Maximus

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    No, it's not still that, for the reason explained, and repeating yourself doesn't slip a black ring onto your argument's finger.
     
  16. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    Yeah, at most it's like sacrificing an unborn child that will grow up to be that nearly omnipotent kid from the Twilight Zone ep It's a Good Life" that sent anyone who displeased him "to the cornfield", if they were lucky...
     
  17. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    He could also grow up to be the next Bill Nye The Science Guy.
     
  18. rkyeun

    rkyeun Cabbitus Maximus

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    No, it's like wiping a cumshot off the floor. It has the potential to become a being, if a certain chain of events happen and it lands in a fertile place. But that isn't currently the case. Right now, it's a half-full turkey baster of god goo.
     
  19. Threadmarks: Coup Data (part 15)
    Mr Zoat

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    "Halt, dem-!"

    Zagreus spots me, and lowers his bow.

    "Lantern, I realise that you are frequently a stranger to reason, but we try to keep demons out of Erebos."

    Richard Simpson tries to make himself look smaller. The thaumically active and anatomically accurate android body he's currently in doesn't have any sort of size-changing ability, and the warding chains that prevent him accessing his more exotic abilities are in place to prevent him adding such an ability. As a result, he's limited to cringing. It's a bit odd; he's not any physically weaker than Nergal was, and all that will happen if his body gets damaged is a few minutes of inconvenience for me.

    "Mister Simpson has information vital to a project I'm pursuing, and I need to get him and Hecate together in one place."

    Zagreus doesn't look impressed.

    "I was coming to the palace to get permission from Lord Hades; you just intercepted us before we arrived."

    "Really."

    "I respect Lord Hades."

    His right hand goes to his forehead. "Then in my father's name, tell me what you are planning."

    "Are you sure that you want me to?"

    He regards me for a moment.

    "No. No I am not. But I have a duty."

    "Are you familiar with the term 'plausible deniability'?"

    "Yes. I assume that you're going to do something I might want to deny having known about."

    "I say no such thing. But you could see how something like that could be-."

    "Go. Go. Just-. Go."

    "Thank you!"

    I pick up Mr. Simpson with a construct and fly at speed in the direction of Hecate's Pool Party.

    "You didn't tell Hecate I was coming either, did you?"

    "No. But I'm confident that she'll be interested to meet you."

    "How come?"

    "Wouldn't you rather live in a universe where she is than a universe where she isn't?"

    "Shiiiiiiiit."

    A couple of probably-Amazons are mock-wrestling on the inflatable, while there's a greater current of action amongst the others. Eris-

    "Hey!"

    -is holding court, but pushes through the swimwear-clad courtiers to get closer to me the moment we make eye contact. At least she's wearing clothes now.

    "Lady Eris. This is-."

    "Does Hades know you've got a demon?"

    "He will once Zagreus tells him. This is Mister Richard Simpson."

    Eris looks at him, an expression of amused curiosity on her face.

    "A demon lord hiding in a robot body. Did you do that?"

    "I did most of the robot. The rest was him. Is Lady Hecate still around?"

    "A demon, a goddess and a giant snake walk into a pool party." She smiles. "I've got to know the punch line."

    Mr. Simpson looks around a little awkwardly as Eris leads the way back towards the tower. "I wasn't expecting a pool."

    "It's a reward for working out how to purify the river Lethe. They've been working on that for a while."

    "Purify as in..?"

    "Turn it into normal water, with the residue being a nasty mind wipe magic."

    She shoves the door open and marches inside.

    "He-cat-ay! My guy's doing his thing again!"

    The shop from before is gone, replaced by a slightly old school arcane workshop. Hecate in teenager mode is standing at a lectern, reading through a modern book on Atlantean thaumaturgy.

    She looks at Mr. Simpson, who raises his right hand to wave awkwardly.

    "What is this? A demon golem?"

    "No." Mr. Simpson shakes his head. "I was a human studying how to use altered states of consciousness to allow the human mind to directly interface with electronic systems. A bloke called John Constantine asked me to have a look at this weird cult called the Resurrection Crusade. I got him the info, but they-. I got too focused. Didn't spot their defence spells. My body got burned to ash while I was still inside."

    "But you're a demon golem."

    "Getting to that. John got into a fight with Nergal, and since he's a fifty a day smoker he wasn't going to outrun him. Instead, he did what I did: put his soul into a computer system. So I took his body and ended up face to face with Nergal. Bloody lucky he realised I wasn't John-. Then I showed Nergal how to go after John, and John got him to chase him into Heaven's data network. Angels burned Nergal to death, but I still had John's cancer-ridden body. Which for some reason, John wanted back. So John convinced me to take Nergal's body instead. I managed to integrate with it -which wasn't much fun- and got to enjoy it for a whole five seconds before Agony and Ecstasy dragged me to hell."

    Hecate considers this.

    "They burned his spirit, while the physical form remained. And you were able to interface with it?"

    "Well, yeah. I'd been living in a computer, dodging technomantic defences and dealing with a reality the human mind isn't designed for. Compared to that, a thing made of human vice was easy."

    "What an adaptable consciousness you must have. And why are you in a golem?"

    "I did okay in hell. Even took over the Odium. But it was still hell. I wanted out, and the best way looked like using the dream of machines to bootstrap myself into full godhood. Only this-. Lantern, stopped me. Made me this body so I don't have to worry about the other demons finding me, but that's not a permanent solution."

    "The dream of machines? What do you-?" Her eyes widen slightly. "Oh."

    I nod. "Modern machines are like nothing in nature. They have their own nature that doesn't shade into anything else in the Dream. Mister Simpson found something emerging. I want the two of you to put your heads together to see if it can be used to empower a god enough that they'll be able to fight Zeus."

    "That is interesting." Hecate looks at Eris with a smile. "I see why you like this one."
     
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  20. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    Before or after it causes untold amounts of death and destruction by accident? Because Titans are to us much like we are to ants, as in it hard to notice when you step on them.
     
  21. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Hah!

    So true!

    Except he may also end up stuck in Erebos and then in Tartarus.

    Or Zagreus' arrows could actually permanently kill him.

    Though you have an odd way of showing it.

    'consciousness to'

    'to ash'

    Getting some ideas on how to get rid of Zeus.

    'Hecate'
     
  22. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    No they arent, we saw what Titans were really like first hand in story.
     
  23. Darko

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    Yeah, Constantine's moral limit may be baby rape.

    That's probably one of the few lines he won't cross, but he'll still do a lot of things that aren't so evil.

    The problem with that is that a lot of things can still be extremely evil but not in the same level as baby rape.

    Yeah, Luthor comes to mind.

    The guy has done a lot of evil shit but Paul hasn't been all that interested in opposing him just because it hasn't hurt people he cares about.

    Though he seems to have forgotten all the times the Light tried to kill him and his friends.

    Heck, he even helped Luthor.
     
  24. hance1986

    hance1986 A pitiful excuse for a man.

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    ash
    the
     
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    That should say 'Lethe'. The water of Leith is a real world river.

    That should say 'his'.

    Nice to see that she's onboard with this. It's always nice to have gods with whom you are friendly with.
     
  26. Coltsguy

    Coltsguy Colts fan. Anime fan. Breast and back fan.

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    Man, this section of chapters has been a fun read.
     
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    I know OL's a bit crazy, but 'demon'? Still, it's nice to see Zagreus takes guard duty seriously. Though I suspect OL's lucky he didn't shoot first, investigate the remains later. With an eleven-foot pole.

    Surprised you don't simply have him trussed up like a hand-bag. A handle would probably make it easier to keep him where you can see him...

    And since Hecate is unlikely to be inclined to leave Erebos, well...

    Easier to ask forgiveness than permission, what with bring a live demon in here.

    Are you sure you really want to know? Really, really sure? :D

    ...No, no he is not.

    :confused: ...I swear, I am not reading ahead.

    Can't admit to doing something of dubious legality and safety, after all.

    He isn't paid enough to deal with this shit. ...Not that he's paid at all.

    Such is the drawback of OL's spur-of-the-moment impulses. They're often hard on other people's blood pressure.

    ...I mean, anatomically correct body. But setting that aside...

    Unless that's a joke about OL's Earth, I don't follow... o_O

    Chances they aren't wrestling, but are actually 'wrestling'? x3

    Surprised they haven't got a sound system set up, laying down the DOOFs... :p Ain't a proper party without music.

    ...Let's just hope he doesn't come busting in at the wrong moment.

    OL might have played a part, yes. Do you like it? :D

    It's gonna be a hum-dinger. Zeus won't be so amused, but fuck him. ;)

    It's probably the most harmful of the rivers of the Underworld. And yes, I am including Phlegethon, river of fire, in that metric.

    No doubt Hecate's been working on ways to weaponise it for Hades? Or at least dispose of it safely.

    Oh, don't brag because your favourite worshipper is so exciting... :rolleyes:

    Putting OL's offerings to good use, I see.

    'And that was the first time I died...' I'm sure Hecate heard the name Constantine and went 'Yup, that'll happen.'

    Sadly, that's about normal for a Constantine plot-line...

    Well, just a matter of rewriting the hardware drivers.

    ...Boy, she is really stuck on the 'golem' thing, isn't she? :p

    ...Yup. A new Titan, after thousands of years. Not yet aware beyond the most instinctive level, just waiting for someone to snap up its power...

    I'm sure it'll be an interesting exercise for her. And such fascinating company.

    Well, she's in. Anyone else needing to be lined up for this not-a-heist OL's setting up? Man, this is going to come completely out of left field for the Olympians. Only a few of them seem to really comprehend that humanity has been changing, and they need to change with them. Zeus and so many others have just been chilling in Olympus. :sneaky: Maybe the shake-up will do them some good...
     
  28. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Well... Lawful Evil Paul should need the Moirai, since without them there should be a 100% chance this fails.
     
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    I mean, I wouldn't suggest that course of action, but if that's what it takes to resolve Zeus' focus on Diana....

    Oh, wait.
     
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    Fortunately Zagreus is a god so he may be immune to that.

    Though I wouldn't be surprised if Paul somehow has him develop one.

    More like wrestling.

    A crazy ride that ultimately ends in tragedy.

    Holy crap, now I can't stop thinking of Rick and Morty.

    He even has Hephaestus!
     
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