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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Maybe he's being influenced by the mind of the Erdammeru?
     
  2. ForeverShogo

    ForeverShogo Not too sore, are you?

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    Unless he is constantly making significant, game-changer improvements to the designs of NEMO's ships, I feel like Kalmin must surely have hit a point of diminishing returns such that his continued survival really can't continue to be justified.
     
  3. Signaller

    Signaller Know what you're doing yet?

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    How many green rings have the Guardians made since the OLC was established, and were there any spikes in the spectrum at those moments in time?
     
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  4. Darko

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    Because he is.

    True, but compared to the Qwardians their sins are nothing.

    It's like saying that someone that once committed accidental manslaughter is as bad as the Nazis.

    There's an easy solution to that.

    Kill Kalmin.

    "Focus on the mission first. The muder comes later."

    "Focus on the mission. The castration and beating coming to the Qwardian comes later."
     
  5. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    I don't think OL would really mind it much if Orion did kill Kalmin, he isn't of that much use anymore and is a massive potential danger.
     
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  6. Bigking321

    Bigking321 Not too sore, are you?

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    I find this arc very interesting. But at the moment I'm mainly confused.

    Ah well. I sure all will be explained.
     
  7. Darko

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    Paul's not necessarily all that good at figuring out when he should get rid of certain problematic individuals.

    Look at how long it took him to figure out that Luthor is a lost cause.

    He may still think that Kalmin has some use.
     
  8. Duke Long

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    ‘its’?
    It’s possible that he actually is semi-regularly making major improvements, by holding back his technology and releasing it slowly, because of this very reason. Also, I think his continued survival can be justified quite easily even with a low return. With the scale they operate on, a very small improvement to technology could save thousands of lives, and obviously a larger one could save millions or billions. Given that Kalmin isn’t really doing much harm right now (except to the Reach), I don’t think there’s much reason to kill him now. The war will last years, after all.
     
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  9. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    Wait. I thought Paul Did kill Ras. With a rail gun ug through the noggin. As soon as he rezzed from a pool.
    Is he lying to jade or not?
     
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  10. dw7thdoctor

    dw7thdoctor Getting sticky.

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    I'm sure Paul doesn't count that as killing if the man just gets back five minutes later.
     
  11. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    He shot him as soon a he finished resurrecting and then collapsed the already spent Lazarus pool.

    Or maybe I'm misremembering things.
     
  12. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    I think he shot him, watched him get resurrected and then nabbed the Lazarus sarcophagus. Then he brought that and the info to the cave, which prompted the raid on Infinite Island, I think the name was? But by then Ra's was alive and gone from the place.
     
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  13. dw7thdoctor

    dw7thdoctor Getting sticky.

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    I think your miss remembering Paul just shot him that time to find the location of the pit. Once he had that he called in the Justice League.
     
  14. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    I'm sorry to say you're mistaken, my friend. He shot Ra's, then shot a bunch of stuff in the island, then stole the sarcophagus and finally went to the cave.

    He originally thought he had killed Clayface and was a bit morose, but after a chat with Batman he got better about it and then explained what he did, presenting the sarcophagus from subspace and everything. It wasn't until then that the League found out about the Island and had to improvise a raid on it.
     
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  15. Mr Zoat

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    Thank you, corrected.
    Jade is assuming that someone did something to make him permanently dead. The SI is standing by his assersion that it wasn't him.
     
  16. Radix

    Radix I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Why does he think Nylor did it? When did this robot thing happen?
     
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  17. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    By this point you've let a lot of people down.
     
  18. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    [Gestures towards the Story Only thread]

    Somewhere in there.
     
  19. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    Not an abbreviation, so just "Wouldst".

    Usually one word.
     
  20. RoninSword

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    Mr Zoat was there something we missed where Paul actually got samples of the Butcher's Blood? My understanding was that all he managed to do was allow Orion to absorbed residual Red Light. But that's not the same thing as having the actual Blood (which by all appearances the Free Lancers got from both planets).
     
  21. Threadmarks: Butcher's Blood (part 20)
    Mr Zoat

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    21st January 2013
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    I try scanning him, only to have his personal shield baffle my effort. Touching him-.

    Jade starts to reach out, then stops herself and drops her hand.

    Trying to touch him when he's got a force field I don't recognise active would be a bad and quite possibly terminal idea. It's eaten through the bit of the… Deck? It's… Is this stone? But only a little way, because Kalmin's far too capable a technologist to set a disintegration field to 'just keep going' unless that's useful.

    "Dead?"

    Orion doesn't sound particularly concerned.

    "I can't tell. His shield-."

    "Ah, I'd almost forgotten that Weaponers could sense the machines of war, if they were powerful enough."

    News to… Me. "Draan Del Daar, would you mind explaining?"

    "I didn't invite a Weaponer into a maltusian's workshop. You can hardly blame me if he suffers some ill-effects."

    "Right. I thought that your workshop was the room on the surface."

    "At my age? That's barely a foot locker."

    "So..? Where do you want us?"

    Guiding lights appear along the corridors ahead.

    "This way. Leave the Weaponer there or bring him; it makes no difference to me. Though I imagine that he might find it quite interesting, if he regains consciousness."

    Yes, yes, we're being betrayed.

    I try scanning through the surface of the moon, and get nothing. The corridor behind us has firmly closed.

    Hm.

    He's a maltusian. He doesn't have any material desires that he can't meet himself. Members of the actual Controller faction compete for influence and renown through taking positions and proving them viable. That's why Hinon has seniority at the moment and the guy who founded the Darkstars is number two. Killing useful assets reduces that, and while I doubt that killing us would actually trouble him, he wouldn't do it as a result of acquisitiveness. I don't think that I have anything that he wants. If he was interested in the orange light there's an Orange Central Power Battery sitting in the open for him to look at. It's advertising for unaligned maltusians anyway, no one's going to stop him studying it or connecting himself to it.

    Turns out that I can't guess the motives of a being millions of years old.

    Ah, crumblers under the floor that's under Kalmin, cut through and pick him up… Yes, that worked, and now I can carry him along. I-.

    "I should have known that we would face betrayal."

    "Yeah, I feel the same way."

    Jade turns her helmet my way. "You weren't expecting it?"

    "It's just… So illogical." I turn to Orion. "Up to you. He's clearly up to something crazy, but I don't know what and I still want that ring. If you say 'no', I'll do my level best to return you to New Genesis at once."

    He regards me cautiously. Measure of a Man.

    He keeps regarding me. Once Bitten, Thrice Shy.

    Then he turns towards the path. "No. We will finish this. If this is mere mummery then I will merely express my displeasure at his gamesmanship. If he acts against me, then he will not leave here alive."

    He powers up his astro-harness and shoots down the corridor.

    "After he..? Makes the ring?"

    "There are plenty of other maltusians, Paul."

    "It's a specialist-. Shall we?"

    She nods, and we accelerate after Orion with Kalmin floating along like a trailer.

    "It's a specialist subject. Most power ring specialists either stayed Guardian or are Controllers because that's where the specialty gets used. There are actually only three on Maltus who could make a red ring within a reasonable timeframe, and the others are even more neurotic. And so far, he hasn't actually done anything to us other than be a bit cagey and annoying."

    "Do you think that's all he'll do?"

    "Not in a million years."

    We catch up with Orion, and… There isn't really a lot to say. Ring scans are returning nothing at all helpful. The walls look like they're made of stone blocks, but since we've got air and gravity-.

    "Draan Del Daar, this isn't some sort of maltusian bachelor pad, is it? The design is very gothic but-."

    "No. It doesn't like being changed."

    "'Maltusian bachelor pad'?"

    "I know they breed like pandas, but the core motivating factors of organic life must be in there somewhere."

    "I've long since moved beyond such things."

    "You know, a few years ago I more or less shut down my sex drive so that I wouldn't be distracted from my work." I shake my head. "It's not a good idea."

    "Again, speak to me when you are a million years old. Ah, you've arrived."

    There's a door of… Some sort of highly sophisticated material that I can't scan. It splits into twelve sections, each sliding into the surrounding wall to reveal a short corridor leading to a metal-lined chamber. Two… Troughs? Of glowing redStuff, sit on either side of a ring-forge, the contents looking like a cross between a liquid and a construct.

    Did he..? Already have this?

    Orion is incensed. "If you already had the Butcher's essence, why did you send us on that quest!?"

    "Because you could absorb what was left, and create a link between yourself and the Butcher Entity. It will improve the quality of the ring."

    "Then why are you not here?"

    "I am here. Just… Diffuse. I will be overseeing the process, but I will need you to carry out some of the physical actions."

    Orion turns to me. "Lantern, is that plausible?"

    "Krona was punished with dematerialisation, so that's something that maltusians can undergo and survive. Hinon implied to me that a ring forged for a specific person will respond better, but she's never said anything about one I make being better for me."

    "That is because I do not precisely feel rage or hatred any longer, while Hinon Hee Hannanan continues to feel avarice. Age takes its toll, even on us."

    "I've forged rings before. It didn't cause me any harm. It should be fine; just keep your focus."

    Orion nods, and flies over to the forge.
     
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  22. Mr Zoat

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    Thank you, corrected.
    No, it's pretty much the same, but the Free Lancers did get most of it from both places.
     
  23. Darko

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    "Kalmin's a far"

    "then I will"

    "powers his"

    I remember a comic where the Guardians and Zamarons were planning on turning into energy.
     
  24. Bigking321

    Bigking321 Not too sore, are you?

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    So... this guy sent the freelancers to grab the blood, then sent Paul and company to the same spots to absorb the residue?
     
  25. Odysseus2099

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    They're in the Void Hound aren't they? I remember Zoat mentioning it as being in the Maltus system years ago. I suppose that's as good a place as any for making a Red ring.
     
  26. dw7thdoctor

    dw7thdoctor Getting sticky.

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    I didn't think Paul has forged rings yet. He forged a lantern and also pulled Kronos' ring out of the Holden of Avarice, but making a new ring with all the functions that Malthusian imbue in their rings I don't think Paul has done that yet.
     
  27. Chojin Patriarch

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    I rather suspect any defence Kalmin has is likely to be somewhat inimical to organic matter. So best to poke him with a long stick. Like, say, a ten-foot-pole. Or better yet, a twelve-foot-pole, just in case the traps have an eleven-foot radius. :D

    That would be awfully convenient, but I doubt they're that lucky.

    The joy of being a paranoid omnicidal genius. Being able to passively kill anyone stupid enough to try and offer aid is probably a bonus for Kalmin.

    ...I mean, it's not improbable. Much in the same way that Maltusians have a natural knack for using Spectrum energies.

    Or at least a bespoke work site for the Ring-making.

    ...The whole moon is basically his armament storage facility, isn't it? Besides the ancient alien super-weapon it's made from?

    Assuming he doesn't insist on disintegrating you for the offence.

    Erdammeru's shielding probably not making that any easier, is it?

    That's what happens when a person has the power to be a post-scarcity civilisation in their own right, and millions of years of practical experience. Hence Draan's apparent love of Science! for it's own sake.

    Sadly, until he turns off the 'whatever-it-is'-field, that's about all they can do. Heck, it might be the only thing keeping Erdammeru's defences from killing him outright.

    To be honest, you probably thought you could trust him, OL. Let that be a lesson to you.

    ...You're still hoping he plans to make the Ring and let you guys have it?

    I can imagine even OL sweating a little under that gaze.

    At least you'll get a chance to take your annoyance out on someone today, Orion.

    Who haven't locked into Orange Light specialisation yet?

    If weapons-boy turns into dead weight if you need to haul ass out of there... Leave him behind. :sneaky:

    ...More neurotic? Good grief.

    Suspicious, but not unreasonable, being inside a moon and all.

    I mean, some people like that sort of aesthetic. Though that 'It doesn't like being changed' is rather telling.

    I mean, even having sex with every sapient species in the galaxy would probably get boring eventually.

    Though everyone did get some laughs out of how dense you were being about the romance thing.

    ...Motherfucker. That's the Butcher's Blood, isn't it?

    At least now we know who sent the Free Lancers after it for certain.

    ...All that side-questing... For a +1 to a skill check? <facepalm>

    ...You mean they're breathing him right know? ...Ew. :eek:

    I mean, on one level, you can customise the programming, if nothing else. But i suspect your skill bonus isn't high enough to trigger the masterwork bonuses Hinon meant.

    And just like Kalmin, it comes down to someone beating molten emotion into a Ring shape. How... Fitting.

    Ironically, doing this manually, pounding and beating on the Ring matter with a hammer, seems somehow appropriate for a Ring of Rage. And Orion can make sure that there's no hidden traps or protocols tucked away, if he's surrounding it with his Godhead. On the other hand, a Ring this bespoke won't be much use for mass production. Not that OL planned to do so, I suppose.
     
  28. The Froggy Ninja

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    Actually I think it would be “Kalmin’s far too capable a technologist”
     
  29. RoninSword

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    He made comment earlier about being able to make rings (and it not being that secret that he can). Readers commented on it at the time and the conclusion we came to was that it just happened off screen.
     
  30. Darko

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    Plus it's Qwardian tech, so he'd know.

    Draan: How does it feel to have my essence inside of you?

    Everyone: Please...stop...

    I mean, in the comics a Guardian made a ring like that.
     
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