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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    'Fun' isn't the word I'd have used, but I'm glad that you liked it.
     
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  2. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    Well, that was interesting, in a disturbing way (which is basically what it needed to be to work).
     
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  3. theaceoffire

    theaceoffire Versed in the lewd.

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    ... I know they keep trying to pretend that she has some sort of agenda that is just hard to explain, but this is really coming off like a fetish thing.

    "Life is meaningless, step on me Mommy!"
     
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    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    Yikes. I hope the White Light comes soon, this is depressing
     
  5. CTrees

    CTrees Chasing the ring

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    Especially with the reader-only mystery of who "Mistress" is (everyone in-story seems to know, but they aren't telling US for some reason), I'm starting to picture her as a stereotypical (or Southpark-style) goth kid. Match wants to know what she wants, but she really only wants to sit on her stoop being performatively miserable and writing awful poetry for her Anti-Livejournal.
     
  6. Bramble Thorn

    Bramble Thorn Verified Silhouette

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    ...braaaains...
     
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  7. Citizen

    Citizen Well worn.

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    I have concerns about his working conditions.
     
  8. Frank Iannetta

    Frank Iannetta Getting out there.

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    I wonder if Mistress could be M’gann? Match says she used to be a good person. Maybe she got overwhelmed by the anti-life. Being invisible and intangible would make it pretty hard to find her. She’s even called Mistress Martian in the comics at times.
     
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  9. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    I remember this Lucifer comic where there was a guy who's fiance or wife thought that he was somehow enlightened.

    Turns out the guy was just massively depressed and just didn't care about living.

    No shit.

    You know, the Joker may honestly be one of the more dangerous threats if he can control Anti-Life.

    Given his own mental state, it may be possible.
     
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  10. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    I think the Sheeda destroyed Hub City.

    Though the people in these locations may be doing slightly better compared to other parts.

    it was mentioned that 3rd world countries wre handling it better due to having to deal with depressing situations more often, so the same may apply here.

    Though he did have the advantage that many people probably didn't try to look too deep

    Good luck staying sane after spending time around the Joker.
     
  11. BartlettMagic

    BartlettMagic peekaboo, you fucks you!

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    i may be forgetting, but has there been any description about what the Hellenistic pantheon is doing in/about the Anti-Life? i know we had the episode with the fungus infecting the Green, but i think it would be interesting to hear what new/improved Heph or even Melinoe might be doing about the Anti-Life. or even just how it's affecting them, having so much of humanity spiritually messed up.
     
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  12. xSieg

    xSieg Making the rounds.

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    Why would you even be a Joker henchman, anyway? Does his pay average out better because he's so mercurial he's quick to give bonuses for good heisting?
    Because a random chance of being mogged by a stupid prop cigar of all things makes the idea of chilling with Bane or Penguin or someone else more 'normal' seem much better even if the pay's trash
     
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  13. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    I imagine it's less dangerous than being in most street gangs. Less picky for recruitment, too.
     
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  14. Rebu

    Rebu hey, little Anna, you're the one

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    Not by much.
     
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  15. mastermenthe

    mastermenthe Mint Thistle

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    As far as we know they can't do much, the Anti-Life has created a mostly impenetrable film across the thaumosphere of the planet.

    For the gods to do anything they would have to punch a hole open, and right now their usual channels of worship and divine power are completely jammed.

    They could enter the world directly, if they wanted to personally risk the Anti-Life, but then the film would cut them off from their own greater selves anyways, so it's a bad move regardless.

    It is implied that there some political drama going on in the Pantheons of the globe, internal strife between the gods who side with The Status Quo or side with Apocalypse or side with New Genesis. Like Marvel Comics Civil War Arc, but for the gods.

    No one knows what Hell is up to, they seem to be more afraid of Anti-Life exposure than the Gods.
     
  16. RoninSword

    RoninSword Sky God

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    John did manage to block the Anti-Life from hitting Themyscira's reform island, granted he created the barrier right before the Anti-Life hit so who knows if that shield can be expanded to the rest of the islands.
     
  17. Darko

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    Desperate people will do many things to survive, even if those things have a chance of killing them.

    Others may be crazy nd just admire the Joker.

    Bane seems to primarily operate in South and Central America in this fic, and Penguin is more or less legit.

    Mist did mention that some gods like the Shinto may work for Apokalips if it's necessary for survival.

    It would make sense.

    The Anti-Life targets negative emotions like despair and increases them by a hundred, and living in Hell likely makes despair very, very present.
     
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  18. RoninSword

    RoninSword Sky God

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    Mist mentioned that the Shinto may hold themselves back because they assume that Earth will triumph, so why should they waste any power when it'll happen anyways. Not on Apokalips side, but certainly mercenary/strategic.
     
  19. Threadmarks: Home Field (part 6)
    Mr Zoat

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    6th February 2013
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    It's morning. We're here in the morning, in the open, and this… Should be a school day. Except there's nothing happening, even at the good schools. Even if the teachers turn up, people don't want to teach. Or get taught.

    That's not exactly how it is in places where the Anti-Life hasn't taken over. Wally's still going to school, and so are Conner and M'gann. Mom… Hasn't really said.. anything, but I'm studying in my own time to try and keep up. I could get a transfer, but-.

    "Hey… Artemis?"

    I look over at Dick for a moment, then go back to watching the Anti-Lifed thugs.

    "Yeah?"

    "Was this how..? Gotham used to be?"

    "How d'you mean?"

    "My family travelled around a lot. I'd been on three continents before I ever came to Gotham. And I was pretty young. Even when I started as Robin, I didn't really know how bad things were."

    I frown. "Didn't Batman have you following him around every night?"

    "Hardly. Training was every day. Fighting crime was one night a week. Maybe three if there was a holiday. I saw plenty of crime, but I didn't know how representative what I saw was of the whole of the city."

    He glances at his wrist computer, checking the feeds from the cameras he's planted.

    "And I've read up on things since then, but it's not the same as seeing it. Do you remember?"

    "Dad didn't encourage me to socialise." But that's not a helpful answer. "No. Thanks to Mistress, there's only one gang in town. Back then, any of the gangs could be attacked by any of the other gangs. So walking around on the street first thing in the morning? That wasn't really something they did. Not outside the middle of their territory. And they walk different."

    "Yeah, I know what you mean. These guys… They don't care who sees them."

    I nod. "They don't-." Damn it. "They didn't used to walk like that after Batman cleaned up the city, because the cops started doing their jobs and they could get arrested. They didn't walk like that in the old days because the cops were paid off by one of the mobs and they didn't like it when people committed crimes without asking permission first."

    "Were there this many?"

    "Ah…" I try remembering, but I wasn't all that old either. "I don't know. I think there were more other people around."

    People aren't really living. They're just going through the motions. I've looked in on a few families when I visit Mom, and it's kinda like they're robots. Not modern robots. Complicated wind-up ones from the sixties, where they stumble around the place without knowing why they're doing anything, and if they're even a little at the wrong angle they'll trip over the furniture.

    We're already seeing signs of malnutrition. Even if people aren't killing themselves, they're not taking care of themselves.

    And on that subject…

    "How are they managing the food supply?"

    "Some of Poison Ivy's henchpeople got infected, and they set up some city farm plots. But food doesn't get produced all the time. Harvesting crops in the US doesn't happen for months. It's mostly imports that have shut down, and that was way down anyway after the Sheeda attacks."

    "What about interstate trucking?"

    "You can order stuff. We're still getting oranges in Happy Harbor. You have to get really demanding about it, but once things are moving, they tend to stay moving." He nods. "If we don't get this fixed inside a month, that'll get worse."

    Another… Month..?

    "Hey."

    He's… Put his hand on my arm. I didn't notice-.

    "If we can't get it fixed inside a month we can always do what OL said."

    "Move to another planet?" Dick nods. Like a lot of things Paul says, that was somewhere between 'funny' and 'terrifyingly serious'. "But if you're right and people can be broadcasters, wouldn't we just bring it with us?"

    "Don't worry about that. With a new colony, we wouldn't have enough food for everyone anyway."

    Heh.

    "Oh, that's totally wrong."

    "No, Mister Atom checked the figures. Plants need all kinds of soil microbes, and if you have to introduce them to a new planet, that takes… A while. We'd actually have to raid about fifty sewage treatment plants for raw material."

    I gag.

    Right… Fertiliser, and microbes…

    "Mister Atom was pretty sure we could fit it all in two oil tankers. We'd just have to reinforce them so Superman could carry them."

    "Hah!" I can't help smiling at that image. "Okay. Thanks."

    "I got pranked by a robot with no sense of humor this morning. I feel like I need to up my game."

    "Mister Atom pranks people?"

    "He's got a program for it. Oh, here we go."

    I lean over to look at his computer screen, and I see the truck doing deliveries for Mistress. She's set up a food-for-work program for anyone who can drag themselves over there. A lot of the people who take her up on that end up as part of her pseudo-Justified gang, and that's why we haven't wanted to risk getting too close.

    Dick moves the screen so I can see its relative position. Okay. I notch a tracking arrow and raise it. Check distance, check wind speed, and… Loose.

    Two. One.

    "Good shot, Arte. Clean contact."

    This type of tracking arrow actually disintegrates after the tracker gets attached. At this time of day, there's no way they wouldn't notice a regular one. This has got a shorter transmitting range, but…

    "Robin to Canis. You're good to have breakfast."

    "I'm sure that dining with such lowlies will bring back many memories."

    "Happy memories?"

    "Can I kill and cook them over their own fires?"

    "Ah, that's a no?"

    "Then merely memories. Canis out."

    I frown. "Are we sure this 'Mistress' chick even has an inner circle?"

    "Anti-Life makes them loyal to her, but it doesn't give people skills they don't have. There's nothing in her personal history which shows that she knows how to run a gang or rule a city. Someone's helping her. But they're not big on phones, or we could just hack them."

    "They don't have Apokoliptian technology, right?"

    "They shouldn't, but we've IDed a lot of ex-henchmen with them, and there's a lot of old supervillain tech around Gotham."

    "So they could have anything Batman's enemies had."

    Dick nods.

    "Great."
     
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  20. Darko

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    Odd that he'd ask, but it makes sense.

    He grew up in a traveling circus and even after moving to Gotham he lived in a wealthy part of the city.

    Yep.

    "the cops"

    "produced"
     
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    I wonder if Paul should start making contingency plans for the Justice League for other potential disasters like this one?
     
  22. Whenever Possible

    Whenever Possible Versed in the lewd.

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    I wonder what Mars knows/thinks about the Anti-life shenanigans happening right next door.
     
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    If they knew anything about it, they'd be scared out of their minds, possibly literally.
     
  24. Caerwen

    Caerwen Know what you're doing yet?

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    So who is mistress?
     
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    Dear god.

    They've got a giant penny. They're going to be unstoppable.

    :V

    Mars <-> Earth
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    New York <-> New Jersey

    "Oh god, what have they done *this* time, is it still on fire?"
     
  26. Chojin Patriarch

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    How diligent of you, Artemis. Thinking of the day you can't run around out there in tights and leather, battling crime. Admittedly, being Dannered up makes your crime-fighting days likely to be a lot longer than most.

    Heh. I would hope they've got their limiters off for the duration of this crisis. Though it has been, what, over a year since they got dosed by Paulphidian anyway. If they couldn't adapt in that time...

    I suppose he never did see much of the regular city life, after all. Plenty of its night life, though, if you catch my drift.

    Gotta remember, even if his family started here, he hasn't spent much time here before, well...

    And once the Freaks starting crawling out of the woodwork, that would get even less representative.

    After all, a history book can only do so much for painting a picture of the life then.

    Comes from being the big dogs.

    And there's always some young yahoo or new-in-town dolt trying to start shit...

    The purely mechanical kind, relying on precise timings that can foul up if there's so much as one hair out of place? I can picture it...

    Such is the nature of Anti-Life. Without a strong will to direct them...

    Which is why granaries were so important back in the ancient times. Even with fewer mouths to feed back then. 'Society is only three meals from collapse' and all that...

    ...Ironically, I could see karens serving as local middle-managers with their obnoxious resolve. :rolleyes:

    Yeah, looks bad, huh?

    OL's said a lot of crazy things. Which one do you mean? :p

    Terrible calculus, indeed.

    Hey, he's not lying.

    What better place for it. Dirty job, I know...

    Though that would probably be enough to seed hundreds of hectares of fields...

    Heh.And I'm impressed you're admitting that, Robin.

    Ah, back to work.

    Ah, taking the good old-fashioned method of trailing them, eh?

    Not bad for a mere human. I'm sure Celestial Archer would be impressed.

    Impressive trick. I'm assuming Nanomachines (son!)

    Eh, his idea of happy memories probably involves mass murder.

    Still, he asked first. Progress?

    I mean, what self-respecting evil leader wouldn't? Can't do everything herself.

    To be fair, most of the existing network structures pretty much run on automatic. But nothing says anyone has to use it.

    Which is a hell of a lot of shit. From Freeze Rays to old Fear Gas. Mind control hats to Smilex sprayers...

    On the upside, anything not breathable, you're a lot more resistant to.

    Good to see the Team hasn't forgotten the art of covert information gathering. Though I don't doubt that somehow, this will end up in a grand melee of superpowers. The only question is which side will be the stronger. Though it sounds like even they aren't sure just who this 'Mistress' is. I guess Batman isn't sure, but has his suspicions that he's not sharing...



    Double Space.
     
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    Sockmonkey I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I'm wondering what Thaanagar thinks about this. They're the interstellar power closest to Earth, and would not be thrilled to have a world controlled by Apocalypse right in their backyard.
     
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    Venom is apparently common enough that every time the Justice League knocks down a factory producing the stuff for international distribution a new one pops up.

    Not that amazing against heroes on it's own. But if you can source an autocannon, or have the suicidal justified/anti-lifers willing to wear around really heavy high-yield suicide vests, the extra equipment-carrying capacity Venom gives might be useful.
     
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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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    Given that so far all his plans have provably made things worse...

    That would probably be a bad idea.
     
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