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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    But first they needed to be decorated with up lifting murals using bright primary colors and pastels, also lots of potted plants and other bits of greenery.
     
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    Twilight666 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Broken tag. Also it's been 15' and not posted on this thread too.
     
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  3. Duke Long

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    ’mantle’
     
  4. Darko

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    Hmm, what does Nommo feel?

    Shit, now he may have access to corrupt the White Light entity.
     
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    Mr Zoat

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    "Taaru!" / "Taaru!" / "Taaru!" / "Taaru!" / "Taaru!"
    "We Are One!"

    "No."

    And… The Forever People stand there looking like lemons for a moment before diving for cover as Finality Man opens fire with its arm-mounted weapons. Fortunately Alan's on the ball, tearing a lump of concrete out of the ground and throwing it into the path of the beam.

    Railguns.

    Compliance.

    The concrete is annihilated, only the tiniest fragments falling to the ground, but the Forever People are able to scramble away from the giant robot. Justifiers are… Closing in-.

    "Accursed thief!"

    Orion flies at Finality Man's head, blossoming red chainsaw blades whirring around him. Finality Man's eyes glow red as it prepares to fire its eye beams, and I load a crumbler and fire at maximum power. The round hits it just as it fires, causing the same burst of red energy I remember from Norway as I spoil the shot. Orion hits a moment later, blades biting at-.

    "Die for Mannheim."

    Finality Man just punches him, shattering his construct and smashing him into the ground!

    Ah… Can we do this with Finality Man still active? Not sure. Going to try.

    Load mage slayers.

    Compliance.

    "Doctor Mist! Where is the elf gate?!"

    "Somewhere within the building."

    Ghia'ta and Stewart dart over to the Forever People, grab them and fly away from the Anti-Life broadcaster. Might work. I fire a volley of mage slayers rounds into the building itself in an attempt to shut down the gate but it would be pure luck at this point.

    "Can you shut it down?"

    "No, his grip is too strong."

    "He's connected it to himself?"

    "Yes-. I see. Thet may be possible. But we must deal with Finality Man."

    Finality Man's eyes go red again, and another crumbler-.

    Hits a force field, the glow is still building, and I'm not sure where he's looking girder!

    I rip the giant metal beam out of an abandoned building, bend it and hoopla it over Finality Man's head just as he fires, blocking the sho-.

    Blaster bolts hit my construct armour from the rear, and I half-turn to see Malvolio raining green fists down on the oncoming-.

    Graviton deflator and teleportation dis-. No, jammer.

    Compliance.

    "Taaru!" / "Taaru!" / "Taaru!" / "Taaru!" / "Taaru!"
    "We Are One!"


    Did that-?

    "Drax."

    "You've made a mess of my machine, Uxas." Prince Drax doesn't so much fly as run through the air, stepping off… Temporarily solid patches of air as he hurtles towards Finality Man. "That took a lot of work."

    Finality Man raises its hands and fires at him, but the beams of golden energy… Bend around and smash into its chest.

    "Which isn't to say it was perfect. If you Lanterns have a plan-"

    "Orange Lantern to everyone. Mannheim has bound himself to the gate network. We can hit him first."

    Drax dodges past Finality Man's arms, grabs onto its back and punches… Something on its back. "-you should probably get on with it." A blue light spreads out from the point of impact, and Finality Man freezes up. "This will only hold as long as I do."

    "Good." Usually a good sign when Batman likes the plan. "Green Lantern, Ghia'ta, keep the Justifiers from interfering. Everyone else, get to the main entrance."

    I fly fast, Malvolio just behind me and the others coming in from all directions. Stewart begins making hit and run attacks against the oncoming masses, but we need to do this quickly. I land, orange light pooling around my left hand.

    "You're not trying to make energy pulses. You're trying to forcibly inject the purest form of your colour into the target. Trying to push Darkseid… Whatever Darkseid did to Mannheim out of him. He can probably backhack any one of us. He can't backhack what we can do together."

    I raise my right hand, Larfleeze's ring shining, and I call desire forth from the world and push that into the Alliance Building. There's resistance, but I push on through, connecting with… Something. A… Dark presence-.

    "There seems aught to it."

    I can feel Malvolio's certainty and conviction. It's not like Guy, where he uses his own soul as a battering ram. This is all-enveloping presence putting everything just in its place. And it's there and around the gateway, but our colours aren't really combining or becoming greater than a sum of their parts.

    Carol joins next, reaching out to share her own sororal love with anyone who wants to see how it's done. Alan's unquenchable faith that everything will work out. Still nothing added, but we need all the parts.

    Batman's contribution is the fear of a thousand criminals and the fears of a collapsing civilisation. Everything's in flux and nothing's what we thought it was. Makes sense. And-.

    Ahh… I didn't…

    I didn't… Know that Nommo felt like that. I thought that his prime directive approach was an intellectual thing, not…

    Ah, okay, okay, it's working so far. Where-?

    Orion is trying to cut Finality Man's right leg off.

    "Orion! We need you!"

    "I need no tricks to destroy my father! But this thing-!"

    "The meaning of victory is not to merely defeat your enemy but to destroy him, to completely eradicate him from living memory, to leave no remnant of his endeavours, to crush utterly his achievement and remove from all record his every trace of existence!" He turns his head my way, actually paying attention. "We need to be able to erase the Anti-Life, or we haven't done anything. Darkseid loves the Anti-Life? Let's take away something he actually cares about."

    "Fine!"

    He stomps closer, opening his mouth and exhaling the accumulated rage of an immortal's lifetime, joining in our stream…

    And I feel-.

    "Thank you, fools."
     
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  6. Mr Zoat

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    Thank you, corrected.
    I have a cold. Woke up feeling freezing. Forced myself out of bed, turned the central heating and the fan heater on, posted on Story Only and then went back to bed. Got a temperature a few minutes later but wasn't thinking straight enough to turn the heating off. Felt hot and miserable for however long it's been.

    I mean, I knew that people over the age of 40 were more susceptible to disease but I've had two colds since my last birthday.
     
  7. Chojin Patriarch

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    Oof! Completely no-sold by master override, huh? Or is Mannheim simply suppressing their shared ability somehow? Which says worrying things about his current power level. We can but hope his ego has inflated in turn and he gets cocky.

    Well, then. Time to keep the escort NPCs alive until they can do their thing.

    Good, they're not dumb enough to try again right away. On the other hand, they might not get another chance at this rate.

    Hopefully, that wouldn't have simply annihilated Orion, but let's not test that theory until after you do the thing.

    Ah, right. Still a giant eff-off robot.

    Gonna need a bigger stick, OL...

    ...Okay, I was expecting him to shoot the robot guy, but that works better.

    Without a clearer location, this is down to rolling a 20.

    Ugh, railroading final bosses, huh?

    ...He's not talking entirely to OL, is he?

    Ah, damn, he's learning to defend himself against that trick.

    Ah, right, the trash mobs. Little more than an annoyance at this stage.

    Yeah, can't trust it'll go easy, OL. Take no chances with this.

    ...I know it's tiny because they're further away, but I can't help but imagine them whispering it..

    Oh, dear. Mannheim's gone full Darkseid. Enough that other New Gods see him as the being riding him...

    Ah, the joy of having all the hax. Pity he times out way too fast to be useful...

    Because you never build something like this without some kind of off switch or master override only you know about...

    Oh, boy... The big moment arrives!

    Ah, damn, is his Anti-Life infection acting up?. That could be trouble.

    The framework the rest can slot into and around, eh?

    It won't make sense until the last piece slots into place, of course. Who can comprehend Life in all it's splendour when they're seeing only a tiny part, after all?

    Hopefully, that counts for the Indigo Light.

    Goddammit, he's going 'feral berserker' mode.

    Idiot! One servant is not the master! But this can hurt Him properly!

    See? That is how you defeat someone, boy. Not by punching a robot in the sensitive parts.

    There you go! Was that so hard, brat?

    ...Oh, hell no! You don't get to play a trap card, Mannheim!

    Well, the colours are flowing. But they haven't merged yet. Perhaps they need some sort of prism to shine through. And what better piece than the very thing trying to stain the true Light? But first they have to overcome him. Things are about to get very strange indeed, I suspect. Let's hope Mr Zoat is well enough to finish the tale, at least. :oops: But don't force yourself to work on our account, Paul. Look to your own health, even if it means missing a day.
     
  8. Ngamer11

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    That should say 'thought'.
     
  9. Silveraith

    Silveraith Argent Phantasm

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    Them.
     
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    Let's just hope that the same thing that happened to Dandy Dick whwn he tried a trap card happens to Darkseid here.
     
  11. Duke Long

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    Are they smashing into Finality Man’s chest or Drax’s? If the former, should it be ‘its chest’?
    ‘purest’
    ‘with anyone’?
    There should be an extra line.
    Is that a quote from somewhere?
     
  12. NightmareWarden

    NightmareWarden Versed in the lewd.

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    Dang, and the way colds mess with everything's taste... Best wishes, Mr Zoat, I hope it isn't the flu. Hopefully the only people you risk spreading it to are pricks.
     
  13. Vaermina

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    He really should have purged the Anti-Life from the Orange Light before going on this part of the quest.
     
  14. Fylantine

    Fylantine Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    Hey pals, can someone help me out? I tapped out an appreciable time ago, and would like to return to reading. Last thing I remember is evil-ed merging of Forever People coming onto scene when Earth is just infected by Anti-life. Which chapter it was?
     
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  15. Rebu

    Rebu hey, little Anna, you're the one

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  16. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    Warhammer 40,000. Naturally.
     
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  17. Someguy Somewhere

    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    As Zoat said, it's from 40k, notably one of there stand-ins for Alexander The Great in Spaaaaace:
    The meaning of victory is not to merely defeat your enemy but to destroy him, to completely eradicate him from living memory, to leave no remnant of his endeavours, to crush utterly his achievement and remove from all record his every trace of existence. From that defeat no enemy can ever recover. That is the meaning of victory.

    - Lord Commander Solar Macharius (Codex Imperial Guard 5th Edition)
     
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    Mr Zoat

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    Black.

    I feel it flow out-.

    Black.

    I destroyed Batman's happiness and I can't undo that.

    Black.

    Reach up-.

    Black.

    I want to meet Superman's expectations despite knowing the suffering that will come from his hands-off approach.

    Black.

    Envelop-.

    Black.

    I bullishly led us into this trap, confident that I could fix things. Good work.

    "Illustres, resist-!"

    Black.

    Whu-?

    Black.

    Pulled inwards-.

    Black.

    I can't get everything I want without…

    Without-.

    Bla-.

    No. You reached too far.

    Where am I? Can't really… Feel my body. Black everywhere and a slowly weakening orange aura around the bit where I am.

    Just a foolish old man trying to recapture a youth I don't deserve.

    Ala-? No.

    For an instant the black recedes and I see a tiny wisp of blue between the dark strands which are boring into it. Alan, his aura fading.

    Go.

    And I'm there, the tendrils burned away-. No, grab that one.

    "Alan, Diana's just as old as you. You don't think badly of her for being on the Justice League, do you?"

    "No, of… Of course not."

    "You don't think she should just kill herself and get out of the way, do you?"

    "No!"

    "Then why should you? There's nothing wrong with wanting things, Alan."

    "I… Guess you've got a point." His flame gets a little bit bigger, and I feel a bit less worried that he's going to be swallowed. "What happened, where are we, and… I guess it didn't work?"

    "It hasn't worked yet. That… That's not the same thing."

    "Hey, I-. I felt that."

    "I think we're all inside Bruno Mannheim's… Soul, or whatever he made with the magic power he took from the Aztec gods. I heard Malvolio a moment ago but I don’t know what happened to the rest. No one has died because… The white light is still present. But… Malvolio and I were the ones who got free."

    "Because you're enlightened."

    "Probably."

    "So we need to go pick up the others."

    I look at the strand of avarice-seeking Anti-Life I'm holding. Can't do a thing to me, but…

    What's at the other end?

    Mannheim was working with Apokoliptians willingly, but… How signed up with this was he? With effectively becoming a different person?

    "I wonder what Mannheim wanted out of this originally?"

    "Power, and everything that comes with it. I read the files: he's basically just a mob boss."

    "So he wouldn't want to destroy the Earth?"

    "I… I mean, he is. But I get where you're coming from. So… You think he's just been Anti-Lifed like everyone else?"

    "Yes. Which… Would mean that he's in here somewhere." I pull on the thread. "I want to know what this connects to."

    What do you want?

    Uh.

    "You getting anything?"

    "I think so."

    And if you can pull on me, why can't I pull on you?

    And if it turns out that saving one man fixes this whole mess

    I… Think I'm pulling, but… There isn't enough in this ink void for me to tell.

    "Alan, do you remember what it felt like when we made the white light?"

    "Ki-kind of. I understand why you made such a big deal out of it."

    "When the Anti-Life is this all-enveloping, I don't think we're going to get anywhere without it. All the colours are here. Can you get back in that headspace?"

    "I don't know. Some of the things… The Anti-Life isn't exactly wrong, is it?"

    "Yes, it's always wrong, it's just not always untrue. When it tried to get to me through compassion it made me think that Superman's compassion would have stopped me attacking the Spider Guild. Which is nonsense because he was there when I attacked them, and while he wasn't happy about it he understood it."

    "With…" I hear a sigh. "You've picked up quite a body count."

    "You're not sure if you should have sent me on my way when I tried to buy your lantern? Yeah, I can see that. Except that would have just meant that when I found a way to charge my ring again I wouldn't have morally righteous veteran superheroes around to guide me in the right direction. Even if I don't agree with them all the time. Before achieving enlightenment, one of my fears was that I'd turn into some sort of 'utility-sniper'. 'Detriment to humanity? Bang. Detriment to humanity? Bang.' You being around means that will never happen."

    "Heh. Okay then. Let's go rescue Mannheim."
     
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    Remove the " in the middle.

    I'm guessing not very.

    He probably thought he'd be made into a god.

    And he was.

    Technically.

    Be careful what you wish for.

    "I pull"
     
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    BR549 This is filth! FILTH!!

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    The monkey's paw curls!
     
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    I hope that's not something back-flowing along the spiritual connections to his clones. Maybe he should have put some effort into tracking down the remaining ones after that initial suicide attack. Otherwise... This is Mannheim's work, isn't it...

    Or perhaps he'll redouble his efforts to reform his methods after this, having descended into the darkest depths.

    All-encompassing bleakness, eh? Like a drowning man with no idea of which way to the surface...

    Sometimes, you just have to trust that people won't be complete dickbags about things. But never let go of the big stick, either.

    Ah, is it more like something bubbling up, eh? Something you can scoop up, pin down or otherwise contain?

    To be fair, this was the best solution you could think of, and the League's methods weren't doing the job...

    And he's not alone here, I see. Wherever here is.

    Seems OL wasn't expecting that. He can't have given up yet...

    Push back, OL.It's not over until you give up. And that's what Mannheim wants.

    Without stepping on what someone else wants. Yes, that's generally the nature of wanting.

    Hmm... Not the Ophidian, OL would have pushed her away to keep her safe. It seems his desire to fight has awakened...

    Funny, that doesn't sound like something OL would think. He's not that old, after all.

    Oh, hell no. He does not go out like this!

    Ensuring you have a trail to follow, eh, OL?

    Maybe a little older, but it's a bit rude to debate just how much so...

    Old soldiers never die... But fading away is just a state of mind.

    Interesting that OL is so... Orange, but Alan isn't Blue. Must be something to do with his innate state of mind.

    Keep feeling like that, OL. Keep that connection alive...

    Hard for the Anti-life to get in on something that's always filled up already.

    Sounds like... Not a plan, too simple for that. A short-term goal.

    And is it something... Or Someone... You can give a stern kick in the bollocks?

    I suspect he wasn't given much of a choice.

    Most likely, once the first hooks were in, he didn't have any thoughts on the matter anymore.

    Don't get too curious, OL. There are others in more need around here.

    ...Well, that's a little embarrassing. I was hoping for something more... Lively.

    At least he's got something to lead the way.

    Somehow, I doubt the whole plan would pivot on a single soul... But if it is the lynchpin, then perhaps pulling on it would bring the whole enterprise crashing down.

    I mean, it was only, what a minute or two ago. He's not that old, OL.

    That's asking a lot, OL. Shining brightly in this black morass?

    Because even he can understand that sometimes, something evil enough has to be destroyed.

    And I've seen enough Lantern SIs to imagine just that. Like Professor Black back on SB (Not that that's updated recently that I've seen.)

    ...And there's a line I never thought I'd hear uttered in this universe.

    Well, at least they're all still fighting. Hopefully. And Hope and Want together can serve to lead our heroes to their allies. Because it's almost certain that they'll need all of them to beat back the darkness. And it's likely that each one they find will make the next easier to locate. So onwards, to the big finale! :cool:
     
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    I think that's missing a word. Maybe "black recedes and'.
     
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    Firewillreign Know what you're doing yet?

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    I really hate Darkseid.

    It sounds childish and it probably is, but I despise how great of an affect he's had on Earth 16, and just for his own amusement and satisfaction at that.
     
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    I'm thinking that both the Aztec afterlife and the emotional spectrum count as energy fields larger than your head. We all know what a mistake it is trying to absorb those.
     
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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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    PDV Revelation That Uncertainty Is Itself An Answer

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    In response, they've made the prototype of a weapon that can hurt him where it counts. First test isn't going great, but it still may turn out to be a pyrrhic victory.
     
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    Ardy I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Guys guys guys guys guys

    I just realized who can help them in their moment of crisis

    Who has beaten Darkseid again and again

    Who embodies everything the Anti-Life tries to destroy

    Who is based on Earth

    SANTA CLAUS!!!
     
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    Zig Not too sore, are you?

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    To be fair, Santa never beats Darkseid one on one. He gets in and gets out of APokalyps every year and can doge the Omega Effect so it's not like he'd be useless, but he's far from a sure bet.
     
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    BR549 This is filth! FILTH!!

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    I'm still half-expecting this to end with Darkseid himself squishing Mannheim like a bug, for having become too much like his new master.

    There, after all, can be only one.
     
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    17th February 2013
    Eris Knows


    "…reason to eradicate the rapscallions, yet you stayed your hand…"

    I look around but can't see a thing aside from the wisp of Alan. Sounds like Malvolio's found Batman. On the other hand-

    It was the right thing to do, right? You get an opening, you take it.

    -I think I can hear Mannheim justifying this to himself. Telling himself that he did nothing wrong. Telling himself something that he knows to be untrue because he believes that he's powerless to do anything about it. Okay, this is starting to-.

    The black stops retreating and I fly into it-.

    Idon'twannaIdon'twann…

    Guh!

    "You okay there?"

    "I'll live."

    I look… Up, and I can just about make out the millions of tendrils reaching out, each a crushed hope, a thwarted or counterproductive desire, a moment of destructive rage

    "I guess we're here."

    "And what about everyone else?"

    "Hopefully they'll sense us when we start."

    "And… How do we do that?"

    "Each of these strands connects to an element of his psyche. Grab one relating to hope and try and wake his up. You'll probably need to use the white light to get in. I'll show you."

    I thought that touching the white light on my own would be hard. But… I don't know if it's enlightenment, the others being here, Nommo being here… It's not hard. It's almost harder not to.

    Whu-?

    Hello, Mister Mannheim.

    You don't want to be controlled by people, do you? You pushed out Morgan Edge for a reason. Even though the relationship was profitable, you didn't want him there. So how do you feel about this?

    I-I can't…

    That's the Anti-Life talking. It's lying. Darkseid is lying right into your brain.

    It… Wasn't like this… To start with…

    It's not an issue of what it was or wasn't. It's an issue of WHAT YOU WANT.

    The strand I grabbed onto evaporates. I guess I made my point. I hope I did, anyway. I feel around-. There goes another one. And another, and all the ones with orange associations are evaporating. Excellent.

    "Alan, you're up."

    His flame flickers for a moment, and then-.

    "Huh."

    "Yes?"

    "I've done a lotta good."

    "Ah, yes, you're a superhero."

    "No, I mean… I guess a lotta the time… I don't.. see it. I don't see people going on and living improved lives because of me, I just get that one moment of crisis. But the white light, it's… Showing me things."

    Interesting, and I'm glad that he's getting the extra motivation, but it's not really relevant.

    "Bruno, what did you want to be when you were a kid?"

    He waits for a moment.

    "Huh, really? Well, we're gunna need a whole lot of those when this mess is over. You could give it a shot."

    And… Yes. More strands collapse and fade.

    Everyone, we're over here!

    The all-enveloping black.. doesn't fade, but it's pulled back, thinner than it was before. In the distance I can see tiny flecks of colour-.

    I throw out orange strands made of my desire to resolve this crisis towards each of them-. The green and yellow are already heading this way, but the red… I can barely see the red.

    I feel it as my strands connect to Batman and Malvolio as tethers. Which means that I should be able to communicate with them.

    "Orange Lantern here. New plan. Bruno Mannheim's original personality is still in here. If we eliminate the Anti-Life infection working on him, that should finish this."

    "He shall regret-"

    And their flames are there, Anti-Life strands burned away from them.

    "-clasping us to his bosom."

    "Not exactly. As I said, he's become increasingly like Darkseid. But it's got to the point where it's entirely left his original personality behind, and that's still in here. I think that the simplest way to handle this is to purify him."

    "And what of justice, for all he has wrought?"

    "Do you torture criminals before executing them?"

    "Nay. T'would be better for him to answer for his crimes in his right mind. How may this be done?"

    "You can create a link by touching the white light, then it's up to you to make him… In your case, regain the impetus to focus his own will."

    I look-. Batman shimmers for a moment, throwing off the Anti-Life strands frantically trying to reconnect to him. Then-.

    "Done."

    Another batch of strands detach, another part of the blackness opens up.

    "Any man who could do this must have some measure of will."

    Leave him to it, and look for Carol and Orion. Carol is a little closer, but I can see dozens of Anti-Life strands trying to connect to her. Orion has fewer attackers, but it looks like they're further into him. I should prioritise him.

    A new orange strand made of an understandable desire to tear apart the Anti-Life and an instant later I feel it connect.

    "Orion-."

    "You! You did this to me!"
     
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