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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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    Mr Zoat

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    He takes off, and I'm…

    Yeah, I've got no idea what I am.

    Least he picks good take-out restaurants. To start with I thought he was just insulting my entire country as some sort of dominance thing, then I actually tried eating stuff from other countries, and I.. get it.

    "Artemis?"

    I watch the orange dot vanish, then turn back to the fire door to our newly de-asbestosed apartment, dinner in a paper bag in my left hand. Check for anyone watching first, then take out my key and put it in the one-way lock and open the door. It's a whole lot more convenient than going through the lobby or wriggling through a window, and the push-bar inside doesn't need a key…

    Mom's waiting in the kitchen, walker next to her as she forces herself to use her legs to stand up.

    "Hey Mom. I…" I hold up the bag. "Brought dinner."

    She looks at the design on the bag, blinking. "Is that from Vietnam?"

    "No. It's… From a Vietnamese restaurant in England. Paul…"

    Paul had one of his little episodes when I suggested eating Vietnamese, then had no idea how much he should tell me about hygiene in Vietnamese restaurants. He was probably freaking out over nothing-.

    Heh. Not like that time Wally showed him that video on Indian street food and his whole body started glowing orange. That was actually funny in a scary-thing-that-nearly-happened kinda way.

    "The Orange Lantern?"

    I put the bag on the worktop, nodding. "He knew a place."

    "In England?"

    I shrug as she pulls the takeaway containers out, watching so I can catch her if she starts having problems standing up. She did right after he did it, but she's been okay for a little while.

    "We all got zeta tube access. There's a tube in London, and London's got a bunch of restaurants."

    "You could have invited him in."

    Yeeeeeah…

    "I got.. homework." And I do. But that's not why. "I-. Mom, how do you tell when a guy's… Like, a psycho?"

    Mom looks kinda worried, and puts the foil container down next to the plates. "Artemis, are you alright?"

    "Yeah! Yeah yeah, he's not-." I breathe out. How do I explain-? "I'm pretty sure they wouldn't let someone like that on the team."

    Except maybe Indigo, I guess. Shouldn't the Justice League have someone who could look at that-. At her?

    "Then why are you asking?"

    "I… Thought Paul might be? And then he did some stuff, and I… Don't know? Maybe it's his ring, or…" How can I..? "Or maybe he's autistic, or something? They like complicated math-games, right?"

    "Why do you think he might be a psycho, Artemis?"

    "He shot a cat in the head." Mom looks-. Yeah, okay, I should have explained-. "He used some blood from an immortal guy to make the cat immortal too. Its head just grew back, it was fine… But it was still pretty creepy. And I know medicines and cosmetics get tested on animals and stuff, so I guess.. him…"

    "He is testing things on animals?"

    "Yeah… A whole.. bunch of mad scientists made things that makes people… Better, and he wants to see if any of them are actually safe."

    "You.. haven't taken any-?"

    "No! No." I breathe out, trying not to get-. Kids my age do stuff like that, she's just-. Worried. Hey, that's basically what Wally did. "He had this… 'Vitamin' from World War Two which is supposed to be safe, but I said no."

    "Is it?"

    "He had a big pile of research… He found everyone who ever used it and went through their whole medical history." I.. frown. No, he said-. "Except one guy who took some other stuff as well. According to him, they all got a boost and none of them had any problems, but… Paul isn't exactly a doctor, and he was giving… Vibes."

    I should… Probably look up that one guy. See if Robin knows anything, or if I can find anything out myself.

    Mom nods and turns back to the food, pulling the edge of foil… Huh. Never seen one like that before. The lid's card with foil on the inside for insulation. Guess that's how they do them in England?

    "'Vibes'?"

    "He-could-be-a-psycho vibes."

    "Because he shot the immortal cat."

    "Yeah, and-. He thought I'd be interested. He thought I'd be okay with it once I saw that the cat was okay. It's like he-. That cat was alive at the start and alive at the end, so everything in the middle had to be okay, y'know?"

    Does that even..?

    "Does that make sense?"

    Mom nods. "Yes, Artemis, it makes sense."

    "Okay, good. Because its brain was all over the place, and that's not-. It's not normal how cool he was about it."

    Mom starts plating the food as I lean back against the table.

    "Did you tell him you didn’t like him shooting animals?"

    "Yeah, and he.. stopped doing it. But is that okay?

    "Artemis… Do you like him?"

    … "… He's… Nice? But it's like… He doesn't know how to act, sometimes? Like… Okay, so the first time I saw him on my own was in the gym, and he was checking me out really obviously. So I called him out on it and he took his shirt off to make it even."

    "Did you like what you saw?"

    "Ah… Yeah, I… Guess, but who does that?"

    Mom picks up the plates and carries them to the table-. And I realise I should have got some glasses of water, so I get that while Mom gets the chopsticks.

    "Someone who is very confident." Mom carefully pulls out her seat and sits down as I fill the glasses. "Has he said what sort of relationship he wants?"

    "Dating, leading to marriage and a couple of kids, getting better superpowers until we conquer the universe as immortal gods. I think."

    "Ah. Like your father."

    Huh? "Huh?"

    "Artemis, your father and I are supervillains."

    Well, yeah, but-. Wait. "Were. You were, right?"

    "It is hard to be a supervillain with a broken back. And it is irresponsible to do the things we used to when you have a young daughter."

    Oh no. "But you're not going back, now, right?"

    "The things your father and I used to do, we did them more because it was fun than for money or status. It was fun being smarter, faster, more carefree than everyone around us. It was liberating. And then I went to prison and your father… It stopped being fun for him."

    "Yeah. I remember."

    "When I got out, he said that he wanted to…" She sighs. "He wanted to achieve tangible results, money, influence, power… Whatever it cost. I told him that even if I could get healed I didn't think it was worth it. I suppose that the question of whether Paul is better for you than Lawrence is for me is whether he is willing to stop doing things that you don't like when you ask him to. Is he?"

    "He didn't shoot the cat again."

    "Then you are already a better judge of men than I am."

    "Heh. Thanks. So…"

    "You could try talking to his other friends, or his teachers? Maybe he just does not know how to act around girls?"

    Okay. Get Robin to help look into that one guy who obviously had a bad reaction, and talk to him and the rest of the team about how Paul normally acts. I can do that. Because… He's hot, and-. He tries to be nice, and he's a superhero, and if I could stop worrying about this, I think… I think I could really like him.
     
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    Yeaaahhh....this isn't going to end well.
     
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    AmericanNumbers Not too sore, are you?

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    Or maybe it is. This Paul really tries. And she has a type.
     
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    Yea, I'm calling bullshit on this.

    Because there's no way someone with her mothers history wouldn't have been able to identify him as a Joker level sociopath with that description.
     
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    Who is Artemis referring to here when she says she'll ask Robin to look into someone who had a bad reaction to Tangseid? Also, that word should be removed.
     
  6. Dragoon140

    Dragoon140 Getting some practice in, huh?

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    Ooo, interesting change in perspective!
     
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    Ooh, Artemis chapter? Now we get to see what she thinks of Tang's behaviour. And just how many red flags his behaviour should be raising. Sadly, I get the feeling she's one that might be blind to the bigger faults of the 'bad boy' type...

    True. American food is... From what I understand, their producers are more about cheap than good. Just look at how many 'Americans try foreign foods' reaction videos there are with positive responses...

    ...Because, if you remember, Tang couldn't be arsed to do more than fix her spine. :oops: No free physiological rebuild and rejuvenation for this universe.

    Heh. The joy of dating someone capable of going anywhere on Earth in very little time at all.

    To be fair... He's kind of right, there. Food Safety Practices are... :oops: Not a common concern, especially for street vendors in a lot of the region.

    Yeah, I could see him being so repulsed by the matter that he reflexively gives himself a deep clean just thinking about it.

    Well, it's 'exotic but not too exotic', know what I mean?

    So, so many restaurants. Throw a stone on any high street, and you'd probably hit an 'Asian' restaurant of some description.

    Not quite at that level, huh?

    Ah, here we go. Sharing her concerns... With her mother, the former supervillain who married Sportsmaster of all people. :rolleyes:

    You'd think, but the kind of scientific knowledge needed rarely lends itself to superheroing.

    Okay, I think you're just confusing her now. Start at the beginning.

    That sort of thing doesn't aim to kill the test animal, though.

    Not that he'll ever really fix the one mistake of using one before testing it.

    Such an innocuous name for a super-soldier serum, huh?

    He is a bit of a mad scientist in this universe, isn't he?

    Yes, good idea to double-check his statements. His moral indifference may make him consider some things less of a drawback than other people might.

    Really, if you have to ask... Then you're only looking for confirmation of your conclusions.

    Since the whole 'lack of moral grounding and human empathy' isn't exactly obvious on the outside...

    Probably too much sense to her mother.

    ...And isn't it just a little worrying that she wasn't more shocked by that? Jeez, how bad was her upbringing that that hardly rated more than a 'what the hell?'

    Quite firmly, If I remember right.

    ...He stopped doing it when you were around. :sneaky: Don't assume that he acts the same when you're not present to be offended.

    :rolleyes: Ah, blinded by the beefcake. Wasn't the best start to their friendship, really.

    Heh. I can see her being very interested in that angle. She's probably had to deal with guys ditching her when they got what they wanted, more than once.

    At least Sportsmaster dreamed big, I suppose. Even if the reality couldn't hope to match up...

    Honestly, I'm surprised Arty didn't realise that sooner, what with daddy's little training trips and all that.

    ...But you'd still go back to that life if you were able to, wouldn't you? :rolleyes:

    Yes, bullets to the spine do have that kind of effect on people and their families. Sharp reminders of their mortality and all that.

    Again, no guarantee that he's not doing them when she's not around, is there? ;)

    ...Man, if she ever finds out about the Evil serum, she's going to have such an 'I'm an idiot!' moment...

    'Teachers', right... Sadly, the League is maybe a little too hands-off with him...

    ...Why do I get the feeling this is where things start to go bad?

    Well. I suppose her mother isn't the best judge of character, especially given her lack of interaction with Tang. Rather suspect he tends to be distant with everyone he's not interested in dating. Indeed, this might well be the first a lot of the League hear about his little scientific projects. Though I bet Batman's file on him is quite thick.



    Guess that's how they do them in England?
     
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    Wivk Know what you're doing yet?

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    Not a bad reaction to him, a bad reaction to the mad scientist future tech super soldier drugs he was offering her that were "mostly safe, except for that one guy"

    Knowing exactly what happened to that one guy, and hopefully why, is pretty important before you utilize the mad scientist future tech yourself.
     
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    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    Our corporations are focused on maximizing profit above ALL other considerations (admittedly it varies from industry to industry, but the food industry is probably one of the worst ones), but they only get away with it because it was gradual and everyone was doing it, so we didn't notice the changes until fairly recently, and many still don't.
     
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    Signaller Know what you're doing yet?

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    What's Tamgseid going to do, the first time someone calls him that?
     
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    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    No, it's okay. She can change him.
     
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    The one person Tangseid mentioned as having a bad reaction.
    Thank you, corrected.
    The name 'heroin' got picked because it was the heroic alternative to opium, which was clearly unhealthy.
    [Looks at modern Disney]

    No.
     
  13. jasonh23761

    jasonh23761 Not too sore, are you?

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    I like how Paula is the most on the ball in this timeline. Honestly though, Tangseid's thought processes at this point fit "budding supervillain" even more then Grayven's did.
     
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    This would be vastly more meaningful if we didn’t already know that this version of the SI escalates to full on mind-raping people into compliance within a matter of months. What Artemis thinks and feels today isn’t going to matter soon.
     
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    All life ends in death. That doesn't mean that it doesn't matter.
     
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    It could matter in the future.

    The following chapters may show him descending further and further, but this thing with Artemis could set up a potential countermeasure that they have against him that we'll see in the future.
     
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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    "Ah, yeah." Robin nods. Was.. he looking into this already? "Oh El asked me about him."

    "Really?" Because talking about someone he doesn't want to talk to me about doesn't sound like something-.

    "Okay, he asked Batman about him. And Batman knows a guy who used to work in British Intelligence."

    "I thought he could just scan for intel with his power ring."

    Robin wiggles his right hand. "Kinda. Green Lantern finds stuff like that hard. He usually uses an actual computer from a world with really advanced technology when he wants to hack something. Oh El can do it easier, but it still only really works with computer databases. We tested it a while after he got here, and going through paperwork takes him way longer. He thought Batman might be able to help him find stuff."

    "Huh. So… Who is he?"

    "Dennis Wilson. Used to be a superhero called 'Vitaman'." He presses a button on his arm computer and it brings up a hologram of some buff guy in combat pants, a skin-tight… Leotard? And a green beret. "Fought in World War Two, then he.. kinda vanished."

    "Vanished?"

    "Nineteen forties record-keeping was a lot more basic than what we have today. I know he stayed in the army after the war, but it's hard to find what he actually did. Except…"

    "Okay?"

    "Does the name 'Malayan Emergency' mean anything to you?"

    "No?"

    "It's basically British Vietnam, except they won. Batman couldn't find any paperwork about Vitaman being there, but Superman… Ah, found some old photographs a reporter took when they went there for a story, and he was in a couple of them."

    "Vietnam, like..?"

    "China-backed communist paramilitary picking a fight with the Europeans running the country, concentration camps, Agent Orange… And mass murders. That kind of thing."

    "And Vitaman was there?"

    Robin nods. "He wasn't super strong, but-."

    "Yeah, Paul already told me about Vitamin X. He.. wanted me to take it."

    Robin looks at me curiously. I just.. shrug. Then he presses another button and the hologram changes-.

    "Is that a.. real head?"

    "Yeah. That was kind of a thing for the Malay soldiers who mostly fought on the British side. Officially, it was for 'identification purposes'."

    "And the British soldiers joined in?"

    "Officially? No."

    "Annnd unofficially?"

    "They weren't exactly shy about posing for pictures with the severed heads." He shuts down the hologram. "He got a bunch of commendations, and it's… Basically impossible to tell if he was personally involved in any of the massacres."

    "But you think he was."

    Robin hesitates. "I think I'm judging him harshly because he was a superhero. For a soldier… War's… Messy and violent, especially guerrilla wars. And if he was involved, he sure wasn't the only one."

    "Is there anyone we could talk to about it?" Uh. "Should we?"

    "It happened during the fifties, so basically everyone who could have seen anything is dead. And honestly, memory isn't that reliable after that long anyway. Does it matter?"

    "Paul said that no one had a bad reaction to Vitamin X except him, and that was only because he took some other stuff. But if he was only doing stuff that other soldiers were doing… What was he talking about?"

    "I'm not sure. Paul doesn't really like talking about his research, and after I watched him pull apart a lab rat with his ring I.. kinda stopped asking."

    "He's never had a problem talking about it with me."

    He grins. "You've… Got an advantage over me, there."

    I roll my eyes.

    "Why'd you want to know, anyway?"

    "Is there a problem with Vitamin X?"

    "Not that I know of. Are you actually planning on taking it?"

    "Not until I know what went wrong with Dennis Wilson. 'cause…" Ugh. "Does Paul seem, like… Off, to you?"

    "Yeah? He… Did tell you he comes from a parallel universe, right?"

    What? "No?"

    "He-?" Robin sounds puzzled, and I'm feeling puzzled. "Huh. I didn't-. It's not like it's a secret."

    Did he say anything about-? I mean, I think he said something wasn't how they did things where he was from, but I thought he just meant England.

    "No. So..? What's it.. like? Where he's from?"

    "No superpowers or mad scientists. Or… Not superscientists. One time he told me that some crazy British inventor built an engine with only three moving parts, but apart from that it was just a regular car engine." He shrugs. "It's not really supposed to be all that different from here."

    "What do you mean, 'supposed to be'?"

    "We can't check. He said he didn't know how he got here and the Justice League hasn't found a way to send him back. And… I saw how he reacted to stuff right after he got here, and it all fit."

    "Like what?"

    "He'd never seen a hologram before, and he thought he needed special gloves to use a holographic keyboard. They don't have holograms, so it was like a science fiction show for him." Gotham High doesn't have holographic keyboards, either. "And a couple of times he called someone by their real name in costume." That's.. bad. "I mean, it was in private so it wasn't a big deal, but I still don't think I've ever heard him call Wonder Woman 'Wonder Woman'. Diana, mostly, and 'sir' or 'your Highness' a few times. They don't have superheroes, so if he knows someone's name, that's what he called them."

    "Y.. eah, he… Told me Green Arrow's got a kid?" Robin winces slightly, then nods. "Okay, but, apart from that."

    "Ah, maybe? I only see him for team stuff. You should ask… Huh."

    "What?"

    "Mia's memories are still messed up from Brainiac, Miss Martian and Green Lantern are aliens and Kaldur comes from Atlantis. I don't think he really knows anyone else. I don't know if anyone would have noticed."

    "Wonder Woman?"

    "Maybe. What exactly are you worried about?"

    "I dunno, exactly. I-. He's really serious about.. me, and I wanna be sure that that's just how he is and he didn't… Dose himself with something by accident or something."

    "Huh. We've got medical reports from when he showed up. Batman would probably be okay with us checking them." He stops talking for a moment. "This 'thing' you're worried he dosed himself with. Are you talking about the other thing Vitaman got?"

    "I dunno. Maybe?"

    "I'll talk to Batman. Even if it's nothing, it's still a good training exercise."

    He turns to go-.

    "Hey, ah. Robin?" He turns back. "Thanks."

    He smiles. "No problem. What are team mates for?"
     
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    So I'm guessing this is when he's "forced" to start turning the League evil?
     
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    So Tangseid didn't have anyone close enough to tell him not to dose himself with a strange chemical/concoction that could have unforeseen side effects. This makes his situation a little tragic.
     
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    You shouldn't need someone to tell you not to dose yourself with strange chemical concoctions.
     
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    Considering all the mad scientists who exist on their world who do exactly that, I disagree.
     
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    I'd go with it being more stupid than tragic.

    Yes, but Paul didn't sound his whole life on this new planet.
     
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    Given Paul's encyclopedic knowledge of comic books he should have known not to dose himself with strange chemical concoctions that nobody understands.

    Especially when you consider that in comic books most "super serums" usually cause physical deformities and/ or some form of insanity in the majority of people that take them.
     
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    Mad scientists don't test things out on themselves, they test things out on other people.
     
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    I'd be curious to see what makes this Paul different from the others save for a questionable series of decisions and presumably a degree of blindness about this particular setting within DC?

    Is it similar where the Renegade had a bad day at work before being transited over? Has the methodology changed in general? Or are there other things that make "this" Paul different besides his decisions since arriving in DC?
     
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    Ah, good, not wasting any time looking into Tang's odder behaviour.Though being a junior affiliate of the League might make it trickier to actually find anything out without setting off any alarm bells with either the League or Tang himself...

    Ultimate hacking device, and all that. But if it isn't written into a computer database, it gets much harder for him to find information.

    After all, even he can get bored filtering through thousands of records, especially if he hasn't gotten the hang of letting the AI handle the reading.

    Ah, the fifties. Because when you want to show off your super-muscvles, of course you wear a skin-tight shirt.

    After all, when someone has to manually write or type of after-action reports and collate them into operational logs...

    Ah, yet another land war in Asia that people should have known not to get involved in. But of course 'colonial interests' and 'communist expansion'... :rolleyes:

    Jungle warfare, guerilla tactics and messy relationships with the native population caught in the middle, yes.

    Sadly, the American's experiences in South-East Asia tend to be all many history books focus on, because America.

    So, closer to 'peak human' in a world where 'peak human' mean the ability to crack concrete with your bare hands and not shatter your bones.

    Ah, right... Atrocities.

    Well, after so long in the jungle... Conventional morality tends to take a back seat...

    Take a guess... :oops:

    I mean, you don't want to insult the local fellows by refusing... Especially when they might be watching your back tomorrow.

    Sadly, that's the mistake. I doubt he was ever properly a superhero. Soldier super-types tend to straddle the divide, really.

    Something that was never in the official records, perhaps. Like, say, the Evil formula.

    :confused: 'Pull apart' as in a simple hands-off dissection, or as in 'drawn and quartered'?

    Never underestimate the appeal of a hot teenage girl.

    Ah, there's the rub, isn't it? Has anyone other than Tang bothered to investigate it properly, rather than get a dose and down it?

    Finally, someone who can maybe do something about Tang hears about it.

    I mean, when would that ever come up in a conversation? Unless he mentions Terry Pratchett or something else that doesn't exist in DC-verse.

    ...Kinda wonder if Games Workshop ever made a superhero-themed game, now. Feels like the sort of thing they'd do in a universe with superheroes. :p

    All the way back in 1952, apparently. And it does seem kind of mad-sciencey. Edit: Okay, not that one. Maybe a Stirling Engine? Seems closer to the details...

    Oh, so many things...

    And no-one ever questioned him calling Diana 'sir', did they? It's one of these Paul things, isn't it...

    See? Maybe the team should hang out more. I suppose that's one drawback of having less people without civilian lives on the team...

    ...And now we know how he got away with it for so damn long...

    And now the sense of foreboding creeps in. Just how well do they know Tang? Is he really a bad guy who can play nice, or...

    The joy of not knowing just what Tang has rattling around in his labs.

    As what? 'How to identify if an ally is operating in a altered state of mind'? :D

    Hopefully not getting them killed or mind-whammied, for a start...

    And now the suspicions begin. The investigation will have to be very careful not to alert Tang to their concerns. It might encourage him to start his experiments with desire rewriting that leads to, well... Tangseid as we first saw him. This whole plotline really does feel like one of those 'how did they get here' stories that opens with the epilogue... And watching the downfall will be painful.
     
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  29. ForeverShogo

    ForeverShogo Not too sore, are you?

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    He was just . . . really kind of stupid about it in general because he knew taking the serum was a terrible idea and did it anyways.

    What he dosed himself with is literally called Dr. Hyde's Evil Serum.

    It's been awhile, but I seem to recall him basically going, "I doubt it actually turns you evil."

    This despite being in a comic book universe where comic book logic should absolutely be a thing you take seriously. With his safeguard basically being a scan of himself before he took the serum, under the idea that if it actually messed with his head he'd just go back to the way he was. But he completely failed to account for the idea that the evil version of himself wouldn't want to go back to the way he was.
     
  30. The Unaligned Player

    The Unaligned Player Agony that desires to meet Extinction

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    Dr. Jekyll.
     
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