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Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And avoids saying his own name again
Andy333
Andy333
Exactly, but how was the small snippet? I had to edit out a decent chunk of it and it's obviously in need of a lot more editing, but for a general feel for their voices what did you think?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Let me read it
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I really like the difference of romancing compared to seducing and her placing the orange delicately in her drink
Andy333
Andy333
Nice. I hope the older style of talking isn't too distracting. I had open Robin Crusoe and some Dickenson the entire time I was writing comparing the two and deliberately trying to make my stuff sound less modern.
Andy333
Andy333
While she's obviously a very different character, a couple hundred years would do that to anyone, I hope I was able to include at least a little bit of the Original Charlie's personality bleeding through.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
The older style is fine and Charlie feels unique here. Your own design
Andy333
Andy333
Thanks. She's an interesting character to write and that's what's important. But I sleep. You too. It'll help you feel better. Hopefully it all passes pretty quick. Night.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Sleep
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Editing talk later
Andy333
Andy333
Have fun. Hope you feel better.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Pregnant one piece girls and I do
Andy333
Andy333
That's pretty great. Will look for one Piece girls, but found a fun game you need to check out. Don't know how you feel about deck builders or rogue lites, but having a blast with the demo for this game Get Yoked.
gregs-games.itch.io

GET YOKED: Extreme Bodybuilding by gregs-games

Bodybuilding Roguelike Deckbuilder.
gregs-games.itch.io gregs-games.itch.io
Andy333
Andy333
The body types you can achieve once you get good at the game. it's something else. lol.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I hate everything about this portrayal of bodybuilding. It is everything grotesque of the practice. Those pecs are man ass boobs
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Sexy in art, doubtful if sexy in real life. More and let's see talk Charlie or Warring Paths
Andy333
Andy333
That's kind of the point of the game. lol. It's parodying how external and out of touch body building has become. Like any rouge like there's a goal or number you have to surpass each "week" and if you don't you lose.
Andy333
Andy333
But if you succeed early you get a reward, right? Well one of them is an event where your mom is in the hospital and you can choose to cut your training short this week for no gain or ignore her and keep chasing gains. which do you think people choose?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Gains. Fucking gains. Ugly looking gains
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