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Neurax

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  • MisterHilbert
    I wonder how Carrion will now do in the rewrite, once he got the knowledge of Yoru's eternal war plan and the US making Atomic Bombs again. I think he can stop Yoru but the United States of America? I doubt it.
    Red_Faux
    Red_Faux
    The rewrite that hasn't been updated in 4 years?
    WhiteGrapejuice
    You know I've been thinking with how Yoru treats the consepts connected to war like her children (at least in the English translation) and you saying that one of the main reasons for her obsession with Carrion is the connection between War and one of his consepts..I now just imagine Yoru trying to treat Carrion as the daddy of her children and acting like they are a big murderous family lol
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    Rammacam
    Yoru hating on Makiman and Denji for "Stealing" Carrion away like an angry ex-wife is very funny ngl
    Neurax
    Neurax
    Given his concepts associated with "war", CARRION to the rest of the Weapon Devils is that otherwise chill uncle that single-handedly sparks a violent argument at thanksgiving dinner table with their mother because of his "controversial political views" ("Hey guys, let's not kill humans for no reason.") leaving them to eat their meal in awkward silence as someone gets punched through a wall in the next room over.
    Rammacam
    Real question here: when Denji, Makiman and SI sit down to let Pochita explain things, will it be the biggest game of charades the earth, heaven and hell ever see?
    Or imagine that 4 arm monster using chalk and a board lmao
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    Not quite. The SI does figure out a way to communicate back and forth with Pochita (granted it's one-sided and a huge pain in the ass to boot), but there would charades, as it seems Pochita can't talk in his small form, and his big form, well...
    Black Chainsawman: VAM-VAGAH! VAGYAH GYAH!
    SI: ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER, DO YOU SPEAK IT?!
    Neurax
    Neurax
    And actually, that does open up an interesting conversation about Devils and language, that hasn't really been touched upon in the manga. Since CSM Devils are basically Tulpas formed from the fears of the collective consciousness of Humanity, it would make sense that the non-feral Devils could understand/speak any human language, That, or the Language Devil got erased and everyone speaks the same language now.
    So will Makima try to become Denjis mother?
    Sabret00th-303
    @Neurax Is your chainsaw man si fanfic dead or something?
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    He'd think she's funny until Fami reveals she thinks the best way to save everyone is to kill them, which then he thinks she's annoying. She seems more misguided than pure evil though, so unless Fami starts killing people I can't see him doing worse than breaking out the rolled up newspaper and spray bottle as disciniplary measures. Though I think she'd crumple like a wet paper bag when their personalities clash...
    WhiteGrapejuice
    WhiteGrapejuice
    Aha! So basically Carrion's horseman list would go:
    1. Makima
    2. Fami
    3. Yoru
    4. Death
    ..it's a bit sad that Carrion only really likes one person of the family lol
    Rammacam
    Rammacam
    Makima after Carrion explains why her erasure plan is dumb on every level conceivable:
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    WhiteGrapejuice
    You know thinking back on Yoru simping for Carrion..he obviously hates her for being even more evil then Makima but wouldn't he also dislike her for using the body of a highschool girl to do her weird version of "flirting" ? I feel like that alone would already kill any chance of him responding positively.
    Rammacam
    …

    Well… this is the part where we celebrate that you put the fanfic on recess until we knew more.

    Oh boy.
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    Neurax
    Fujimoto really is good at narrative-ly punching people in the gut with a plot twist, huh... but damn. Just as well as I chose to wait, as the SI should've immediately sussed "Fami" out with his lie detection powers, or Makima would just tell him because she'd still be alive. Either way, let's see where this goes...
    It's about time we start asking the real questions here.

    Does Carrion know about the RG33 youtube channel?
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    Since Makima can't be hurt without the damage transferring to an innocent person, the bean gets all the abuse when she pisses him off.

    Also, he vehemently denies any claims that the tinier drones will grab the Makima bean at night to use as a teddy bear. Though there will come a reckoning the day Makima opens a random closet and finds a sleeping drone snuggled up with an incredibly smug looking plushy of herself.
    KikoJosefino
    How would Makima feel seeing a plushy of her getting more hugs than she does?
    I'm guessing mixed reactions?
    Neurax
    Neurax
    Outwardly composed with a perfect smile, but inwardly coping and seething like there's no tomorrow. Meanwhile, the SI is panicking as his negative emotion six-sense is going haywire at the sudden black hole of murderous intent and envy that's drowning out every other negative emotion in Tokyo's vicinity.
    Neurax
    My reaction to CSM chapter 195: OH MY GAH, THE DEATH DEVIL IS FINALLY HERE, AND IT'S KOBENI WEARING A WIG
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    At any moment, she's afraid that the "sun" will open its eye and spread its wings... *cue Radiance from Hollow Knight music*

    Though, that's just a joke. Eternity is definitely not pretending to be the sun because a certain Primal Devil destroyed the real one. Definitely not.
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    Rammacam
    Rammacam
    -I don't get it Makima, why the hate for your sisters?
    +Carrion, you know what's like to be the only one with a job with 4 teen sisters...?
    Neurax
    Neurax
    SI: You're a simp for an outwardly murderous psycho who you've never had an actual conversation with, and who clearly isn't interested in you despite the years you've spent harassing him to vore you, which would fuck over everyone if he did. While I congratulate you for being a functioning member of society, are you really sure you're better than them?
    Makima: 😐
    Makima: 😠
    Griffyn
    Is IAtSMA ever going to be continued/revived? If I'm being honest, this has been one of the only fanfics to hold my attention for so long, I really hope you don't let it die.
    Neurax
    CSM Chapter 167... I'm speechless. I was expecting there's be a sex scene at some point, but not that. Fujimoto really does know how to subvert all expectations, huh?
    Rammacam
    Ohhh I was thinking about something if you don't mind.
    Do you think Carrion would be in good terms with Falling? Or at least nos hostile at sight, she seems reasonable enough.
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    He'd be chill with her right up until she tries cooking a human, at which point she gets turned into a fine red mist. Her PTSD attack would be effective on the SI's Hivemind, but it would also be the equivalent of kicking a hornet's nest once they get their bearings. An incredibly destructive fight for sure, but Falling isn't winning this as the SI's drones would be capable of flight by this point in the story.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    Oh, and if he saw her spawn in like she did in Part 2 with all the people jumping to their deaths to form her body, yeah, he's not gonna talk to her, he's just gonna try obliterating her on sight.
    WhiteGrapejuice
    WhiteGrapejuice
    Carrion: "I only simp for Justice!"
    WhiteGrapejuice
    Hello again... I wonder if makima's many in universe simps are gonna be pretty mad at makima's great emotional intrestest in Carrion while he's mad at HER for using all these guys that way lol
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    People are going to think that Makima's type is someone willing to talk back to her as she and Carrion constantly argue and keep trying to passive aggressively one-up each other while still managing to be two of the most competent workers in Public Safety.
    Hey man, I hope you're having a great time! I just have a question. Did other biblical events happen in the IATSMA verse? Like for example, the rebellion in Heaven that was led by the angel Lucifer? I always had this headcanon that the first Primal Devils were born from Lucifer's flesh after Michael cast him down to Hell.
    WhiteGrapejuice
    Heya Neurax we know that you plan to build on the framework of a more redemple Makima from canon, are they any new quicks or headcannos you plan to also show Makima to have? (Unless of course that's spoilers then never mind)
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    Neurax
    As per canon, she really likes movies, to the point she hits the SI with a monologue essay about movies when he gives her the slightest hint he watches them.

    She has a weakness for small and pitiful looking animals, and the reason she only has huskies as pets is because she wouldn't get anything done at home otherwise. For this reason, tiny drones are at risk of being grabbed and snuggled against their will.
    Sabret00th-303
    Atleast show us some kind of progress Instead of just saying it's coming pls?
    ZurigaSungama
    ZurigaSungama
    You've got the thread watched, right? So, you'll know when it's updated, right? So, you don't have any reason to be here bothering him, right?
    Rammacam
    Without going in to spoiler territory, you think underused character like Spider o Quanxi´s fiends could not just be killed that quickly. Particulary with Quanxi, she is an Assasin that travel to another country to kill a 16yo boy, so for our dear Carrion would be like "It's on sight, old hag".
    The idea of Carrion one shotting Quanxi it´s particulary funny to me hahah.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    Depends if Quanxi underestimates him or not. If she tries to CQC him, she will lose the second he gets a good grip on her. Her Hybrid form has a better chance, but it's just delaying the inevitable. While she never fought Makima in the manga, in IATSMA Quanxi still would've lost if she resisted and Makima wouldn't have even had to use Devil powers. Not weak, just fighting something entirely out of her weight class.
    Griffyn
    Could an Angel and Devil procreate or is that entering spoiler territory?
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    But more seriously, I'm not really sure if I want to incorporate something like that into the story, or how it would work. Angels and Devils are Tulpas, independent entities brought into existence through thought as "ideas" and "fears" respectively. Unless a large amount of humans are actively thinking about the SI to knocking up Makima and making babies from it, realistically it's not gonna happen.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    Now I have been considering how "Fallen Angels" would fit in to the lore, and maybe if the SI was "fallen" such a thing would be possible... assuming that Pochita hasn't already retconned what would be a likely horrifying concept of Devil-on-Devil offspring. We still don't know that much about him, but it wouldn't surprise me.
    WhiteGrapejuice
    WhiteGrapejuice
    I guess it would depend on what makes a "fallen" angel different from a normal one... that's properly also a good question in general.
    WhiteGrapejuice
    Don't know how you guys feel about death battle but Gojo vs Makima is next!

    I'm gonna root for our girl even if she is the more asshole canon version.

    And she even got a pretty decent chance thanks to her contract with the prime Minister.
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    I can't speak for canon as it isn't clear it's a power inherent to the Control Devil, but in IATSMA Makima's finger-gun is linked to her "bow" and is not a space cutting/bypassing attack. But for canon, if it was, it probably wouldn't have stopped at the wall after she hit Power with it.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    But then again, she wasn't exactly restricted to one setting for that attack, so maybe it could have bypassed space on a certain setting. But if that was the case, why didn't she use it on Pochita instead of shooting him into space? Would have made retrieval a lot easier if she managed to defeat him...
    WhiteGrapejuice
    WhiteGrapejuice
    Makima lost... oh well.
    Amanofmanytentacles
    Recently watched a play-through of Carrion and got reminded of this story. I had forgotten how utterly terrifying Carrion is, especially when one remembers that in the game you run on very limited supply
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    Amanofmanytentacles
    Amanofmanytentacles
    Especially when one considers the ramifications of Carrion, throughout the entire game you are at your weakest. A carrion out in the wild has a massive supply of humans to eat and foreign dna to assimilate. There's a whole smorgasbord of traits for it to consume. And A LOT of space for it to grow and spread its mass.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    IATSMA's Carrion is even stronger than the game version due to not being restricted to meat but can assimilate anything that qualifies as "biomass" such as plant material. There are drawbacks in place to prevent the Si from steamrolling everything, but he's more or less the most powerful thing in CSM's setting we've seen so far.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    But this'll all be covered in Fumigation 1.1 as the SI explains why he doesn't cover Japan in a sea of living spaghetti to find Denji. He's incredibly powerful and nigh-impossible to truly "kill", but he isn't invincible.
    Rammacam
    Good morning, Neurax. I noticed that while you're preparing the other part of the prologue, you've been explaining some questions from people on your profile, and I couldn't resist hopping on board.
    Could you tell a little of how fiends would interact with SI?, if Si is as strong as primal fears and Cosmo, Power--
    Hello Neurax. I saw your comment about the Horsemen's potential relationship with CARRION and I've been very interested in how he might actually become besties with the Death Devil.

    If you don't mind me asking, what are your personal interpretations or headcanons about Death given how she is the only horseman who hasn't been officially revealed yet?
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    Neurax
    Neurax
    (SI---<--Yoru) Apathy/Obsession: What Makima and Pochita were in canon. One of the SI's concepts has a connection to "War" that the obviously starved War Devil will be chomping at the bit to latch onto him, while he just sees her as yet another psycho in a world full of them who has an unhealthy interest.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    (SI<->Fami) Mutual Hatred: As Rammacan put it, both Fami and the SI were designed to hate each other from the get go, especially since what Fami's doing with her cult is more slimy than what Makima did, and isn't apologetic whatsoever about it.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    (SI---Death) Friendship? Admittedly, we know nothing about the Death Devil so far, so this could be entirely out of the picture if Fujimoto's masochism strikes again and he makes them another crazy bitch. But it would be nice to have a "chill" Horse(wo)man.
    Sabret00th-303
    What happened to your uploading schedule to your story if you don't mind me askin?
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    Neurax
    Motivation tanked after Trans I, and I've been working on and off on the second part of it. I still work on writing it here and there, but it's slow going with all the distractions around me and the limited amount of free time I have. It's getting there. Slowly, but surely.
    Sabret00th-303
    Sabret00th-303
    that's a long time to work on a chapter for a year or so tbh
    WhiteGrapejuice
    how would fami and carrion feel like about eachother?... if you don't mind me asking.
    Neurax
    Neurax
    Mutual, genuine hatred.
    WhiteGrapejuice
    WhiteGrapejuice
    Yeah makes sense fami seems to be the most intrestest in just fighting the good fight against the angels without any hate-love or anything like that

    And carrion being a Angel and former saintlike human dislikes devils unless they prove themselves
    Rammacam
    Rammacam
    An angel that is designed to eat encounters a manipulative evil devil that takes control of those she can starve...
    Yeah, as the Jefesito Neurax said, they are designed to hate eachother.
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