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Comments on Profile Post by OneirosTheWriter

  1. Gaemnomut
    Gaemnomut
    If I may ask, what exactly aren't you happy with in your character portrayals?
    Nov 18, 2018
  2. OneirosTheWriter
    OneirosTheWriter
    They were too samey in voice, not enough distinctiveness.
    Nov 19, 2018
  3. Gaemnomut
    Gaemnomut
    To smart in voice? As in, not feeling natural enough? Too witty?

    As for the distinctiveness, with the short segments of character interaction it's not that surprising that we don't know them so well yet. Especially since Roscis for example isn‘t even part of the current campaign.
    Nov 19, 2018
  4. Gaemnomut
    Gaemnomut
    That aside, I think you did Corvus, Makaeus and Otaciu pretty well. Inathkus and Finiriel are quite good too, although they don't stand out as much. Krond's internal monologue is pretty different from how his underlings talk as well.
    Nov 19, 2018
  5. Gaemnomut
    Gaemnomut
    I guess the others just weren't present enough to be distinctive yet. Perhaps we could introduce another one of them to Otaciu. Or have an interlude from a different perspective. Inathkus' mission for example, or Finiriel's POV of the ambush she is leading. Or if you don't want to do their POVs directly maybe experiences of one of the soldiers under their direct command.
    Nov 19, 2018
  6. OneirosTheWriter
    OneirosTheWriter
    Not smart - that was a phone auto-corrupt. I actually meant "samey" :S
    Nov 19, 2018