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  1. Raguel'sShadow86

    Dreamless [MCU SI/OC] (Randomised Power Gain)

    Hmmmm maybe not at chance games but counting cards or something would be easy. The way I think of the power (I'm currently working on describing it better) is like a superrrr weak 'path to victory' kinda thing yk ? it'll show him how things work and interact together but it's not a tinker or...
  2. Raguel'sShadow86

    Dreamless [MCU SI/OC] (Randomised Power Gain)

    Yuppp I guess you could blame comic logic but I like to think I've presented him as a pretty immature character and well if you randomly gained the power to teleport you WOULDN'T break into a bank ?
  3. Raguel'sShadow86

    Dreamless [MCU SI/OC] (Randomised Power Gain)
    Threadmarks: Chapter 2 - Slippery Slope

    Had some troubles irl recently so this chapters been a good bit late, not entirely sure I'm happy with it either but it'll do. Hope y'all enjoy. ------ Chapter 2 - Slippery Slope ------ Noises. Voices. Words. Something's happening. Someone's speaking to me. Deja vu. I remember this. A...
  4. Raguel'sShadow86

    Dreamless [MCU SI/OC] (Randomised Power Gain)

    You kinda nailed it tbh...it'll probably be a bit more clear after I get a few more chapters out and get a bit better at this. How long it takes to get a power, how strong it is, what I use as inspiration, limitations, effect etc are mostly randomised. I TRY not to copy/paste powers from other...
  5. Raguel'sShadow86

    Dreamless [MCU SI/OC] (Randomised Power Gain)

    Thanks ! Very useful information, I am trying to work on that, get chapters a bit longer and maybe work on dialogue, think I try to get all my ideas on the page too quickly. Still not sure how I feel about Chapter 1 so thanks again !
  6. Raguel'sShadow86

    Dreamless [MCU SI/OC] (Randomised Power Gain)
    Threadmarks: Chapter 1 - Like Clockwork

    This is a total rewrite of my original first chapter, as it was kinda rushed, more like a summary of my ideas than it was a story. I've applied some advice, used a grammar checker, added to the story, and I'm trying a little harder, so hopefully I've learned. And let's see how it goes. Chapter...
  7. Raguel'sShadow86

    Dreamless [MCU SI/OC] (Randomised Power Gain)
    Threadmarks: Chapter 0 - Prologue

    Chapter 0 - Prologue Woke up and decided to try writing, enjoy. (Loosely following timeline, MCU is a clusterfuck) June 23rd, 2010 7:16 am A Flash of Blue A light. An explosion. So much noise. Guns. Movement. It flashes again. A terrible roar—no, a cry for help? More light. Flashing. I...
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