My attempt at a Canon Naruto with Chaos Gacha. I don't speak English very well, so I rely heavily on ChatGPT and Google Translate for translations; if anyone knows of a better option or has any tips, I'm all ears.
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A Chaotic Whirlpool - Naruto with the Chaos Gacha
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Chapter 1: Chaos Begins
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Naruto Uzumaki had never been particularly good at keeping his emotions in check, and that afternoon would be no exception.
He could still feel the mental and physical exhaustion after using the Shadow Clone Jutsu to defeat Mizuki. His body hurt, his clothes were dirty, and the revelations about his own life would bother him that night. However, as he walked back to his apartment, none of that could put out the huge smile on his face.
Iruka-sensei had accepted him. He had risked his life to protect him and, finally, had given him the ninja headband he had wanted so badly.
Naruto stopped in the middle of the street and adjusted it on his forehead, making sure the metal plate was perfectly centered. After looking at his reflection in a shop window, he raised both arms with a triumphant smile.
"I did it! I finally did it! Naruto Uzumaki is a real ninja!" Some people passing by turned their heads to look at him, but he didn't care. He was too busy imagining all the things he could do now that he had passed the graduation exam. He still had a long way to go before becoming Hokage, but that had never stopped him before.
When he reached his apartment, he practically threw the door open. He left his sandals to one side, entered the room, and looked at himself again in the little mirror on the wall. The headband was still there. It hadn't disappeared while he was walking, and it wasn't a dream or any kind of joke.
"Thank you, Iruka-sensei," he murmured, touching his headband again. "I promise I'll become an incredible Hokage. Just you wait!"
The room fell silent after his declaration. Naruto lowered his arms, satisfied with himself, and began thinking about what he could eat to celebrate his graduation. There might still be some food in the fridge. If not, he could always stop by Ichiraku the next day and order an extra-large bowl.
That was when it arrived, practically echoing inside his head as if someone had shouted it right into his ear.
[Welcome to the Chaos Gacha! You have been selected as the next lucky participant. The Lady of Luck, or perhaps Fate itself, might have its eyes on you if you managed to be selected, but I don't care about that! So let's get the show on the road. Let's gamble!]
Naruto jumped and clutched his head.
"What...?" He turned toward the door and then the window, looking for some sign that someone was playing a trick on him. "Hey! Who's there? If this is a joke, I'm warning you, it isn't funny!"
There was no answer.
Naruto took a few steps, checked behind the door, and even looked under the bed. He might not be the best ninja, but he was sure he could find someone inside his own apartment. After confirming that he was alone, he scratched his head in confusion.
"A gacha? What the heck is that?" The term meant nothing to him. However, before he could keep wondering what was happening, three sharp chimes rang in his ears.
[You have obtained X1 Random Bronze Ticket for successfully passing the Ninja Academy graduation exam!]
[You have obtained X1 Random Silver Ticket for defeating Mizuki!]
[You have obtained X1 Random Gold Ticket for learning the Shadow Clone Jutsu!]
Naruto blinked. The information came with a strange sensation, as though he had just received something he couldn't see or touch. Nevertheless, he could feel the tickets there. It was as certain as knowing he was wearing his ninja headband.
Naruto's mouth fell open in astonishment. Three tickets. One for graduating, another for defeating Mizuki, and one more for learning the technique that had changed the outcome of the fight. Suddenly, what had begun as a rather unsettling experience was turning into something that completely captured his attention.
"Wait a second!" he exclaimed, pointing at himself. "I have three of those things? And what am I supposed to do with them?"
The answer came instantly.
[Would you like to use your tickets?]
Naruto remained still for a few moments. He still wasn't sure what this Chaos Gacha was, but being rewarded for his accomplishments made sense. Besides, if there was a chance to obtain something useful for his dream of becoming Hokage, he wasn't going to waste it.
"Yes, of course I want to use them," he said aloud. Light suddenly flashed, accompanied by the sound of coins falling. In his mind, he saw a huge roulette wheel spinning so fast that he couldn't make out anything on it. In less than a second, it spun and stopped three times, and an announcement appeared in his mind.
You have used a random Bronze Ticket!
[Impact]
|Uncommon Ability|
You are able to amplify the physical impacts of your attacks by expending energy, making your punches and kicks, etc. deal more damage, but this does not amplify your stats, only the impact of your hits.
Naruto read the description, going over every detail with growing interest. An ability that let him hit harder without having to increase his muscles' strength sounded pretty good. He could feel that it was ready to be assigned whenever he wanted; the information seemed to have settled into his head along with the reward, giving him a basic understanding of what he had just obtained.
"This is awesome!" he said, clenching a fist in front of his face. "Imagine punching an enemy and sending him flying!"
A second announcement interrupted his imagination.
You have used a random Silver Ticket!
[Megaphone]
|Common Ability|
Allows the user to amplify their volume to disorientating levels, being able to shout loud enough to be heard over a loud concert or loud enough to disorient targets.
Naruto frowned as he finished absorbing the explanation.
"Seriously? Just shouting louder?" He cupped both hands around his mouth and was about to try it right then and there, but remembered that he was in his apartment and that his neighbors probably wouldn't appreciate him testing an ability like that at this hour.
"Hehehe. This will be useful for a few pranks," he said as a mischievous smile began to form on his face.
The third announcement arrived shortly afterward.
You have used a random Gold Ticket!
[Relentless Stamina]
|Elite Trait|
Your stamina is ridiculous, even as a regular human you could run a marathon and not be winded, you also recover from exhaustion really fast and it takes a lot to get you exhausted.
Naruto stared at his hands, trying to find some difference. He didn't feel as though his muscles had changed or his body had suddenly transformed. Even so, he could feel himself recovering energy, and the pain in his body quickly faded until he felt as good as new.
"I can move around a lot more without getting tired?!" His smile widened. "That's incredible! Good luck trying to catch me now, bastards!"
With his newfound energy, the room seemed much less cramped. Naruto began pacing back and forth, practically bouncing with joy as he imagined everything he could do with those rewards. He could already see how the Impact ability would make a lethal combo with his Shadow Clones, and if he learned to use his voice to disorient his enemies first, they wouldn't stand a chance. With that stamina, he could keep fighting long after his opponent was down to his last breath.
He didn't know whether any of this was some kind of strange technique, an illusion, or something even the best ninja in Konoha knew nothing about. What he did know was that the three rewards had appeared after real events in his life and that, for some reason, they now belonged to him.
Naruto approached the window. Outside, the village continued its usual routine, completely unaware of what had just happened in that little apartment. To anyone looking at him, Naruto Uzumaki would be nothing more than a brat who had just passed the graduation exam and was probably planning his next prank.
Naruto touched the ninja headband on his forehead again. The metal plate glimmered faintly in the light coming through the window, reminding him of everything that had happened that day and how much he still had to prove. His dream remained the same: to become Hokage and make everyone in the village acknowledge his existence.
The strange Gacha wasn't going to change that.
But maybe it could help him achieve it.
Now he had one more reason to train, three new rewards to understand, and a mysterious opportunity that might allow him to obtain many more. For Naruto, that was enough.
His first night as a ninja had just become much more interesting than he could have imagined.
He could still feel the mental and physical exhaustion after using the Shadow Clone Jutsu to defeat Mizuki. His body hurt, his clothes were dirty, and the revelations about his own life would bother him that night. However, as he walked back to his apartment, none of that could put out the huge smile on his face.
Iruka-sensei had accepted him. He had risked his life to protect him and, finally, had given him the ninja headband he had wanted so badly.
Naruto stopped in the middle of the street and adjusted it on his forehead, making sure the metal plate was perfectly centered. After looking at his reflection in a shop window, he raised both arms with a triumphant smile.
"I did it! I finally did it! Naruto Uzumaki is a real ninja!" Some people passing by turned their heads to look at him, but he didn't care. He was too busy imagining all the things he could do now that he had passed the graduation exam. He still had a long way to go before becoming Hokage, but that had never stopped him before.
When he reached his apartment, he practically threw the door open. He left his sandals to one side, entered the room, and looked at himself again in the little mirror on the wall. The headband was still there. It hadn't disappeared while he was walking, and it wasn't a dream or any kind of joke.
"Thank you, Iruka-sensei," he murmured, touching his headband again. "I promise I'll become an incredible Hokage. Just you wait!"
The room fell silent after his declaration. Naruto lowered his arms, satisfied with himself, and began thinking about what he could eat to celebrate his graduation. There might still be some food in the fridge. If not, he could always stop by Ichiraku the next day and order an extra-large bowl.
That was when it arrived, practically echoing inside his head as if someone had shouted it right into his ear.
[Welcome to the Chaos Gacha! You have been selected as the next lucky participant. The Lady of Luck, or perhaps Fate itself, might have its eyes on you if you managed to be selected, but I don't care about that! So let's get the show on the road. Let's gamble!]
Naruto jumped and clutched his head.
"What...?" He turned toward the door and then the window, looking for some sign that someone was playing a trick on him. "Hey! Who's there? If this is a joke, I'm warning you, it isn't funny!"
There was no answer.
Naruto took a few steps, checked behind the door, and even looked under the bed. He might not be the best ninja, but he was sure he could find someone inside his own apartment. After confirming that he was alone, he scratched his head in confusion.
"A gacha? What the heck is that?" The term meant nothing to him. However, before he could keep wondering what was happening, three sharp chimes rang in his ears.
[You have obtained X1 Random Bronze Ticket for successfully passing the Ninja Academy graduation exam!]
[You have obtained X1 Random Silver Ticket for defeating Mizuki!]
[You have obtained X1 Random Gold Ticket for learning the Shadow Clone Jutsu!]
Naruto blinked. The information came with a strange sensation, as though he had just received something he couldn't see or touch. Nevertheless, he could feel the tickets there. It was as certain as knowing he was wearing his ninja headband.
Naruto's mouth fell open in astonishment. Three tickets. One for graduating, another for defeating Mizuki, and one more for learning the technique that had changed the outcome of the fight. Suddenly, what had begun as a rather unsettling experience was turning into something that completely captured his attention.
"Wait a second!" he exclaimed, pointing at himself. "I have three of those things? And what am I supposed to do with them?"
The answer came instantly.
[Would you like to use your tickets?]
Naruto remained still for a few moments. He still wasn't sure what this Chaos Gacha was, but being rewarded for his accomplishments made sense. Besides, if there was a chance to obtain something useful for his dream of becoming Hokage, he wasn't going to waste it.
"Yes, of course I want to use them," he said aloud. Light suddenly flashed, accompanied by the sound of coins falling. In his mind, he saw a huge roulette wheel spinning so fast that he couldn't make out anything on it. In less than a second, it spun and stopped three times, and an announcement appeared in his mind.
You have used a random Bronze Ticket!
[Impact]
|Uncommon Ability|
You are able to amplify the physical impacts of your attacks by expending energy, making your punches and kicks, etc. deal more damage, but this does not amplify your stats, only the impact of your hits.
Naruto read the description, going over every detail with growing interest. An ability that let him hit harder without having to increase his muscles' strength sounded pretty good. He could feel that it was ready to be assigned whenever he wanted; the information seemed to have settled into his head along with the reward, giving him a basic understanding of what he had just obtained.
"This is awesome!" he said, clenching a fist in front of his face. "Imagine punching an enemy and sending him flying!"
A second announcement interrupted his imagination.
You have used a random Silver Ticket!
[Megaphone]
|Common Ability|
Allows the user to amplify their volume to disorientating levels, being able to shout loud enough to be heard over a loud concert or loud enough to disorient targets.
Naruto frowned as he finished absorbing the explanation.
"Seriously? Just shouting louder?" He cupped both hands around his mouth and was about to try it right then and there, but remembered that he was in his apartment and that his neighbors probably wouldn't appreciate him testing an ability like that at this hour.
"Hehehe. This will be useful for a few pranks," he said as a mischievous smile began to form on his face.
The third announcement arrived shortly afterward.
You have used a random Gold Ticket!
[Relentless Stamina]
|Elite Trait|
Your stamina is ridiculous, even as a regular human you could run a marathon and not be winded, you also recover from exhaustion really fast and it takes a lot to get you exhausted.
Naruto stared at his hands, trying to find some difference. He didn't feel as though his muscles had changed or his body had suddenly transformed. Even so, he could feel himself recovering energy, and the pain in his body quickly faded until he felt as good as new.
"I can move around a lot more without getting tired?!" His smile widened. "That's incredible! Good luck trying to catch me now, bastards!"
With his newfound energy, the room seemed much less cramped. Naruto began pacing back and forth, practically bouncing with joy as he imagined everything he could do with those rewards. He could already see how the Impact ability would make a lethal combo with his Shadow Clones, and if he learned to use his voice to disorient his enemies first, they wouldn't stand a chance. With that stamina, he could keep fighting long after his opponent was down to his last breath.
He didn't know whether any of this was some kind of strange technique, an illusion, or something even the best ninja in Konoha knew nothing about. What he did know was that the three rewards had appeared after real events in his life and that, for some reason, they now belonged to him.
Naruto approached the window. Outside, the village continued its usual routine, completely unaware of what had just happened in that little apartment. To anyone looking at him, Naruto Uzumaki would be nothing more than a brat who had just passed the graduation exam and was probably planning his next prank.
Naruto touched the ninja headband on his forehead again. The metal plate glimmered faintly in the light coming through the window, reminding him of everything that had happened that day and how much he still had to prove. His dream remained the same: to become Hokage and make everyone in the village acknowledge his existence.
The strange Gacha wasn't going to change that.
But maybe it could help him achieve it.
Now he had one more reason to train, three new rewards to understand, and a mysterious opportunity that might allow him to obtain many more. For Naruto, that was enough.
His first night as a ninja had just become much more interesting than he could have imagined.
Chapter 2 - Team 7
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Naruto still hadn't gotten used to the idea of being a ninja, but that hadn't stopped him from spending much of the morning showing off the headband on his forehead. Whenever he found a reflective surface, he took the opportunity to check how it looked on him, and when he entered the classroom, he quickly drew everyone's attention by proudly pointing at the metal plate as if there were any chance someone hadn't heard that he had passed.
"Look, everyone! Now I really am a ninja!" he announced, lifting his chin with a big, foxlike grin accentuated by the marks on his cheeks.
Most of his classmates were already used to his antics, so he received only a few glances before everyone returned to their own business. Naruto puffed out his cheeks, disappointed by the lack of enthusiasm, but soon recovered his good mood. After all, for once, he didn't feel the need for external validation.
He entered the classroom and sat at his usual desk, already excited about what would happen next in his life as a ninja.
At that moment, the classroom door suddenly opened, and Sakura and Ino's loud argument drew everyone's attention. It didn't take long for them to finish, and Sakura turned to look in his direction. For a moment, he imagined that she wanted to talk to him, only for the girl to shove him aside with a brusque movement that put him in just the right position to see her heading toward Sasuke, the bastard. But just as she was approaching, Ino appeared and blocked her path.
"Sakura, where do you think you're going?" - Ino asked, glancing at Sasuke. - "I'm planning to sit with him."
Sakura pressed her lips together and crossed her arms. "And who said you could decide that for both of us? I want to sit with Sasuke-kun too, so find somewhere else, Ino-Pi."
"Who are you calling Pig?!" - Ino took a step toward her, momentarily forgetting that they were still in class. "Besides, I saw him first!"
"That doesn't mean you have the right to sit beside him!"
As the two began arguing over who had more right to take the seat beside Sasuke, he remained seated at his desk, apparently indifferent to the argument taking place just a few inches away. Naruto, still lying on his desk, looked at the girls, then at the Uchiha, and finally examined him again with a thoroughly confused expression.
He didn't understand what was so special about that bastard. It was true that Sasuke was the top student in class, but that didn't explain why practically every girl seemed ready to fight for a few minutes of his attention. Naruto saw nothing that justified such a commotion.
Determined to find out what he was missing, he approached Sasuke's desk and squatted on top of it, face-to-face with the boy. Sasuke looked up and found Naruto staring intently at him, so close that it was impossible to ignore him.
"What do you want now?" Sasuke asked with obvious irritation.
Naruto didn't answer right away. He continued examining him, tilting his head slightly as he tried to find some extraordinary feature in his face. "I just don't get it. Sakura, Ino, and all the others are going crazy over you, but when I look at you, I don't see anything special. What are you supposed to have?"
Sasuke, irritated, looked Naruto straight in the eyes as if deciding whether it was worth answering him. This didn't stop Naruto from continuing to stare, far too absorbed in his examination. Sakura and Ino's protests continued beside them, growing louder as neither managed to get the upper hand.
It was then that a student standing behind Naruto turned to look at the ongoing argument and accidentally hit him with his elbow.
"Whoa!" Naruto exclaimed as he lost his balance.
He tried to brace himself against the desk to keep from falling, but the movement sent him straight forward. Sasuke didn't even have time to turn his head before Naruto collided with him. For an instant, they both froze, their lips accidentally pressed together and their eyes wide with surprise, while the rest of the classroom fell into deep silence.
Naruto was the first to pull away. He fell backward, landing clumsily on the floor, and clutched his throat, gagging and spitting as he tried to get rid of the feeling. Sasuke, meanwhile, remained seated for a few seconds, his expression of disbelief soon giving way to disgust. He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand as if trying to erase what had just happened, spitting on the floor as he was about to move to show the blond how displeased he was.
Sakura and Ino were already reacting on both their behalf.
"NARUTO!!!" Sakura screamed in horror, while Ino pointed at him with such indignation that she looked ready to leap at him. "How dare you kiss Sasuke?!"
"I DIDN'T DO IT ON PURPOSE!!!" Naruto defended himself, still on the floor. "THAT GUY PUSHED ME!!!" He got up to point at the guy who had been standing behind him.
The student was nowhere to be seen, because the moment he realized what had happened, he ran out of the classroom. The girls were too angry to pay attention to him and focused on the only other responsible they could find.
Sakura, Ino, and all the other girls were even angrier, while Sasuke continued wiping his mouth with an increasingly uncomfortable expression. The commotion grew, and just as it seemed ready to explode, the classroom door flew open and Iruka-sensei raised his voice just before the girls could throw themselves at Naruto.
"That's enough!" the teacher ordered, silencing them with a stern look. "It was an accident. Naruto, stop shouting and return to your seat; everyone else, stop making a scene."
Naruto immediately took advantage of the interruption to get up and move away from Sasuke, still muttering that what happened hadn't been his fault. Just as he returned to his seat, an announcement echoed inside his mind.
[You have obtained X1 Bronze Ticket for having your first kiss!]
[You have obtained X1 Bronze Ticket for stealing Sasuke Uchiha's first kiss!]
Naruto stopped mid-step. The surprise made him forget, for a moment, the embarrassment and disgust he felt. His eyes widened a little. He had obtained two new tickets. He wasn't sure why the Gacha considered what had happened an achievement worthy of a reward, especially considering it had been an unpleasant accident, but he wasn't going to argue when he was being rewarded.
A smile began to form on his face, and Sakura noticed it immediately.
"What are you laughing about, Naruto?" she asked suspiciously.
"N-Nothing!" he answered too quickly, recovering himself and sitting up straight. "It's nothing, Sakura-chan!"
She narrowed her eyes, unconvinced, before turning to look at Iruka. Naruto did the same, although his attention wasn't on his teacher. Two more tickets meant two more chances to obtain abilities or other rewards, and the idea was exciting enough that he quickly forgot what he had just suffered. If things continued like this, perhaps he could get something really useful before his ninja training began.
After finishing his speech about their graduation, Iruka-sensei began explaining how the teams would be formed. Naruto straightened up, paying attention to each name as it was announced. This was more important than what had just happened: the teams would determine who he started working with and who his instructor would be. He had reached this point after years of effort, and he was ready to find out what awaited him.
The names were assigned to the different groups one after another until it was finally Naruto's turn.
"Team 7 consists of Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, and Sasuke Uchiha. Their jōnin instructor is Kakashi Hatake."
Naruto took barely a second to react. "What?! Why do I have to be on the same team as that bastard?!"
Sakura stood up almost at the same time, although her complaint went in a very different direction. "Iruka-sensei! Why do I have to be with Naruto?!"
Iruka sighed as he saw the two start complaining the moment he finished listing the members. He explained that the teams had been organized to balance the graduates' abilities and could not be formed solely according to personal preferences. Naruto protested that he could work perfectly well alone, but Iruka decided to ignore the declaration, knowing that arguing with the blond at that moment would do him no good.
Sasuke, for his part, didn't seem particularly concerned about the team's composition. His indifference irritated Naruto, although beneath the complaints was a feeling he couldn't ignore. He had a team, teammates to train with, and an instructor who would teach him to become a real ninja. He wasn't sure what working with Sakura and Sasuke would be like, but that didn't change the fact that his life had just taken another step forward.
"Look, everyone! Now I really am a ninja!" he announced, lifting his chin with a big, foxlike grin accentuated by the marks on his cheeks.
Most of his classmates were already used to his antics, so he received only a few glances before everyone returned to their own business. Naruto puffed out his cheeks, disappointed by the lack of enthusiasm, but soon recovered his good mood. After all, for once, he didn't feel the need for external validation.
He entered the classroom and sat at his usual desk, already excited about what would happen next in his life as a ninja.
At that moment, the classroom door suddenly opened, and Sakura and Ino's loud argument drew everyone's attention. It didn't take long for them to finish, and Sakura turned to look in his direction. For a moment, he imagined that she wanted to talk to him, only for the girl to shove him aside with a brusque movement that put him in just the right position to see her heading toward Sasuke, the bastard. But just as she was approaching, Ino appeared and blocked her path.
"Sakura, where do you think you're going?" - Ino asked, glancing at Sasuke. - "I'm planning to sit with him."
Sakura pressed her lips together and crossed her arms. "And who said you could decide that for both of us? I want to sit with Sasuke-kun too, so find somewhere else, Ino-Pi."
"Who are you calling Pig?!" - Ino took a step toward her, momentarily forgetting that they were still in class. "Besides, I saw him first!"
"That doesn't mean you have the right to sit beside him!"
As the two began arguing over who had more right to take the seat beside Sasuke, he remained seated at his desk, apparently indifferent to the argument taking place just a few inches away. Naruto, still lying on his desk, looked at the girls, then at the Uchiha, and finally examined him again with a thoroughly confused expression.
He didn't understand what was so special about that bastard. It was true that Sasuke was the top student in class, but that didn't explain why practically every girl seemed ready to fight for a few minutes of his attention. Naruto saw nothing that justified such a commotion.
Determined to find out what he was missing, he approached Sasuke's desk and squatted on top of it, face-to-face with the boy. Sasuke looked up and found Naruto staring intently at him, so close that it was impossible to ignore him.
"What do you want now?" Sasuke asked with obvious irritation.
Naruto didn't answer right away. He continued examining him, tilting his head slightly as he tried to find some extraordinary feature in his face. "I just don't get it. Sakura, Ino, and all the others are going crazy over you, but when I look at you, I don't see anything special. What are you supposed to have?"
Sasuke, irritated, looked Naruto straight in the eyes as if deciding whether it was worth answering him. This didn't stop Naruto from continuing to stare, far too absorbed in his examination. Sakura and Ino's protests continued beside them, growing louder as neither managed to get the upper hand.
It was then that a student standing behind Naruto turned to look at the ongoing argument and accidentally hit him with his elbow.
"Whoa!" Naruto exclaimed as he lost his balance.
He tried to brace himself against the desk to keep from falling, but the movement sent him straight forward. Sasuke didn't even have time to turn his head before Naruto collided with him. For an instant, they both froze, their lips accidentally pressed together and their eyes wide with surprise, while the rest of the classroom fell into deep silence.
Naruto was the first to pull away. He fell backward, landing clumsily on the floor, and clutched his throat, gagging and spitting as he tried to get rid of the feeling. Sasuke, meanwhile, remained seated for a few seconds, his expression of disbelief soon giving way to disgust. He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand as if trying to erase what had just happened, spitting on the floor as he was about to move to show the blond how displeased he was.
Sakura and Ino were already reacting on both their behalf.
"NARUTO!!!" Sakura screamed in horror, while Ino pointed at him with such indignation that she looked ready to leap at him. "How dare you kiss Sasuke?!"
"I DIDN'T DO IT ON PURPOSE!!!" Naruto defended himself, still on the floor. "THAT GUY PUSHED ME!!!" He got up to point at the guy who had been standing behind him.
The student was nowhere to be seen, because the moment he realized what had happened, he ran out of the classroom. The girls were too angry to pay attention to him and focused on the only other responsible they could find.
Sakura, Ino, and all the other girls were even angrier, while Sasuke continued wiping his mouth with an increasingly uncomfortable expression. The commotion grew, and just as it seemed ready to explode, the classroom door flew open and Iruka-sensei raised his voice just before the girls could throw themselves at Naruto.
"That's enough!" the teacher ordered, silencing them with a stern look. "It was an accident. Naruto, stop shouting and return to your seat; everyone else, stop making a scene."
Naruto immediately took advantage of the interruption to get up and move away from Sasuke, still muttering that what happened hadn't been his fault. Just as he returned to his seat, an announcement echoed inside his mind.
[You have obtained X1 Bronze Ticket for having your first kiss!]
[You have obtained X1 Bronze Ticket for stealing Sasuke Uchiha's first kiss!]
Naruto stopped mid-step. The surprise made him forget, for a moment, the embarrassment and disgust he felt. His eyes widened a little. He had obtained two new tickets. He wasn't sure why the Gacha considered what had happened an achievement worthy of a reward, especially considering it had been an unpleasant accident, but he wasn't going to argue when he was being rewarded.
A smile began to form on his face, and Sakura noticed it immediately.
"What are you laughing about, Naruto?" she asked suspiciously.
"N-Nothing!" he answered too quickly, recovering himself and sitting up straight. "It's nothing, Sakura-chan!"
She narrowed her eyes, unconvinced, before turning to look at Iruka. Naruto did the same, although his attention wasn't on his teacher. Two more tickets meant two more chances to obtain abilities or other rewards, and the idea was exciting enough that he quickly forgot what he had just suffered. If things continued like this, perhaps he could get something really useful before his ninja training began.
After finishing his speech about their graduation, Iruka-sensei began explaining how the teams would be formed. Naruto straightened up, paying attention to each name as it was announced. This was more important than what had just happened: the teams would determine who he started working with and who his instructor would be. He had reached this point after years of effort, and he was ready to find out what awaited him.
The names were assigned to the different groups one after another until it was finally Naruto's turn.
"Team 7 consists of Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, and Sasuke Uchiha. Their jōnin instructor is Kakashi Hatake."
Naruto took barely a second to react. "What?! Why do I have to be on the same team as that bastard?!"
Sakura stood up almost at the same time, although her complaint went in a very different direction. "Iruka-sensei! Why do I have to be with Naruto?!"
Iruka sighed as he saw the two start complaining the moment he finished listing the members. He explained that the teams had been organized to balance the graduates' abilities and could not be formed solely according to personal preferences. Naruto protested that he could work perfectly well alone, but Iruka decided to ignore the declaration, knowing that arguing with the blond at that moment would do him no good.
Sasuke, for his part, didn't seem particularly concerned about the team's composition. His indifference irritated Naruto, although beneath the complaints was a feeling he couldn't ignore. He had a team, teammates to train with, and an instructor who would teach him to become a real ninja. He wasn't sure what working with Sakura and Sasuke would be like, but that didn't change the fact that his life had just taken another step forward.
That same afternoon, the newly graduated students gathered to wait for the jōnin who would be in charge of their respective teams. At first, the place was full of students talking about their new teammates and trying to guess what their instructors would be like. The jōnin-sensei began appearing one by one, calling their students and leaving with them to explain their first duties.
Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke stayed behind, waiting for theirs to appear.
For the first few minutes, Naruto sat calmly. He was convinced their instructor would arrive soon, explain what they had to do, and take them on some exciting mission. However, when several teams had already left and Kakashi still hadn't appeared, he began looking toward the entrance with growing impatience.
"How long is he going to take?" he asked, resting one hand on his knee as he leaned forward.
Sakura didn't have an answer either. She suggested that perhaps their instructor had run into some trouble, but Naruto replied that this didn't explain why all the other jōnin had managed to arrive on time. Sasuke simply watched the entrance, apparently less concerned about the delay, although he had no intention of leaving without meeting the person they had been assigned.
Another hour passed, and then another. The group of students dwindled as the last instructors arrived and left with their teams. Naruto went from pacing back and forth to sitting on the ground, and then ended up lying flat on his back, staring at the sky with an expression of utter boredom. Sakura checked the time from time to time, while Sasuke remained seated without saying much.
The sun moved quickly across the sky as evening approached, and the place that had once been full of students was practically empty. At last, there was no team left waiting except the seventh.
Naruto sat up, indignant that they still hadn't received any word from their instructor. "This is ridiculous! Everyone else has already left! What kind of sensei did they assign us?"
Sakura let out a sigh and remarked that perhaps he had forgotten about them, a possibility Naruto found even more insulting. Sasuke, however, suggested that the delay might be a test to evaluate their patience. Naruto thought about it for a few seconds before crossing his arms.
"Well, if that's his way of training us, I already hate him," he declared, convinced that any ninja worth his salt would have arrived hours ago.
That was when a silver-haired figure appeared, walking calmly toward them. The man wore his ninja headband tilted over his forehead, a mask covering the lower half of his face, and held a book in one hand, as though arriving several hours late to his first meeting with a team of newly graduated students were perfectly normal.
"Hello," he greeted them, casually raising one hand.
Naruto sprang to his feet and pointed at him, unable to contain all the anger he had accumulated while waiting. "Where the hell have you been?!"
"I got lost on the path of life," their sensei said, tilting his head slightly without showing the slightest sign of embarrassment.
Naruto stared at him, mouth hanging open, unable to come up with an immediate response. Sakura put a hand to her forehead, while Sasuke seemed to have lost any expectation that this meeting would be normal. If that was their instructor, life on Team 7 promised to be much more complicated than they had imagined.
After introducing himself as Kakashi Hatake, their new sensei, the jōnin explained that he wanted to get to know them a little better before beginning their training. He asked them to talk about their likes, dislikes, dreams, and what they wanted to achieve as ninja. Naruto found the request strange, since he was convinced that his name and his dream were the only things that really mattered, but he quickly volunteered to go first.
He introduced himself enthusiastically, talking about his love of Ichiraku ramen and how much he hated having to wait for it. Then he declared that his dream was to become Hokage, without hesitating for even an instant. He said it with the same conviction with which he had set out to graduate, and for a moment Kakashi looked at him attentively before returning to his book and moving on to his teammates.
When it was Sakura's turn, she adjusted her hair and began speaking with a rather shy smile. She mentioned that she liked spending time with Sasuke and enjoyed the things girls her age usually enjoyed, although she didn't mention anything directly; she did give Naruto an annoyed look when she talked about her dislikes.
Finally, Kakashi turned his gaze to Sasuke, who had listened without showing much interest until then.
"My name is Sasuke Uchiha. There are many things I dislike and few things I like," he began, his voice much more serious than his teammates'. "I don't have a dream. I have an ambition, and I intend to make it a reality."
Sasuke slightly clenched his hands as he continued, making it clear that his goal was to restore his clan and kill a particular man.
Kakashi's expression changed subtly, although he didn't ask any questions about the declaration. When the introductions were over, he stood up and informed them that the next day they would begin a mission. Naruto immediately regained his enthusiasm and asked what kind of mission it would be, but Kakashi merely told them they would find out when the time came. Before Naruto could insist too much, his sensei was already leaving, leaving them with more questions than answers.
Sakura said goodbye shortly afterward, and Sasuke didn't take long to leave either. Naruto left a little later, remembering the tickets he had obtained that morning. If he had to wait until the next day to begin his first mission, he could still use the day to see what new abilities he would get and try out the ones he had obtained the day before.
Naruto looked for a secluded training ground, far from the more heavily traveled paths: a simple clearing among the woods from which Konoha got its name, with a few thick wooden logs in the middle for practice. When he reached them, he sat down and focused on the two tickets he had obtained.
He used both tickets, and the noise and light he had come to associate with the Chaos Gacha appeared as he waited for the results.
You have used a random Bronze Ticket!
[Hustle]
|Common Ability|
Yomi Hustle - "It may be your only move" allows you to "Hustle" your opponents by performing a gesture, whether it's snapping your fingers and giving a taunting smile or lying down on a lawn chair mid-fight, your hustle must at least last half a second. When you successfully complete a Hustle, you regain some energy and stamina. The longer your hustle goes on, the more you will recover energy. Effectiveness depends on how stylish and aggravating you were. Can only be used in active combat against an enemy who means you genuine harm.
Naruto tilted his head as he received the information. He understood why someone would want to look cool while fighting. or simply wanting to mock an opponent, but even to him this seemed like an inconvenient ability (especially considering his [Unrelenting Stamina] trait), with somewhat complicated conditions: he had to be fighting someone who genuinely wanted to hurt him. Without an enemy in front of him, he couldn't fully test how it worked, although the idea was strange enough that he wanted to try it as soon as he had the chance.
"What kind of ability is this?" he murmured, scratching his head. "Well, I guess I'll find out what it's good for."
The second result appeared shortly afterward.
[Mystic Eyes of Depth Perception]
|Trash Ability|
These mystical eyes allow the user to supernaturally perceive the depth of an object or location in relation to something else.
Naruto frowned when he read the classification, but decided to try it before judging it. He activated the ability and looked around. There were no flashes or spectacular transformations; he simply began perceiving distances between objects with a precision he hadn't had before. He could more easily tell what was near, what was far away, and the distance between a branch and a tree or a stone and the ground in front of him.
He moved around the clearing, observing different objects from several angles. He even threw a small stone and followed its trajectory with his eyes, surprised by how clearly he could understand its position in space.
"Oh! This could help me aim better," he says with a smile as he continued testing his new eyes.
Then he remembered the ability he had obtained the previous night and decided to switch from his mystical eyes to Impact. He tried to do it mentally, but nothing happened. He tried again, concentrating harder this time, and got exactly the same result.
Naruto frowned. That was when more information about how these abilities worked came to him: the active ability slot had a cooldown period after changing the equipped ability. He had to wait five minutes before he could change it again.
"Five minutes? I have to wait five minutes every time I want to switch?!" he protested, although there was no one nearby to hear him.
Naruto would have to get used to that limitation and think carefully about which ability he wanted available at any given moment.
While he waited, he decided to test another reward he had obtained the previous night: Unrelenting Stamina. To test it, he began running around the clearing, first at a moderate pace and then gradually increasing his speed to the maximum, convinced that sooner or later he would start getting tired.
But exhaustion took much longer than expected to set in. He kept running until he had completed numerous laps; he even began jumping between the tree branches, moving erratically with the help of the mystical eyes, which gave him a better understanding of his surroundings. When he finally stopped, he was barely panting. His breathing also recovered surprisingly quickly.
"This is incredible!" Naruto shouted, his eyes widening in amazement as he grinned from ear to ear.
When the waiting period ended, he changed the equipped ability again. The mystical eyes disappeared from their slot, leaving him feeling slightly dizzy, and Impact took their place. Naruto clenched a fist, recalled the information he had received, and focused his chakra into his fist before punching a tree trunk.
THUMP!
The impact echoed through the clearing, and Naruto immediately pulled his hand back, shaking his fingers. The trunk now had a small crater a little larger than his hand,
"Ow, ow, ow! Hehehe, it really worked!" he exclaimed, though he soon smiled again. "I have to learn how to use it properly!"
Next, he tried Megaphone, taking a breath before shouting toward the forest. His voice thundered among the trees with such intensity that several birds took flight. Naruto stood still for a moment, surprised by the volume he had managed to reach, before starting to laugh in satisfaction. The ability could be useful for disorienting an enemy or making himself heard from far away, although he would have to be careful not to affect his teammates with it.
After experimenting for quite a while, Naruto understood another of the Gacha's limitations. Although he possessed several abilities, he only had one slot available to equip one active ability at a time. He could switch between them, but each switch activated the cooldown period, and he wouldn't be able to use several simultaneously until he obtained more slots. He wasn't sure how he would get more, but he believed he would eventually figure it out.
Naruto sat under the tree and mentally reviewed everything he had discovered. He had four active abilities among the rewards he had obtained so far: Impact, Megaphone, Hustle, and the mystical eyes. Unrelenting Stamina was added to those. He still didn't know which option would be best for his future missions, but at least he now had some experience using them.
Finally, he stood up and brushed off his clothes. The next day he would have his first mission with Team 7, and although he still thought Kakashi was a pretty strange guy, he couldn't deny that he was excited to find out what awaited them. He had new abilities to master, a trait that would allow him to train for longer, and an entire road ahead of him before he became Hokage.
"All right!" he declared, clenching a fist with determination. "Tomorrow will be the beginning of my great career as a ninja!"
His voice echoed through the clearing as he returned to the village. Naruto had no way of knowing what kind of mission Kakashi would assign them. But for now, he was satisfied with what he had obtained and eager to discover what other rewards awaited him in the future.
Naruto pulls
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[Impact]
|Uncommon Ability|
You are able to amplify the physical impacts of your attacks by expending energy, making your punches and kicks, etc. deal more damage, but this does not amplify your stats, only the impact of your hits.
[Megaphone]
|Common Ability|
Allows the user to amplify their volume to disorientating levels, being able to shout loud enough to be heard over a loud concert or loud enough to disorient targets.
You have no idea how close this one came to being [Bitch Breaker]; I thought it had landed there, but the wheel kept spinning just enough to move to the next one.
[Relentless Stamina]
|Elite Trait|
Your stamina is ridiculous, even as a regular human you could run a marathon and not be winded, you also recover from exhaustion really fast and it takes a lot to get you exhausted.
[Hustle]
|Common Ability|
Yomi Hustle - "It may be your only move" allows you to "Hustle" your opponents by performing a gesture, whether it's snapping your fingers and giving a taunting smile or lying down on a lawn chair mid-fight, your hustle must at least last half a second. When you successfully complete a Hustle, you regain some energy and stamina. The longer your hustle goes on, the more you will recover energy. Effectiveness depends on how stylish and aggravating you were. Can only be used in active combat against an enemy who means you genuine harm.
[Mystic Eyes of Depth Perception]
|Trash Ability|
These mystical eyes allow the user to supernaturally perceive the depth of an object or location in relation to something else.
[Mystic Eyes of Flame]
|Elite Ability|
Type Moon - Allows the user to increase the temperature of and spontaneously combust any target in their line of sight. The stronger the target the more energy they have to expend. While active their eye turns red while harboring the image of three overlapping triangles
|Uncommon Ability|
You are able to amplify the physical impacts of your attacks by expending energy, making your punches and kicks, etc. deal more damage, but this does not amplify your stats, only the impact of your hits.
[Megaphone]
|Common Ability|
Allows the user to amplify their volume to disorientating levels, being able to shout loud enough to be heard over a loud concert or loud enough to disorient targets.
You have no idea how close this one came to being [Bitch Breaker]; I thought it had landed there, but the wheel kept spinning just enough to move to the next one.
[Relentless Stamina]
|Elite Trait|
Your stamina is ridiculous, even as a regular human you could run a marathon and not be winded, you also recover from exhaustion really fast and it takes a lot to get you exhausted.
[Hustle]
|Common Ability|
Yomi Hustle - "It may be your only move" allows you to "Hustle" your opponents by performing a gesture, whether it's snapping your fingers and giving a taunting smile or lying down on a lawn chair mid-fight, your hustle must at least last half a second. When you successfully complete a Hustle, you regain some energy and stamina. The longer your hustle goes on, the more you will recover energy. Effectiveness depends on how stylish and aggravating you were. Can only be used in active combat against an enemy who means you genuine harm.
[Mystic Eyes of Depth Perception]
|Trash Ability|
These mystical eyes allow the user to supernaturally perceive the depth of an object or location in relation to something else.
[Mystic Eyes of Flame]
|Elite Ability|
Type Moon - Allows the user to increase the temperature of and spontaneously combust any target in their line of sight. The stronger the target the more energy they have to expend. While active their eye turns red while harboring the image of three overlapping triangles
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I think it's an issue with the Spanish translation; Naruto usually says "Creelo" or "de veras" though sometimes he simply doesn't say it. I write it that way, but I think the AI doesn't understand it and translates it literally. I'll check on that later.
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When you run it through the AI, try to have it add that verbal tic where it seems appropriate—though not too excessively. Great work; the fic looks interesting. Do you already have it in Spanish so I can bookmark it? Is it on AO3 or somewhere like that?
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no la verdad es que no, solo he subido aqui traducido
no tengo cuenta de AO3(y no por falta de intentos) y no uso muchas más páginas aparte de esta y ao3
Chapter 3 - The Bell Test
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"SHADOW CLONE JUTSU" - character speaking
"SHADOW CLONE JUTSU" - character thinking
"SHADOW CLONE JUTSU" - Gacha, loud or threatening voices, jutsus, or simply words that I want to highlight
For the first time in his life, Naruto Uzumaki was wondering whether becoming Hokage was worth having to get up at such an ungodly hour.
Dawn had not quite broken when he left his apartment and began walking toward the training ground Kakashi had told them about the previous day. Konoha's streets were practically deserted, the early morning air was quite cool, and no matter how much he tried to convince himself that he was excited about his first mission, he couldn't help yawning every few minutes.
At least he'd managed to get some sleep. After returning home the previous afternoon, he'd spent quite some time thinking about the abilities he'd obtained from the Gacha and how he might use them during a real mission. The temptation to keep experimenting had been strong, but he'd eventually decided to go to bed. He didn't want his new sensei to find him asleep during his first mission.
When he reached the field, he discovered that Sasuke was already there, leaning against one of the trees with his arms crossed. The Uchiha looked as wide awake as ever, something Naruto found particularly irritating considering the considerable effort he was making to keep his eyes open.
"Hey, teme! How long have you been here?" Naruto asked, raising a hand in greeting before yawning again.
"Just got here," Sasuke replied without bothering to change his posture.
Naruto grunted and dropped onto the grass. Just a few minutes later Sakura appeared, walking with considerably less enthusiasm than usual and covering her mouth as she tried to stifle a yawn. However, when she saw that Sasuke was already waiting, she immediately straightened up and tried to hide her exhaustion.
"Good morning, Sasuke-kun!" she greeted him with a smile before focusing on Naruto, who was practically lying on the grass. "What are you doing down there?"
"Trying not to fall asleep," he replied, rubbing his eyes. "Why do we have to come so early? Even the old man at the ramen stand isn't awake at this hour!"
Sakura sighed, though she couldn't really argue with that complaint. She would have preferred to stay in bed a little longer herself, but Kakashi had been quite clear about their meeting time. The three of them eventually settled near the training posts as they waited for their instructor to arrive.
And they waited.
The sun began to rise above the trees, the temperature gradually increased, and the first sounds of morning replaced the silence of dawn. Naruto went from sitting down to pacing back and forth, then sat down again and eventually started pulling small blades of grass out of sheer boredom. Sakura checked the time every so often, while Sasuke remained with his arms crossed, seemingly calm, although the way his fingers tapped against his arm made it quite clear that he, too, was losing patience.
By the time the morning was well underway, Naruto abruptly jumped to his feet.
"That damn sensei has done it again! Why does he make us come so early if he's just going to show up whenever he feels like it?!"
"You're not the only one who's annoyed, Naruto!" Sakura snapped, having stopped trying to hide her irritation. "We've been waiting for hours!"
Sasuke said nothing, but his gaze remained fixed on the entrance path. If Kakashi was trying to test their patience, he could at least be sure he was succeeding in irritating all three of his students.
Finally, when the sun was fully illuminating the training ground, a silver-haired figure appeared, strolling calmly between the trees with one hand in his pocket and the other raised in a casual greeting.
"Good morning," the silver-haired man said with a relaxed expression and a soft voice.
Naruto felt as though a vein was about to burst in his forehead.
"GOOD MORNING?! WE'VE BEEN WAITING FOR HOURS!!!"
"You told us to come early!" Sakura added, pointing at him accusingly. "Why are you always late?!"
Kakashi stopped in front of them and seemed to consider the question for a few seconds. Then he tilted his head slightly, as though he'd just remembered something important.
"Well, you see... A black cat crossed my path, so I had to take a different route."
Naruto stared at him. He'd heard and made plenty of excuses in his life, but that was by far the stupidest he'd ever heard.
"A BLACK CAT?! THAT'S IT?!"
Kakashi shrugged, apparently satisfied with his explanation, and walked toward the three wooden posts in the center of the field. Sasuke followed him with his eyes without commenting, although his expression suggested that he hadn't believed a single word, either.
Naruto was still grumbling when Kakashi took out a small alarm clock and placed it on one of the posts. He adjusted its hands to noon and, once satisfied, turned back toward his students. "All right. We have until twelve to complete the test."
That immediately caught Naruto's attention. He straightened up and watched Kakashi take out two small silver bells hanging from strings. He jingled them softly before fastening them to his belt on one side of his waist.
"Your objective is quite simple: take these bells from me before the alarm goes off. You may use any technique you know, and I have no intention of making things easy for you."
Naruto smiled at that. Finally, they were going to do something interesting. However, his smile vanished when Kakashi pointed to the training posts and explained that anyone who failed to get a bell would end up tied to one of them, forced to watch while the others enjoyed their lunch.
"What?! That's cruel!" Naruto protested, especially because he'd skipped breakfast that morning in his hurry.
"Kakashi-sensei... There are only two bells," Sakura pointed out, having noticed a problem with the way the test was set up.
"Very observant, Sakura," Kakashi replied, lifting one of them slightly. "That means at least one of you won't be able to get one. Whoever ends up without a bell will fail and be sent back to the Academy."
The news hit the three genin like a bucket of cold water.
Naruto looked at the bells and then at his teammates. The possibility of returning to the Academy, after everything he'd gone through to graduate, was something he didn't even want to consider. Sakura didn't seem particularly enthusiastic about the idea either, glancing sideways at Sasuke, while he watched Kakashi with an increasingly serious expression.
"And one last thing," the jōnin continued as he walked leisurely away from his students. "If you want to get one of these bells, you'll have to come at me with the genuine intention of killing me. If you hold back, you won't stand a chance."
Naruto felt a shiver at those words. Attacking someone like Mizuki was not the same as deliberately attacking his own instructor, but Kakashi's expression left no room for doubt: he was serious.
None of the three replied. Naruto quickly checked the equipment in his ninja pouch, Sakura inspected her weapons, and Sasuke prepared in silence while Kakashi assessed their preparations.
"All right. Begin," the older ninja said. The three genin needed no further prompting and immediately scattered among the trees.
Naruto landed on a thick branch and crouched behind the trunk, watching the field from an elevated position. Kakashi remained in the same place, seemingly unconcerned, while waiting for one of them to decide to attack. Naruto could make out some movement among the nearby branches, but he wasn't sure where Sakura and Sasuke had hidden themselves.
For the first time since arriving at the field, he allowed himself to seriously consider the possibility of failure.
There were only two bells.
Even if all three managed to work together well enough to snatch them from Kakashi, one of them would have to return to the Academy. Naruto clenched his fists as he remembered all the times he'd failed the graduation exam, his classmates' mockery, and that night when Mizuki tricked him into stealing the forbidden scroll.
He couldn't go through all that again.
Not after Iruka-sensei had risked his life to protect him. Not after finally receiving that forehead protector that meant so much to him.
"I'm not going to fail. Not now that I've come this far."
Naruto looked up at Kakashi, remembering the ability he'd tested the day before. Impact could increase the power of his blows. For the moment, he couldn't see how Megaphone could be useful, and considering that switching between abilities required some time, at least he could prepare himself before starting the fight.
Naruto smiled slowly. He had never been particularly patient, and staying hidden while waiting for a perfect opportunity had never been his style.
He jumped from the branch and landed in front of Kakashi, several meters away.
From their hiding places, Sakura and Sasuke watched in surprise as Naruto voluntarily abandoned the cover of the trees. Neither seemed to understand what he hoped to accomplish by facing a jōnin directly.
"Well, now. I thought you'd stay hidden a little longer, Naruto," Kakashi remarked as he turned toward the blond.
"I don't need to hide to take those bells from you!" Naruto answered, pointing at him with a defiant smile. "Get ready, Kakashi-sensei!"
The jōnin watched him for a moment before taking out a small book and opening it to his marked page. Naruto frowned when he saw him start reading so casually.
"Hey! What are you doing?!" the blond demanded, bewildered.
"Reading, of course," the older ninja said as he calmly turned a page without even looking up for a second.
"I can see you're reading! But why?!"
Kakashi turned a page with absolute calm.
"Don't worry. Your attacks are so weak that I can stop them even while reading. So it doesn't matter if you attack me."
That produced exactly the reaction he wanted.
"WEAK?! I'LL SHOW YOU HOW WEAK MY PUNCHES ARE, DATTEBAYO!"
Naruto charged forward and, as he covered the final few meters, focused his attention on Impact, making sure the ability was equipped. He felt his chakra respond to his will, gathering in his arm as he threw a punch directly at Kakashi's face.
The jōnin raised a hand without taking his eyes off the book.
THUMP!
Kakashi's palm intercepted the blow.
Naruto felt his knuckles strike solid resistance, but the additional impact quickly made itself felt. The force of the attack was considerably greater than his instructor had calculated, and Kakashi's one visible eye widened slightly as he felt the pressure against his hand.
"Hmm?" Kakashi looked up from his book for a second to examine Naruto's fist before returning to his reading.
It wasn't enough to break his guard or force him backward. Kakashi was an experienced jōnin and the difference between their abilities was still enormous, but that blow had carried far more power than a recent graduate should possess.
Naruto, of course, wasn't about to stop and analyze the result.
Taking advantage of Kakashi having one hand occupied, he launched a kick toward his side. The jōnin ducked calmly, allowing the leg to pass over his head, and before Naruto could regain his balance, he vanished from his field of vision.
A presence immediately appeared behind him.
"Huh?"
"Naruto, there's something you should learn about Shinobis." The boy tried to turn around, but Kakashi had already brought his hands together to form a rather strange seal. From the trees, Sakura and Sasuke watched the scene with growing alarm. Judging by the position of his fingers and the seriousness with which Kakashi had spoken, both thought he was about to use some dangerous technique.
"Konoha's secret technique!" Kakashi announced.
Naruto's eyes widened.
"Wait, wait...!"
"One Thousand Years of Death!" With those words, the older ninja moved. Naruto's scream echoed across the field as the technique violently launched him forward. His body flew through the air before he finally plunged headfirst into the nearby lake, water splashing all around him.
Sakura stood motionless, unable to believe what she had just witnessed. Sasuke said nothing either, although the disbelief on his face was quite difficult to hide, and with every passing second he lost a little more faith in his sensei's seriousness.
Meanwhile, back in the training ground clearing, Kakashi opened his book again.
"Well, that should teach him not to let his guard down."
An indignant voice came from the lake.
"DAMN YOU, KAKASHI-SENSEI!!!" Naruto shouted as he dragged himself out of the water, completely soaked and spitting as he tried to catch his breath. It had been humiliating, and the pain he still felt did nothing to improve his mood. However, thanks to Relentless Stamina, the effort of his attack and the fall had barely affected his energy reserves. After shaking the water out of his hair, he looked back at Kakashi with a defiant smile.
"You can laugh all you want, but someday I'm going to become Hokage! Then we'll see who's laughing, dattebayo!"
Kakashi looked up slightly.
"Oh, really? Then you'd better start by getting one of these bells."
"That's exactly what I'm going to do!" Naruto said, a grin spreading across his face.
As he spoke, several figures shot out of the water and the surrounding woods: Naruto's shadow clones, which he'd summoned while he was in the water.
Kakashi watched the clones with renewed interest.
"So, the rumors are true. He really can use the Shadow Clone Jutsu at will."
Naruto gave him no time to think further. Two clones attacked from the sides while three others descended from the branches, forcing Kakashi to retreat to avoid being surrounded. Contrary to what one might expect from someone like Naruto, the movements seemed purposeful: each clone tried to limit Kakashi's options while the others looked for an opening.
One of them threw a kick from the left, forcing the jōnin to lean toward the right, where another clone was already waiting with a punch. Kakashi blocked the punch, but once again felt that additional pressure he'd noticed in the original Naruto's blow.
Kakashi's single visible eye narrowed. "Interesting. He can do it consistently."
The clone that had thrown the punch immediately vanished in a cloud of smoke, before Kakashi could even strike it.
Naruto noticed it too.
He didn't need to pause for long to understand what had happened. His clones could use Impact just as he could, but the amount of chakra they received when created was limited, and using the ability at full power consumed a large part of those reserves. Some could maintain it for longer, but others ended up dispersing after a single especially powerful blow.
"So they can use my abilities too!" Naruto's grin widened as he circled Kakashi, blending in with the clones and waiting for the right moment to reveal himself while the clones kept up the pressure.
That opened up a lot of possibilities.
Two clones lunged at the jōnin simultaneously, one trying to grab his arms while the other sought to immobilize his legs. Kakashi spun around and managed to prevent them from completely catching him, but a third Naruto appeared behind him and threw a kunai toward one side, forcing him to alter his movement to dodge it.
That was exactly the opportunity the original had been waiting for.
Naruto darted forward from one side and extended his hand toward the bells, taking advantage of the fact that Kakashi seemed to have his attention divided among the copies.
His fingers almost brushed one of them.
However, Kakashi turned at the last instant and avoided him by mere centimeters. "Hmm, this brat is full of surprises. He really is his father's son. Looks like I won't be able to keep reading."
"Almost, Naruto. That was a good attempt," the jōnin said aloud, looking at the blond with a little more attention as he raised his eyes fully from his book.
Before Naruto could try again, the jōnin moved and rapidly struck the clones attempting to surround him. The copies vanished one after another in clouds of smoke. Before Naruto could process what had just happened, a hand emerged from the smoke and headed straight for his face. The blow sent him flying several meters backward.
The boy rolled across the ground but got up almost immediately. The blow had hurt, although his extraordinary stamina allowed him to recover much faster than Kakashi had expected.
"I'm not finished yet! SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!!!" Naruto created more clones and renewed the attack. Over the next several minutes, Kakashi had to defend himself against a series of offensives that, while nowhere near posing a real threat to him, were certainly surprising to see from a recent graduate, especially one with Naruto's reputation.
The clones attacked from behind when Kakashi focused on the ones in front of him, used the trees to change direction, and tried to force him into positions from which the original could reach the bells. Naruto made mistakes, naturally, and on more than one occasion missed opportunities by charging in too soon, but he was learning to coordinate his movements as he fought.
Kakashi began paying closer attention.
Those enhanced blows were still easy for someone at his level to stop, but the technique was peculiar. He had seen many variations of this type of chakra-based jutsu, and this one stood out because it wasn't simply an increase in strength. Even when the clones disappeared after attacking, the extra pressure of the impact could become troublesome if Naruto managed to land several blows in succession.
However, the gap in experience and skill was still far too great.
When Naruto tried to repeat a maneuver to surround him, Kakashi suddenly vanished in a cloud of smoke. The boy barely had time to wonder what had happened before he discovered that one of his clones was right in front of him, charging with a chakra-filled fist.
"Huh?! Wait!"
The clone didn't have time to stop either.
THUMP!
The blow struck Naruto directly in the stomach, folding him in half. At the same time, the original, who had already started throwing his own punch toward the spot where he expected Kakashi to be, ended up connecting with the clone instead.
Both blows carried Impact's additional power. The clone vanished in smoke after the exchange, and Naruto dropped to his knees, clutching his abdomen as he tried to catch his breath.
"Ugh...! Damn it!"
From a nearby branch, Kakashi watched the result of his substitution jutsu. It was a classic that his own sensei loved to use, taking advantage of the fact that Naruto and his clones had been focused on maintaining the offensive and none of them was paying attention to anything but their target.
Naruto stayed on the ground for a few seconds, rubbing his stomach. That blow had been far more painful than he'd expected, and now he understood better why some of his clones vanished after using Impact at full power.
"Damn! That really hurt!"
Even so, the pain gradually began to fade as he recovered his breath. Naruto raised his head and spotted one of the silver bells resting on the grass, apparently knocked loose during the fight.
His eyes lit up.
"A bell!" He quickly moved toward it and reached down to pick it up.
The ground shifted beneath his feet.
"HUH?!"
A rope tightened around his ankle and, before he could react, Naruto was yanked upward, ending up hanging upside down from a branch while the bell he'd tried to pick up remained peacefully on the ground.
Kakashi appeared before him a few seconds later, picking up the bell from the ground. "Well, Naruto. Looks like you found a trap."
"I ALREADY NOTICED!!!"
The jōnin laughed and watched the boy swing back and forth.
"I have to admit your attack was quite impressive. You used your clones much better than I would have expected and didn't hesitate to attack me with all your strength. You also showed quite a lot of endurance by continuing to fight after taking several hits. I'm starting to like you."
Naruto stopped swinging for a moment, surprised by the praise.
"Really?"
"But you were also too naïve," Kakashi continued, wiping the proud expression off the boy's face. "You let the excitement of the fight carry you away and fell into a rather obvious trap. A ninja must pay attention to his surroundings, especially when using jutsu that can be turned against him. If your enemy manages to trick you into attacking the wrong target, all that strength will be useless."
Naruto frowned as he tried to process his instructor's words.
He didn't like admitting it, but Kakashi was right.
Kakashi continued explaining that a true ninja needed to see beyond and recognize the hidden intentions behind an enemy's actions. However, before he could finish his explanation, a group of kunai and shuriken shot out from the trees.
Sasuke had decided to attack, attempting to take advantage of his instructor's apparent distraction.
The weapons struck Kakashi's body directly, piercing him before Naruto's astonished eyes.
"KAKASHI-SENSEI!!!" the blond shouted, surprise and anger evident in his voice. "HEY, TEME! ARE YOU CRAZY?! YOU WENT TOO FAR THIS TIME!"
A cloud of smoke appeared where the jōnin had been.
When it cleared, all that remained was a wooden log pierced by the weapons.
"Again?!" Naruto said, eyes wide.
From the forest, Kakashi calmly watched Sasuke change position after his attack.
"So that's where you were."
Naruto, meanwhile, was still hanging upside down.
"Damn Kakashi-sensei..." Naruto swung slightly as he tried to reach the rope holding his ankle. His instructor's lecture kept going around in his head and, as much as he wanted to complain, he knew he'd made several mistakes, which he kept replaying in his mind. He'd let himself be provoked when Kakashi took out his book, attacked without thinking much about the possibility of a substitution—one of the Academy's three basic jutsu—and finally fallen into a trap that hadn't even been particularly well hidden.
It wasn't pleasant to admit.
But if he wanted to become Hokage, he'd have to improve.
Naruto managed to pull a kunai from his pouch and, after few attempts, reached the rope with its blade. One quick cut was enough to free him. His body began to fall, but he managed to turn in midair and land on both feet with a little flip.
"Ha! That was easy!"
He'd barely straightened up when a scream echoed from somewhere in the forest.
"AAAAAAAH!!!"
Naruto immediately recognized Sakura's voice.
"Sakura-chan?" He turned toward the sound, trying to work out what had happened among the trees. It didn't sound like the girl was merely surprised; she'd screamed as if she'd seen something horrible.
Naruto took a step forward, ready to go check on her.
The ground shifted beneath his feet again.
"EH?!"
A second rope tightened around his ankle and violently lifted him off the ground, leaving him hanging upside down in almost exactly the same position as before.
Naruto remained motionless for several seconds.
Then he lowered his head and looked at the rope.
It was practically identical to the last one.
"THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!!!"
His scream echoed throughout the training ground, although this time no one appeared to make fun of him. Naruto struggled against the rope, angry with himself for falling into the same trap twice, until he finally decided to stop and take a better look at his surroundings.
From that position he could see a large part of the field. The training posts stood near the center, the clock was still counting down the remaining time and, a little farther away, was the strange stone he'd seen when he'd arrived that morning.
A couple containers of food sat beside it.
Naruto narrowed his eyes.
He immediately recognized the bentō Kakashi had brought for lunch. His stomach responded with a growl so loud that for a moment he thought someone else might have heard it.
He hadn't eaten breakfast.
He'd spent much of the morning waiting for Kakashi and then expended a considerable amount of energy fighting him. Although Relentless Stamina allowed him to endure physical exertion much better, that didn't mean he could completely ignore hunger.
Naruto stared at the containers for a few seconds.
Then he looked back at the rope holding him suspended.
An idea began to form in his head.
He managed to free himself again and, after carefully checking that there wasn't another rope hidden beneath his feet, approached the food containers. He looked around before lifting one of the bentō and opening it.
The smell was enough to make him almost completely forget about the exam.
"Food!" Naruto picked up the chopsticks and was just about to bring the first bite to his mouth when a hand appeared on his shoulder.
"Naruto..."
The boy froze and turned his head very slowly.
Kakashi was behind him, his single visible eye staring straight into Naruto's as if it were about to pierce through his head.
"What do you think you're doing?"
Naruto smiled nervously, still holding the chopsticks.
"Uh... Checking whether the food is in good condition?"
Kakashi watched him in silence.
Naruto swallowed.
A few minutes later he was tied to the center post of the training ground, his arms immobilized behind his back and an expression of absolute resentment on his face.
When the clock finally struck noon, Kakashi gathered the three genin in front of the training posts. Naruto remained tied to the middle one, still regretting that he hadn't managed to eat even a single bite, while Sakura and Sasuke listened in silence.
Neither of them had obtained a bell.
The test was over.
Kakashi watched them for a few moments before speaking.
"I've made a decision. All three of you are expelled from the ninja training program."
Naruto was the first to react, snapping his head up.
"WHAT?!"
Sakura's eyes widened in disbelief, while Sasuke frowned.
Kakashi continued without changing his tone. "You haven't shown that you're ready to become real ninjas. You act like spoiled children who think this is all a game, and none of you seems to understand what it means to work as a shinobi."
Sasuke was the first to react. He lunged at Kakashi with the clear intention of attacking him, but the jōnin intercepted him effortlessly and pinned him to the ground before he could complete his movement.
"That's exactly what I'm talking about," Kakashi said, keeping him restrained. "You think being strong or knowing a few techniques is enough to become ninjas. You don't understand that a real mission could cost you your lives if you make the wrong decisions."
Naruto watched the scene with growing concern. He'd expected more criticism, but not for Kakashi to declare them completely unfit to continue.
"But we tried!" he protested. "I did everything I could to get those bells!"
"That's precisely your problem, Naruto. You tried to do everything on your own," the older ninja replied sternly.
The boy closed his mouth.
Kakashi continued speaking, this time addressing all of them while still pinning the Uchiha down.
"They put you in a team for a reason, but none of you stopped to think about it. Naruto charged at me without considering that he had two teammates who could help him. Sakura spent much of the test worrying only about Sasuke and didn't even try to help Naruto when he was hanging from a tree, completely defenseless. And you, Sasuke, are so convinced you're better than the other two that you'd rather work alone than accept their help."
Sasuke gritted his teeth but didn't reply.
Sakura lowered her gaze slightly.
Naruto, for his part, remembered the way he'd come out of hiding to attack Kakashi without consulting his teammates. At the time it had seemed like the most natural thing in the world, but now he was beginning to understand what his instructor was trying to tell them.
"A shinobi must be able to work with his team," Kakashi continued, visibly frustrated. "Individual skills are important, but they mean nothing if the members of a group are incapable of cooperating. And above any individual, even above the team itself, is the mission. If you don't understand that, your decisions will end up causing an operation to fail or your teammates to die."
"But Kakashi-sensei... There were only two bells. Even if we'd worked together, one of us would have had to fail," Sakura protested softly.
Kakashi watched her for a moment.
"Exactly. That was the point of the test. I wanted to see whether you were capable of setting aside your own interests and putting the team's well-being above your personal desires, even when it seemed that doing so would mean losing your chance to pass."
All three remained silent.
Then Kakashi took out a kunai and placed it near Sasuke's neck, still keeping him immobilized.
"Imagine we're on a real mission, Sakura, and an enemy manages to capture Sasuke. He orders you to kill Naruto if you want to save Sasuke's life. What would you do?"
Sakura froze.
Naruto stopped moving too.
Kakashi didn't press the blade against his student's neck, but the threat represented by the example was perfectly clear.
"Would you kill Naruto to save Sasuke? Or would you let Sasuke die? On a mission, you may face these kinds of situations. If you don't trust your teammates and can't work together, not only will the mission fail, but someone will die." Kakashi withdrew the kunai and allowed Sasuke to get up. Then he looked toward the memorial stone near the field.
"See that stone? The names carved on it belong to ninjas who died serving the village. They're remembered as heroes because they gave their lives while carrying out their duty."
Naruto watched the stone silently. Until then, he'd barely paid any attention to it, except when he'd seen the bentō beside it. Now he understood that the monument represented something far more important than a simple resting place.
Kakashi put away the kunai as he slowly approached the stone and placed a hand on it, his fingers tracing a few names that only he could see.
"The names of some of my friends are carved there." The words were spoken with a calmness more unsettling than any of his earlier scoldings. Naruto didn't know what to say, and for once he didn't feel the need to say anything. Sakura lowered her gaze, while Sasuke remained motionless.
Kakashi let the silence stretch for a few seconds before turning around.
"I'll give you one last chance."
Naruto immediately raised his head.
"Really?!"
"Don't get too excited. The second part will be harder. You'll have three additional hours to get one of the bells, and this time I won't hold back."
Sakura and Sasuke exchanged a glance.
"You can use the time to eat lunch before continuing. You'll need to recover your strength," Kakashi said as he collected the food containers and placed them in front of his students.
Naruto smiled hopefully, but his expression vanished when his instructor pointed to the post he was still tied to.
"Except you, Naruto. You tried to break the rules and eat lunch before the test was over, so you'll stay tied up and go without food."
"WHAT?! THAT'S NOT FAIR!"
Kakashi ignored the protest and turned toward the other two.
"And one warning: if either of you tries to give him food, you'll fail immediately. I make the rules, and you follow them." After that final warning, he vanished among the trees, leaving Team 7 alone once again.
For a few moments, none of the three said anything.
Naruto remained tied to the middle post, watching in absolute misery as Sakura and Sasuke opened their respective bentō. The smell of food reached him almost immediately, making his stomach growl so loudly that Sakura looked up.
"Naruto..."
"Don't say anything, Sakura-chan!" he replied, trying to maintain a little dignity as he looked away. "I can manage without eating! I'm going to get one of those bells, even if I have to do it on an empty stomach, dattebayo!"
The declaration would have been much more convincing if his stomach hadn't complained again immediately afterward.
Sakura watched him with a mixture of pity and concern, but immediately remembered Kakashi's warning. If she tried to help him, she'd lose her chance to become a ninja.
Sasuke, meanwhile, sat in front of his food without touching it.
He'd listened carefully to everything Kakashi had said. Their instructor had criticized them for not working as a team, thinking only of their own interests and being unable to consider their teammates' needs. Yet now he'd ordered them to leave one of their number without food before continuing a test that would require all their energy.
Sasuke glanced briefly at Naruto.
The blond was still looking away, trying to ignore the smell of food.
"Naruto," the Uchiha said as he got up and approached the still-tied boy with his chopsticks raised.
"What do you want, teme?"
"Eat." Sasuke held a portion of food in front of him.
"Huh?" Naruto murmured, staring at him.
"If you're too hungry to move, you'll only get in the way during the second test. We need to be in good condition if we want to get those bells," the Uchiha explained in a firm, clear voice, without a trace of doubt.
Naruto opened his mouth, surprised by the offer. For an instant he remembered Kakashi's warning and glanced toward the trees, expecting his instructor to appear and punish them.
"But Kakashi-sensei said you weren't allowed to give me food!"
"He's not here," Sasuke replied calmly. "Besides, if we're going to work together, there's no sense in letting one of us be weakened."
Sakura watched the scene for a few seconds before understanding what Sasuke was doing. She looked at her own lunch, then at Naruto, and finally remembered Kakashi's words about the importance of teamwork.
She smiled slightly.
"He's right, Naruto. If we're going to pass the test, we need you to be in good enough condition to help us." Sakura approached with her chopsticks too, offering him some of her food.
Naruto looked at both of them with an expression somewhere between surprise and emotion. He'd expected many things from that day, but this show of kindness from his teammates definitely hadn't been one of them.
"Guys..." he murmured before smiling broadly. "Thanks!"
He opened his mouth to accept the first bite.
Then a cloud of smoke appeared in front of them.
"CAUGHT YOU!!!" Kakashi appeared out of nowhere with such a stern expression that all three genin froze completely.
Sakura immediately withdrew her chopsticks, Sasuke went on guard, and Naruto felt as if the food were caught in his throat even before he'd managed to taste it.
"I told you that anyone who fed Naruto would fail," Kakashi reminded them, looking at each of them in turn. "You disobeyed a direct order from your instructor."
For a few seconds, none of them could come up with a suitable answer.
Kakashi remained motionless.
Then, to his students' utter surprise, his expression changed. The severity vanished from his visible eye, and a smile began to form beneath his mask. "Congratulations."
Naruto blinked in surprise.
"All three of you pass."
For an instant, no one reacted.
"We passed?!" Sakura was the first to respond.
Kakashi nodded calmly.
"That's right. The real test was never about getting the bells. I wanted to see whether you were capable of putting your teammates' needs above orders that seemed designed to set you against each other. The previous teams did exactly what I told them, competed against each other, and ended up failing because they never understood the purpose of the exam."
Naruto looked at Sasuke, then Sakura, and finally back at his instructor, feeling an enormous wave of emotion growing in his chest.
They'd passed.
All three of them.
"In the ninja world, those who break the rules are considered scum. But those who abandon their comrades are worse than scum," Kakashi said, casting one last glance toward the memorial stone before continuing.
The words carried a seriousness none of the three could ignore. Naruto remembered Kakashi's warning about the friends whose names were engraved on that stone and understood that, as strange as the exam had been, his instructor truly believed what he was saying.
Then his emotions finally got the better of him.
"YEEEEEES!!! WE DID IT!!! WE'RE REAL NINJAS, DATTEBAYO!!!" Naruto began wriggling with joy against the post, unable to raise his arms because he was still tied up. His eyes were slightly wet, and a huge smile covered practically his entire face. After spending so many years trying to graduate, he'd finally passed his first test as a genin and could continue moving toward his dream.
It was in the middle of that celebration that he heard a familiar sound.
[You have obtained X1 Gold Ticket for passing Hatake Kakashi's bell test!]
Naruto went still.
The smile remained on his face, but for a moment he stopped squirming and opened his eyes in surprise. "Another gold ticket!"
Kakashi noticed the sudden change in his behavior. The boy had gone from celebrating to standing completely still in the space of a second, something rather strange even for Naruto. However, after observing him briefly, he decided not to ask.
Sakura and Sasuke noticed the change immediately as well, but considering how happy they each were, neither mentioned it.
"All right. I'll see you here tomorrow, Team 7." With that farewell, Kakashi vanished among the trees.
Sakura immediately approached the post and began cutting the ropes holding Naruto with a kunai. Sasuke watched with his arms crossed.
"Ahhh! Finally! I thought I was going to be tied up forever!" the blond exclaimed as he began stretching.
Sakura shook her head.
"That's what you get for trying to steal lunch," the girl retorted, though there was no animosity behind her tone.
"I was hungry!" Uzumaki replied with a big smile, as though that excused him.
Sasuke turned around.
"See you tomorrow."
Naruto raised a hand in farewell while Sakura hurried after the Uchiha. It didn't take long for them to disappear among the trees, leaving the training ground silent once more.
Naruto stayed there a while longer, looking at the place where he'd spent much of the day.
He'd taken some pretty painful hits, fallen into the same kind of trap twice, and nearly ended up back at the Academy. However, he'd also learned several important things about his own abilities and, more importantly, managed to pass alongside his teammates.
Besides, he had a gold ticket waiting.
"Hehehe! Let's see what I get this time!" Naruto smiled.
He sat on the grass and focused his attention on the ticket he'd just received. The familiar sensation of the Gacha returned, accompanied by the sounds and flashes characteristic of it. In his mind, the enormous roulette wheel appeared, spinning at great speed until it finally stopped.
You have used a random Gold Ticket!
[Mystic Eyes of Flame]
|Elite Ability|
Type Moon - Allows the user to increase the temperature of and spontaneously combust any target in their line of sight. The stronger the target the more energy they have to expend. While active their eye turns red while harboring the image of three overlapping triangles
Naruto read the description in his mind and remained silent for a few seconds.
Then his eyes widened.
"I can set things on fire just by looking at them?!" the blond thought excitedly.
This was completely different from his previous rewards. Impact could make his blows more powerful, and Megaphone allowed him to use his voice to disorient an enemy, but causing fire simply by looking at something seemed like an ability on another level.
Naruto immediately stood up, excited to try it.
Then he remembered that he had Impact equipped and would need to change abilities to use his new mystic eyes. Fortunately, quite some time had passed since his last switch, so the slot was already available. He focused on the new reward and made the switch.
The sensation was similar to what he'd experienced with the Mystic Eyes of Depth Perception, although this time he noticed a slight change in his vision. A faint reddish glow appeared around the edges of his field of view, without hindering his ability to distinguish the objects in front of him at all. Everything still looked normal, but he could feel his chakra responding in a strange way whenever he focused his gaze on something.
Naruto couldn't see his own eyes, but if he'd had a mirror in front of him, he would have discovered that his irises had taken on an intense red color, shining intensely as if they were rubies.
He looked around, searching for something suitable to test the ability on. He didn't want to accidentally set a tree on fire or cause a disaster in the middle of the training ground, especially after passing the exam.
That was when he noticed the pieces of rope left on the ground after Sakura had untied him.
"Perfect!" Naruto approached them and crouched slightly, focusing his gaze on one of the ropes. The information needed to use the ability was already in his mind, just as it had been with his previous rewards. He knew how to direct his chakra toward the target and how to produce the effect.
He decided to start with a small amount.
The result was immediate: three triangles appeared in rapid succession on the rope.
.
FWOOSH!
The rope burst into flames suddenly and violently, burning away so quickly that Naruto barely had time to step back before it had been reduced to ashes.
"WHOA?!" Naruto's eyes widened, surprised by how quickly it had happened. He'd expected the rope to start heating up slowly or for a small flame to appear, but instead it had burned almost instantly.
He crouched beside the ashes, studying them with a mixture of excitement and caution.
"That was incredible!" he murmured, though he then looked toward the trees surrounding the field. "But... if I'd tried testing it on one of those..."
Naruto swallowed.
The idea of starting a fire in Konoha didn't particularly appeal to him. He'd already had enough trouble with the destruction of such an important part of the village, and this ability seemed far more dangerous than he'd initially imagined
He straightened up and deactivated the eyes, allowing his vision to return completely to normal.
"I definitely need to learn to control this better," the blond thought as he looked again at the charred remains on the ground.
Perhaps Kakashi-sensei could help him. After all, he was a jōnin and surely knew many strange techniques. Naruto wasn't sure he wanted to tell him everything about the Gacha, but perhaps he could ask how to better control an ability that produced fire through chakra.
With that decision made, he gathered his things and began walking back toward the village.
The sun was already well into its descent, and the sky was beginning to take on the colors of sunset. Naruto raised his head as he walked, watching the clouds drift slowly above Konoha.
It had been a pretty long day.
Naruto smiled as he adjusted his forehead protector.
If this was how things were starting, he couldn't wait to find out what awaited them next.
I will try to update at least once a week. I'm not very consistent with these things, so I might occasionally forget. In any case, if you run into any issues, please let me know. While I can read English fluently, I find it difficult to write or translate into it, so I rely on AI-based translation. If anything sounds odd or could be improved, please let me know.
"SHADOW CLONE JUTSU" - character thinking
"SHADOW CLONE JUTSU" - Gacha, loud or threatening voices, jutsus, or simply words that I want to highlight
For the first time in his life, Naruto Uzumaki was wondering whether becoming Hokage was worth having to get up at such an ungodly hour.
Dawn had not quite broken when he left his apartment and began walking toward the training ground Kakashi had told them about the previous day. Konoha's streets were practically deserted, the early morning air was quite cool, and no matter how much he tried to convince himself that he was excited about his first mission, he couldn't help yawning every few minutes.
At least he'd managed to get some sleep. After returning home the previous afternoon, he'd spent quite some time thinking about the abilities he'd obtained from the Gacha and how he might use them during a real mission. The temptation to keep experimenting had been strong, but he'd eventually decided to go to bed. He didn't want his new sensei to find him asleep during his first mission.
When he reached the field, he discovered that Sasuke was already there, leaning against one of the trees with his arms crossed. The Uchiha looked as wide awake as ever, something Naruto found particularly irritating considering the considerable effort he was making to keep his eyes open.
"Hey, teme! How long have you been here?" Naruto asked, raising a hand in greeting before yawning again.
"Just got here," Sasuke replied without bothering to change his posture.
Naruto grunted and dropped onto the grass. Just a few minutes later Sakura appeared, walking with considerably less enthusiasm than usual and covering her mouth as she tried to stifle a yawn. However, when she saw that Sasuke was already waiting, she immediately straightened up and tried to hide her exhaustion.
"Good morning, Sasuke-kun!" she greeted him with a smile before focusing on Naruto, who was practically lying on the grass. "What are you doing down there?"
"Trying not to fall asleep," he replied, rubbing his eyes. "Why do we have to come so early? Even the old man at the ramen stand isn't awake at this hour!"
Sakura sighed, though she couldn't really argue with that complaint. She would have preferred to stay in bed a little longer herself, but Kakashi had been quite clear about their meeting time. The three of them eventually settled near the training posts as they waited for their instructor to arrive.
And they waited.
The sun began to rise above the trees, the temperature gradually increased, and the first sounds of morning replaced the silence of dawn. Naruto went from sitting down to pacing back and forth, then sat down again and eventually started pulling small blades of grass out of sheer boredom. Sakura checked the time every so often, while Sasuke remained with his arms crossed, seemingly calm, although the way his fingers tapped against his arm made it quite clear that he, too, was losing patience.
By the time the morning was well underway, Naruto abruptly jumped to his feet.
"That damn sensei has done it again! Why does he make us come so early if he's just going to show up whenever he feels like it?!"
"You're not the only one who's annoyed, Naruto!" Sakura snapped, having stopped trying to hide her irritation. "We've been waiting for hours!"
Sasuke said nothing, but his gaze remained fixed on the entrance path. If Kakashi was trying to test their patience, he could at least be sure he was succeeding in irritating all three of his students.
Finally, when the sun was fully illuminating the training ground, a silver-haired figure appeared, strolling calmly between the trees with one hand in his pocket and the other raised in a casual greeting.
"Good morning," the silver-haired man said with a relaxed expression and a soft voice.
Naruto felt as though a vein was about to burst in his forehead.
"GOOD MORNING?! WE'VE BEEN WAITING FOR HOURS!!!"
"You told us to come early!" Sakura added, pointing at him accusingly. "Why are you always late?!"
Kakashi stopped in front of them and seemed to consider the question for a few seconds. Then he tilted his head slightly, as though he'd just remembered something important.
"Well, you see... A black cat crossed my path, so I had to take a different route."
Naruto stared at him. He'd heard and made plenty of excuses in his life, but that was by far the stupidest he'd ever heard.
"A BLACK CAT?! THAT'S IT?!"
Kakashi shrugged, apparently satisfied with his explanation, and walked toward the three wooden posts in the center of the field. Sasuke followed him with his eyes without commenting, although his expression suggested that he hadn't believed a single word, either.
Naruto was still grumbling when Kakashi took out a small alarm clock and placed it on one of the posts. He adjusted its hands to noon and, once satisfied, turned back toward his students. "All right. We have until twelve to complete the test."
That immediately caught Naruto's attention. He straightened up and watched Kakashi take out two small silver bells hanging from strings. He jingled them softly before fastening them to his belt on one side of his waist.
"Your objective is quite simple: take these bells from me before the alarm goes off. You may use any technique you know, and I have no intention of making things easy for you."
Naruto smiled at that. Finally, they were going to do something interesting. However, his smile vanished when Kakashi pointed to the training posts and explained that anyone who failed to get a bell would end up tied to one of them, forced to watch while the others enjoyed their lunch.
"What?! That's cruel!" Naruto protested, especially because he'd skipped breakfast that morning in his hurry.
"Kakashi-sensei... There are only two bells," Sakura pointed out, having noticed a problem with the way the test was set up.
"Very observant, Sakura," Kakashi replied, lifting one of them slightly. "That means at least one of you won't be able to get one. Whoever ends up without a bell will fail and be sent back to the Academy."
The news hit the three genin like a bucket of cold water.
Naruto looked at the bells and then at his teammates. The possibility of returning to the Academy, after everything he'd gone through to graduate, was something he didn't even want to consider. Sakura didn't seem particularly enthusiastic about the idea either, glancing sideways at Sasuke, while he watched Kakashi with an increasingly serious expression.
"And one last thing," the jōnin continued as he walked leisurely away from his students. "If you want to get one of these bells, you'll have to come at me with the genuine intention of killing me. If you hold back, you won't stand a chance."
Naruto felt a shiver at those words. Attacking someone like Mizuki was not the same as deliberately attacking his own instructor, but Kakashi's expression left no room for doubt: he was serious.
None of the three replied. Naruto quickly checked the equipment in his ninja pouch, Sakura inspected her weapons, and Sasuke prepared in silence while Kakashi assessed their preparations.
"All right. Begin," the older ninja said. The three genin needed no further prompting and immediately scattered among the trees.
Naruto landed on a thick branch and crouched behind the trunk, watching the field from an elevated position. Kakashi remained in the same place, seemingly unconcerned, while waiting for one of them to decide to attack. Naruto could make out some movement among the nearby branches, but he wasn't sure where Sakura and Sasuke had hidden themselves.
For the first time since arriving at the field, he allowed himself to seriously consider the possibility of failure.
There were only two bells.
Even if all three managed to work together well enough to snatch them from Kakashi, one of them would have to return to the Academy. Naruto clenched his fists as he remembered all the times he'd failed the graduation exam, his classmates' mockery, and that night when Mizuki tricked him into stealing the forbidden scroll.
He couldn't go through all that again.
Not after Iruka-sensei had risked his life to protect him. Not after finally receiving that forehead protector that meant so much to him.
"I'm not going to fail. Not now that I've come this far."
Naruto looked up at Kakashi, remembering the ability he'd tested the day before. Impact could increase the power of his blows. For the moment, he couldn't see how Megaphone could be useful, and considering that switching between abilities required some time, at least he could prepare himself before starting the fight.
Naruto smiled slowly. He had never been particularly patient, and staying hidden while waiting for a perfect opportunity had never been his style.
He jumped from the branch and landed in front of Kakashi, several meters away.
From their hiding places, Sakura and Sasuke watched in surprise as Naruto voluntarily abandoned the cover of the trees. Neither seemed to understand what he hoped to accomplish by facing a jōnin directly.
"Well, now. I thought you'd stay hidden a little longer, Naruto," Kakashi remarked as he turned toward the blond.
"I don't need to hide to take those bells from you!" Naruto answered, pointing at him with a defiant smile. "Get ready, Kakashi-sensei!"
The jōnin watched him for a moment before taking out a small book and opening it to his marked page. Naruto frowned when he saw him start reading so casually.
"Hey! What are you doing?!" the blond demanded, bewildered.
"Reading, of course," the older ninja said as he calmly turned a page without even looking up for a second.
"I can see you're reading! But why?!"
Kakashi turned a page with absolute calm.
"Don't worry. Your attacks are so weak that I can stop them even while reading. So it doesn't matter if you attack me."
That produced exactly the reaction he wanted.
"WEAK?! I'LL SHOW YOU HOW WEAK MY PUNCHES ARE, DATTEBAYO!"
Naruto charged forward and, as he covered the final few meters, focused his attention on Impact, making sure the ability was equipped. He felt his chakra respond to his will, gathering in his arm as he threw a punch directly at Kakashi's face.
The jōnin raised a hand without taking his eyes off the book.
THUMP!
Kakashi's palm intercepted the blow.
Naruto felt his knuckles strike solid resistance, but the additional impact quickly made itself felt. The force of the attack was considerably greater than his instructor had calculated, and Kakashi's one visible eye widened slightly as he felt the pressure against his hand.
"Hmm?" Kakashi looked up from his book for a second to examine Naruto's fist before returning to his reading.
It wasn't enough to break his guard or force him backward. Kakashi was an experienced jōnin and the difference between their abilities was still enormous, but that blow had carried far more power than a recent graduate should possess.
Naruto, of course, wasn't about to stop and analyze the result.
Taking advantage of Kakashi having one hand occupied, he launched a kick toward his side. The jōnin ducked calmly, allowing the leg to pass over his head, and before Naruto could regain his balance, he vanished from his field of vision.
A presence immediately appeared behind him.
"Huh?"
"Naruto, there's something you should learn about Shinobis." The boy tried to turn around, but Kakashi had already brought his hands together to form a rather strange seal. From the trees, Sakura and Sasuke watched the scene with growing alarm. Judging by the position of his fingers and the seriousness with which Kakashi had spoken, both thought he was about to use some dangerous technique.
"Konoha's secret technique!" Kakashi announced.
Naruto's eyes widened.
"Wait, wait...!"
"One Thousand Years of Death!" With those words, the older ninja moved. Naruto's scream echoed across the field as the technique violently launched him forward. His body flew through the air before he finally plunged headfirst into the nearby lake, water splashing all around him.
Sakura stood motionless, unable to believe what she had just witnessed. Sasuke said nothing either, although the disbelief on his face was quite difficult to hide, and with every passing second he lost a little more faith in his sensei's seriousness.
Meanwhile, back in the training ground clearing, Kakashi opened his book again.
"Well, that should teach him not to let his guard down."
An indignant voice came from the lake.
"DAMN YOU, KAKASHI-SENSEI!!!" Naruto shouted as he dragged himself out of the water, completely soaked and spitting as he tried to catch his breath. It had been humiliating, and the pain he still felt did nothing to improve his mood. However, thanks to Relentless Stamina, the effort of his attack and the fall had barely affected his energy reserves. After shaking the water out of his hair, he looked back at Kakashi with a defiant smile.
"You can laugh all you want, but someday I'm going to become Hokage! Then we'll see who's laughing, dattebayo!"
Kakashi looked up slightly.
"Oh, really? Then you'd better start by getting one of these bells."
"That's exactly what I'm going to do!" Naruto said, a grin spreading across his face.
As he spoke, several figures shot out of the water and the surrounding woods: Naruto's shadow clones, which he'd summoned while he was in the water.
Kakashi watched the clones with renewed interest.
"So, the rumors are true. He really can use the Shadow Clone Jutsu at will."
Naruto gave him no time to think further. Two clones attacked from the sides while three others descended from the branches, forcing Kakashi to retreat to avoid being surrounded. Contrary to what one might expect from someone like Naruto, the movements seemed purposeful: each clone tried to limit Kakashi's options while the others looked for an opening.
One of them threw a kick from the left, forcing the jōnin to lean toward the right, where another clone was already waiting with a punch. Kakashi blocked the punch, but once again felt that additional pressure he'd noticed in the original Naruto's blow.
Kakashi's single visible eye narrowed. "Interesting. He can do it consistently."
The clone that had thrown the punch immediately vanished in a cloud of smoke, before Kakashi could even strike it.
Naruto noticed it too.
He didn't need to pause for long to understand what had happened. His clones could use Impact just as he could, but the amount of chakra they received when created was limited, and using the ability at full power consumed a large part of those reserves. Some could maintain it for longer, but others ended up dispersing after a single especially powerful blow.
"So they can use my abilities too!" Naruto's grin widened as he circled Kakashi, blending in with the clones and waiting for the right moment to reveal himself while the clones kept up the pressure.
That opened up a lot of possibilities.
Two clones lunged at the jōnin simultaneously, one trying to grab his arms while the other sought to immobilize his legs. Kakashi spun around and managed to prevent them from completely catching him, but a third Naruto appeared behind him and threw a kunai toward one side, forcing him to alter his movement to dodge it.
That was exactly the opportunity the original had been waiting for.
Naruto darted forward from one side and extended his hand toward the bells, taking advantage of the fact that Kakashi seemed to have his attention divided among the copies.
His fingers almost brushed one of them.
However, Kakashi turned at the last instant and avoided him by mere centimeters. "Hmm, this brat is full of surprises. He really is his father's son. Looks like I won't be able to keep reading."
"Almost, Naruto. That was a good attempt," the jōnin said aloud, looking at the blond with a little more attention as he raised his eyes fully from his book.
Before Naruto could try again, the jōnin moved and rapidly struck the clones attempting to surround him. The copies vanished one after another in clouds of smoke. Before Naruto could process what had just happened, a hand emerged from the smoke and headed straight for his face. The blow sent him flying several meters backward.
The boy rolled across the ground but got up almost immediately. The blow had hurt, although his extraordinary stamina allowed him to recover much faster than Kakashi had expected.
"I'm not finished yet! SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!!!" Naruto created more clones and renewed the attack. Over the next several minutes, Kakashi had to defend himself against a series of offensives that, while nowhere near posing a real threat to him, were certainly surprising to see from a recent graduate, especially one with Naruto's reputation.
The clones attacked from behind when Kakashi focused on the ones in front of him, used the trees to change direction, and tried to force him into positions from which the original could reach the bells. Naruto made mistakes, naturally, and on more than one occasion missed opportunities by charging in too soon, but he was learning to coordinate his movements as he fought.
Kakashi began paying closer attention.
Those enhanced blows were still easy for someone at his level to stop, but the technique was peculiar. He had seen many variations of this type of chakra-based jutsu, and this one stood out because it wasn't simply an increase in strength. Even when the clones disappeared after attacking, the extra pressure of the impact could become troublesome if Naruto managed to land several blows in succession.
However, the gap in experience and skill was still far too great.
When Naruto tried to repeat a maneuver to surround him, Kakashi suddenly vanished in a cloud of smoke. The boy barely had time to wonder what had happened before he discovered that one of his clones was right in front of him, charging with a chakra-filled fist.
"Huh?! Wait!"
The clone didn't have time to stop either.
THUMP!
The blow struck Naruto directly in the stomach, folding him in half. At the same time, the original, who had already started throwing his own punch toward the spot where he expected Kakashi to be, ended up connecting with the clone instead.
Both blows carried Impact's additional power. The clone vanished in smoke after the exchange, and Naruto dropped to his knees, clutching his abdomen as he tried to catch his breath.
"Ugh...! Damn it!"
From a nearby branch, Kakashi watched the result of his substitution jutsu. It was a classic that his own sensei loved to use, taking advantage of the fact that Naruto and his clones had been focused on maintaining the offensive and none of them was paying attention to anything but their target.
Naruto stayed on the ground for a few seconds, rubbing his stomach. That blow had been far more painful than he'd expected, and now he understood better why some of his clones vanished after using Impact at full power.
"Damn! That really hurt!"
Even so, the pain gradually began to fade as he recovered his breath. Naruto raised his head and spotted one of the silver bells resting on the grass, apparently knocked loose during the fight.
His eyes lit up.
"A bell!" He quickly moved toward it and reached down to pick it up.
The ground shifted beneath his feet.
"HUH?!"
A rope tightened around his ankle and, before he could react, Naruto was yanked upward, ending up hanging upside down from a branch while the bell he'd tried to pick up remained peacefully on the ground.
Kakashi appeared before him a few seconds later, picking up the bell from the ground. "Well, Naruto. Looks like you found a trap."
"I ALREADY NOTICED!!!"
The jōnin laughed and watched the boy swing back and forth.
"I have to admit your attack was quite impressive. You used your clones much better than I would have expected and didn't hesitate to attack me with all your strength. You also showed quite a lot of endurance by continuing to fight after taking several hits. I'm starting to like you."
Naruto stopped swinging for a moment, surprised by the praise.
"Really?"
"But you were also too naïve," Kakashi continued, wiping the proud expression off the boy's face. "You let the excitement of the fight carry you away and fell into a rather obvious trap. A ninja must pay attention to his surroundings, especially when using jutsu that can be turned against him. If your enemy manages to trick you into attacking the wrong target, all that strength will be useless."
Naruto frowned as he tried to process his instructor's words.
He didn't like admitting it, but Kakashi was right.
Kakashi continued explaining that a true ninja needed to see beyond and recognize the hidden intentions behind an enemy's actions. However, before he could finish his explanation, a group of kunai and shuriken shot out from the trees.
Sasuke had decided to attack, attempting to take advantage of his instructor's apparent distraction.
The weapons struck Kakashi's body directly, piercing him before Naruto's astonished eyes.
"KAKASHI-SENSEI!!!" the blond shouted, surprise and anger evident in his voice. "HEY, TEME! ARE YOU CRAZY?! YOU WENT TOO FAR THIS TIME!"
A cloud of smoke appeared where the jōnin had been.
When it cleared, all that remained was a wooden log pierced by the weapons.
"Again?!" Naruto said, eyes wide.
From the forest, Kakashi calmly watched Sasuke change position after his attack.
"So that's where you were."
Naruto, meanwhile, was still hanging upside down.
"Damn Kakashi-sensei..." Naruto swung slightly as he tried to reach the rope holding his ankle. His instructor's lecture kept going around in his head and, as much as he wanted to complain, he knew he'd made several mistakes, which he kept replaying in his mind. He'd let himself be provoked when Kakashi took out his book, attacked without thinking much about the possibility of a substitution—one of the Academy's three basic jutsu—and finally fallen into a trap that hadn't even been particularly well hidden.
It wasn't pleasant to admit.
But if he wanted to become Hokage, he'd have to improve.
Naruto managed to pull a kunai from his pouch and, after few attempts, reached the rope with its blade. One quick cut was enough to free him. His body began to fall, but he managed to turn in midair and land on both feet with a little flip.
"Ha! That was easy!"
He'd barely straightened up when a scream echoed from somewhere in the forest.
"AAAAAAAH!!!"
Naruto immediately recognized Sakura's voice.
"Sakura-chan?" He turned toward the sound, trying to work out what had happened among the trees. It didn't sound like the girl was merely surprised; she'd screamed as if she'd seen something horrible.
Naruto took a step forward, ready to go check on her.
The ground shifted beneath his feet again.
"EH?!"
A second rope tightened around his ankle and violently lifted him off the ground, leaving him hanging upside down in almost exactly the same position as before.
Naruto remained motionless for several seconds.
Then he lowered his head and looked at the rope.
It was practically identical to the last one.
"THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!!!"
His scream echoed throughout the training ground, although this time no one appeared to make fun of him. Naruto struggled against the rope, angry with himself for falling into the same trap twice, until he finally decided to stop and take a better look at his surroundings.
From that position he could see a large part of the field. The training posts stood near the center, the clock was still counting down the remaining time and, a little farther away, was the strange stone he'd seen when he'd arrived that morning.
A couple containers of food sat beside it.
Naruto narrowed his eyes.
He immediately recognized the bentō Kakashi had brought for lunch. His stomach responded with a growl so loud that for a moment he thought someone else might have heard it.
He hadn't eaten breakfast.
He'd spent much of the morning waiting for Kakashi and then expended a considerable amount of energy fighting him. Although Relentless Stamina allowed him to endure physical exertion much better, that didn't mean he could completely ignore hunger.
Naruto stared at the containers for a few seconds.
Then he looked back at the rope holding him suspended.
An idea began to form in his head.
He managed to free himself again and, after carefully checking that there wasn't another rope hidden beneath his feet, approached the food containers. He looked around before lifting one of the bentō and opening it.
The smell was enough to make him almost completely forget about the exam.
"Food!" Naruto picked up the chopsticks and was just about to bring the first bite to his mouth when a hand appeared on his shoulder.
"Naruto..."
The boy froze and turned his head very slowly.
Kakashi was behind him, his single visible eye staring straight into Naruto's as if it were about to pierce through his head.
"What do you think you're doing?"
Naruto smiled nervously, still holding the chopsticks.
"Uh... Checking whether the food is in good condition?"
Kakashi watched him in silence.
Naruto swallowed.
A few minutes later he was tied to the center post of the training ground, his arms immobilized behind his back and an expression of absolute resentment on his face.
When the clock finally struck noon, Kakashi gathered the three genin in front of the training posts. Naruto remained tied to the middle one, still regretting that he hadn't managed to eat even a single bite, while Sakura and Sasuke listened in silence.
Neither of them had obtained a bell.
The test was over.
Kakashi watched them for a few moments before speaking.
"I've made a decision. All three of you are expelled from the ninja training program."
Naruto was the first to react, snapping his head up.
"WHAT?!"
Sakura's eyes widened in disbelief, while Sasuke frowned.
Kakashi continued without changing his tone. "You haven't shown that you're ready to become real ninjas. You act like spoiled children who think this is all a game, and none of you seems to understand what it means to work as a shinobi."
Sasuke was the first to react. He lunged at Kakashi with the clear intention of attacking him, but the jōnin intercepted him effortlessly and pinned him to the ground before he could complete his movement.
"That's exactly what I'm talking about," Kakashi said, keeping him restrained. "You think being strong or knowing a few techniques is enough to become ninjas. You don't understand that a real mission could cost you your lives if you make the wrong decisions."
Naruto watched the scene with growing concern. He'd expected more criticism, but not for Kakashi to declare them completely unfit to continue.
"But we tried!" he protested. "I did everything I could to get those bells!"
"That's precisely your problem, Naruto. You tried to do everything on your own," the older ninja replied sternly.
The boy closed his mouth.
Kakashi continued speaking, this time addressing all of them while still pinning the Uchiha down.
"They put you in a team for a reason, but none of you stopped to think about it. Naruto charged at me without considering that he had two teammates who could help him. Sakura spent much of the test worrying only about Sasuke and didn't even try to help Naruto when he was hanging from a tree, completely defenseless. And you, Sasuke, are so convinced you're better than the other two that you'd rather work alone than accept their help."
Sasuke gritted his teeth but didn't reply.
Sakura lowered her gaze slightly.
Naruto, for his part, remembered the way he'd come out of hiding to attack Kakashi without consulting his teammates. At the time it had seemed like the most natural thing in the world, but now he was beginning to understand what his instructor was trying to tell them.
"A shinobi must be able to work with his team," Kakashi continued, visibly frustrated. "Individual skills are important, but they mean nothing if the members of a group are incapable of cooperating. And above any individual, even above the team itself, is the mission. If you don't understand that, your decisions will end up causing an operation to fail or your teammates to die."
"But Kakashi-sensei... There were only two bells. Even if we'd worked together, one of us would have had to fail," Sakura protested softly.
Kakashi watched her for a moment.
"Exactly. That was the point of the test. I wanted to see whether you were capable of setting aside your own interests and putting the team's well-being above your personal desires, even when it seemed that doing so would mean losing your chance to pass."
All three remained silent.
Then Kakashi took out a kunai and placed it near Sasuke's neck, still keeping him immobilized.
"Imagine we're on a real mission, Sakura, and an enemy manages to capture Sasuke. He orders you to kill Naruto if you want to save Sasuke's life. What would you do?"
Sakura froze.
Naruto stopped moving too.
Kakashi didn't press the blade against his student's neck, but the threat represented by the example was perfectly clear.
"Would you kill Naruto to save Sasuke? Or would you let Sasuke die? On a mission, you may face these kinds of situations. If you don't trust your teammates and can't work together, not only will the mission fail, but someone will die." Kakashi withdrew the kunai and allowed Sasuke to get up. Then he looked toward the memorial stone near the field.
"See that stone? The names carved on it belong to ninjas who died serving the village. They're remembered as heroes because they gave their lives while carrying out their duty."
Naruto watched the stone silently. Until then, he'd barely paid any attention to it, except when he'd seen the bentō beside it. Now he understood that the monument represented something far more important than a simple resting place.
Kakashi put away the kunai as he slowly approached the stone and placed a hand on it, his fingers tracing a few names that only he could see.
"The names of some of my friends are carved there." The words were spoken with a calmness more unsettling than any of his earlier scoldings. Naruto didn't know what to say, and for once he didn't feel the need to say anything. Sakura lowered her gaze, while Sasuke remained motionless.
Kakashi let the silence stretch for a few seconds before turning around.
"I'll give you one last chance."
Naruto immediately raised his head.
"Really?!"
"Don't get too excited. The second part will be harder. You'll have three additional hours to get one of the bells, and this time I won't hold back."
Sakura and Sasuke exchanged a glance.
"You can use the time to eat lunch before continuing. You'll need to recover your strength," Kakashi said as he collected the food containers and placed them in front of his students.
Naruto smiled hopefully, but his expression vanished when his instructor pointed to the post he was still tied to.
"Except you, Naruto. You tried to break the rules and eat lunch before the test was over, so you'll stay tied up and go without food."
"WHAT?! THAT'S NOT FAIR!"
Kakashi ignored the protest and turned toward the other two.
"And one warning: if either of you tries to give him food, you'll fail immediately. I make the rules, and you follow them." After that final warning, he vanished among the trees, leaving Team 7 alone once again.
For a few moments, none of the three said anything.
Naruto remained tied to the middle post, watching in absolute misery as Sakura and Sasuke opened their respective bentō. The smell of food reached him almost immediately, making his stomach growl so loudly that Sakura looked up.
"Naruto..."
"Don't say anything, Sakura-chan!" he replied, trying to maintain a little dignity as he looked away. "I can manage without eating! I'm going to get one of those bells, even if I have to do it on an empty stomach, dattebayo!"
The declaration would have been much more convincing if his stomach hadn't complained again immediately afterward.
Sakura watched him with a mixture of pity and concern, but immediately remembered Kakashi's warning. If she tried to help him, she'd lose her chance to become a ninja.
Sasuke, meanwhile, sat in front of his food without touching it.
He'd listened carefully to everything Kakashi had said. Their instructor had criticized them for not working as a team, thinking only of their own interests and being unable to consider their teammates' needs. Yet now he'd ordered them to leave one of their number without food before continuing a test that would require all their energy.
Sasuke glanced briefly at Naruto.
The blond was still looking away, trying to ignore the smell of food.
"Naruto," the Uchiha said as he got up and approached the still-tied boy with his chopsticks raised.
"What do you want, teme?"
"Eat." Sasuke held a portion of food in front of him.
"Huh?" Naruto murmured, staring at him.
"If you're too hungry to move, you'll only get in the way during the second test. We need to be in good condition if we want to get those bells," the Uchiha explained in a firm, clear voice, without a trace of doubt.
Naruto opened his mouth, surprised by the offer. For an instant he remembered Kakashi's warning and glanced toward the trees, expecting his instructor to appear and punish them.
"But Kakashi-sensei said you weren't allowed to give me food!"
"He's not here," Sasuke replied calmly. "Besides, if we're going to work together, there's no sense in letting one of us be weakened."
Sakura watched the scene for a few seconds before understanding what Sasuke was doing. She looked at her own lunch, then at Naruto, and finally remembered Kakashi's words about the importance of teamwork.
She smiled slightly.
"He's right, Naruto. If we're going to pass the test, we need you to be in good enough condition to help us." Sakura approached with her chopsticks too, offering him some of her food.
Naruto looked at both of them with an expression somewhere between surprise and emotion. He'd expected many things from that day, but this show of kindness from his teammates definitely hadn't been one of them.
"Guys..." he murmured before smiling broadly. "Thanks!"
He opened his mouth to accept the first bite.
Then a cloud of smoke appeared in front of them.
"CAUGHT YOU!!!" Kakashi appeared out of nowhere with such a stern expression that all three genin froze completely.
Sakura immediately withdrew her chopsticks, Sasuke went on guard, and Naruto felt as if the food were caught in his throat even before he'd managed to taste it.
"I told you that anyone who fed Naruto would fail," Kakashi reminded them, looking at each of them in turn. "You disobeyed a direct order from your instructor."
For a few seconds, none of them could come up with a suitable answer.
Kakashi remained motionless.
Then, to his students' utter surprise, his expression changed. The severity vanished from his visible eye, and a smile began to form beneath his mask. "Congratulations."
Naruto blinked in surprise.
"All three of you pass."
For an instant, no one reacted.
"We passed?!" Sakura was the first to respond.
Kakashi nodded calmly.
"That's right. The real test was never about getting the bells. I wanted to see whether you were capable of putting your teammates' needs above orders that seemed designed to set you against each other. The previous teams did exactly what I told them, competed against each other, and ended up failing because they never understood the purpose of the exam."
Naruto looked at Sasuke, then Sakura, and finally back at his instructor, feeling an enormous wave of emotion growing in his chest.
They'd passed.
All three of them.
"In the ninja world, those who break the rules are considered scum. But those who abandon their comrades are worse than scum," Kakashi said, casting one last glance toward the memorial stone before continuing.
The words carried a seriousness none of the three could ignore. Naruto remembered Kakashi's warning about the friends whose names were engraved on that stone and understood that, as strange as the exam had been, his instructor truly believed what he was saying.
Then his emotions finally got the better of him.
"YEEEEEES!!! WE DID IT!!! WE'RE REAL NINJAS, DATTEBAYO!!!" Naruto began wriggling with joy against the post, unable to raise his arms because he was still tied up. His eyes were slightly wet, and a huge smile covered practically his entire face. After spending so many years trying to graduate, he'd finally passed his first test as a genin and could continue moving toward his dream.
It was in the middle of that celebration that he heard a familiar sound.
[You have obtained X1 Gold Ticket for passing Hatake Kakashi's bell test!]
Naruto went still.
The smile remained on his face, but for a moment he stopped squirming and opened his eyes in surprise. "Another gold ticket!"
Kakashi noticed the sudden change in his behavior. The boy had gone from celebrating to standing completely still in the space of a second, something rather strange even for Naruto. However, after observing him briefly, he decided not to ask.
Sakura and Sasuke noticed the change immediately as well, but considering how happy they each were, neither mentioned it.
"All right. I'll see you here tomorrow, Team 7." With that farewell, Kakashi vanished among the trees.
Sakura immediately approached the post and began cutting the ropes holding Naruto with a kunai. Sasuke watched with his arms crossed.
"Ahhh! Finally! I thought I was going to be tied up forever!" the blond exclaimed as he began stretching.
Sakura shook her head.
"That's what you get for trying to steal lunch," the girl retorted, though there was no animosity behind her tone.
"I was hungry!" Uzumaki replied with a big smile, as though that excused him.
Sasuke turned around.
"See you tomorrow."
Naruto raised a hand in farewell while Sakura hurried after the Uchiha. It didn't take long for them to disappear among the trees, leaving the training ground silent once more.
Naruto stayed there a while longer, looking at the place where he'd spent much of the day.
He'd taken some pretty painful hits, fallen into the same kind of trap twice, and nearly ended up back at the Academy. However, he'd also learned several important things about his own abilities and, more importantly, managed to pass alongside his teammates.
Besides, he had a gold ticket waiting.
"Hehehe! Let's see what I get this time!" Naruto smiled.
He sat on the grass and focused his attention on the ticket he'd just received. The familiar sensation of the Gacha returned, accompanied by the sounds and flashes characteristic of it. In his mind, the enormous roulette wheel appeared, spinning at great speed until it finally stopped.
You have used a random Gold Ticket!
[Mystic Eyes of Flame]
|Elite Ability|
Type Moon - Allows the user to increase the temperature of and spontaneously combust any target in their line of sight. The stronger the target the more energy they have to expend. While active their eye turns red while harboring the image of three overlapping triangles
La madre que lo pario maldito gacha de mierda, otro par de ojos mágicos
Then his eyes widened.
"I can set things on fire just by looking at them?!" the blond thought excitedly.
This was completely different from his previous rewards. Impact could make his blows more powerful, and Megaphone allowed him to use his voice to disorient an enemy, but causing fire simply by looking at something seemed like an ability on another level.
Naruto immediately stood up, excited to try it.
Then he remembered that he had Impact equipped and would need to change abilities to use his new mystic eyes. Fortunately, quite some time had passed since his last switch, so the slot was already available. He focused on the new reward and made the switch.
The sensation was similar to what he'd experienced with the Mystic Eyes of Depth Perception, although this time he noticed a slight change in his vision. A faint reddish glow appeared around the edges of his field of view, without hindering his ability to distinguish the objects in front of him at all. Everything still looked normal, but he could feel his chakra responding in a strange way whenever he focused his gaze on something.
Naruto couldn't see his own eyes, but if he'd had a mirror in front of him, he would have discovered that his irises had taken on an intense red color, shining intensely as if they were rubies.
Thanks to @Aeonicist, who provided me with information about eyes and how they work.
He looked around, searching for something suitable to test the ability on. He didn't want to accidentally set a tree on fire or cause a disaster in the middle of the training ground, especially after passing the exam.
That was when he noticed the pieces of rope left on the ground after Sakura had untied him.
"Perfect!" Naruto approached them and crouched slightly, focusing his gaze on one of the ropes. The information needed to use the ability was already in his mind, just as it had been with his previous rewards. He knew how to direct his chakra toward the target and how to produce the effect.
He decided to start with a small amount.
The result was immediate: three triangles appeared in rapid succession on the rope.
FWOOSH!
The rope burst into flames suddenly and violently, burning away so quickly that Naruto barely had time to step back before it had been reduced to ashes.
"WHOA?!" Naruto's eyes widened, surprised by how quickly it had happened. He'd expected the rope to start heating up slowly or for a small flame to appear, but instead it had burned almost instantly.
He crouched beside the ashes, studying them with a mixture of excitement and caution.
"That was incredible!" he murmured, though he then looked toward the trees surrounding the field. "But... if I'd tried testing it on one of those..."
Naruto swallowed.
The idea of starting a fire in Konoha didn't particularly appeal to him. He'd already had enough trouble with the destruction of such an important part of the village, and this ability seemed far more dangerous than he'd initially imagined
He straightened up and deactivated the eyes, allowing his vision to return completely to normal.
"I definitely need to learn to control this better," the blond thought as he looked again at the charred remains on the ground.
Perhaps Kakashi-sensei could help him. After all, he was a jōnin and surely knew many strange techniques. Naruto wasn't sure he wanted to tell him everything about the Gacha, but perhaps he could ask how to better control an ability that produced fire through chakra.
With that decision made, he gathered his things and began walking back toward the village.
The sun was already well into its descent, and the sky was beginning to take on the colors of sunset. Naruto raised his head as he walked, watching the clouds drift slowly above Konoha.
It had been a pretty long day.
Naruto smiled as he adjusted his forehead protector.
If this was how things were starting, he couldn't wait to find out what awaited them next.
I will try to update at least once a week. I'm not very consistent with these things, so I might occasionally forget. In any case, if you run into any issues, please let me know. While I can read English fluently, I find it difficult to write or translate into it, so I rely on AI-based translation. If anything sounds odd or could be improved, please let me know.
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Bronnkindofguy96
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Bootleg amaterasu.
August D. Helsing
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The Mystic Eye of Flame is non-canon, but its based off of the artificial mystic eye that is Yvette L. Lehrman's Ruby Mystic Code. Since its a Red coloured mystic eye, it should generally just look like a red coloured eye that glows in the dark. It overlaps three orange triangles on whatever the user is looking at, and just after the third is applied, it explodes. I can't find it, but I do remember seeing it at some point. I'll keep looking, but thats the gust of it.
reborn1303
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Thank God. Seriously, thanks—I'm going to edit this. Plus, the three triangles give me something to work with. I was trying to figure out how to balance Naruto having Amaterasu, with its power scaled based on chakra—something that the bastard has in spades.
Edit: Using the owner's name, I found a GIF showing how the eyes work. It's still instantaneous, but at least now I know what it looks like and how it functions.
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Sweet Peaches
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"Mystic Eyes of Depth Perception" and "Mystic Eyes of Flame" is a curious coincidence, which is likely to confuse things nicely.
When Naruto explains his pseudo-Amaterasu to Kakashi, the latter will be shocked: Amaterasu is one of the final evolutions of the Sharingan and Naruto is not an Uchiha nor does he have the regular Sharingan, at least as far as anyone knows.
Naturally, Kakashi will want to know whether Naruto has any other Sharingan-related abilities or anything else that has to do with his eyes. At that point Naruto (being Naruto) may something like "Um, yeah, I have this ability to see things better, kind of like improved depth perception, but it's not very useful and I can't use it when I have my Flame eyes active."
The explanation will apparently confirm that Naruto has some kind of mutated dōjutsu, perhaps a bizarre cross between the Sharingan and the Byakugan. I am sure Sasuke and the Hyūga elders will be happy to learn that they have a new relative!
When Naruto explains his pseudo-Amaterasu to Kakashi, the latter will be shocked: Amaterasu is one of the final evolutions of the Sharingan and Naruto is not an Uchiha nor does he have the regular Sharingan, at least as far as anyone knows.
Naturally, Kakashi will want to know whether Naruto has any other Sharingan-related abilities or anything else that has to do with his eyes. At that point Naruto (being Naruto) may something like "Um, yeah, I have this ability to see things better, kind of like improved depth perception, but it's not very useful and I can't use it when I have my Flame eyes active."
The explanation will apparently confirm that Naruto has some kind of mutated dōjutsu, perhaps a bizarre cross between the Sharingan and the Byakugan. I am sure Sasuke and the Hyūga elders will be happy to learn that they have a new relative!
reborn1303
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Well, honestly, yeah—imagine a Byakugan that could set things on fire within its field of vision."Mystic Eyes of Depth Perception" and "Mystic Eyes of Flame" is a curious coincidence, which is likely to confuse things nicely.
When Naruto explains his pseudo-Amaterasu to Kakashi, the latter will be shocked: Amaterasu is one of the final evolutions of the Sharingan and Naruto is not an Uchiha nor does he have the regular Sharingan, at least as far as anyone knows.
Naturally, Kakashi will want to know whether Naruto has any other Sharingan-related abilities or anything else that has to do with his eyes. At that point Naruto (being Naruto) may something like "Um, yeah, I have this ability to see things better, kind of like improved depth perception, but it's not very useful and I can't use it when I have my Flame eyes active."
The explanation will apparently confirm that Naruto has some kind of mutated dōjutsu, perhaps a bizarre cross between the Sharingan and the Byakugan. I am sure Sasuke and the Hyūga elders will be happy to learn that they have a new relative!
That's the kind of shit any old geezer would want for his clan.