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Darkstep | 10 |
Those suggestions sound great and I'll add them in so thanks! And I'm no mechanic either but if it sounds like its believable then that means my research wasn't in vainSeems good so far, honestly I think I saw this before but I just scrolled through it, some advice maybe it will help you pick more readers, fix up your tags and title, for the title maybe add a (OC-Insert) to better grab people attention also remove the Self-Insert tag because from what I've seen so far there ain't any self insert in your story (from chapter 1 you made it clear that your OC is not you, have no memories of a life in another earth, or any sort of meta knowledge hence putting self-insert), also put in the cyberpunk 2077 tag and not just cyberpunk, since the cyberpunk 2077 tag is the more general tag being used for the cyberpunk fics on the site
aside from that writing wise its good, I'm no mechanic so I don't have much of an opinion about the car modification stuff but it reads believable so to me so I guess that means it good enough for laymans