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Chaldean Brain Trust (Fate/Grand Order "Comics")

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Seth Vatamaris, Jan 8, 2021.

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  1. Threadmarks: #001 the Agartha Experience
    Seth Vatamaris

    Seth Vatamaris Hentai Will Save the World

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    #001 the Agartha Experience
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    David gave a 3 star review


    I've decided to follow in the steps of my sensei OroJuice and his hilarious work and start my own. Let me tell you my computer literacy made this more difficult than it should've been.

    If you're familiar with his work like him I edit the assets from the game Fate Grand Order and place characters in differing situations, you can expect some laughter, tearjerking, and heartwarming moments. Some knowledge of the game and franchise is needed to understand what's happening, but thankfully I'm not an expert so I'm not going too deep.

    And today is my Guinea Pig Kichi's second birthday so this was a special occasion


    I have multiple ideas in the works that I hope to share soon


    Design notes

    • There were several ideas I originally had to make a start, in fact I had planned to post in October 2020 but life and difficulty understanding how to make this got in the way .
    • Out of all the Servants who could have some interesting moments in Agartha, Teach and Medb are at the top because of their respective personalities but Medb in particular given her history
    • There was going to be a larger crowd and I had the square at first but the palace lights were more visibly interesting to me.
    • I edited Teach multiple times to get a face I labeled as "Perv Blush" which combines two different faces and used his grabby hands portrait he gets in Summer 4 to appear like Master Roshi, the pixel meme glasses are a cherry on top
    • Emiya was always intended given his Interlude but the problem was who to put, I had Amazons, Penth, Megalos, but I settled with him being waist deep in poison while Torturers' (called Atrocious Officers in JP) wail on him while Kiyohime peeps
    • I love how out of place the scandalized French woman is
    • Another idea was from a standard Japanese Gag 2 koma where Emiya would be in the same exact position as Teach but it didn't feel right so I went with the destroyed background
    • David was going to be a part 3 but the joke lasted long enough

    On the name.

    Brain Trust was a holdover from a fic that I am reworking. I originally got the title from the BLEACH fanfic Uninvited Guests where Kenpachi expected his officers to do the thinking for him, calling them the title, only to realize that was a terrible mistake
     
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  2. ezok

    ezok Well worn.

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    Nice one.
    Are you gonna post it over on reddit?
     
  3. Seth Vatamaris

    Seth Vatamaris Hentai Will Save the World

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    Already there, should’ve expected this level of activity given how late I’m posting but work and last minute sets backs had me


    And yes Emiya is getting his crotch bludgeoned
     
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  4. theboringman

    theboringman I like Milfs, Futas, Monster girls, and Chaos!

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    OHHH YEAH!!
    I love Orojuice's comics, and I have a feeling these are going to be just as fun!
     
  5. Threadmarks: #002 Godwin Strikes Again
    Seth Vatamaris

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    #002 Godwin Strikes Again
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    The next time he's back you all fail, this is the Archaeology Department.


    Already at the second comic and Hitler shows up.

    I thought of this one rather quickly after looking at Lev's profile, in fairness he's more of the ethnic group but they've not that distinct enough to say you are one, especially if you're German. Some unfortunate implications.

    I'm still learning how to make comics and I am proud of my second one. Managed to find one of the secret lab backgrounds from Halloween 3 and I thought that it would be a good ridiculous place for the Clocktower to have. And why is he of all people being repeatedly cloned? Mages. Lev was going to be pissed but I settled with unsurprised contempt of his students.

    Still new but getting better and trying to set a good pace at making these.
     
  6. Threadmarks: #000 Baby's First
    Seth Vatamaris

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    #000 Baby's First
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    Hey it was my first time

    Something witty

    An extra treat for you all is my first comic, where I misspelled decrepit.

    Here from OroJuice I learned all about GIMP, more than what the tutorials taught me. What you see is the result of my work, its a test run but I love it. This was going to be the Sitonai comic I was trying to make in October, though I prefer her baked face. He even edited the Cafeteria which I found, and as it turns out there are a lot of hard to find backgrounds.

    I admit I feel that my first issue didn't get the joke across and I will make a revision but keep the original for posterity.

    I'll probably follow Sensei's method of MWF. No one gets early access except for Sensei, editors, or the moderators and that's to check my work.

    While it is one issue per selected day I might include free issues which are different versions that I felt should be out, but I don't want to get burned out.

    Also I will be making adaptions of works I like, some might be a section of a fate fic, a few are from short stories, for instance I'll adapt a few Sherlock Holmes works as few characters are needed, most are under novel length and we have Holmes.

    Eventually I seek to adapt my work as I've been thinking of an extensive story.

    I don't do requests and I'm too new and not audacious enough to be open for commission.

    And as a I share in my success with others I will recommend other works like this one Missing in Action (Halo) | SpaceBattles Forums which keeps me entertained at work when I'm not thinking of the next comic.

    And I'll share my other avatar.

    Bache from Azur Lane

    Never played it and she hasn't appeared in the anime but this one with her gap moe motherly personality to contrast her smug meme face while dressed for culinary arts is why I love this picture.

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    From top left to right my first edits. I'm proud of Teach being his degenerate self.
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  7. Seth Vatamaris

    Seth Vatamaris Hentai Will Save the World

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    #003 Flauros vs Master-D
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    The animation department had to cut corners for the fight budget.

    Third one and you won't see Hitler for a while.

    Another planned one as I made them all in advance but I find it funny for Hitler to fight a Jewish Demon. Yes a jerk like Flauros has standards.

    It would be funnier if Flauros had his cat form

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    Design Notes

    I had to search for the Solomon Flauros to make this feel right, but no good ones exist online so I took a screenshot of the cutscene, I do prefer the design of Arcade Flauros though.

    For the Saiyan Aura I had to redo the entire first page because I forgot to put it in, the shadow aura is the Monster3 where they are shadow like and I placed the red eyes behind Lev, flipped and resized them, after the fact I wanted to put one forward like the game does but I didn't want to stay on this any longer

    I had to put the explosion of Castle Romeo last minute as the end as ridiculous as it was, felt too abrupt.

    Hitler comes from the 2009 Wolfenstein promotion series that plays a bit fast and loose with retelling events, he's Mecha Hitler but dies in a few hits due to lacking armor.

    The name Master-D came from the American version of Bionic Commando but Hitler still appears at the end, Lev's one liner is exactly what Spencer says.
     
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  8. Threadmarks: #004 Short Version - Skadi Salt Whale vs F2P
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    #004 Short Version - Skadi Salt Whale vs F2P
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    True Story

    I'm proud of how this turned out, the Skadi Banner was added last minute for extra context, I wish we could see Red Chaldeas but Nameless Master was too big, I did think of changing to a 4th Wall Break where she has a head shot as if screaming into the camera. The greyed out SQ is a cherry on top.

    Male Ritsuka is using a custom expression I made and he has my exact thoughts as I didn't want Skadi as at the time my Quick AOE was lacking, I used 1 maybe 2 tickets on the London Banner for kicks and got her. Now while I do have Parvati and Berserkalot they are both at NP1.

    A regret for comic 002 is that I found a better discontent Lev expression after the fact


    The Short Version is for a Quick meme that's true to my experience but there's a more ridiculous one for later
     
  9. Threadmarks: #005 Strange Bedfellows
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    #005 Strange Bedfellows
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    Chiron has refused to comment



    An easy one I got from the newest Carnival Phantasm. I got Red Hare in the same roll as Qin Shi Haung.

    You have not idea how much trouble I went thought to get Red Hare and Xiang Yu to make their very subtle expressions work.



    Special Thanks to Reign from Tumblr for the first two panels.

    I am in need of certain sprites and backgrounds if I can be pointed in the right direction.
     
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