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Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by TheVoid22222, Feb 8, 2016.

  1. TheVoid22222

    TheVoid22222 Making the rounds.

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  2. Adyen

    Adyen Experienced.

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    Is that supposed to be "wasn't"? It just reads wrong...
     
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  3. jrbless

    jrbless You needed worthy opponents.

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    Faultline's Crew was missing from the list of villains, but it's excusable because they are mercenaries, not heroic or villainous. Taylor would kinda fit with them as her Changer/Breaker form looks like a Case 53.
     
  4. jrbless

    jrbless You needed worthy opponents.

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    Thanks action sequence is good. It gives a good sense of what is going on. Taylor will probably try to finish off Oni Lee, but gets distracted by the rest of the Undersiders calling for help. Oni Lee dies of his injuries off screen.

    The rest of the team ran into Lung (because Taylor HAS to fight Lung as one of her first fights).
     
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  5. jrbless

    jrbless You needed worthy opponents.

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    The Travellers think Frost killed Noelle. When Frost was draining Noelle's powers, they might have altered Frost, making her look like one of Noelle's evil clones. At least, that is my interpretation of these events.

    Frost asking for Lisa's leash was odd. I'm not quite sure what Frost's motivations are any more since she has a safe place and money. It seems that if she could be left alone or only interact with people when she chooses she would be fairly content.
     
  6. jrbless

    jrbless You needed worthy opponents.

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    Glad to see this getting picked back up. It's always fun to read about the adventures of the less-than-well adjusted Taylors.
     
  7. VorpalMedia

    VorpalMedia Not too sore, are you?

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    So... Taylor.
     
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  8. jrbless

    jrbless You needed worthy opponents.

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    Not quite. The worse mental health than normal Taylor.
     
  9. Ack

    Ack (Verified Ratbag) (Unverified Great Old One)

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    All I can say is that her powers have really fucked with her head.
     
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