High Tech System CH 1 by Harly Boy

In an isolated alley in the middle of the night, a person is being beaten up by 3 guys, they keep kicking and stomping him and he could only stay lying on the floor while using his hand and feet to protect his vital he's not even making a sound until one of the guys use his qi to strike him in the head.
*Bang*
Then blood starts oozing from his orifice and he got unconscious when the 3 guys saw this, they look at each other and start laughing.
"Haha serve you right, that's what you get to try to steal from us, an ordinary person without power try to steal from us? a stage 1 cultivator? puh, disgusting" one of the guys said.
Then they start walking out of the alley leaving him in the darkness in an isolated alley, the guy just lying on the floor but you can see that he is breathing no more until golden light starts glowing from his body then his injured body is healed and finally he opened his eyes.
When he opened his eyes, his sky-blue colored eyes are glowing golden light, and then the golden light starts to dim before completely disappearing.
Then he stands up and starts looking around.
"Where am I?"
"I am pretty sure I was in a lab earlier researching Mini nuclear gun"
"So why I'm here now?"
At this time a vast amount of memory starts surging into his brain pricking his mind like a thousand needle, Jin Sung holds his head with both hands and eyes closed, after a few moments Jin Sung opens his eyes and Jin Sung have a look of realization on his face.
"Ah I remember now"
"The mini nuclear reactor explode when I and my team start to
install it inside the gun!"
Realizing that Jin Sung starts thinking.
'So I'm dead?'
'Then why am I here?'
after Jin Sung thought about that, another wave of memory surging into his mind, another wave of pain greater than the last struck him in his mind. after a few moments, the wave of memory stop and Jin Sung's jaw dropped.

"So I'm in a magical world?"
"Or should I say Cultivator world?"
'Apparently, this guy dares to steal from those cultivators because he is desperate, what a reckless guy.'
'But I like it, at least this guy has guts, not to mention this guy has a cute, sweet little sister at home that haven't eat for days, with no money, no food this guy can only resort to stealing.'
'But why would he steal from those cultivators instead of the ordinary people clearly stealing from ordinary people without magical Qi and battle experience is much easier. '
Thinking about this Jin Sung start to browse his new memories.
'so that's why.'
'This guy is too good and too kind for this world.'
'Apparently, he doesn't want to steal from ordinary people because ordinary people are already having a bad life from being oppressed by cultivators.'
Jin Sung then starts looking at the sky and then lets out a sigh.
'Guess it's time to go home' he thought.
After that he starts walking to his home according to his new body's memory.
While walking to his destination he thought to himself isn't it supposed to be that transportee got some kind of power or something.
Back on earth, he read this kind of novel all the time and he's pretty sure the MC always got some OP power-like system or great powerful elder to guide them to kill their enemies and became the strongest existence the world ever see.
Right after he thought about that a 'ding sound' appear on his head.
[High Tech System activate]
What is this cringe mechanical robot sound like thing appearing in my head?
Jin Sung was taken aback and then he realizes, so this is my golden finger, my legendary system?
It says High Tech System, so I will be using laser guns, mecha, and space battleship now?
I guess that's pretty dope, but using guns in a world filled with cultivators is weird isn't it.
Why don't I get a system that makes me powerful instantly instead? Well, I guess that's fine at least it's better than nothing.
Then he tries to check out his new system before he realizes that he doesn't know how to do so.
'how do I open this thing, this thing is basically intangible.'
'Wait in this situation usually we should open the system with our mind' then he starts thinking about it.
'System'
Then a screen appeared in front of his face.
Jin Sung was taken aback he doesn't expect to succeed on his first try.
He looks at the screen.
[High Tech System]
User: Jin Sung
Balance:1000
Access Level:1
Shop type
Weapon
Suit
Material
BluePrint
Communication and information
Miscellaneous
Seeing this, Jin Sung feels very excited.
So after countless novel systems that I read my dream finally come true. even though Jin Sung Is a Scientist in real life that is not his real passion, his real passion is to have a powerful system of his own.
But that is just fantasy back on earth so since he has a smart brain then why not having fun researching nuclear weapons, at least that's what he thought until he remembers that the mini nuclear reactor had taken his life.
Putting aside his thought he starts browsing weapons in the shop. in a world where the strong prey on the weak of course the first thing you need is a powerful weapon, but what he sees in the list baffles him.
[PPS pistol 9x19mm]
[P250 DC pistol 9x19mm]
[LCP pistol .380ACP]
[PK380 .380ACP]
[Desert Eagle .44 Magnum]
Seeing this Jin Sung was even more baffled.
'I'm pretty sure the system says High Tech System, not Old Antique System.'
'Then why I feel like I'm looking at a museum'
Jin Sung comes from Earth in the year 12021 so naturally, these weapons are like antiques to him, back on earth this kind of weapon is already 10.000 years old.
'Yes, it's good if you have it on earth you can sell it to Collector for money but this is not earth so who would buy them here.'
'Eh wait a minute isn't this world has no technology whatsoever.
realizing this Jin Sung start to reevaluate the value of the weapon on the list again.
'doesn't that mean I can sell these modern weapons in this world and make a profit? no, not just profit but a huge profit, this world has no modern weapon at all people use Qi to Cultivate their body, meridian, or soul and the technology they can make are cold weapon artifact and magical formation that's it.'
'They can't make tanks, guns, battleship, fighter jet not to mention Communication technology, oh wait it seems they can make Communication technology I think they call it Communication jade but even so it has restriction like the Communication Jade can only call 1 other Communication Jade and it cannot be changed, and it has distance restriction of 25KM more than that then you can't speak to other parties anymore.'
The restriction Jin Sung thought about Communication Jade is true but that is only the lowest level of Communication Jade the higher the level of Communication the more advanced it is like Communicating with more than 1 person, and longer distance Communication, in Fact, the highest level of Communication Jade has no restriction on distance and can Communicate with unlimited people at once but that only exist in legends.
Thinking about this Jin Sung start browsing the weapon section once again.
After a long list of pistol what Jin Sung see after is something that he somewhat feels glad about.
[Aug A3 6.8 mm]
[M4A1 5.56mm x 45mm]
[AK-47 7,62 x 39 mm]
[QBZ-95 5.8 x 42mm]
'Assault Rifle, with this weapon in hand I don't think I need to worry about my survival anymore because no matter how strong a stage 1 cultivator is can they stop rains of bullets?'
'But I'm not sure if I should really sell these weapons, what if someone tortures me so they can create the weapon themself isn't that mean I'm digging my own burial grounds.'
'let's just skip the weapon section for now.'
Then Jin Sung starts to browse the suit Section then his eyes start glowing.
[Cloaking Full Body Suit]
[Paper Light Steel Armor Body Suit]
[Night Hunter Mechanized suit]
[High-Pressure resistance Suit]
[High-Heat Resistance Suit]
[Shock Absorber Suit]
[Accelarator Suit]
[Phantom-Assassin suit]
seeing this Jin Sung's excitement is on the roof. he starts clicking on the [Phantom-Assassin suit] icon because the name is so cool for him.
[Phantom-Assassin suit]
Hardness:40
Strength:20
Toughness:35
weight:5KG
Additional Effect:
Force:30
Speed:40
Energi:5
Additional Ability:
Reduce the smell and sound the user makes.
Hidden Blade
Spinning tungsten Needle(consume 1 energy per minute)
Solar Charging (able to absorb sunlight to replenish energy, replenish 1 energy per hour)
Description:
Assassin-type suit commonly used to infiltrate and assassinate. able to reduce the smell and sound the user makes. Built-in Sharp Obsidian Blade 40CM long on the left side that has been soaked with a special substance to remove the brittleness of obsidian, the special Substance also makes the blade retain its sharpness for a long time. on the right side of the suit's arm is a built-in 45CM long Tungsten needle made out of steel with the tip made out of the diamond, The tungsten needle is able to spin with a sound as loud as a mosquito wing and with a speed of 5.000 RPM when activated.
Seeing this Jin Sung knows that he has to stop browsing the store because this suit right here is what he currently needs.

 

Alright, I am interested so far. Formatting is somewhat messy though, with too many line breaks. That really should be fixed.
Also I recommend using grammarly or some other grammar checking software to help catch common mistakes. since english is clearly not your native language