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I Am Cadence?

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Nightgazer, May 19, 2016.

  1. Nightgazer

    Nightgazer Cute Lil' Pegasus Gone for Good

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    Well here's another fic by me now. I think I might have put enough stuff in there to make it interesting now. Below are some image files for the fic showing current and future happenings for it.

    It's Princess Cadence

    Princess Cadence Happy

    Princess Cadence With Wings Spread

    Here's Milfeulle Sakuraba

    Here's the build for my custom CYOA.

    Self Insert 'Have body of Milfeulle Sakuraba' 'Time to awaken is shortly before Taylor Hebert left for the Summer Camp'

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    Skill Gained: Milfeulle's cooking.

    Advantage Gained: Milfeulle's luck.

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    God Mode +150 points
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    Disadvantages

    Wanted +3 points 'ABB/E88/Merchants'
    Without a Map +2 points 'in a three-way fight between the E88/ABB/Merchants'
    Outed +3 points
    Anomaly Magnet +4 points
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    Things Get Worse

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    Alicorn Princess

    Cadence -26 points (Immortality) (Shapeshifting)

    Abilties Unique To Cadence

    Power of Love
    Aura of Attraction
    Crystal Heart
    Third Eye
    Perfect Couple
    Comforting Embrace
    Love Magic
    Familiar (Love Kitten) (Amore)

    Abilities All Alicorns Have

    Bright Mind
    Stats
    Sight
    Memory
    Psi
    Snacks
    Bed
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    Advantages

    The Stealth Package -5 points
    Extra Skill -1 point 'Anything-Goes Martial Artist'
    Greater Vials -5 points (for fifteen vials)
    Charles Atlas Superpowers -1 point
    Comic Book Pretty -1 point
    Companion -1 point 'Princess Sunset Shimmer'
    Companion -1 point 'Princess Twilight Sparkle'
    Companion -1 point 'science Twilight Sparkle'
    Item of Power -1 point (Captain America's vibranium/uru shield and a version of his uniform made of unstable molecules)
    Resoures -2 points
    Secret Lair -1 point (upgrade) -3 points
    The Cybernetic Package -4 points
    Tinkertech -1 point (personal force field) (upgrade) -3 points
    Adaptable -1 point
    Combat Aptitude -1 point
    Logistician -1 point
    Born Leader -1 point
    Original Thinker -1 point
    The Stickers Package -8 points "Baseball" (trick shot item is baseballs)
    The Domestic Martial Arts Package -7 points
    Special Cell Phone -1 point
    The Utility Bundle -7 points "Artistic" 'Writing' 'Painting' 'Music/Singing'
    Taylor Sense -0 points
    Magic Ring -0 points
    Genius -1 point (upgrade) -1 point
    Shard Vision -1 point
    Psychic Paper -0 points
    Minions -0 points
    The Girl Package -8 points
    Special Snowflake -1 point
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    Evolution Of Companions

    Science Twilight Sparkle evolves into an Alicorn Princess (You are Twilight. The Alicorn of Science. The Learned Knowledge.)

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    Abilities Unique To Princess Sunset

    Fireball
    Flame Teleport
    Fire Shield
    Fire Manipulation
    Flamethrower
    Combustion
    Summon Fire Wolf
    Ancient Blaze
    Summon Fire Bats
    Fire Wings
    Dragon's Breath
    Fire Escape
    Summon Fire Guardian Elemental
    Fire Scrying
    Fire Claws
    Fire Extinguisher
    Fire Magic
    Familiar (Fire Wolf) (Fenrir)

    Abilities Unique To Princess Twilight

    Secrets of the Arcane
    Organization
    Librarian
    Thief of Knowledge
    Detective
    Sanctuary
    Magic
    Familiar (Tome Bird) (Wordy)

    Abilities Unique To Princess Science Twilight

    Secrets of the Scientific: You have the capacity to learn every scientific skill in exisence, possibly even a few that don't even exist yet. However you will require lots of research, practice, and study to even use this knowledge. Because of this you will never truly master such knowlede, you will become more of a "Jack of all trades" regarding science. You are inherently able to understand a few basic scientific facts such as physics. Parahuman abilities count as scientific facts as well.
    Organization
    Librarian
    Thief of Knowledge
    Detective
    Sanctuary
    Scientific Knowledge: You know more scientific facts than you can shake a stick at.
    Familiar (Magical Talking Dog) (Spike)

    Abilities All Alicorns Have

    Bright Mind
    Stats
    Sight
    Memory
    Psi
    Snacks
    Bed

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    For A Brighter World?

    For Want of a Nail -1 point 'One day the Endbringers turn into a stone-like sunstance that cannot be broken and they go dormant and never wake again'
    For Want of a Nail -1 point 'Annette Hebert lives but now walks with a permanent limp in her left leg from the accident that almost killed her but didn't'
    For Want of a Nail -1 point 'the supernatural - souls, gods/demons, spirits, blood oaths, magic itself, ki-using Martial Arts, Really weird stuff - are quite real and publicly acknowledged on this Earth Bet'
    Crossover -2 points 'Friendship is Magic' 'it's always been this way'
    Crossover -2 points 'Ranma 1/2 both manga and anime' 'it's always been this way'
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    Convert

    +5,800 dollars

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    Recruits

    The Seraphim
    Bill & Ted
    The Real Ghostbusters
     
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  2. floppy_seal99

    floppy_seal99 With a car, you can go anywhere.

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    Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh shit.

    I can't even make snide comments now. I swear. Sometimes I think that Nightgazer was hired by fucking Chatoyance to fuck with SB, SV, and QQ simply for disagreeing with xir that TCB is utter shit.

    Will someone forcibly remove Fox from these premises? Someone can probably take him.
     
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  3. Jordan99

    Jordan99 Making the rounds.

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    i NEED to know the Lore of this world, did this all start to happen in 1980's when shards started to show? or maybe even earlier?
     
  4. Nightgazer

    Nightgazer Cute Lil' Pegasus Gone for Good

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    The next chapter will have Cadence going online to do research on the Earth she has found herself in.
     
  5. Gladiusone

    Gladiusone Well worn.

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    In all honesty, I will believe that when I see it.
     
  6. floppy_seal99

    floppy_seal99 With a car, you can go anywhere.

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    no, please don't feed the General Factotum de Chatoyance.

    ^ This. Actually follow up with a story.
     
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  7. Jordan99

    Jordan99 Making the rounds.

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    What does this mean? i tried to look it up but i have no idea

    does this author have a habit of leaving one chapter story's or something?
     
  8. Gladiusone

    Gladiusone Well worn.

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    Chatoyance is an infamous MLP fanfic author, an alicorn worshiping misandrist who wrote some of the more vile Conversion Bureau stories. as for this 'fic's' author ... Check out their list of started threads, and do the same on SB and SV. You'll likely notice a pattern.
     
  9. Jordan99

    Jordan99 Making the rounds.

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    oh boy i am starting to notice a pattern in nightgazer, but i dont get the part about feeding Chatoyance. unless Nightgazer is Chatoyance.
     
  10. Nightgazer

    Nightgazer Cute Lil' Pegasus Gone for Good

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    NO. WAY. IN. HELL. DUDE.

    I'm anti-tcb understand.

    My favorite story is "Other Side of the Spectrum'.
     
  11. Gladiusone

    Gladiusone Well worn.

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    Floppy was implying that 'Gazer is basically an acolyte of the Chatty One: similar methods of dealing with criticism, similar obsession with alicorns, similar contempt for humanity, similar tendancy to simply ignore little things like plot, characterisation and good taste ... although, I will say, Chatoyance at least had more than two posted stories, and they weren't short.

    So, I suppose we can say that Chatoyance is a superior author to Nightgazer.
     
  12. floppy_seal99

    floppy_seal99 With a car, you can go anywhere.

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    While I mostly agree with you here, I did say that Nightgazer was "General Factotum"- i.e., right-hand man. Ideological differences do exist, (I did see Nightgazer's most recent post) so it's more of a General Factotum in the sense of Iago to Othello between the end of Act II and Act V. But yes, there are numerous cosmetic differences.

    Although I will give it to you, Nightgazer, you're not part of Chat's hugbox- nor do you give a shit about whether your publishing environment is one. Why would he be writing about a Worm CYOA if he didn't want to save or help humanity out in some way?

    That does remind me, I need to start looking at ideas about spinning off the TCB in Worm. Ziz versus Sunbutt! Fight! I really want to see Eidolon and his immaculately conceived Endwhelps (Oh my god, the Endbringers are Kaiju Jesus times 20) trash one of Chatty One's Equestrias. Or Cauldron decides to abduct Equestrians and purposefully dump them back home as Case 53's. That type of shit really brings out equine xenophobia.
     
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