Look Again (RWBY SI) (NO POWERS)

[Yachii]

I really wanna see everyone freaking out over a potato powering a bulb. And maybe an sdc pov of Jacques going PANIC mode. Menagerie would go crazy for solar power or other alternative means. Vacuo not so much of solar bcus SAND and limited water supply for it.

 

[GrindStone]

I really wanna see everyone freaking out over a potato powering a bulb. And maybe an sdc pov of Jacques going PANIC mode

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"Wealthiest man in the world seriously considering wether a common crop will destroy the economic monopoly his empire relies on"

 

[Doccer]

Anon might be an alien.

 

[Anonymous Brainwash]

I'm wondering if anyone's going to realize the value of hybridization in rockets.

Dust may get wonky away from the planet's surface, but it could presumably still be used in the initial stages.

Gravity Dust to lighten the load and Fire Dust as propulsion, and once they stop working, then switching to chemical propulsion.

 

[FungusLord]

Holy AI batman.

I like the story but stop doing this constantly.

That," he said slowly, "is actually very close to the answer the chat arrived at."

"That" (someone says) "rest of the sentence" is used constantly. Over and over. Always oobleck saying it too I think

The whole
This is X
It's Y
It's Z

Also should be careful using at all. No one writes like that.


Also AI loves telling us what emotion to feel and loves having characters say "that's uncomfortable " or scary or some other emotion and it drives me up a wall.

I love the idea of the story and I'm going to continue reading but adjust your prompts or something so it reads more like a person wrote it all.

 

[Silent Knight]

question for everyone .

are we sure that salem didn't genocide several generations of humanity ?
the second humanity was made by the gods with them leaving salem and ozma took over .
if they have lived for so long , is it possible that humanity did evolve without dust and used technology to move forward
and then salem either destroyed them back to the stone age or Ozma hid knowledge to make humanity dependent on him ?

 

[RegularReader21]

This entire thing has been a treat to read!

Im not normally a fan of the 'forum/chat' style in most works, i tend to skip them infact!

Somehow you have conjured into being one i not only tolerate but have rather enjoyed!

...Please write more?