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Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Vagrant, Sep 2, 2019.

  1. Vagrant

    Vagrant Getting some practice in, huh?

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  2. Akuma-Heika

    Akuma-Heika The Devil Exists Within

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    FTFY. Based on the various things said before and after this, this isn't based on the original canon Marvel Symbiote. They didn't have high caloric needs (possibly due to their divine origins), but they needed adrenaline in extremely high quantities. Messing with a person's endocrine system is dangerous regardless of how it is done, but especially with extreme changes.
     
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    Akuma-Heika The Devil Exists Within

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    Might want to reword this. I thought Izuku was saying he was in General Studies, and was very confused on the classroom bit :p
     
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    Akuma-Heika The Devil Exists Within

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    Thanks. It wasn't a huge thing, but I was like, "Huh, that's a new one," followed with, "what?" :p

    I have seen one fic with a Support Course Quirkless Izuku who moves to Hero Course after the festival, but that is it, so a General Studies one would have been unique.
     
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  5. Lusacan2099

    Lusacan2099 Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    This was a pretty good chapter, but I feel like Todoroki’s parents moved on a little too quickly. They hear he’s dead, look a sad for a second, and then immediately start cleaning up the scene and giving useful advice. Maybe a scene transition, or a short time skip to give them time to grieve a little would make the moment land better.
     
  6. Par Tzu

    Par Tzu The Indecisive Procrastinator

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    Well... this looked very very promising... then SHoto died.

    I'm no longer fan of this.


    but I'll still follow this just so see how far in the hole you'll dig yourself.
     
  7. Par Tzu

    Par Tzu The Indecisive Procrastinator

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    ...
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    Ooh nice, upgrade time!
     
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  8. Akuma-Heika

    Akuma-Heika The Devil Exists Within

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    Interesting. Even without the fine control to erase the carcinogen (and considering how old it apparently is, it might be beyond her even if they had the control [and assuming it has a biological base, or her power reverses anything]), she could still reset his infection (and likely make it safe for him to pass on OfA; if the cancer is reset to a single cluster of cells for example, and the DNA sample is taken elsewhere, OfA could be safely passed down), thus giving him more time (and better health) each cycle. Edit: If they do it in a special medbay, All Might would even be able to check and obtain immediate treatment, which if he is still sick, would allow a better outcome.

    It also is a short enough period that it won't be dangerous for Eri or Aka. They erased a grown man from existence. Even if he was only 20, that is still more time than what they would need to remove from All-Might).
     
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  9. ScarletFlames

    ScarletFlames I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    When you're super smart but so detached from reality that the obvious consequences of your actions go completely over your head... That's how you get relateable villains. Though to be fair, her goals are actually good for the world, and her method is 'merely' questionable cloning practices.

    Though, how is she going to make a viable symbiote host out of a toshinori clone?
     
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