Stargate Etheria
Summary: Entering a gate leading to an unknown planet while dodging fire...
Summary: Entering a gate leading to an unknown planet while dodging fire...
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It doesn't surprise me that they didn't consider some planets may be against the return of Magic.
It doesn't surprise me that they didn't consider some planets may be against the return of Magic.
Because from their perspective why would you be? Magic is so fundamental to their world that the idea of trying to live without it is unimaginable.
To be honest I would be all for the introduction of magic to Earth, but I can understand why not everyone would be as keen as me.
Can I also say I'm really enjoying how SG1 is drawing exactly the wrong conclusions about Catra's history, but in a way that makes complete sense given what they know.
Ask and ye shall receiveWell, this just keeps getting better. I can't wait for Sg1 to meet Hordak.
Earth? Hang on! That's where I live! People can get into serious trouble showing huge alien fleets where they live!
This was lovely!
The interactions between the Etherians and SG-1 are great
I understand that SG-1 needs to work out how to address social and political issues with the Etherians, but that's a lot of discussion that doesn't actually do anything for the story. I feel like those sections are dragging. Establishing Daniel and Jack's positions could be condensed to a paragraph of dialogue each with a little internal monologue. A couple sentences for Sam and Teal'c. You write the characters well, those sections just seem larger than necessary, and don't give us greater insight into SG-1 or grow them as characters.
I like it, especially the culture clash and the acknowledgement that the characters from a fictionalized version of the US military from 20 years ago would have somewhat different cultural viewpoints than the average Netflix viewer had when they watched the show.
Jack and the others are people from the late 90s and even though they are good people they may not be as open about things as someone from the present would be.
I also like the extrapolation of how the various She-Ra characters would have evolved after the show.
I also think this might be a good point to quote from one of my favourite Terry Pratchett books "Only You Can Save Mankind" in which the young hero is informed by the aliens that he is helping that they want to go to "Earth"
Well, enjoy the next chapter!I fucking love this. I've been reading all day and I'm eager for more.
I very much did
I post spoilered drafts on spacebattles. The finished chapters are the same.
Ah ok, I kind of posted my comment thinking it was NSFW section opposed to SFW, and thinking there was going to be a difference.I post spoilered drafts on spacebattles. The finished chapters are the same.