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The King has Left the Building (Yu-gi-oh! GX SI)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by PrinceJonathan, Oct 25, 2020.

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  1. Anon-Echo98

    Anon-Echo98 Purveyor of tales and lewds

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    Mmm, and won't it be oh-so sweet when that Power Bonded Cyber End Dragon runs into a neat lil' tiddy called Magic Cylinder?

    But oooooh, m'boy Bastion startin' to piece things together~.... too bad he didn't account for backrow removal.

    Also, whooo boy, Mr. Crowler's gonna have some explaining to do....
     
  2. PrinceJonathan

    PrinceJonathan I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Zane isn't dumb enough to risk going into a Power Bonded Cyber End Dragon if the opponent has a face-down. That's the same mistake he chewed his little brother out for years ago back in grade school.

    I also read that as "neat lil' tiddy Magic" and laughed my ass off.

    Sneak Peek:
    "You think I don't know my own deck's weaknesses?! I activate my face-down, Dust Tornado!"

    That's going to be a pain-in-the-ass and a half to write, but I hope I can do him justice and not stray too much farther into character bashing territory than I already have.

    Then again can you really call it character bashing when in episode 5 Crowler is shown loitering outside Jaden's bedroom window in the middle of the night for no reason other than to spy on Jaden? Seriously, what the fuck?!
     
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  3. Anon-Echo98

    Anon-Echo98 Purveyor of tales and lewds

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    Mmm, true, but then again, literally anything that stops battle damage would F up power bond. Like... even the OG Kuriboh would do it.

    I mean... this setting does have blood magic -see: Millennium items, Earthbound immortals, etc, etc- so..... y'know, it's on the table.

    Hah, classy.

    Oh yeah, no, that's some difficult stuff, especially since we do know that Crowler can be an actually good teacher when he actually tries to.
     
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  4. Project Eden

    Project Eden Enthusiastic Seeker of Culture

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    Yes, the power of Fourth Wall combined with little logic and common sense truly is a superpower on its own.
    As for the deck archetypes, who cares about it? All it needs is CHEESE CARDS! Let your enemies' SALT flow! Bask in the glory of your cheese cards and hear the lamentation of your foes as they get REKT. Reducing Children's Card Games into mere numbers and statics might be a heartless thing to do but it works! Just stuff your deck with cards that gives the most values and you'll be ahead of 90% of competition.

    Jaden needs to spam his deck with Magic Cylinder. It's just pretty much point and shoot.
     
  5. PrinceJonathan

    PrinceJonathan I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I am the Fork of my Fondue
    Curds is my body and Whey is my blood.
    I have trolled over 9000 Duelists,
    Unaware of Rhyme,
    Nor aware of Reason.
    Withstood the Light to create Darkness, Waiting for one's Arrival
    I have no Regrets. This is the only Path--
    UNLIMITED CHEESE WORKS!
     
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  6. ThatGuyMike

    ThatGuyMike That One Guy

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    Bastion once again showing his stuff, was a good read overall. Though It feels like Alexis is focusing this a bit much, whether because its the whole being in Jaden's body thing or because she genuinely sees something in the MC will be interesting to find out.
     
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  7. St3f

    St3f Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    Wonderfull fic, cant wait for update :)
     
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