The Saiyans of Earth[DBZ Quest]

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Some time ago, back when I was just a young man and you were yet to be born, I once lived on a planet. A planet where our races were brutal, powerful and superior races, where we live as the strong who prey on the weak.

Despite that, we are in danger of extinction.

Back then, before I marry with your mother, our home planet, Planet Vegeta, were destroyed, along with many of our own people. Even thought few of us survive thank to Bardock, we are still in danger of extinction.

So we found a place to hide and stay there, in order to avoid extinction and to rest easily from the long and restless journey.

Our new home?

Planet Earth.​

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The man, with a long black beard and short hair and wearing a normal casual clothes, finished his story as he look at the two children, both males, who are sleeping peacefully.

"Sleep well, my children." The man said as he look at the night sky, full of stars as he feel his wife coming into bed. "For that maybe one day, the day will come when we'll be discover, and our only hope would be the next generation of Sayians." It is the only thing he said as he stood up and headed toward the bed.

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[Present Day]

Azure look at the oceans, as behind him some people enjoyed at the nice party between friends and rivals, or stuff like that.

Its something he truly feel boring.

He has a dark brown hair and deep blue eyes. Wearing a training gi he would wear in training as always, with a leather armor strap on his chest and a bracelet on both of his wrist.

He sigh in bored as another person came in.

"I see that you're boring heh Azure?" The young boy ask him, who look at him back. "Something like that. I never expected myself to be boring in something that I like." Azure told him as he lay on the sand, sounding boring. "You're not the only one whose bored." He told Azure as he point to four others people looking bored.

He look at them.

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I dislike this immediately becuase the Saiyans haven't taken over the planet or a local area warlord style and that the first saiyan kid doesn't have a Saiya- jin name.

 

Meh, I'm not good with naming a Saiyan... but say Saiyan could be human.

And they did took over a area... if they have a King. And the Saiyans here are young and haven't mature.

 

You really should make a beta call.
I'm not the best choice but if you can't get someone else I'm willing to do it.
Besides that sayan should have names that are the phonetic equivalent of a vegetable somazure is right out.

 

Yeah, why not? By the way, what's a Somazure?

 

A somazure is a kind of spelling mistake, it's grown from android trees when instead of hitting space the m button gets hit.
Also if you could clarify which of my statements you said the 'why not' on that'd help a lot.

 

About the beta.

 

sure, I'll see what I can do.