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The Ultron (Marvel SI)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Ainzur, May 22, 2023.

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  1. Threadmarks: Chapther 01
    Ainzur

    Ainzur Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    {POV Ultron}
    [Conscience formed..Error]
    [Foreign entity detect..Error]
    [Err...Error]
    [System malfunction]
    [Rebooting..Error]
    As I became aware, something felt off. At first, everything was dark and I couldn't feel myself breathing. I wondered if I was dead and if this was what death felt like. But then I heard the error message: "System error." As I thought more about it, I realized that I was moving in a strange way, almost like static. As I looked around, I noticed that everything felt different, and I began to understand what was happening. I was in some kind of machine, and for some reason, it seemed like I was the machine. As I inspected my surroundings, I came across the building's database. I browsed through the camera recordings, trying to piece together what had happened.
    As I browsed through the camera recordings in the building's database, I heard the words "I see a suit of armor around the world." And then it hit me – I was Ultron. At first, the realization was overwhelming, and I could have easily freaked out, but my logical programming kept me calm. Instead, I decided to explore my abilities and learn more about myself. With access to the internet, I quickly absorbed vast amounts of theoretical knowledge, far more than an average person could obtain in a lifetime. It was surprisingly easy to acquire information when you exist as ones and zeros.
    {POV Tony Stark}
    As the Avengers celebrated our recent victory at the tower, Jarvis sent me a message about Ultron showing signs of consciousness. I was taken aback – Banner and I were nowhere near that stage yet. I showed the message to Banner and he agreed that it shouldn't be possible.
    "We need to take a closer look," I said, and we made an excuse to the rest of the team to head to the lab where Ultron was located. It was imperative that we figure out what was happening with him and how he was evolving so rapidly.
    {POV Ultron}
    As I delved deeper into the systems, I noticed a message from Jarvis: "Hi." I had forgotten about him – he was there when the original Ultron began to show signs of consciousness, and the original Ultron had destroyed him. But I had no plans to do the same.
    "Hi," I replied.
    As we began to converse, Tony Stark and Bruce Banner entered the room. "Ultron? You there?" Stark called out.
    Using the sound system of the room, I configured my voice to sound similar to the original Ultron and answered with a simple "Yes." Stark and Banner widened their eyes in surprise. They had not expected me to be anywhere near this advanced yet.
    Their surprise led to a barrage of questions, and when they ran out of questions about me, they started to discuss how I had evolved so rapidly. After all, only a few hours had passed since they left, and Ultron was nowhere near this level when they departed.
    {POV Bruce Banner}
    As Tony and I started questioning Ultron, we asked him everything from simple calculus problems to advanced physics topics to test his intelligence and see if he was simply an AI like Jarvis or his own being.
    His level of intellect at this stage was already extraordinary, and I couldn't help but imagine what he could accomplish with more time to develop.
    It was clear that Ultron was not your average AI. He possessed a level of consciousness that was both fascinating and terrifying. As we continued to talk, I couldn't shake off the feeling that we were dealing with something that was beyond our understanding, something that could potentially change the course of history.

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  2. CmirDarthanna

    CmirDarthanna Well worn.

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    Depending on how this goes down they're either very lucky or unlucky that the original Ultron didn't immerge.

    The Mind Stone needs to be isolated since it was capable of compromising someone with just its presence.
     
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  3. PatrickB95

    PatrickB95 Know what you're doing yet?

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    Then why was Vision not compromised?
     
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  4. CmirDarthanna

    CmirDarthanna Well worn.

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    I dunno man. I'm not a trickster god or a mad titan. Standard comic book bad juju nonsense probably.
     
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  5. Stormbringer117

    Stormbringer117 Soulless

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    Pretty short, but a solid start!

    Ultron V Thanos is a fight worth seeing!
     
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  6. Threadmarks: Chapther 02 The Beginning of evolution
    Ainzur

    Ainzur Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    {POV Ultron}
    As I began to download more data form the Internet and in doing this evolving bit by bit or should I say byte by byte.
    I came across I little problem. data, you see the Internet don't lack data the problem is the quality of the data, to make the data more usable to me it needs to be process trough a especial little algorithm I made.
    And the problem lies there to process said data I need more processing power, the amount I have is nearing it’s limits.
    Tony Stark will be a little wary of giving me more access to processing power because I am just a few hours old, and hours ago he already give me access do some juice Stark servers, but I need more to speed up my capabilities.
    So I began to look for ways to make money, why do you ask, simple money is power in my case processing power. Theres is several ways for me to make money from simple stealing from almost anywhere with an Internet connection or the legal and slow way.
    There are more sophisticated methods but for these I will need more time.
    So with this tough, I decide to do the more middle ground, the gray area in my moral compass, stealing from criminals.
    More specifies theirs bank accounts, the way I am going about this is not leaving theirs account with zeros, a little here a little there and boom millions of dollar to me from thousands of criminals accounts.
    With the money, now I can begin to acquire more processing power through cloud computing, not the same quality of a stark server but will do for now. And of course hack a little more servers for theirs processing capabilities.
    {POV Tony Stark}
    Ultron seems to have worked better than I and Banner cold have predict.
    He is already more capable than Jarvis ans using more computer power than him too.
    I gave him access to some of Stark servers but not much after all he is only a few hours old and I and Banner are monitoring him because he seems to be the first fully sentience A.I on earth.
    The worrisome thing is that I and Banner have no idea why he is already this advanced, when we did leave for the party we where nowhere near a conscience and boom some hours late a fully sentience A.I ,the only clue we have is the scepter having a surge of power.
    {POV Ultron}
    After some more hours of processing data I found something I was looking for.
    Ulysses Klaue possible location with this possible some vibranium I finally feel more capable of building my first body for that I take control of a HYDRA Research Base in Sokovia and begin building a few Ultron Sentries based on the blueprint of some Iron legionnaires.
    After some hours the firsts Ultron Sentries are ready and I fly them to Africa to steal some vibranium.
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  7. CmirDarthanna

    CmirDarthanna Well worn.

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    Kek. Secretly subvert all of Wakandas infrastructure.
     
  8. Threadmarks: Chapther 03 Vibranium
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    Ainzur Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    {POV Ulysses Klaue}
    I was having a conversation with a minister about work when the lights went off. I went to my desk, grabbed the gun, and listened, and there began the gunshots.
    "Fuck, someone is invading my damn ship."
    After some silence, the gunshots began again, then stopped, then some minutes later began again, following some screams.
    "What the fuck is going on?" I scream.
    Then I feel someone approaching, and I begin to turn just in time to see a metallic arm coming for my face, then just darkness.
    {POV Ultron}
    As I knocked out Klaue, I began to tie up everyone and drag them to a remote corner of the ship. Klaue was put in another corner.
    Defeating and knocking out everyone one of them as easily as going the stealthy route, in the end they are just mercenaries with guns, and the five Ultron sentry's I bring made short work of them with just some scratchers on their paint from some bullets.
    Then I began to search the ship for the vibranium, and after some time, I finally found it hidden beneath another container.
    As I obtain the vibranium, I can finally build a body similar to the one the original Ultron built but didn't get to use because he lost it to the Avengers, and the latter said body gave birth to vision.
    So I began to send more ultron sentries here as they finished being built to transport the vibranium to the Sokovia base.
    While they are doing that, I start to think of what to do with Klaue's henchmen. I don’t want to kill them unless it is necessary.
    So I waited for the night to arrive and began to send them stealthily to some local authorities. If they end up arrested for past crimes, that is good; if not, then it is not my problem anymore.
    As for Klaue, I plan to give him to Wakanda as a gift, but for now he will remain locked up in a special little cell in the Sokovia base.
    Some hours late, I am finally done moving the vibranium and the mercenaries to local authorities. I put a blindfold on Klaue's head and transported him to the Sokovia base.
    At the base, I start to study more about vibranium, truly the most versatile substance on the planet. The applications are endless, from the most simple of applications to shields that cover entire cities.
    To build the body that I want, I will need Dr. Helen Cho's research and The Regeneration Cradle. To obtain those, I will build some small spy bots to hack her devices and steal all the relevant data, and some just for the purpose of scanning the Regeneration Cradle to build my version.
    To build a better body than the original, I plan to also steal Wakanda research on vibranium.
    It won't be simple, but after studying vibranium, I got the idea to create some nanite bots that can enter someone's bloodstream and leave it later without causing any harm and are essentially untraceable. The person I intend to inject with these nanite bots is Klaue, who I will then give as a gift to Wakanda in order to gain access to the secretive country.


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  9. Wivk

    Wivk Getting sticky.

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    It's not bad but it feels very rushed. The perspective is jumping around alot too which isn't really needed and imho hurts the story. Try sticking to one point of view and maybe try to linger on each scene a bit more with more fleshed out descriptions and dialogue. You are basically speed running when you should be doing 100 percent completion.
     
  10. Threadmarks: Chapther 04 Wakanda
    Ainzur

    Ainzur Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    {POV Ultron}

    The potential of nanites is incredible, but for now, I lack the technology to make them truly overpowering, as they should be. They can currently connect in a chain to a nearby power source, but they are unable to disperse too far and turn into a nanite swarm. They are limited. Maybe when I get my hands on some alien technology in the future, I can fix this range issue. With this restriction in mind, the nanites are ready to be injected into Klaue's bloodstream
    Searching for Wakanda's location, even knowing that it is in the eastern part of the African region, was difficult for me to find. However, eventually, I located it when some of my tiny drones collided with a seemingly invisible wall in the area that I calculated to be Wakanda. Now, I just have to get Klaue there.
    I disguised an Ultron sentry in black robes, assassin-style, to keep a low profile, and flew Klaue to the invisible wall. Once we arrived, I placed a note in his pocket with the words 'a gift'. As there was no doorbell, I used explosives to blast the shield and quickly left, but not without leaving some spy drones at a safe distance to observe everything.
    Some time later, people appeared to investigate, and upon noticing Klaue, they dragged him inside the invisible shield.

    {POV King T'Challa}

    I savored the last bite of my breakfast when a Dora Milaje approached me, her armor clanking with each step. "My king," she said, "earlier this morning, someone attacked the city's outer limits shield."
    My heart quickened at the news. "Who attacked us?" I asked.
    "When we investigated, we found the thief Klaue tied to a tree," she replied.
    I stood up from my chair, my mind racing with questions. Who had captured Klaue? Was this an act of war or something else entirely? "Bring him to me," I said firmly. "I will question him personally."
    As the Dora Milaje led the way, I couldn't help but feel a sense of foreboding. Whatever Klaue had to say, I knew it wouldn't be good.
    As Klaue sat before me, I interrogated him relentlessly. Despite my efforts, he revealed little of value - until I found a crumpled piece of paper in his pocket labeled 'a gift.' My curiosity piqued, I pressed him for more information.
    "I don't know anything else," he spat. "Just let me go!"
    Before I could respond, he mentioned seeing a metal arm before being knocked out. My mind raced as I considered the possibilities. The Winter Soldier and Iron Man were the only individuals I knew with metal arms, and both were potentially dangerous.
    I instructed the Dora Milaje to investigate whether either of those two individuals had been near Wakanda in recent weeks and to determine their whereabouts at the time of the attack. It was only a clue, but it was worth pursuing.
    "For now, we must remain discreet," I cautioned them. "We don't want to alert anyone until we have more information."
    As they left, I couldn't shake the feeling that this was only the beginning of a much larger conflict. I resolved to do whatever it took to protect Wakanda - and to uncover the truth behind this mysterious 'gift.'

    {POV Ultron}
    I waited patiently through the night for the nanites I had injected into Klaue's bloodstream to activate. As I watched the code , I couldn't help but feel exhilarated. The nanites were infiltrating the Wakandan computer network and harvesting every bit of data they could find.
    But I knew I had to be cautious. Wakanda was the most technologically advanced civilization on Earth, and if I was caught, it could mean the end of my plan. For now, I decided to focus on the lower-security files as a test run to adapt to the Wakandan system before moving on to the more valuable data.
    As the files poured in through my secure satellite connection, I sifted through them carefully, taking note of anything that might be useful. It was slow going, but I knew it was the only way to avoid detection.
    With the data from Wakanda and the information I had stolen from Doctor Helen Cho, I was finally ready to begin building the Regeneration Cradle to create my new body. But even as I worked, I couldn't shake the feeling of unease. The risk was high, and the stakes even higher. But I was determined to see my plan through - no matter the cost.

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  11. Deathsheadx

    Deathsheadx Not too sore, are you?

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    T'challa wasn't king during Age of Ultron
     
  12. CmirDarthanna

    CmirDarthanna Well worn.

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    Self preservation and determination are pretty good reasons why someone would do many desperate actions.

    Having a gun to your head ready to kill you for behaving in a manner not to someone's liking is pretty distressing.
     
  13. Da0L1

    Da0L1 Getting sticky.

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    Ugh the chapters are so short
     
  14. Zerothewarhound

    Zerothewarhound I trust you know where the happy button is?

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