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Trampling Sincerity (Nolan si/oc-insert)

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Boing said:
The cabinet behind him cracked further and she saw him flinch at the sound, saw fresh horror flood his expression. He was afraid of himself. Afraid of what he might do.

She shoved back the realisation of what Viltrum really was, of what system Nolan had grown up in, that he clearly saw how wrong it was, how hurt he had been by it, and yet she saw how he couldn't bring himself from not believing in it still.
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The second paragraph seems out of place. That was already written a few lines prior. Did you copy and paste it by mistake?
 
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