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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. BlueMangoAdea

    BlueMangoAdea Alive. For now.

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    Why not both?
     
  2. Darko

    Darko Well worn.

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    Technically both.

    Though some demons were former humans.

    Animal cruelty laws may apply.

    'of things or 'those sort'

    Though being trapped in her body would probably feel like hell.

    'not look'

    Is the next episode paragon or renegade focused.
     
  3. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Uh, the soul powers the tattoos? Forever? That's harsh man.
     
  4. Vanbers

    Vanbers Versed in the lewd.

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    Well, as Farnsworth says:

    HAIL SCIENCE!

    More harsh than eternal pain, suffering, and active/directed/malicious torment?
     
  5. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    Well...

    And I looked for a clip, but I couldn't find one.
     
  6. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    ...Ah, Linda Danvers' father. I'm guessing the events that occurred in the Paragon timeline also happened here, and didn't end so well. A sound reminder that the Renegade is missing out on a lot of things while he's off in space...

    I have to wonder who or what he was summoning in this timeline, since Noriel wouldn't have been available, not having been discorporated without the hunt for the 'Thief of Eden...'

    ...Huh. That's interesting.

    Ah. Yes, that makes a lot of sense, I guess. Given what we heard about Linda's character before...

    Not exactly the sort of thing you can custom-order, after all.

    To be fair, I don't think we want to either... But...

    Which Renegade doesn't realise is an actual place, does he? Not having dug into things like that the way Paragon did...

    ... o_O Is this a 'Hellblazer' thing?

    :eek: ...Definitely a 'Hellblazer' thing.

    No, don't want her popping out sprogs that are just chock-filled with demonic energies. Remember Satanus and Angelica Blaze? Yeah.

    ...Not an unreasonable response.

    Well, if he goes to slug the Renegade, at least it won't hurt... Much.

    :oops: ...Oooh, yeah. She was bound for the express lane down Hell's Highway...

    Not in a handbasket, but I doubt the ride is any more pleasant regardless.

    ...Not seeing an improvement...

    Not the time for your brand of cheerfulness, Renegade...

    I'm sure Buzz's buddies have just the perfect pit of fire lined up for her...

    I hope not.

    Oh, this has so many ways it could go wrong...

    Easier to ask forgiveness than permission, eh? Or in this case, belated permission...

    Well, at least she'll have the most common superpower... :V

    Just keep in mind it's expensive, and potentially painful, the latter being something she's not used to...

    Ah, the same set as Chantinelle and the Paragon, eh? At least this set didn't need to be carved onto the soul... yet.

    That really needs a burst of maniacal laughter, doesn't it?

    Okay, that came out more or less from nowhere. Still, if it's an obligation, the Narrative won't let it pass unattended-to. I suppose it's safer than producing some half-demon babies. Those are always trouble. And Sunset gets to play with some spells that would quite upset Celestia, so... Bonus?
     
  7. Darko

    Darko Well worn.

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    I'm now thinking of this.

     
  8. jaelin910

    jaelin910 habitual lurker

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    Blocked in Australia on copyright grounds.
     
  9. Darko

    Darko Well worn.

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    Buzz did have a superior he answered to, so maybe he was trying to summon them.

    He may know it's real, but may not know the specifics.

    Even if it wasn't it really sounds like it could belong there.

    Read my above post.

    This wouldn't be the first time renegade has been behind something very stupid.



    When it's not the time for his particular brand he tends to use it the most.

    Your hope will not come to fruition.

    Seeing as she's from Hell she may be used to pain.

    Having her finger nails pulled off may be her equivalent of a manicure.

    These spells may upset a lot of people not just Celestia.
     
  10. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    Kind of weird to be doing this now, innit? Aren't we focused on the other Grayven? Did Artemis and Kanto already go to do the stealth/preemptive strike?

    Still, it's always fun to see the differences between Grayven's universe and the Illustres's. Obviously nobody stopped Buzz from doing some demonic shit with Linda, but I imagine the bitch angel officially known as Noriel wasn't present for that part of the ritual? Kinda curious what Buzz accomplished with that and what's the geopolitical status in Hell.

    Can somebody remind me who this Gloria is? I'm usually fairly capable of remembering this one note or passing characters but she doesn't ring even a tea bell.
     
  11. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Eventually, it amounts to the same thing,if she is aware.

    Also,Hell has at least the chance of escape, right?
     
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  12. Darko

    Darko Well worn.

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    The First of the Fallen is still alive for one.

    She's a demon, a succubus I think, that loves kn Earth and is married to an athlete.

    I think she's the tutor for renegades half demon children.
     
  13. BR549

    BR549 This is filth! FILTH!!

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    Maxim 14. "Mad Science" means never stopping to ask "what's the worst thing that could happen?"
     
  14. Darko

    Darko Well worn.

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    I think you need to come to some kind of emotional or philosophical realization that allows you to see how you've sinned and can then go on to Heaven.

    However the constant torture makes thinking difficult.
     
  15. Vaermina

    Vaermina Versed in the lewd.

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    Yes, because Hell in DC isn't eternal.

    Also she likely wasn't actually in Hell given it usually takes a lot more then that to end up there.
     
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  16. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    LAND OF THE FREE, BITCHES!
    [​IMG]
     
  17. Vaermina

    Vaermina Versed in the lewd.

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    Oh right... In this circumstance every very time Gloria has sex for Linda it's basically like she's being raped...

    Yea... That's... Probably a lot worse then what would have been done to her in Hell if she actually ended up there...
     
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  18. AmericanNumbers

    AmericanNumbers Making the rounds.

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    Friendship is necromancy and using a soul as tattoo ink?

    Interesting that Constantine is showing up now to work for Grayven.
     
  19. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    He's done so before, mostly for consultation or helping the magic school that Circe runs.
     
  20. AidanMorgan

    AidanMorgan Essentially Overworked

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    ...

    Fuck. Here I was thinking that at least Renegade was behaving somewhat normally and then this happens xD

    Oh well. We'll always have Common Sense Paul.
     
  21. CTrees

    CTrees Chasing the ring

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    I don't know what state they're in, but if it's New York or California, it probably was illegal. Prior to 2018, it looks like eating dog or cat was legal in 44 US states. Slaughtering them at a commercial slaughterhouse was not, and selling the meat was a mixed bag, but home preparation and consumption? Totally legal. Harder to find trustworthy answers on this than you'd think.
     
  22. DAT_NOOB

    DAT_NOOB Accused of writing in a far away land

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    Wait wait, I forgot who was Linda Danvers?
     
  23. Darko

    Darko Well worn.

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    She's a teenage girl that dated a demon named Buzz.

    In the comics she was merged with some plasma entity an alternate version of Luthor made and became a version of Supergirl.

    In this story, or at least in the Paragon side, something similar happened, but instead of a plasma entity Buzz used magic to merge a fallen Angel with Linda.

    Eventually the memories of the Angel, Noriel, overwhelmed her, so she's either now gone and Noriels personality is the one calling the shots, or they've somehow merged.

    You already know what happened to her renegade side.
     
  24. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Gloria lives in Britain, so...
     
  25. Karnven

    Karnven Know what you're doing yet?

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    Ugh, I hate how I used to like Renegade butbit turnes to shit for me with the further inclusion of MLP. Just soured the whole thing.
     
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  26. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    Same. I mean, I can enjoy it when it isn't too blatant, but that's not every time.
     
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  27. CTrees

    CTrees Chasing the ring

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    Ah, the chapter mentioning the FBI threw me off. I didn't consider the internationality of this possession facilitation.
     
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  28. Senevri

    Senevri Know what you're doing yet?

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    Huh. Gray&Arty did a sort of a Rex&M. G Thing, come to think of it.
     
  29. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Who?
     
  30. Assblaster5000

    Assblaster5000 Not too sore, are you?

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    Same for us in Canada.
     
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