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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Is he accidentally trying to assimilate the old god via the infection and causing them to wake up?
I would be surprised if so given how quickly the assimilation progressed. It could just be that the Old God has a link to its cells (wouldn't be surprising) and it felt the attack. Or it could be one or several of the Supertown New Gods coming down to fuck with the Primitives, since we just heard they're going crazy and picking fights.
 
23rd July 2013
11:31 GMT


Aarden looks disconcerted as Mantis and I walk into the Primitive's settlement. "Is.. that a bug?"

"Yes. His people are suffering from the same disease. Given the physiological differences between your two peoples that should be impossible, but it turns out that it might not be a disease organism in the strict sense."
And where Old Gods are concerned, petty little things like mere science are of no significance... Let's hope that whatever OL might be planning, it doesn't accelerate the awakening, or New genesis might be in peril.

He actually looks relieved. "Clearly, the oracle has given you a powerful vision. If-."

I nod. "Instead of just telling me, yes. I've got an idea for a cure, but it'll be slow going and uncomfortable."
Which isn't great, but if Roy keeps treating the symptoms, OL can work on speeding up the process. I guess Aarden and Mantis get to play guinea pigs.

He nods. "We will endure. What need do you have for me?"

I nod to a stone bench. "Sit down."
I suspect whatever you plan to do, he'll be fine standing. The news on the other hand...

He chuckles, shaking his head. "I am steady as a mountain. I do not need-"

"You've been infected by a solution of an Old God's body tissues."
Just like pulling off a band-aid. Don't let them psyche themselves up for the pain... Just yank it off fast.

"-a-." He looks at my face to determine whether or not I'm playing some sort of joke. "An..?" Realising that I'm not joking, he makes a clenching motion with his right hand.
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The ground behind him buckles, extruding as seat of stone. He sits down heavily, gazing sightlessly ahead of himself. "An Old God."
Why do I get the feeling the regular bench might have struggled with his weight anyway? Presumably he's much heavier than he looks to go with his stone powers.

"I haven't seen it directly myself, but that was what Ms. K'Zandr said."

"Such a thing could corrupt our connection to the Source…" He nods. "And that is making us ill."
Good, yes. Eminently logical conclusion.

"Something like that." I generate a construct dialysis machine. "So what I'm going to try and do is assimilate the cells without assimilating the rest of you."

"What is 'assimilate' in that context?"
So, filtering his blood, collecting the cells and converting them without affecting him? That'll be tricky.

"That's where I turn things into constructs."

"For how long?"

"About a hundred trillion years, give or take."
In other words, until the heat death of the universe. Or the Orange Light runs out, whichever comes first.

"So it's permanent."

"Well, we won't know for certain for a hundred trillion years, but probably. Now, if I start assimilating you by mistake, that's not a problem. I-."
I think by that time, you'd have other things to worry about anyway.

He looks disconcerted. "It is a problem."

"I can just stop it. You don't become a construct until the process is fully complete."

"And if it is completed?"
Though it can be a bit disconcerting to see part of yourself transforming into Orange Light. That's not likely to happen with a New God though, given their resistances.

"That's… Bad. So far I've only seen one person assimilated where I wouldn't have killed them if assimilation wasn't an option. He acts like himself for the most part, but I'm not sure if that's because he's still alive in a sense or if the ring's just best guessing how he'd behave and making the construct do that. But if this is a viable treatment, then I can remove the contamination matter from the bodies of everyone here, and then Mantis's colony, and then go looking for the source of the infection."
How about not assimilating the cells of an Old God, and just, you know, filtering them into a secure container? Then again, bringing them together may have bad results.

"What if we become reinfected?"

"Well, it should be possible for me to check your food sources. I already know that it's not in the air, so a few scans of your farms or hunting grounds should let me find it."
Logic would suggest that the point of emergence, if it's singular, would be equidistant between the Primitives and the Bugs. If there's multiple, you may have bigger issues.

"And the Old God?"

"Hopefully, it'll go back to sleep. Failing that, some sort of telepathic sleep-inducer?" I nod to the machine. "Ready?"
I doubt technology would so easily affect something called an Old God. Maybe divinely-empowered technology, but even then, it would be an uphill battle.

"Yes."

Two x-ionised cannulae pierce his arm, a small amount of cloned blood being added to the mix as blood flows out of his artery and through my filter. Detect the right particle… And… assimilate.
I still say assimilating it is a bad idea. Collect, fine, but what happens when the cell-constructs die and re-enter the Ring?

Identity theft in progress. One percent complete.

"Have you begun?"

"Yes. Ring, announce progress."
Surprised he can't feel a tickle, but the initial effect is minor.

Identity theft in progress. Two percent complete.

"
Are you feeling anything?"

Aarden frowns. "A pinch, but nothing else."
And that could easily be attributed to the unfamiliar medical device.

"Okay, good, let me know if you feel anything else."

Two clicks from Mantis. "I will go next."
Brave, but risky. They haven't even determined if this will work.

Ah…. I give him a quick scan, and there's appreciably less resistance than from Aarden. Shouldn't be any harder. "Alright, I think I can manage that. Though I can't completely guarantee that it will work in exactly the same way. Particularly given that your metaphysique is weaker than a New God's, so you'll be less able to resist if something goes wrong."
To some degree, filtering his blood would be easiest, as well as any non-vital cells that may be infected.

Identity theft in progress. Three percent complete.

Aarden looks curious. "Do the bugs have a connection to the Source?"
All living things should. I think what you mean is 'How strong is their connection?'

"I have no idea. Mantis has a stronger metaphysique than the average human, but anything else is outside of my area of expertise. If you need to know, I could call in an expert?"

"No, that won't be necessary. I had assumed-." He looks awkwardly at Mantis, who is quietly clicking to himself as he watches the blood purification process. "No, I suppose that was unfair."
Wonder if the Bugs have castes other than Forager and Warrior? Well, besides Queen and Consorts, obviously.

"What's unfair? I knew that the New Gods of Supertown don't like them, but I don't remember hearing why."

"Their forebears come from Apokolips. They were sent here as living weapons. For a long time our hunting parties worked together with warriors from Supertown to destroy them. But if one of them can stand here and not lash out at everyone then they must have gained some degree of restraint."
I'd say something about hunting sophont beings, but they are New Gods. It's likely they didn't even care that the Bugs are thinking beings. Especially if they've never had peaceful contact.

"Mantis?"

Three clicks this time. "I am not hungry."
Logical enough.

"That wasn't-." My ring flashes. "Excuse me." I hold my left hand up to my ear. "Orange Lantern, go ahead."

"Paul, we have a problem."
Ah, trouble in Supertown? Wonder what this could be...

"Hello Lantern Rrab. Is it a disease outbreak? Because I'm working on that."

"No, there is no disease. But the people here are going crazy! They're picking fights with each other over every little thing and they're laughing about it!"
Not lethal fights? Just... Punchy arguments? Sounds like Orion might be leaking a bit...

"Apparently, an Old God is stirring in its sleep. Down here that's having a knock on effect on people's physical health. Perhaps its affecting their minds up in Supertown?"

"That.. is possible. But how do I stop it?"
Yes, I don't see a rookie Lantern being able to do much here. Far above her figurative pay-grade.

"Have you tried a telepathy jammer, just in case?"

"Yes. It didn't work."
And she probably isn't proficient enough to directly infuse people with Green Light to maintain calm and focus. If that's even a thing.

"Then, try to stop them doing anything permanent, and when I deal with the Old God it should subside. I can-."

Identity theft in progress. Four percent complete.


The ground around us begins to shake!
Ah, sounds like you may have poked the proverbial sleeping bear, OL.

I'm guessing that's the Old God rolling in its sleep. Assimilating a few separate cells shouldn't do too much to the main body of it, unless sympathetic magical connections are in play. It'd be like someone feeling dander shedding, if anything... The trouble in Supertown could be related, or it could just be Orion's anger issues getting distributed to the others. Can't be sure, especially if they're laughing about the fights...
 
Thank you for the chapter.

I forgot how much I like Kirby's Fourth World stuff as it's this eclectic mix of jarring and charming. I always love seeing it being depicted in this story.
 
I wonder how magnificus, Nyssa, their isolated lab site, and the whole Sivanna family is doing
 
Oh for anyone curious- The history lesson in this latest chapter is the official story.

It's also a complete lie.

New Genesis made the Bugs as biological weapons against Apokalips but they escaped the labs and colonized the surface.

The Bugs are explosive breeders, the plan was for them to eat enough food that the New Gods of Apokalips would starve.

Such explosive breeders that the race survived multiple attempts at the New Gods of Hightown trying to genocide them.

The excuse given was that without culling the Bugs would consume all the resources of the surface and everything would die, which is apparently true enough, but really the attempts at genocide was about removing the evidence of Hightown's ruthlessness and lies.

Oh and I was wrong, by the by, it was canon before Bug! that Forager was a New God, it was mentioned in New Gods #3 that revealed the origins of the Bugs and introduced Forager 2. Amusingly, she was originally blue. "The first Forager was one of you New Gods adopted by us but I have chosen a successor I believe will bring honor to his legacy."

Another thing I didn't realize before- The Bugs were described as "hybrid god insects." So the Bugs apparently have New God DNA.

So if anyone wonders why space insects look pretty human, well the fact they are the result of splicing insect DNA into a humanoid base would make that a bit more understandable. Or splicing humanoid DNA into an insect, it wasn't specified,

In New Gods #3 Orion was trying to broker a treaty between Hightown and the Bugs. The Bugs would give soldiers in the fight against Apokalips, the Bugs in return would get their own land that Hightown would acknowledge is Bug legal sovereignty, and Hightown would have someone whip up a birth control method so the Bugs could control their growth.

Which would work for both sides, because the Bugs are smart enough to know that starving to death because you ate all the food is a thing worth avoiding.

Of course, how much this applies to this story we will have to wait and see.
 
Ripples (part 12) New
23rd July 2013
11:36 GMT


Construct seismograph says… It started to the south, towards the sea. I could try and get another bearing to narrow down the exact location of the hypocenter, but I'm… Filtering a man's blood here.

Identity theft in progress. Five percent complete.

"
Lantern Rrab, we just had an earthquake and I'm a little tied up. Could you please come to the surface for a moment and find out where it started?"

"Should I bring Troia with me?"

"
Use your judgement. There shouldn't be anyone who can easily hurt her up there-. And the blessing of Metis is custom designed to undo mental alterations."

"Right!"
Her face vanishes.

I-.

Her face reappears. "I forgot! Arisia out!"

And she vanishes again. Because Jordan's been trying to teach her communication discipline, even if it's a little obsoleted by power rings.

Identity theft in progress. Six percent complete.

I turn to Aarden. "Do you get a lot of earthquakes around here?"

"No. None. New Genesis is a garden world."

I nod. "Yes?"

"I mean, it was cultivated by our forebears to be as pleasant a place to live as possible. Its ecology and structure are artificial. It has next to no seismic activity. That shaking is more likely to have been an Apokoliptian attack than anything natural."

I suppose that Apokolips didn't just go on hold because we fought them off…

"I assume that Supertown will deal with it if it was."

"Normally, yes, but if they are… If something is twisting their minds, they may not do so."

My ring flickers as Arisia sends the first bearing. It's from the west of here.

"What sort of weapons do you have?"

"Our innate powers. Beyond that, simple bows and spears."

"Are Apokoliptian raids a regular thing?"

"Not large ones. I can kill dog soldiers well enough, and we know these forests well enough that those who cannot fight can disappear."

"But, ultimately, you're dependant on Supertown."

His eyes narrow slightly. "You… Don't like the way we live, do you?"

"I can see the disadvantages. But I'm not the one who has to live with them."

Identity theft in progress. Eight percent complete.


"How is it on your world?"

"We have all forms of life from remote hunter-gatherers even more primitive than you to post-industrial megalopolises. We don't have any true arcologies yet and it'll be a while before we can colonise other planetoids, but…" I raise my left ring slightly. "My masters have experience with literally every form of society that's ever existed, and trialled most of them themselves."

Arisia sends another bearing, this time from the east. Triangulating the times and intensity puts the most probable location… Right along the wall of the continental shelf. Based on the speed of the waves through the ground…

Whatever caused the quake happened exactly when.. I started-

I construct-grab everyone as another shake rocks the settlement.

-assimilating the cells inside Aarden's bloodstream.

"Okay, we might have a problem."

Aarden and Mantis both give me a funny look.

"Another problem. The earthquake started when I started assimilating, which means that the Old God might possibly-."

"Stop at once."

"Yeah." I dismiss the construct. "I thought you might say that. Ah. Okay, I'm going to go and check-." K'Zandr lives in a cave. "Check on K'Zandr, and then check on where that earthquake came from. I'm still not entirely sure what I'm going to do about the Old God, but I'll come up with something when I get there."

Aarden looks concerned. "That does not sound wise."

"'Something' might be 'hand the whole matter over to Highfather', so it's basically what you'd do. Don't worry: I don't intend to engage a high-end arcane life form unless absolutely essential, and so far a being in that class has only killed me once."

"You.. look well for a dead man."

"Thank you. You don't look bad for a terminally ill man." I pick up my purple healing ray. "Mantis."

He clicks… Once.

"I can give you this." I offer him the ray. "If you use it on members of your hive who are ill, it should fix their symptoms. Alternately, you can come with me so that you can report back what I've found."

"I will do both. Others have followed my pheromone trail. I will give the ray to them. Then I will go with you."

"Alright. We'll also be picking up a colleague of mine." I reach out, putting my right hand on his left shoulder and transition us to the edge of the Primitive's clearing. "Alright, how-?"

Mantis click-hisses, and a mound of earth bulges up in the ground. Mantis tosses the healing ray to it, and a green limb reaches out and grabs it. Mantis clicks twice. "Healing tool of the gods. Take to All-Widow."

The other insectoid waves, then the arm vanishes in a spray of earth.

Right, next thing. I transition us to K'Zandr's cave. "K'Zandr! Are you alright?!"

"Neither these stones nor these bones break easily. Get on with it!"

I nod, and transition Mantis and I to a cliff top overlooking the sea closest to where the earthquake originated.

"Orange Lantern to Arsenal. Are you alright?"

"Yeah, and I got some good news. Looks like I won't need you to build me a ship."

"Oh? Are you planning on staying?"

"No, I found one. Looks like it was made on Earth, too."

I study the water for a moment, but while it appears choppy it doesn't appear to be getting more choppy. In that case…

"I'll be with you in a moment."
 
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"Orange Lantern to Arsenal. Are you alright?"

"Yeah, and I got some good news. Looks like I won't need you to build me a ship."

"Oh? Are you planning on staying?"

"No, I found one. Looks like it was made on earth, too."

I study the water for a moment, but while it appears choppy it doesn't appear to be getting more choppy. In that case…

"I'll be with you in a moment."
Does anyone have any idea what Arsenal could be referring to?
 
23rd July 2013
11:36 GMT


Construct seismograph says… It started to the south, towards the sea. I could try and get another bearing to narrow down the exact location of the hypocenter, but I'm… Filtering a man's blood here.

Identity theft in progress. Five percent complete.
The water for sure, then. Probably the cells are spread throughout the local water table. I'm guessing OL will hand the source of the earthquakes off to someone else. One guess who...

"Lantern Rrab, we just had an earthquake and I'm a little tied up. Could you please come to the surface for a moment and find out where it started?"

"Should I bring Troia with me?"
Unless she has powers relating to the earth and stone, she'll probably be more use in Supertown breaking up fights.

"Use your judgement. There shouldn't be anyone who can easily hurt her up there-. And the blessing of Metis is custom designed to undo mental alterations."

"Right!"
Her face vanishes.
If Troia heard that, she'll be whipping out the lasso and throwing blessings like candy, I bet.

I-.

Her face reappears. "I forgot! Arisia out!"

And she vanishes again. Because Jordan's been trying to teach her communication discipline, even if it's a little obsoleted by power rings.
At least this way she can coordinate with human teams.

Identity theft in progress. Six percent complete.

I turn to Aarden. "Do you get a lot of earthquakes around here?"
I see he's continuing this foolish course. Not taking it as granted that the earthquakes started when he did.

"No. None. New Genesis is a garden world."

I nod. "Yes?"
And not in the 'Mass Effect' sense, either. It's a perfect planet, too perfect, outside of the roaming tribes...

"I mean, it was cultivated by our forebears to be as pleasant a place to live as possible. Its ecology and structure are artificial. It has next to no seismic activity. That shaking is more likely to have been an Apokoliptian attack than anything natural."

I suppose that Apokolips didn't just go on hold because we fought them off…
A garden in the truest sense, then. With a few weeds here and there, but ultimately shaped and cultivated by the New Gods.

"I assume that Supertown will deal with it if it was."

"Normally, yes, but if they are… If something is twisting their minds, they may not do so."
Hoo boy. And if it is Orion getting a bit wild, letting out the Red Light... That's on OL too.

My ring flickers as Arisia sends the first bearing. It's from the west of here.

"What sort of weapons do you have?"

"Our innate powers. Beyond that, simple bows and spears."
Nothing they can't craft themselves, then. So wood, flint and simple metals. Not going to do too much against an Old God, even in their empowering hands.

"Are Apokoliptian raids a regular thing?"

"Not large ones. I can kill dog soldiers well enough, and we know these forests well enough that those who cannot fight can disappear."
Mere skirmishes, eh? Probing attacks of annoyance not really meant to do more than keep a conflict rolling along.

"But, ultimately, you're dependant on Supertown."

His eyes narrow slightly. "You… Don't like the way we live, do you?"
He's made that abundantly clear just by his attitude, if they have any empathic sense.

"I can see the disadvantages. But I'm not the one who has to live with them."

Identity theft in progress. Eight percent complete.


"How is it on your world?"
I mean, it works for them just fine. If they're happy, they're happy. It's only his own feelings on it that make him so grumpy at them...

"We have all forms of life from remote hunter-gatherers even more primitive than you to post-industrial megalopolises. We don't have any true arcologies yet and it'll be a while before we can colonise other planetoids, but…" I raise my left ring slightly. "My masters have experience with literally every form of society that's ever existed, and trialled most of them themselves."
The joy of the Maltusians literally doing it all on their way up the tech trees.

Arisia sends another bearing, this time from the east. Triangulating the times and intensity puts the most probable location… Right along the wall of the continental shelf. Based on the speed of the waves through the ground…

Whatever caused the quake happened exactly when.. I started-
Ah, light dawns. Perhaps trying to destroy the cells of an Old God the way he was...

I construct-grab everyone as another shake rocks the settlement.

-assimilating the cells inside Aarden's bloodstream.
...Wasn't the best idea he's ever had.

"Okay, we might have a problem."

Aarden and Mantis both give me a funny look.
Don't worry, gents, everyone feels that way around him after a while.

"Another problem. The earthquake started when I started assimilating, which means that the Old God might possibly-."

"Stop at once."
On the upside, stopping now will let him actually go and do something about the trouble he's started.

"Yeah." I dismiss the construct. "I thought you might say that. Ah. Okay, I'm going to go and check-." K'Zandr lives in a cave. "Check on K'Zandr, and then check on where that earthquake came from. I'm still not entirely sure what I'm going to do about the Old God, but I'll come up with something when I get there."
I'm sure her place of power is sturdier than a mere brat of an Old God rolling in his sleep. Still, to be nice...

Aarden looks concerned. "That does not sound wise."

"'Something' might be 'hand the whole matter over to Highfather', so it's basically what you'd do. Don't worry: I don't intend to engage a high-end arcane life form unless absolutely essential, and so far a being in that class has only killed me once."
Honestly, once is probably one time too many for most people. Not that most get a chance to get better from it.

"You.. look well for a dead man."

"Thank you. You don't look bad for a terminally ill man." I pick up my purple healing ray. "Mantis."
Ah, trading barbs about death. Benefit of being very hard to keep dead.

He clicks… Once.

"I can give you this." I offer him the ray. "If you use it on members of your hive who are ill, it should fix their symptoms. Alternately, you can come with me so that you can report back what I've found."
Good, that'll help the Bugs. Honestly, surprised he doesn't have multiple stowed to dole out. Unless he's being very cagey about doing so. No telling what they could end up doing with it.

"I will do both. Others have followed by pheromone trail. I will give the ray to them. Then I will go with you."

"Alright. We'll also be picking up a colleague of mine." I reach out, putting my right hand on his left shoulder and transition us to the edge of the Primitive's clearing. "Alright, how-?"
Because of course he's not alone. No doubt he left a pheromonal 'hold here' trace when he met OL.

Mantis click-hisses, and a mound of earth bulges up in the ground. Mantis tosses the the healing ray to it, and green limb reaches out and grabs it. Mantis clicks twice. "Healing tool of the gods. Take to All-Widow."

The other insectoid clicks twice back and then turns tail and runs.
At least it'll be in good hands while Mantis gets to be a superhero for a bit.

Right, next thing. I transition us to K'Zandr's cave. "K'Zandr! Are you alright?!"

"Neither these stones nor these bones break easily. Get on with it!"
Well, that was pretty likely. She's probably endured worse rattles over the years, minimal seismic activity or not.

I nod, and transition Mantis and I to a cliff top overlooking the sea closest to where the earthquake originated.

"Orange Lantern to Arsenal. Are you alright?"
Presumably Roy's still hanging around the Primitive village, keeping people healthy.

"Yeah, and I got some good news. Looks like I won't need you to build me a ship."

"Oh? Are you planning on staying?"
Eh? Now what could Roy have found out there?

"No, I found one. Looks like it was made on earth, too."

I study the water for a moment, but while it appears choppy it doesn't appear to be getting more choppy. In that case…

"I'll be with you in a moment."
...That's quite interesting. And deeply unsettling. Annoyingly, it appears to have distracted OL, though...

Well, this is a mystery indeed. An annoying mystery that seems to have distracted OL at a vital moment. Then again, it may prove to be a key clue to the puzzle, and poking around an Old God's possible resting place is unlikely to improve matters. Especially if he manages to wake it up. At this point, calling on Highfather might be a good plan before they go poking anything.
 
Mantis click-hisses, and a mound of earth bulges up in the ground. Mantis tosses the the healing ray to it, and green limb reaches out and grabs it. Mantis clicks twice. "Healing tool of the gods. Take to All-Widow."
Extraneous 'the'
'a green'
"No, I found one. Looks like it was made on earth, too."
'Earth'

Is this from long ago, or was the vision about Oh El's Life wave having consequences somewhat more metaphorical than it seemed? Though if it was more metaphorical, there aren't many humans who could come here in that timeframe. Only the Sivanas come to mind, though there's always the possibility of some random guy on Earth having a very good FTL drive for some reason. Hopefully someone who has read the relevant comics has more of a clue.
 
Ripples (supplementary, Renegade option) New
23rd July 2013
18:40 GMT -7

I look up at the cup of arcane force that's been placed over my head for a moment, and then look down at my captor.

"Your Highness! How can I help?"

Shining Armour trots a few paces closer, his guards forming a perimeter around us. "You can tell me what you said to my sister."

"Your highly strung, highly neurotic sister."

"Yes."

There are a lot of things I could say, like he must know her well enough to know that this is just something she does from time to time. Like the time she set up a closed temporal loop because she set up a closed temporal loop.

Boom boom.

"I pointed out that she never technically graduated."

He winces. "Oh no."

I raise my forehooves. "Look, I know that threw her into a loop, but she was already talking about setting up her own school when I got there so the crazy juices had clearly already started flowing."

He looks puzzled. "A.. school?"

"Teaching friendship. So perhaps 'seminary' is a better descriptor?" I reach out with my right forehoof and tap the barrier. "Would you mind?"

He regards me levelly. "My sister has been teleporting cross-country non-stop since she spoke to you."

I nod. "Have you considered ketamine? I have drones preloaded with it."

"I'm not drugging my sister. She'll calm down. We just need to give her some space."

"R.. ight, but teleporting while exhausted sounds like something that could go very wrong, so maybe we should dart her for her own good?"

He looks down as he considers it. "Is the dosage safe?"

"She's an alicorn, so it's hard to know what the correct dose is, but by default it's enough to rapidly knock out a regular pony. We can increase it if that doesn't work."

"And it's not addictive?"

"None of the other ponies I've darted have come back for more, so I think we're okay with a single dose." I regard him curiously. "This can't be the first time she's done something like this."

He looks mulish for a moment, then shakes his head. "It's not, but it is the first time she's done this since she became an alicorn."

I nod. "And got earth pony endurance and an increase mana reserve, right. She isn't going to wear herself out."

"Not quickly." His horn glows as he dismisses the bubble around me. "Okay, send your.. drones."

Update target priorities.

Done, Lantern Grayven. I'll let you know when she's recumbent.

Thank you, Sinestro.

I nod to Shining Armour, who sighs. "Thanks. Why are you in the Crystal Empire?"

"Did you meet Starlight Glimmer when you were in Canterlot?"

"No…" He frowns thoughtfully. "Wait, isn't she the pony who thinks that special talents are evil?"

"It's a little more complicated than that, but basically yes. Well, she's having a bit of trouble with her research and wants to hire an assistant and it turns out that one of her old friends is living up here. Apparently, that's the dynamic they used to have in the orphanage where they grew up. I offered to go with her, she wanted some space…"

I shrug.

"Thought I'd go for a walk while the two of them caught up." I look around. "Nice place you've got here. Very… Shiny. Suits you."

That gets an eye roll, but he's a little less tense than he was.

"I didn't ever thank you for dealing with Queen Chrysalis. Cadence and I have both been sleeping easier knowing that she's never going to threaten us again."

"Not a problem. Happy to help. What do you think about the changes in the guard training regimen?"

"You mean, the way Tempest Shadow threw out everything I ever did and completely replaced it?"

"Yes." I nod. "That."

"Ah… Well, she has a point about Equestria not having fought a conventional war for centuries. I mostly oversaw guards being trained for what they actually do, and we didn't have a weapon development department. Having seen what she's been able to do, and… Having read the reports the other officers wrote after the Changeling Invasion… I.. probably should have looked for someone like her to help us improve the moment I got promoted to 'Captain'."

I nod. "It would have been a start."

"Hey, don't sugar coat it for me."

"No, I don't-. The Invasion would have been an inciting incident. If you'd stayed on as captain then you'd probably have started fixing the problems I identified. I can't blame you for not having my experience of warfare, and I'm sure that your efforts here have been better."

He nods. "Mine, and the mercenaries I hired. The yetis like the weather, and the Dream Valley ponies are fitting in surprisingly well."

I nod. I'd say that he'd do as a mid-level officer. If it came to a war I'd back Tempest Shadow over him for command authority, but he seems to be a good deal more competent than the fools who replaced him. "How's Cadence doing?"

"She's taking it easy. We just found out that she's expecting."

Ah… Might be a problem if the foal isn't an alicorn… Plus, I doubt that Equestrian obstetrics are much more advanced than their general level of technology…

"Want me to take a look? I've got access to medical technology centuries ahead of anything on Equestria, and it'll be good practice for me."

"Practice? Oh, are you and Princess Luna trying for a foal?"

"Not yet, but we will once we're married. And while I'm familiar with human pregnancy, there are probably a lot of issues specific to equines that I have no experience with. And…"

Ah, I shouldn't-.

"And-?" He understand the implication. "They might be an alicorn."

"Or they might not be. It's an issue either way. Of course, they might be a pegasus pony like their mother started as, or a unicorn like you."

He nods solemnly. "I guess it's better to know."

I nod. "Mother Box, hush tube to the palace, please."

Ping.

The aperture opens with barely a whisper, and I trot on through. Shining Armour follows a moment later, then stands aside to count his escort back home before dismissing them.

"Okay, lead the way-."

Poof!

"SHININGINEEDACHARACTERREF-."

Psh!

The stealth drone delivers its load directly into her neck. The dart hits home, then glows for a moment as she pulls it out.

"Huh. That's interest-."

Psh.

The second one hits her in the torso, and her eyes roll back into her head as she falls to the floor.
 
23rd July 2013
18:40 GMT -7


I look up at the cup of arcane force that's been placed over my head for a moment, and then look down at my captor.

"Your Highness! How can I help?"

Shining Armour trots a few paces closer, his guards forming a perimeter around us. "You can tell me what you said to my sister."
Heh. Clearly Shiney heard something was afoot with Twilight. I'm guessing she's been spotted here and there in town during her mad teleportation marathon. And I get the feeling he's not happy about it.

"Your highly strung, highly neurotic sister."

"Yes."
Surely he's well aware that anything could set her off. Though given the Renegade is lurking around, it's an easy guess to make that he's somehow responsible...

There are a lot of things I could say, like he must know her well enough to know that this is just something she does from time to time. Like the time she set up a closed temporal loop because she set up a closed temporal loop.

Boom boom.
Hey, in that case, not completing the loop could well have had dire consequences. Not sure what, but she's smart enough not to take the chance.

"I pointed out that she never technically graduated."

He winces. "Oh no."
Yeah, even he knows that's bad. It wasn't technically you pointing it out, just leading her to realise... Ah, what's done is done, and now they have a panicking Alicorn to deal with.

I raise my forehooves. "Look, I know that threw her into a loop, but she was already talking about setting up her own school when I got there so the crazy juices had clearly already started flowing."

He looks puzzled. "A.. school?"
Nice to see that threw him for a bit of a loop.

"Teaching friendship. So perhaps 'seminary' is a better descriptor?" I reach out with my right forehoof and tap the barrier. "Would you mind?"

He regards me levelly. "My sister has been teleporting cross-country non-stop since she spoke to you."
But do you really want to suffer the feedback if he has to break the shield? Or force the bluff and see if you can crush his head?

I nod. "Have you considered ketamine? I have drones preloaded with it."

"I'm not drugging my sister. She'll calm down. We just need to give her some space."
She's got plenty of space, and seems to be trying to occupy every bit of it simultaneously. 😏

"R.. ight, but teleporting while exhausted sounds like something that could go very wrong, so maybe we should dart her for her own good?"

He looks down as he considers it. "Is the dosage safe?"
Even with an Alicorn's stamina, she's got to get tired sooner or later, and that's when the errors can creep in. Don't really want to take the risk she 'disappears' after teleporting inside a rock or something.

"She's an alicorn, so it's hard to know what the correct dose is, but by default it's enough to rapidly knock out a regular pony. We can increase it if that doesn't work."

"And it's not addictive?"
Then she gets to relax a bit every now and then when she gets cravings?

"None of the other ponies I've darted have come back for more, so I think we're okay with a single dose." I regard him curiously. "This can't be the first time she's done something like this."

He looks mulish for a moment, then shakes his head. "It's not, but it is the first time she's done this since she became an alicorn."
She has had less-controlled teleporting spasms before, mostly when she was 'carrying' the other Alicorns' magic during the Tirek affair. And even then she got control of herself pretty quickly.

I nod. "And got earth pony endurance and an increase mana reserve, right. She isn't going to wear herself out."

"Not quickly." His horn glows as he dismisses the bubble around me. "Okay, send your.. drones."
In other words, it could be days yet of her being here, there and everywhere. Good plan...

Update target priorities.

Done, Lantern Grayven. I'll let you know when she's recumbent.

Thank you, Sinestro.
Hopefully it doesn't take long, given how far and wide she's been roaming.

I nod to Shining Armour, who sighs. "Thanks. Why are you in the Crystal Empire?"

"Did you meet Starlight Glimmer when you were in Canterlot?"

"No…" He frowns thoughtfully. "Wait, isn't she the pony who thinks that special talents are evil?"
That's going to be hanging over her head for a while, isn't it?

"It's a little more complicated than that, but basically yes. Well, she's having a bit of trouble with her research and wants to hire an assistant and it turns out that one of her old friends is living up here. Apparently, that's the dynamic they used to have in the orphanage where they grew up. I offered to go with her, she wanted some space…"
Slightly adversarial these days, with a high likelihood of romance at some point when the tension rises too high? Or just her being 'I fluffed up, and I'm... S-uh... S-uhhh...' kind of tongue-tied.

I shrug.

"Thought I'd go for a walk while the two of them caught up." I look around. "Nice place you've got here. Very… Shiny. Suits you."
Hopefully they're not making too much noise, one way or the other. 😏

That gets an eye roll, but he's a little less tense than he was.

"I didn't ever thank you for dealing with Queen Chrysalis. Cadence and I have both been sleeping easier knowing that she's never going to threaten us again."
Dealing quite permanently, if I remember right. I guess the remaining Changelings have been keeping themselves in polite, neighbourly order.

"Not a problem. Happy to help. What do you think about the changes in the guard training regimen?"

"You mean, the way Tempest Shadow threw out everything I ever did and completely replaced it?"

"Yes." I nod. "That."
That's got to sting a bit, but he was never really a war leader, after all.

"Ah… Well, she has a point about Equestria not having fought a conventional war for centuries. I mostly oversaw guards being trained for what they actually do, and we didn't have a weapon development department. Having seen what she's been able to do, and… Having read the reports the other officers wrote after the Changeling Invasion… I.. probably should have looked for someone like her to help us improve the moment I got promoted to 'Captain'."
At least he can see his mistakes, accept them and hopefully learn from them.

I nod. "It would have been a start."

"Hey, don't sugar coat it for me."
It might go down smoother that way, though. Still, bitter medicine is often more effective.

"No, I don't-. The Invasion would have been an inciting incident. If you'd stayed on as captain then you'd probably have started fixing the problems I identified. I can't blame you for not having my experience of warfare, and I'm sure that your efforts here have been better."
I hope so, given the Crystal Empire has to stand on its own hooves out here, alliance with Equestria or not.

He nods. "Mine, and the mercenaries I hired. The yetis like the weather, and the Dream Valley ponies are fitting in surprisingly well."

I nod. I'd say that he'd do as a mid-level officer. If it came to a war I'd back Tempest Shadow over him for command authority, but he seems to be a good deal more competent than the fools who replaced him. "How's Cadence doing?"
Not a General Failure, but not a total success either. Kind of what you'd expect of someone who'd never been in anything more violent than a playground tussle until his wedding day.

"She's taking it easy. We just found out that she's expecting."

Ah… Might be a problem if the foal isn't an alicorn… Plus, I doubt that Equestrian obstetrics are much more advanced than their general level of technology…
If canon plays out, then yes, the foal will be quite the handful.

"Want me to take a look? I've got access to medical technology centuries ahead of anything on Equestria, and it'll be good practice for me."

"Practice? Oh, are you and Princess Luna trying for a foal?"
Oh, that will be even more of a handful one day.

"Not yet, but we will once we're married. And while I'm familiar with human pregnancy, there are probably a lot of issues specific to equines that I have no experience with. And…"

Ah, I shouldn't-.
Bit of metaknowledge showing awkwardly for once, perhaps? Been a while since he had to hold any back, though. or it could be a reasonable guess, based on New God reproduction... 🤔

"And-?" He understand the implication. "They might be an alicorn."

"Or they might not be. It's an issue either way. Of course, they might be a pegasus pony like their mother started as, or a unicorn like you."
If they were mundane, they'd likely be more likely to ascend by accident, though. Or suffer horrible inferiority complexes because they aren't as 'powerful' as their mother...

He nods solemnly. "I guess it's better to know."

I nod. "Mother Box, hush tube to the palace, please."

Ping.
"Certainly, Grayven. Best not to disturb the peace and quiet with the usual tube..." No time like the present, of course.

The aperture opens with barely a whisper, and I trot on through. Shining Armour follows a moment later, then stands aside to count his escort back home before dismissing them.

"Okay, lead the way-."
Sensible. I bet they appreciate the quick trip back to base.

Poof!

"SHININGINEEDACHARACTERREF-."
Ack, flashbanged by a panicked Alicorn!

Psh!

The stealth drone delivers its load directly into her neck. The dart hits home, then glows for a moment as she pulls it out.

"Huh. That's interest-."
...Ooh, that's a worry. Hopefully one dart would serve to calm her down a little, if nothing else...

Psh.

The second one hits her in the torso, and her eyes roll back into her head as she falls to the floor.
...Okay, better to have her safely out, and probably enjoying some quirky dreams while she's there.

Well, at least she's no longer zooming around the country like a headless chicken. Best to get her wrapped up in bed with calming things around her, perhaps with Cadance at hand to help contain her when she awakes. Maybe finding out she's soon to be an auntie will distract her from her scholastic issues... And more likely make her stress about being a good auntie. 😄
 
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Nice to see that threw him for a bit of a loop.

While I did enjoy the Student/Young Six, yeah, the School of Friendship was kinda dumb.

... For some reason, I'm now imagining Gallus becoming Grayven's newest ward.

Dealing quite permanently, if I remember right. I guess the remaining Changelings have been keeping themselves in polite, neighbourly order.

Pharynx is the only one I can imagine trying to lead a revenge plot. Though with Flurry Heart's nearing due date, it might not be long until Thorax gets drawn to the Crystal Empire.

Bit of metaknowledge showing awkwardly for once. Been a while since he had to hold any back, though.

I thought his metaknowledge was limited to pre-S4; hence him not knowing the Elements were back in the Tree of Harmony.
 
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