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What's Junk? (The Mech Touch)

M092 New
Lilly was off in space now, making connections and traveling to Cold Grave again. Bolt did not anticipate there being issues. The plan was mostly to go in and check a few things before returning. Minimal risk. Not no risk, but they'd identified most of the major threats on their first run. Two things killed you in salvaging, complacency and the unknown. Neither applied to that expedition.

He wanted to have one thing done before she returned. That would be the rifleman of their group. It was actually relatively good to do it now, his joint patent with Little Big Light had resulted in them sharing more than a few improvements with him. Morning Star's wings had been custom expert designed products. Creating a variation more suited for mass production had been relatively easy for the company once they'd gotten the blueprints.

The now dubbed Feather Chainmail component was both less finicky to repair and a bit less expensive. Not substantially mind you, but it wouldn't be the most expensive component on the mech now, provided he was careful with the design. Which he planned on being.

Designing the system was harder than designing it in the dream. Bolt had known that going in. The wing was naturally the point of pride. It was a essentially a quick deploy shield. With some clever work it could be fully deployed while the mech was firing, giving them a basically one-time block of something big or partial cover against return fire for a short time. That would be invaluable against most enemies.

After this came the weapons. Bolt kept with a laser rifle as the primary weapon despite the local circumstances. The next generation of MTA approved parts would be in a few years, and while the Sandmen were absolutely dangerous, the next generation stuff would all be lasers. Using one of Little Big Light's lasers would mean that when the next generation came about he'd just have to do a few part switches rather than completely revise the design. Bolt anticipated problems with locals more than sandmen as well. It'd be relatively trivial to switch out the weapon if needed anyway.

One laser rifle, medium range, moderate firepower. Basically a middle of the road rifle with few strengths but few weaknesses as well. He probably could tweak it, but he wanted to finalize most of the other things first.

Armor was relatively solid, generator also middle of the line. Really, all of the mech was going to be dead average, which was amusing enough that Bolt deliberately tried to tweak all of the specifications for it. This was harder than it sounded, because there was always a bit of variation, but making a mech dead average all across the board was a strength in itself.

This was going to be an allrounder mech. Which meant you could basically place it in any sort of team and it would add value. Alone, together, with other types and with itself. The backup shotgun on the no-wing side also helped round it all out. This mech would have an answer for anything a person could throw at it.

Of course the mix of projectile and laser rifle demanded some very careful work to be done on the arms. This was actually very tricky. Lasers needed careful precision. Ballistics typically had to deal with the recoil. Their needs had just enough overlap to make it possible rather than impossible. It just required that Bolt sacrifice some accuracy at longer ranges, which was acceptable. Riflemen like this tended to be more workhorse medium range fighters than anything else.

The hands at least didn't need much work. Just a precise trigger finger, a good grip on the trigger hand, and a firm grip on the off hand. Nothing like a melee mech. You could add more, but that added complexity and difficulty in manufacturing. One big thing about design was deciding where you could keep things simple and generic and where you couldn't.

Now all of this taken together made the mech in question average across the board. No part of it stood out statistically aside from the wing. That gave it more durability than your standard rifleman. It wasn't a killer feature though. Bolt could already tell it the mech would be considered a bit of a novelty rather than anything else. A bit too expensive for people who just wanted a rifleman and too generalist for more niche lines. You couldn't even use them as padding since the expense was just a bit higher than a standard rifleman. That wing was costly and he wasn't sure if the added value was worth it.

Bolt was nominally ok with that. He didn't want to release a failure of a mech, but this was supposed to be an internal workhorse. He also wanted to do something special with the spiritual side. That part wasn't visible and wouldn't show up on the specifications.

Before all of that the mech needed a name and a theme. This was the Wounded Angel. The base design brought to mind the older veterans and how they felt more than how they looked. This mech felt like one that had fought so long the battlefield was a second home. In light of that Bolt gave it a few cosmetic colorations that made it look scarred and adjusted the frame here and there to make it look like a grizzled old war veteran of a mech.

Then he made a little figure of it and sort of linked it spiritually with the blueprint. Bolt's examination of Ves' work had given him a lot of things to think about. This was the result of some of that thinking. The other designer had made a sort of central node, the spirit, for most of his mechs. This enforced the spiritual power once the 'scaffolding' was made so to speak. The Wounded Angel was going to have something similar using this.

To use an analogy, Ves made a central server and updated his mechs with it. Bolt was going to make a master copy and have his mechs copied from that. There were pluses and minuses to each approach. It fit Bolt's style better because he was all about refining things in a cycle. The Heart System allowed a mech to improve itself over time. This new mech would be the first one to really lean on that system if he did it right.

It wasn't finished naturally. Bolt strode out of his office and down to the more general areas. The 'local bar' so to speak was a bit more centrally located. It was technically just a mess hall with alcohol, but was really just the local bar.

In there were a few old vets drinking and talking shit with one another. They barely looked up as Bolt entered the room, and only paid him any attention when he set the figure down on their table. They looked at it and then at him. Eventually one of them spoke.

"Gussin' that's a new mech?" He asked. "Ain't sure why yer bothering us with the little toy."

"It's going to be a rifleman." Bolt gestured to the rifle it was handling. "Ya'll remember that ghost shit at Cold Grave?"

"Wasn't there, but everyone's talking about it. Bit funny that we were all told that it was specifically alien stuff that you countered with psi-on-ics." The man drawled out and gave the young designer a look. "Ain't gonna dispute that, but still funny."

"The MTA has opinions." Bolt said simply. "But this is sort of more psionics. Mind grabbing this and focusing on a few battles?" He wiggled the figure on the table with one hand. "I'm doing something special with it. Will foot the bill fer a few drinks so indulge me."

Bolt was quite aware that if he hadn't been practically holding up the mountain on his shoulders the old vets wouldn't have bothered, or they would have just humored him and not actually done it. Instead one by one they grabbed the figure and focused. To help them focus they started talking about it, and then, since the drinks continued to flow they continued talking. More than a few of the stories were ones Bolt hadn't heard before. These were old veterans, some of them had been actual military before being stranded on the planet. They had so many stories.

The day passed and the night came, and more veterans came by and got in on the free drinks in exchange for stories. The designer was more than fine with it. He could almost see the figure absorbing the atmosphere, the memories. It was exactly what he wanted. It was exactly what he needed for this to work right.

He left once everything started to wind down, little figure in hand. He had what he needed and he needed to do the last step. That required one Crystal Heart and some focus. He mirrored the two to one another and then slotted the Heart into a reader with crossed fingers. He was almost sure he did everything right, but as another designer had said, the proof was in activation.

Slowly the designer began to grin as lines started to scroll down his screen. There, in front of him, was the data that a spiritual mech would have if made. As if the mech had been built already. He'd taken another step forward. He had figured out a way to create a master copy. Now all that remained to be seen was if that copy could be used.
 
It's going to be a seriously weird mech, for green pilots. Should learn fast, I'd say.
So many comments about "the damn Mech's grumbling over my shoulder about what I'm doing and nudging me so I do it right, it's like my bloody uncle's with me in the Mech!"
 
So many comments about "the damn Mech's grumbling over my shoulder about what I'm doing and nudging me so I do it right, it's like my bloody uncle's with me in the Mech!"
Newbies are going to feel like they're being scolded by a grumpy grandfather over every little thing they do, be it walking through terrain ("Mechs are made ta walk on their feet, not their damn toes. Stand up straight!"), shooting ("Good, good, good, now stop there so- Oh there you go you screwed it up again."), or just standing around ("It's called sentry duty, not naptime! You ain't got the skill to daydream, so how about you keep doing your job till you do.").

And then on the other hand, all the vets are going to feel far too smug and vindicated when in theirs, as they'll have someone in their cockpit constantly mocking the basic errors that both their opponents and their allies make ("Stupid kid's gonna get his head rattled if he keeps swinging like that. Aaaaaand yep there he goes. Yeah, I know. What? Oh damn you're right, they're both morons! Heh. Come on then, let's save their sorry hides...").
 
I016 New
"Another wunder-kid design?" One of the techs asked as the blueprint came down.

Crane gave a grunt and then a stern glance at the tech. "You got a problem with that?" He asked quietly.

"Depends, we gotta think special again?" The man replied with a cheeky grin. "Rainbows and unicorns this time?"

The foreman gave another grunt as he looked over the instructions. "Nope. Just gotta get yer head in the game this time. This is another experiment."

He didn't complaints from that, but the man probably wanted to based on the face he made. Crane could sympathize some. Your typical assembly was already pretty stressful and required a lot of focus if you wanted to get the job done fast without injury. Changing up something every time was mentally painful, if not physically dangerous. Yet at the same time Crane understood why the golden child was changing things. He was visibly feeling things out and trying to improve every single thing. Crane was willing to cut him some slack, especially because the kid was practically begging for input and feedback after every build. The whole 'psionic' thing had a lot of potential, but it was obviously very finicky too. (Crane actually kind of liked that. It felt like job security.)

This one was another one where the kid was deliberately keeping away from assembly. The instructions were pretty simple too. Just create the mech as normal but install the Heart System with a pre-programmed crystal early. That alone gave people a bit of motivation. No fancy focuses or thinking. Just the job.

"Get the music going!" Someone called out and things began.

A jaunty tune began to play on low volume as people began to move. Creating a mech as a team was far different than doing so as a singular person. This was doubly true for a production line. Every second the printer was not running was wasted money. Every minute a tool was not being used was again wasted money.

This was a first run of a mech though, so that was waved a bit. Instead they documented things and moved at almost half speed, looking for stop points that would make a production run stall. Skeleton wasn't special, so that went up first. Five people hauled up the plates and affixed the joints while the rest did the other production. Next was wiring, and the Heart System early.

"Huh." One of their code readers made a noise as he looked over the input from the cockpit area. "Already has some juice!" He called out and blinked as a number shifted. "Hah, that changed it too!"

"We already knew that numbskull!" Someone called out. "Line it to a terminal and get outta the way!"

"Screw you!" The tech made a rude gesture as he moved off with a small cable in hand.

"Damned wings are still a pain in the ass!" Someone else called out.

"Better than our Pima Dona!"

"Lovely girl, never doubt that, but the wings make me cry every time they come back broken."

"These will still make you cry like a baby, but that's cause you're a whimp!"

"Bastard!" Laughter followed.

A few minutes later, the wing was wheeled in fully assembled by a few people and hoisted up. Things were noted and the part was inspected. A few laser pointers were used to double check that certain relay points worked, and then they routed some power. It flexed and they checked it again.

"They're easier to make, but yeah, ain't gonna be a quick thing to remake." The tech that made them said with a shake of his head. "Think it's worth the cover?"

"Ratings say maybe. Need input from the pilot." One of the men who checked numbers said. "Wonderboy didn't use special armor for this, so it's not really a defense monster."

"Eh, not all of em have ta be snowflakes, and armor specials are usually hell. Least you can pre-make the wing."

"Chatter people!" Crane called out and several people jumped. He strode over to the tech watching the code. "Finding something?"

"You can actually see when someone's got something going on in their head." The tech pointed to a few numbers. "See that?"

"I see data." The elder man replied.

"We got a cascading change when the wing got attached and another one when one of the techs put in the wires. It's not even close to what we have as the master blueprint though." The man brought up another screen.

Crane couldn't make heads or tails of it, but that was why the man was their code reader and not him. Instead he turned his attention to the others. They already had a list. The physical blueprints had notations here and there where things could use some work, and what would need to be sent back to Bolt. Credit to the young man, the latter was pretty small. He was getting better all the time. The first Ghoul production run had required they scrap the first ones off the line and redo half the documentation for fabrication. (Bolt's construction methods were more than a little insane to follow if you weren't practically elite.)

"Muscles are on. Head, fingers, and toes wiggle!" Came the call.

"Armor next. Anchor points ready?" Slabs of armor were rolled up.

"Someone change the song, it's driving me mad!"

"We're not doing rock this you philistene!"

"Quite using words you don't mean you neanderthal!"

The armor plates were hoisted up and then placed into loading arms. Automated power tools began the process of welding and bolting it into place. Unprompted the techs began to do the cleanup necessary for the bay to be reused. Crane watched it with a critical eye and turned back to the guy monitoring the code.

"No good." The tech muttered. "Comparison says fifty percent. I think the special sauce is at a good level, but it's all jumbled."

"It's not finished yet." The foreman pointed out but felt a small sinking feeling.

Not finished yet didn't mean there was a lot left to do. Right now it looked like a failure, which likely meant more experiments to try to get things right and that they'd need to scrap this run. That was always painful.

The code reader looked back at him and didn't say anything, but he was obviously feeling the same way. Cable gave a snort and looked away. He'd read what that Ves Larkinson had required from his techs. It had been almost like a cult, and he'd wanted nothing to do with it. Yet it had resulted in mechs that performed beyond their technical specs. Bolt was chasing that, and the foreman was unsure how he could both help and keep his workers sane.

"Last bit!" Someone called out.

"Boss man, getting the paint and powder ready." One of the line leads said as he moved up and then frowned at the face. "Ya look like we missed a weld."

"That whole psionics thing is coming up again. Gotta get things aligned mentally." Crane muttered. "Was hoping that our kid figured out something with that Heart, but it doesn't look it." He sighed. "Only thing we can do is finish it."

The line lead gave him a look before shrugging. "Can't say I know the fancy stuff, but I don't see why we can't just do some o' that aligning stuff now. Hey pick out a new song! We need one that fits the mech for the last bit!" He called out.

The nearest tech made a rude gesture but turned to the controls and began to fiddle with them. The serious face he made was actually a little comical, but he did seem to be trying his best. A few songs started up and got booed or catcalled as people gave their input. Then they hit an older and almost melancholy one about war.

It got a few laughs, but everyone agreed it fit the new mech. On the lineman's urging they all got up and did a bit of the paint with a paint gun instead of leaving it to the automated systems. They even added a painted scar to one of the eyes.

Something seemed to click then. It wasn't something visible. It was just a click. There was not another word to describe it. There was just a moment where it was a mech and then it wasn't just a mech. It was a mech and something else. Everyone felt it.

"Oh, that did it!" The code-tech's cheerful words broke the spell.

Crane cleared his throat. "Activation checks people! We ain't finished yet!" He ordered.

With a jump everyone stared to do that. The mech wasn't perfect. He was flawed like all first production mechs were. They had to refine the process. Yet they felt like they had the hints of a proper system for the future. This was something they easily train people with. Crane could pick up a young wanna-be and turn him into someone that could do something similar quickly and easily. It was a process that wasn't cult indoctrination.

It wasn't completely automated mass production. It felt better. More human. And something that was definitely a Wrench Rat special.
 
On an unrelated note, does Bolt still have 'refine the accidentally-experted nanite system' on his docket? I reckon he could revisit the vampire idea, but instead of flying knives thing do a fast swordsman that deploys deconstructor and harvester nanites through the blade. Fancy midnight aristocrat type with a blood-drinking sword. Deconstructors would suck up energy and mindlessly render whatever they touch into powdered base materials till they run out of juice, so they could be used mid-fight as a mech poison of sorts. Then once there's an opportunity, harvesters would grab the powders and feed them into a full body circulatory system that'd give the mech healing factor like Dowry ended up with.

Between that an a laser rifleman or artillery Lich (once the next tech update is out) it'd keep the undead series going.
 
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A few songs started up and got booed or catcalled as people gave their input. Then they hit an older and almost melancholy one about war.

It got a few laughs, but everyone agreed it fit the new mech. On the lineman's urging they all got up and did a bit of the paint with a paint gun instead of leaving it to the automated systems. They even added a painted scar to one of the eyes.

Something seemed to click then.
It's going to turn out that there are 3 major requirements to get this mech to work.

1. A bunch of gruff manly men being men must be part of the construction process.

2. It needs to have visible scars that look cool, mainly the one across its eye. Different kinds of scar designs help improve group cohesion with multiple Angels over a group with just a single design.

3. Old war music must be played, the more either melancholic or patriotic it is the better.
 
M093 New
Bolt had been exchanging a few text messages with Lilly when he got the request. His wife was currently halfway done with her trip and would return soon. She'd already scolded him for not making a monster, but did seem to like the rest of it. Something about having an everyman mech seemed very useful to her eyes. Bolt did have to make another monster at some point though. Just because.

That would have to happen after later. Right now he had a priority. The message was a joint from from Mei and the master of the Empties, Jeanne. Considering both designers were from different nations, this seemed rather important.

Jeanne was an older looking woman with short black hair. Mildly attractive, and surprisingly normal looking. She wouldn't have looked out of place in a cafe sipping tea. That was if you ignored her presence. Something about her, even through the viewscreen brought to mind the feeling of burning incense. She was fire in a way that was impossible to describe verbally.

Bolt had encountered one other master through a screen like this so far, and they hadn't felt nearly as present as this woman did. He spared half a moment to wonder if that was because the man had been more or less skilled before he dismissed it. Jeanne was by all accounts a very hands off and isolated master. His research on her indicated that she had few designs in her nation of birth and was not inclined to obviously use the influence being a master gave her. Evaluating her 'strength' at the moment was counterproductive anyway. She was a designer, not a combatant.

"God's blessings be upon you. Thank you for accepting my invitation so promptly." The master began the call with a serene expression.

"I would be a fool to decline." Mei answered and Bolt nodded in agreement. "The topic of conversation is our Shining Shrine Maiden line?"

"Yes. I was quite amused to see your girls being so popular, and would have just left it at that had they not become a rallying point in recent days. People are going to bring them into battle, and I believe you can see the problem there." The older woman responded with a small grin and pleasant tone.

"Lasers are bad versus sandmen." Bolt observed with a small grunt of irritation at the issue.

"Correct. Now normally I would deal with young Shen, but I understand he is currently occupied. So we use what we can. Are you up for both a revision and an update package?" Jeanne asked.

Mei glanced at the screen and Bolt gave another nod. "We are." She said.

"Good, we'll have to do a virtual collaboration by passing the blueprints back and forth because I am quite busy here. We need to revise the laser damage and likely make a proper space package." Jeanne paused and her smile shifted into something a little dangerous. "Bolt dear, I would like to see you use all your talent for this. Forgive me if I burn some of your cover, but to save lives we must use all our tools. I will handle the backdraft."

"Excuse me?" The young designer asked in mild confusion.

The older woman's expression didn't change as she explained. "I consider myself an vessel of divine fire. I know it. It consumes and transforms. It devours. I was very content to keep to the side when you made your adorable dogs, but I would not have the lives of my people lost over secrecy. Consider my words while we work together." She ignored the confused look on both the juniors as they continued to discuss how the collaboration would go.

Bolt's confusion lasted until the conference call was over with. It was only once it was done that he got what the woman wanted. She wanted him to what, consume the design somehow? He wasn't even sure he could!

At the same time he couldn't outright ignore her demand, or try to avoid it. She was right that hiding what he could do would not help with the sandmen. The designer braced himself to try his best and hoped he could keep from stepping on some landmine.

It wasn't hard at first. The design was already fairly optimized and couldn't be changed much. Bolt's hidden master had been very precise with his changes, and Third Rate mechs had little room for real large and sweeping adjustments while retaining functionality.

Making an analogy using pictures, First Rate mechs were made in 3d. Second in color. Third were in black and white. You could make beautiful pictures with just Black and White. You could easily tell what was a masterpiece and what wasn't. You were also very limited.

They had no need to change the frame much anyway. This was mostly an update they would roll out to the active mechs. They needed to make the weapon better versus sandmen and add space capabilities. This necessitated some small changes to the hands and the heating components as well as redoing the weapon, which was an independent component and by design easy to replace if need be.

Bolt added the Heart system as his main contribution. The mech was technically his, so he could add the component without stepping over MTA rules. It didn't add much value, but it added enough in his opinion. He also rather wanted it in the mechs for more private reasons. They were center points of faith and that built up spiritual power. He really didn't want to know what would happen to that stuff if it wasn't managed right.

Mei added some more security to the drones. They were already pretty robust, using line of sight laser communication nodes to get commands, but they were still something that could be hacked. This reduced the chance a small amount.

Jeanne completely revamped the laser mirror. The frequency was changed and how much it fired was also adjusted. It seared Bolt's senses slightly, and the simulations Jeanne provided indicated that the frequency would be far harder for the sandmen to eat. Unfortunately it was so energetic that it would burn out the drones even faster.

This was tolerable for a flaw. Bolt considered it a decent modification on the surface of it. He could have left it at that. Yet Jeanne had asked for him to use everything, and the Shining Shrine Maiden would just be mildly useful now. He felt like it could be better.

So he revamped the changes and ignored how doing it felt like he'd swallowed something too spicy. Jeanne was a master of fire. He did not doubt that. He could not doubt that upon seeing her work. It even lightly touched on the spiritual through her faith. Her fire was holy, and it burned everything she needed it to. That could be enhanced still further if the drones could keep up and he was certain that he could tie it into the faith power it was gathering.

Mei was the weak point unfortunately. Her changes had been tentative and minor. The only thing he could think of change that was using some of her work and forcing her to apply more of herself. Bolt grabbed the drones and grabbed at the Feather Chainmail technology. He adjusted Jeanne's change to a slightly less energetic frequency and had the drones relay and change that energy, then sent a few requests to Mei. The girl knew this tech. She'd worked on it for years based off the notes. She could add things there if she was willing.

The woman was tentative in replies. Bolt sent a few more possible changes to her in turn to give them all possible options and then moved onto other things. He needed to adjust the programming a bit for the Maiden a bit so that the faith changes could propagate right. This required he play with the figures again to get the right mix. It was actually pretty delicate to get going but he managed. (Bolt was going to make them standard now, it was turning out to be a useful technique.)

He finished before Mei could reply and sent the last of his changes to Jeanne for a review. Then moved onto other things. One of the benefits of doing this all remotely was that he could do other work while he waited on things.

A few days later he had no reply though, and his tentative requests for more information were gently dissuaded by Jeanne. Bolt could take a hint. He kept on doing other chores and even spent a few hours down in the construction lines seeing how his mechs were being built. That always helped him think.

Mei's changes came through after a week and a few days. They were completely different than what he expected. She'd redone the drones. They were better. Far better. They converted with precision, and the burnout was decreased enough that they didn't burn out from what amounted to one use. Even more impressive, Bolt figured they were almost un-hackable. They used the unique signature of the Heart System and the line of sight lasers to make the security practically impossible to penetrate.

Useful!

Bolt was quite proud of the revised system. They'd even managed to get a relatively easy adjustment package for space battle. The mech wouldn't function that well without a platform to dump heat into, but it'd work, and frankly platforms were dead easy to make. Making a Third Rate mech function in both space and ground combat was a feat in itself. (If you called sitting in one place and firing functional in space combat.)

Several systems away and in an office Jeanna sipped at her coffee as she looked over the finished design. It was sublime, though not in the most obvious reasons. Journeymen work was always the equivalent of teenage scribbles to a master's eye. She could trace all of Mei's changes. The real art was that Bolt's work mimicked her own. It was like looking at her younger work. She had students she'd mentored for decades that were less able to do that. Anyone that looked at the blueprint would think he'd just added that Heart System of his.

"Whatever this child is, he's dangerous." The master noted out loud. "If I hadn't long since tempered my faith I'd say he was blessed by God or the Devil. The MTA must have internal knife fights about him. I wonder how many want him dead? His very existence challenges every cherished lie they tell themselves is true."

The woman brought up all the notations of the collaboration and let herself grin. That little Heart System update looked innocent, but she'd managed to tease out a bit there. She could see the potential and what it meant. God had guided her into this point and this? This could see more of His will done.

"Ah, I thought myself devoid of ambition, but now it burns again." Jeanne took a deep breath and let it out as she banished the emotions that had started to build. Caution and care had let her survive so far. Fire could burn the user just as much as the target. "Such a lovely child. He gives so freely without knowing how much value he has. Yet that's part of his charm and why he has so potent a protector. I want to see him grow too." She paused and tapped at the screen as she continued. "You'll have to fudge a few things on the MTA side to have them ignore Mei's change. I can cover everything but that. I've burned too many bridges there to do subtle and we need to be thorough. Breaking and rebuilding your foundation happens, but she did it too fast. If they see how Bolt did that they'll forgo every pretense of neutrality."

'Handled.' The one word appeared on a nearby screen.

"Thank you. And thank you for actually showing yourself now." The master said to the screen with a note of amusement in her voice. "Since I have some attention, do you want me to keep my distance? You wouldn't be revealing yourself like this if you didn't have a reason."

'Temper him.' The two words replaced the others without even a flicker.

Jeanne's grin dropped and she nodded. "Ah, to ask that of me and likely knowing my goals and methods. Cruelty or kindness?" She closed her eyes and took a moment to calculate things. "The Lord tests us in many ways I suppose. It will be done, but I expected a favor. He is not my student, and I will have to use unusual methods to do as you ask."

The words were erased and an acknowledged replaced them a moment before disappearing.

Jeanne stared at the screen for a seconds before she let herself sag slightly. She knew for a fact there wouldn't be any traces of intrusion on the system when she checked it. She still would have to redo the security. She wasn't inclined to curse, but hidden masters like this were always so painful to deal with. Hopefully they were keeping obscure for good reasons. She knew for a fact that a few of the more... Eccentric masters just did it because they found it amusing.
 
Mei's changes came through after a week and a few days. They were completely different than what he expected. She'd redone the drones. They were better. Far better. They converted with precision, and the burnout was decreased enough that they didn't burn out from what amounted to one use. Even more impressive, Bolt figured they were almost un-hackable. They used the unique signature of the Heart System and the line of sight lasers to make the security practically impossible to penetrate.
"You'll have to fudge a few things on the MTA side to have them ignore Mei's change. I can cover everything but that. I've burned too many bridges there to do subtle and we need to be thorough. Breaking and rebuilding your foundation happens, but she did it too fast. If they see how Bolt did that they'll forgo every pretense of neutrality."
Huh, so Bolt basically took the now vastly improved mech apart, created a dozen different "openings" for Mei to take advantage of, and then threw them all at her at once, exposing her to the perfect catalysts to improve her Specialty. But never realized that he did that, just assuming she got more bold.

I wonder if it was just the weird ways she was forced to innovate and learn that made her evolve, or if the Heart system also had a hand in it? It by itself is super weird, and the magical stuff going on with it might help the designers working with it grow as well as the pilots.
 
I am very intrigued. I can't way to see how this all shakes out.
But tempering... well. That's not going to be painless, that's for sure.
 
Huh, so Bolt basically took the now vastly improved mech apart, created a dozen different "openings" for Mei to take advantage of, and then threw them all at her at once, exposing her to the perfect catalysts to improve her Specialty. But never realized that he did that, just assuming she got more bold.
I thought that was just Bolt breaking the shackles her master put on her Specialty? Her Master override her Specialty with his own and tried to do the same on Bolt, that was why the hidden Master retaliated against him.
 
I thought that was just Bolt breaking the shackles her master put on her Specialty? Her Master override her Specialty with his own and tried to do the same on Bolt, that was why the hidden Master retaliated against him.
Sure, something like that.


The mere fact he can do so, almost by accident, while doing a bunch of other things? That's rare. And, leaving the right ones to really help? Rarer still.
 

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