On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

Cataquack Warrior · 2026-06-17T08:34:32+0100

I think it would be interesting if Grass beats Shiro in the race and feels triumphant about overcoming her rival...only to see that Shiro is genuinely content and in fact pleased with placing second. Something like that would unsettle Grass, chipping away at her vision of a rivalry with Shiro when Shiro doesn't seem to even care.

TheSmallSauce said:
Ramonu, what the fuck.

Ramonu is so fortunate to have not been saying that to Shiro instead; if someone gave her the so-called "advice" of channeling her grief into running, Shiro would probably quit on the spot, or even punch the speaker in the face depending on how she's handling her grief.

WrandmWaffles said:
"Swimming might be useful too."

"Really?"

"The buoyancy of the water means your legs aren't carrying all of your weight."

"Hmm…so that's why Trainer-san mentioned that…"

"You do not look very enthused."

"Well…it isn't running."

There was something to be said about loving what you do but Silence Suzuka might be taking it a bit far.

This really reflects the difference between Shiro and the other umas. For Shiro, running is something she naturally enjoys, but it's more of the instinctive thrill of movement rather than focused on racing alone, so she'd be perfectly find channeling her thirst for movement into another outlet like swimming or flying. For other umas, racing itself is what drives their hearts, and they wouldn't accept doing something else as a substitute.

Crispy Taco Shell · 2026-06-17T08:47:15+0100

I wonder how the family restaurant will continue to grow with all the victory money Shiro sends them.

Already after just two races, the restaurant gets a new air conditioning system and a TV. What happens after a hundred races? Will the restaurant turn into a multi-story monstrosity of an uma sports bar with dozens of big screen TVs and uma waitresses in skimpy Polish hussar uniforms?

It's almost like a bragging rights sidequest for an gacha game.

kuopiofi · 2026-06-17T09:38:52+0100

WrandmWaffles said:
"Swimming might be useful too."

"Really?"

"The buoyancy of the water means your legs aren't carrying all of your weight."

"Hmm…so that's why Trainer-san mentioned that…"

"You do not look very enthused."

"Well…it isn't running."

I think they use treadmills in pools for horses and maybe people too...

Winged One · 2026-06-17T10:09:34+0100

WrandmWaffles said:
This probably will stick in Grass' craw if some people say that Shirogane is the one who does the suicide running to help her win races. They are on the same team after all, so it would makes sense as a strategy.

It's not suicide running if she can acutally handle it! When Tanya does it, it's homicide running!

JKD_666 · 2026-06-17T10:57:59+0100

Winged One said:
It's not suicide running if she can acutally handle it! When Tanya does it, it's homicide running!

Serial umacide running. A sensational new racing style.

Radiant Knight · 2026-06-17T12:53:21+0100

Shiro accelerating for the entire race.

Greatazuredragon · 2026-06-17T13:39:04+0100

Heh, if she 'unerved' racers before imagine being chased by a 'soldier ready for battle'. XD

WanderingDragon · 2026-06-17T13:59:54+0100

MARch Of Time said:
The Silver Eagle indeed, that's 8 starts/races, 2 wins, 6 second places, right?

Our beloved Eternal Placer, It would be so funny if she never wins a bronze, ever. If she places, it's 1 or 2
Meanwhile, someone else seems to be collecting all the bronzes...

-and it looks like it's Shirogane Orzel in 2nd and The Bronze Kneecap in 3rd.....again....

Bluefuckingtired · 2026-06-17T14:31:07+0100

Greymatter02 said:
Uniform get!

Did you mean: Umaform get!

WrandmWaffles · 2026-06-17T15:40:58+0100

Killdread said:
Betting odds for Shirogane Orzel
First place 2:3
Second place 100:101
Third place 1:1000
Fourth place 4:5

Shirogane is a decent betting option for the people who are trying to lose bets.

Tomato said:
I'm mostly worried about the air resistance and effects of it dangling on running posture.

Parts of her uniform does make running harder, especially the large hat, but the boots are actually better suited for it than they appear, especially for someone with Shirogane's biomechanics

zecorezecron said:
But more importantly, how much money has she earned?

Something around 30M Yen, I guess? She's mostly been running in lower stakes ones so far, aside from the one G2 she got second in.

Jetsmillion said:
I mean, she wouldn't be the only one. Rice Shower carries a decent sized dagger as a part of her racing outfit.

Durandal and Eishin Flash pull swords out of nowhere too. Grass Wonder pulls a naginata from somewhere too. And in this timeline they'd have figured out how to set up a harness that keeps the problems to a minimum given the prevalence of umas running with pointy things in the past.

TheSmallSauce said:
So this is this story's equivalent of her elderly groom dying IRL. Not a butler, but her grandfather instead. How cruel, how unimaginably cruel!

Yep, I figured since some of Dober's notes mention her dad is sad she doesn't let him call her 'Beru-chan' anymore, it makes sense for that to be a nickname from her grandfather.

TheSmallSauce said:
Ramonu, what the fuck.

Ramonu has no chill (her poor kids)

TheSmallSauce said:
I'm almost surprised that none of her classmates have commented on it, but since she didn't win, I'm guessing her name didn't appear on the noticeboard.

It's also because most of them were lower stakes races so they didn't pay too much attention to them.

Ace98 said:
You know, If shirogane were to show up in that one quest Umamusume: Magical Derby, The moment the 'shadow race' starts, she'd be one of the few who'd Bulldoze through it because she already is familiar with magic and fighting and wouldn't need a 'gift from the goddesses' to beat the shadows.

If Magical Derby was a Persona game Shirogane's shadow would be the Reaper. If she meets Magical Satano Ruby she'd be offended at her poor form and trigger discipline.

Jostev said:
I think Shinko Windy is relatively underrepresented, and am happy to see more of her.

Jostev said:
(To be clear, this is a blatant attempt to remind the author of a character I like, convince them they would be a good fit for the fic, and be interesting/entertaining to write about, just in case they didn't have something planned for them already)

If writing this fic has taught me anything, is that every uma is someone's favorite.

ShadowAngelBeta said:
When did Shiro debut? Because it might have been earlier than in game.

Sometime in June, or so.

Crispy Taco Shell said:
I wonder how the family restaurant will continue to grow with all the victory money Shiro sends them.

Already after just two races, the restaurant gets a new air conditioning system and a TV. What happens after a hundred races? Will the restaurant turn into a multi-story monstrosity of an uma sports bar with dozens of big screen TVs and uma waitresses in skimpy Polish hussar uniforms?

It's almost like a bragging rights sidequest for an gacha game.

There is unfortunately a space limitation to the restaurant, but yeah if this was an anime every time there's a scene in the restaurant there'd be some new thing that got added. They probably have Shirogane's trophies on a shelf somewhere.

Winged One said:
It's not suicide running if she can acutally handle it! When Tanya does it, it's homicide running!

Shirogane overseas: "Oh, we can elbow each other now?"
After the race, several runners had to retire due to broken ribs

Greatazuredragon said:
Heh, if she 'unerved' racers before imagine being chased by a 'soldier ready for battle'. XD

Shirogane the bane of front runners everywhere, unless they are kinda oblivious like Suzuka or scared anyways like Turbo.

Bluefuckingtired said:
Did you mean: Umaform get!

She already got her umaform when she was born.

CantFocusOneThing · 2026-06-17T16:08:54+0100

WrandmWaffles said:
Ramonu has no chill (her poor kids)

Tbh Ramonu problem wasnt that she said something fucked to improve her racing but the fact that she just told Dober to do it rather than teach her how. Running for someone else is not uncommon and it does give you strenght beyond what you usually have. Orfevre won 8 lenghts in a race for a kid with cancer when he died before the race, Tamamo Cross won her race against Oguri Cap when the old man she used to "train" as a kid was dying by a disease. Ramonu coaching sucked because she wasnt able to reach Dober's heart and her feelings with her grandfather.

PinkShadowReader · 2026-06-17T16:19:34+0100

WrandmWaffles said:
Currently her record is something like 8-2-6-0

Huh. So Shiro has run all six races she had wanted?

WrandmWaffles said:
Hana sighed. "I suppose I should have expected that to draw your interest." At least Shirogane-san was not truly shooting for a Sextuple Crown. If someone managed to pull that off…it would be a sight to see. "But even just running in all six of these races would make the league question my sanity as a trainer."

The first two legs of each circuit were within one week of the corresponding leg in the other circuit, with the Shuka Sho and Kikuka Sho being two weeks apart, which was still quite close together. To qualify for each leg, her unimpressionable yet somehow still overly ambitious trainee would have to place or show in one of their qualifier races, and if she did not manage to do so in the circuit races, she would have to do so in another qualifier. The first two legs were not far enough apart for that to be feasible.

Because it looks like her record in the previous chapter would be something like 2-1-1-0. One win at her debut race and one 2nd place at the first of these six races.

Now with her record being 8-2-6-0 it looks like she has done all those she wanted. Because there are seven more from 2-1-1-0 I think that two of these were what Shiro needed to qualify to take those Sixtuple Crown. One she got silver for. The other was either gold or silver again. Then all these other races she got silver.

It really is shaping up to be a Silver Eagle nickname she will get.

Lyrista · 2026-06-17T16:21:45+0100

Wouldn't Silver Sprinter be more appropriate?

drake_azathoth · 2026-06-17T16:58:06+0100

WrandmWaffles said:
Shirogane overseas: "Oh, we can elbow each other now?"
After the race, several runners had to retire due to broken ribs

LOL yeah I was think about that when the armor on her uniform was described. She'd probably adapt to a rougher racing style just a little too well!

It does make me consider how well Grass Wonder would do if she goes to Europe in El Condor Pasa's place along with Shirogane - which is something Toujou is probably at least considering. Given the talk on temperament, even though El Condor Pasa is good at roughhousing it's possible Grass might be better mentally suited to adapt to European turf and tactics.

A lot of Umamusume fans don't think of Grass Wonder as being as dominant as El Condor Pasa because she's not as flamboyant in-game, but the racehorse's actual history is pretty damn impressive having set a record in the Asahi Hai, winning the Takurazaka Kinen, and winning two Arima Kaien - all in the Golden Generation. And that's with an injury in his second year setting him back!

PinkShadowReader · 2026-06-17T17:24:15+0100

WrandmWaffles said:
"Oh yeah…Groove did mention that her kouhai smashed a speaker in the starting gate," Bubble Gum Fellow added, before blowing another bubble. "Gotta say that's a new one."

Looks like we have confirmation that Shiro's attack on these poor speakers was an unique way to be startled. If they all said that its a new one with all these they have ever heard.

WrandmWaffles said:
"You mean the Asahi Hai Futurity Stakes?" Grass Wonder posited. "Are any of you participating? Asides from Shirogane-san and I." She looked rather smug about qualifying for the end of year G1 race, which was rather understandable. Shirogane wasn't quite sure why her other yearmates didn't have schedules planning for participating, but she presumed their trainers had reasons for it. While her own record didn't have as many wins as her teammate, she had enough prize points to qualify.

This seems to be the first leg that Shiro and Grass participate together in out in the world. They will wombo-combo them so their opposition will get destroyed.

WrandmWaffles said:
"Since some of you are going to be participating in your first G1 race soon," she adjusted her glasses dramatically. "We'll be going over your costumes!"

Which graded races has Shiro participated in as of now? I assume its G2 and G3 races. Two G3 races to get into her Six G2 races.

WrandmWaffles said:
"Hmm…" Grass hummed, covering her mouth as she smiled. "You look ready for war."

"Hardly." Her sword was blunt, and she had no pistols. "Parade perhaps."

"Then you'd better win the race," Grass' eyes crinkled in a challenging look, "not that I will let you."

Shirogane adjusted her gauntlet again, tightening the strap, before turning around to look at her teammate and exasperated trainer directly, smiling a challenge of her own.

"Were it so easy."

Shiro says it literally a parade.
Grass thinks its a victory parade and says so.
Shiro thinks she means a call to action and says so.
Meanwhile their trainer thinks: weren't they supposed to run this race together?!

AmeriaOlacyne · 2026-06-17T19:58:28+0100

Typos/Corrections

WrandmWaffles said:
with neither Matikanefukikutaru or Silence Suzaka even placing.

WrandmWaffles said:
Matikanefukikutaru, on the other hand, was extremely mercurial and probably was in a bad mood that day.

Both of these should be fukukitaru.

zecorezecron · 2026-06-17T21:14:12+0100

WrandmWaffles said:
Something around 30M Yen, I guess? She's mostly been running in lower stakes ones so far, aside from the one G2 she got second in.

Not bad. Assuming Tracen's tuition is anything like my college, that should fully cover tuition with at least some leftover.

Tonyloco · 2026-06-17T21:55:01+0100

If in the future Shirogane ever becomes a trainer or needs to help other Umas at the school to recover fro injuries I can see her literally running to run underwater for extra speed and stamina.

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But considering this is Japan and her school doesn't seems to lack funds to spend in training gear it might be something closer to this.

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