EntropyEnginear
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Of course MC gives Zoe an Apple, I'm guessing she didn't outright refuse it due to knowing that MC doesn't know what that means.
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How am I supposed to take him getting turned on by her being a bitch to him, then? Sure, he gets fed up with it every now and then, but those feel like the bare minimum to showcase that he has a spine.
Please quote where that happens so I can alter it. As far as I know (and I mean, I am the author), he never reacts positively to her acting bitchy against him.
It's the feeling I get off of them, since she is a bitch and hasn't really hid her disdain of men, and he somehow still fucking finds her hot.Please quote where that happens so I can alter it. As far as I know (and I mean, I am the author), he never reacts positively to her acting bitchy against him.
I simply hate Zoe with a passion.
Oh yeah, dude has got genuine and completely understandeable beef with the Olympians, it's just that he needs the Ophiotaurus to kill it and Ethan cannot let that happen (for additional reasons revealed in later chapters). Unfortunately, considering his role as a hunter and antagonist, it'll only be at the final confrontation between him and Ethan that I can fully reveal the hurt Orion has been put through (and it's a lot), which adds to the drama and conflict for Ethan. Still, over on Patreon we're at chapter 17 right now and said final confrontation is about two or three chapters away still, so Orion's past will remain a mystery for quite a while still...I am of the opinion that Orion in any interpretation of the myth got completely fucked by the gods
She is old enough to use the Trauma excuse. Especially if she never got therapy over it, and Artemis seemed to be fanning that flame a bit.It's the feeling I get off of them, since she is a bitch and hasn't really hid her disdain of men, and he somehow still fucking finds her hot.
This is also your love of "enemies to lovers" seeing the friction as a plus, if someone treated me like Zoe treats the MC and then confessed, the answer is a hard no.
Does not help that I have high empathy, so when she's being a bitch, I'm constantly thinking "how would I react to her" and "how would I act in her position".
I simply hate Zoe with a passion.
Fucking loathe her for reminding me of a younger, stupider me.
I may not have had her specific hates, but unlike her, I reflected, and fucking grew up.
Zoe is too fucking old to get to use the excuse of "young and dumb".
Damn really I was kind of hoping she'd be around a little bit more I kind of liked her. Would have been funny if the MC started to stay in contact with her just to get more gospel and all that other stuff for new quests. Especially would have been funny if he got a trait that made nymphs find him more attractive and he just wants gospel as she flirts with him would have been funny personally. I don't know I just liked her and hope to see her again."Very loudly." The Lampad huffed.
A muscle twitched in Zoë's jaw and I decided to intervene before our (overly helpful) source became the first Lampad in history to be strangled with her own torch.
"Go, get out of here. Get out of Chicago entirely if what you've told us is true."
The nymph did not need telling twice. She darted past us, paused long enough beside Arion to glance admiringly at the pickup, then vanished into the nearest patch of shadow with a final whispered promise to tell absolutely nobody about us.
I kind of understand what he's going about, she's kind of very cold to him and then he's constantly going on with "oh gorgeous eyes this" "she's gorgeous that" 'she's glaring at me and I can't look at her eyes and makes my stomach shutter" it's doesn't really make sense to me either. It really doesn't make that much sense to me either how you're writing it, she sounds like a bitch but he still talking about nothing more than how hot she is. Eventually gets to a point where someone insults you enough you don't keep thinking they're just hot and ignore it, get annoyed with them and they're attractiveness becomes second to how shitty they are acting.
I'm gonna be honest I don't see what your seeing. And there's better ways if saying you dislike the dynamic between Zoe and the MC. If you dislike it that much man just read something else then.It's the feeling I get off of them, since she is a bitch and hasn't really hid her disdain of men, and he somehow still fucking finds her hot.
This is also your love of "enemies to lovers" seeing the friction as a plus, if someone treated me like Zoe treats the MC and then confessed, the answer is a hard no.
Does not help that I have high empathy, so when she's being a bitch, I'm constantly thinking "how would I react to her" and "how would I act in her position".
I simply hate Zoe with a passion.
Fucking loathe her for reminding me of a younger, stupider me.
I may not have had her specific hates, but unlike her, I reflected, and fucking grew up.
Zoe is too fucking old to get to use the excuse of "young and dumb".
I agree.It's the feeling I get off of them, since she is a bitch and hasn't really hid her disdain of men, and he somehow still fucking finds her hot.
This is also your love of "enemies to lovers" seeing the friction as a plus, if someone treated me like Zoe treats the MC and then confessed, the answer is a hard no.
Does not help that I have high empathy, so when she's being a bitch, I'm constantly thinking "how would I react to her" and "how would I act in her position".
I simply hate Zoe with a passion.
Fucking loathe her for reminding me of a younger, stupider me.
I may not have had her specific hates, but unlike her, I reflected, and fucking grew up.
Zoe is too fucking old to get to use the excuse of "young and dumb".
Meh considering that our MC is kin with primordial it doesn't seem that impressive in comparison.. "That dude biggest ennemies are a rapist and a bitch! ""We face the Bane of the Twin Archers, the greatest male hunter who has ever lived: the giant Orion."
"You should see what it says about some of the others. Not to mention, it's inaccurate. The Earth Mother is my sister. Or half-sister, I'm guessing." I said blithely.
It's not that you're wrong. Chaos is our current word for the original χάος, and the χ is usually romanized as a 'kh'. It's just that it can be written as Kaos as well. Call it stylistic freedom, rather than an 'obvious grammar error'. You're the first one to point it out, so I haven't really seen a reason to alter it.Sry, can't help myself (still haven't really read the chapters - stuff like this bothers me) - shouldn't it be Khaos instead of Kaos ?
I essentially almost didn't even click this because the title had such an obvious grammar error.
To be safe I put Kaos into a search engine and the first thing that pops up regarding Kaos is a british TV series followed by othet businesses.
Khaos is the name of the deity.
Not a linguist, but for what's it worth, from looking it up and general reading, I've never once seen it reffered to that way.It's not that you're wrong. Chaos is our current word for the original χάος, and the χ is usually romanized as a 'kh'. It's just that it can be written as Kaos as well. Call it stylistic freedom, rather than an 'obvious grammar error'. You're the first one to point it out, so I haven't really seen a reason to alter it.
That but I am gonna hope he get a legendary soon,I want to see him get this skill:
Recoilless really is my favorite fictional technique
You know you should probably put these pictures in an extra section so people can see them better.Well, because it easily sets up the enemies-to-lovers trope which just so happens to be my personal preferred romance set up I guess?(Well that and she's hot. Think Inde Navarette mixed with prime Cameron Diaz when she was a brunette for a little while)
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EDIT: I know, understand and agree with every single criticism against the use of AI, but fact of the matter simply is that I'm a barely decent drawer at best and this best conveys how I picture these characters when writing. Considering they're the main character and his current sidekick, it felt important enough to visualize.
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I can't tell if you're talking about him in the Greek myths, in the Riordan verse or in the Type Moon lore. But yeah, for one of the "good" giants he got a raw deal