Harry Potter and the Lady Thief
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More seriously, this may well be the least inane and bashy Hogwarts framing/betrayal/expulsion ever written in the history of this fandom.
Will definitely follow.
Yeah, why add more conniving manipulators with unsavory agendas and heavy political and financial influence into the narrative, when you've got such a selection right there? Look forward to them getting seriously come-uppanced.
The cover's interesting. Hermione in spygirl clothes, natch- though I'm half-desiring a Carmen Sandiego getup for her at one point. That sort of flash is not really her style, though. Is that Harry in a set of Wizangamot robes, or some such?
Excellent use of Mundungus Fletcher, too. Again, why put a thief with a heart of gold in when you've got a thief pre-approved by the Order of the Phoenix hanging around already? Good stuff.
Do you think this'll be another epic, or a shorter one, along the lines of Girl Who Walked On Water?
Lots of fics with Hermione in Slytherin do this as well, for some reason. A brilliant and outspoken muggleborn surrounded by children of Death Eaters, with Voldemort retuning in the background apparently does not provide enough opportunities for conflict and character development, so Dumbledore needs to be recruited as an enemy as well. (I guess making Draco an antagonist interferes with the 'shipping.)Yeah, why add more conniving manipulators with unsavory agendas and heavy political and financial influence into the narrative, when you've got such a selection right there?
That would be bogarting Hermione's revenge.very interesting, as usual.
i just hope ron & harry actually pay malfoy back. the little shit is already on his second murder attempt
and it would be nice to see the boys be relevant sooner than the 30th chapter of the story ^^
Lots of fics with Hermione in Slytherin do this as well, for some reason. A brilliant and outspoken muggleborn surrounded by children of Death Eaters, with Voldemort retuning in the background apparently does not provide enough opportunities for conflict and character development, so Dumbledore needs to be recruited as an enemy as well. (I guess making Draco an antagonist interferes with the 'shipping.)
very interesting, as usual.
i just hope ron & harry actually pay malfoy back. the little shit is already on his second murder attempt
and it would be nice to see the boys be relevant sooner than the 30th chapter of the story ^^
I think I saw one that had the whole trio in Slytherin, that I think might have had Draco as an antagonist (or annoyance), but it's been long enough since I read it that I may be mixing two or more fics up (and I don't recall the author or title of any of them).A Slytherin Hermione, without Draco being a white knight... one can dream.
I think I saw one that had the whole trio in Slytherin, that I think might have had Draco as an antagonist (or annoyance), but it's been long enough since I read it that I may be mixing two or more fics up (and I don't recall the author or title of any of them).
There's a handful of fics. There's JacobK's unfinished classic, of course. There's Mudblood Mistress series by Jose Hood --- though she does end up dating Draco much later, and her character is a bit unrecognizable at that point, though not nicified but rather made more impulsive and less cautious and calculating. A bunch of one-shots, as well.A Slytherin Hermione, without Draco being a white knight... one can dream.
Starfox5, we need a Manipulative!Fletcher omake that reveals that it was all a part of his plan to get himself a talented apprentice while causing Dumbledore much angst.and yes, the use of Fletcher is good, as is the idea of framing Hermione for a crime she didn't commit, then getting her on a bigger crime.
I see your ignoring anything regarding the magical Americas from post-Deathly Hallow, what with the lack of a MACUSA.
Oh, and a good chapter too.
like it.
still lots of "they really will be sorry that they were so naughty but let's not actually do anything"
for draco and his accomplices, snape etc... from dumbledore. harry and ron... well they have the
excuse to actually be powerless and there seems to be actual mental progress, good job.
harry's lack of open incredulity at dumbledore's "Justice will be done, trust me" really felt like a missed occasion though ^^
I'm wondering what you're going to do with Voldemort. On the one hand, with Pettigrew captured, he's going to have a harder time coming back; on the other hand, it's going to be harder to knock the horcrux out of Harry without him around.
So, my wild speculation is that things might go more in accordance with Dumbledore's original hope --- that Harry be older and more experienced before he has to face Voldemort in earnest; but Dumbledore might still get himself killed hunting horcruxes, leaving both sides without their uberwizard. Voldemort's impending return would make it necessary to destroy the Death Eaters' politically and economically, so that Wizarding Britain could present a united front.
Reading these, I sometimes wonder how the various characters from your AUs would react to your other AUs. Like, imagine how the Hermiones from Divided and Entwined or MLR would react to the situations in Lady Thief, Patron, or Family Business (and vice versa, for that matter).
Reading these, I sometimes wonder how the various characters from your AUs would react to your other AUs. Like, imagine how the Hermiones from Divided and Entwined or MLR would react to the situations in Lady Thief, Patron, or Family Business (and vice versa, for that matter).
Rather like that, yeah. I also think they'd be very curious about the cultural and historical differences between their various worlds, because Hermione is Hermione.D&E!Hermione: Sounds like you'd be great at planting explosives in the purebloods' manors.
LT!Hermione: Plant explosives? That sounds like something that would get a lot of people killed.
D&E!Hermione: You say it like it's a bad thing. I call it precision delivery of munitions.
or
D&E!Hermione: I blew up several score Death Eaters and sympathizers.
Patron!Hermione: I killed Voldemort and every marked Death Eater with one spell.
LT!Hermione: I... I'll just stand over there. Outside the blast radius. And, um, ACCIO Any Parts of Me Not Currently Attached to Me.
or
D&E!Hermione: Wasn't allowed to return to Hogwarts after my OWLs under Voldemort-inspired laws.
LT!Hermione: Expelled from Hogwarts and beggared after being framed for theft.
Patron!Hermione: Lucky b#$%es.
Interesting developments, and I'm glad you didn't go the Wizengamut Harry route, though there's still the matter of the "mounds of gold coins" from Harry's vault, but perhaps that was just Rowling's well known hyperbole.
Actually, what canon evidence do we have for the "Noble and Most Ancient" House of Black being oh-so-rich? The Wiki says they are, but they don't seem to source that claim particularly well. (Yes, I know, AU, but this is actually an interesting question in and of itself.)Harry isn't rich. Sirius, however, is. But that isn't a solution to all problems.