'power rings'
'in'
This could be a specific term, or perhaps you meant 'donning'.
Right, he lost the Hellwraith, didn't he?
Enh, sort of depends on the drop. 'Scry and die' is a trope for a reason. That said, it helps if, unlike Boom Tubes, your teleport method is one way so it doesn't expose your staging area to counterattack as readily. And for varying definitions of 'unknown location'.
of -> as
were -> are (to make the tense of the second half of the sentence match the first half)
'power'
To be fair, don't souls normally stick around as miserable ghosts unless they die in a thaumosphere or get captured by something like those shrines Paragon built? Not very peaceful, although I suppose as demigods it's pretty likely that Ascendants are an exception.
'doesn't'?
He's giving blood to the Seeds? Or is it meant to be 'donning'? I still don't know what it means in that case.
I think he still has Nabu-666 somewhere, right? Or did something happen to him that I don't remember?
Thank you, corrected.
He's not.
No.
More or less.
Last I remember, Mr Zoat said that Nabu 666 is handling the Tower of Nabu. As such, Paul may or may not have access to that Construct-Lantern.
I know that. I was thinking after the Anti-Life disaster is over, just because Paul thinks they deserve to know after he's fought them personally.
Yes. It's compressed gravitons. The expansion and contraction of space itself causes a wave that travels through vacuum and will physically shove your eardrums when it gets to you.
'Draw' is probably the wrong term. They exist differently within the material universe.
You know I wouldn't be surprised if you can hear the boom in space because New God Tech is just that bullshit.
um i thought all us government was hostile to mutants. what army base is this? i didnt know the us gov was training mutants....
people's
I had assumed that the boom was the result of the spatial distortion inducing a shockwave in nearby matter.
Thank you, corrected.
Okay, this is still a good challenge even if he's gender flipping in the middle of it. Though I hope he won't lose access to his ring or the orange light completely in this fight.
the -> they
hunter -> hunted
want to -> want you to
'She's'
'There'
'the sort of'
Other times that citizens are mentioned in this chapter it isn't capitalised (except at the start of sentences). Not sure if this should be uncapitalised or others should be capitalised, or if there's different context that justifies this.
they
Thank you, corrected.
Citizen can be a title (a member of the Citizenry) and a regular description (a citizen of the Citizenry).
*Main character changes sex and no one treats it as a big deal.*
Bah da! Bah da! Dude looks like a lady!