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mechlionzet
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mechlionzet

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The end is nigh...for Winging is a Euphemism. Jun 14, 2020

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    1. mechlionzet
      mechlionzet
      The end is nigh...for Winging is a Euphemism.
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    2. Ergoan
      Ergoan
      on act 1 part 8 you have a little quest lingo in there.
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      2. mechlionzet
        mechlionzet
        Thanks for pointing that out. I believe I corrected all of the instances of Second Person for Pokemon Trainer chapter 8. I'll be going through all of my chapters soon with a few grammar correction programs to check for sentence structure, grammar, and spelling issues. I'll have to check on the usage of 2nd person too.
        Apr 26, 2020
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    3. Qazda
      Qazda
      comments on writing

      1 you tend to end questions with periods whwhich leads to stilted dialog
      2 you tend to fragment sentences

      ^ YOur two most visible technicl flaws systematc

      less obvious in winging more so in contracted
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      2. ReinZero
        ReinZero
        It does also make it harder to tell if it's intentional instead of by accident. Since depending on how a line is said, it can make the difference between coming off as a question or a statement/declaration.

        So for fragmenting, I can see how it'd make sense for thoughts or speech.
        Apr 7, 2020
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      3. Qazda
        Qazda
        grammarly isn't perfect :-p

        anyway i like slick write and hemmingway app. not 100% reliable, but good for overall checks. example: used slickwrite to check flow etc.
        Apr 8, 2020
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      4. mechlionzet
        mechlionzet
        Slick Write looks pretty simple, especially with the chrome extension. I'll probably go through my old chapters in the JumpFic to test it out a bit. Thanks.
        Apr 8, 2020
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    4. That Guy
      That Guy
      Preens at seeing you vote in my quest. Winging is a Euphemism is so good to read. The fluff is to die for.
    5. mechlionzet
      mechlionzet
      Gathering all the Little Birds~
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    Feb 17, 1986 (Age: 34)

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    For discussions on the current quest, future quests, or even to catch my attention in general, you can use my discord channel!

    My Current Quest is: Winging is a Euphemism~ - A Sekirei Quest where you are the Sekirei.

    Current Fiction is: Contracted Entertainment (Jumpchain SI - Current World: Final Fantasy 7 with Generic Hentai World Supplement)

    Mechlionzet's Works - A Master list of all Works from Quests to Jumpchains.