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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Well, there is an internal/external damage divide.

    Bare knuckled punches are far more likely to split skin, both due to the "sharp" edges of knuckles, and the more compact affected area. (Though the elbow is the ultimate eyebrow splitter)

    Now, barring a clash of heads, a split eyebrow/cheekbone from a gloved covered hand tends to have said cut happen from the inside. Hence why they can be so nasty. You're being hit so hard that your bone is cutting through your compacted face.

    Now, pain vs damage.

    As you say, a bare knuckled punch tends to "Hurt" more. There are multiple factors on this, and forgive me if I can't explain it perfectly. Basically you have a much smaller area taking a much "smaller" blow. Say, middle knuckle the the cheekbone.

    Nerves light up, that pinpoint part gets smashed, and you're body goes "Something bad just happened!"

    Also, depending on how he landed it, the person who hit you likely just hurt his hand. Might have even broken it.

    Now, put on the glove.

    First thing you get is the force of the blow spread across a much larger area, and because the puncher's hand was protected, he didn't hurt himself. Thus, because he's not subconsciously or consciously holding back (as he is relying upon the glove to protect him) he's starting to punch a LOT harder, really getting his hips into it.

    Now, the first punch didn't "Hurt" quite like a bare knuckled punch so you shook it off. No single, pinpoint set of nerves in your face took that sharp impact. You basically took a really solid pillow shot to the skull.

    Problem? Your brain is floating around in there, and when your head whipped back, your brain crashed into the inside of your own skull, and even when your head stopped moving...it didn't.

    It didn't hurt the same way. But the damage tends to be greater.

    And here is wear it gets dangerous (listen to older boxers talk). The punch didn't hurt as the bare knuckled shot did, so you're still going. But you're taking more punches, more powerful shots that are sending your brain bouncing around the skull.

    I've often described it as a hard shot vs a solid shot.

    A solid shot will just drop you on your ass, if not knock you out. See various Head kicks in MMA. Just bang...lights out.

    But you only took the one.

    A hard shot is bouncing your head around, but its not quite in that certain way that just turns the lights out.

    I'm not entirely sure why, but then again, I"m not a brain doctor.

    Here is the thing though....more people have died in the gloved era, then the bare knuckled era (At least, according to all known data of the bare knuckled era).

    This is not only due to the force of the blows being much greater, but also the sheer number of them.

    With no gloves fighters tend to throw a lot less headshots. The skull is just too fucking hard, and its so easy to break your hand. So you are throwing less headshots, but the ones you do throw, you are not throwing quite as hard. Due to that fear of a broken hand.

    So a lot more body shots were being thrown.

    In the gloved era guys are just getting their bell rung again and again and AGAIN.

    The damage just piles up. Damage vs pain as I said.

    That, and boxers have no way to protect themselves like an MMA fighter does. In MMA, a fighter can just tap out. But in boxing, short of quitting on your stool...you're expected to just take it. The "Bravery" thing. If a fighter looks at the ref and says "I'm done. I give up." He's derided as a coward (usually by people who've never fucking fought) and his career is almost certainly impacted negatively.

    Roberto Duran is legit one of the greatest boxers who've ever lived...and he STILL hasn't lived down the "No Mas" fight.

    It will be interesting to see how MMA fighters age. But I have noticed a pretty staunch lack of slurring and mental fuzziness from the first/second generation of big time MMA fighters. They are just taking way less shots to the head, and have other options throughout the fight.


    So a glove might represent safety to Hal's hand....it's not safe to the guy it's hitting. Not trying to argue with you....this is just kinda my area, and I like people to be informed. Its fun, when I get told that I let someone in on something they didn't know.

    Through, to be frank, I imagine Hal uses boxing gloves because, when he first did, it was an easy to draw fist, that every reader would understand it's impact. Again, due to boxing's popularity around that time.
     
  2. Flightless Man

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    Oh i fully agree in a fight. I'm only referring to one punch. In superheroics, a knock out ends the fight and civillians can die. And having his ring being based on willpower and the explanation of them being a safety feature would affect how he forms the glove. I imagine he's making the glove 'wrong'.

    Good distinction on head vs body shots. gloves on the body will have a way different affect then a gloved head shot. Most of these analytics took a while to form so hal is told this is for safety and its how he see's it. he very likely isn't up to date on current knowledge which is why i feel he's making the glove how it was supposed to work instead of how it really does.

    Heck i figure he's unknowingly adding a sedative to glove.
     
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    Jordan's fighter construct zooms in through the portal while I wait a second before creating my own entrance. I see flashes of green as it opens fire as I go in, but Sinestro drummed remote targeting techniques into his head during his initial training and every shot is on target.

    Not that the walking acid golem things are particularly troubled by having green beams punch through their bodies, but they do get hit accurately. But how to deal with them? Throwing them off the ship should work, but their bodies appear fairly protean and I can't rule out the possibility that they might be able to get back. Or go into a degrading orbit and threaten the planet below.

    I take out three vials of Wallace's tentatively named Essence of Calcinol and launch them, each one taking an acid golem in the chest as I fortify my construct shields. The reaction is extremely vigorous, golems exploding in a brilliant flash of light and toxic sludge being blasted all over the hangar.

    "Clear?"

    "Clear."

    Jordan flies in, dismissing his construct.

    "Why aren't they trying something else?"

    "Not sure. My guess is that they can't." He frowns at me in an interrogative manner. "Sheeda disrupt potential sources of resistance before attacking to weaken an enemy. Sivana prevented that. They tried raiding to beat us through attrition but they had to either dodge the League or set up an ambush where they had all of the advantages. But their backs are against the wall, here."

    "You think we could get them to surrender?"

    We both fly back out into space, heading for the next opening.

    "Perhaps. If we kill the Queen. Then there's the question of what we do with them."

    "Killing in combat's one thing, but I'm not-."

    "No, I'm not saying we should kill them, but how do we apply the Geneva Conventions? We literally can't send them home."

    "Trial by the International Criminal Court first-."

    "The ICC only has authority if the Security Council gives it authority. And how would we prove which Sheeda did what?"

    "That-."

    A swarm of space-adapted snake-like Sheeda-beasts surge out of the next three portals, squirming through space between us. I generate eight positron beam projector constructs and open fire, targeting the snakes one after the other with deadly accuracy. Jordan on the other hand generates a construct travel crate with a construct mongoose inside it, turning the case's interior into an orgy of serpentine violence.

    "That's a good question. No paper or electronic records. Think the Atlanteans or the Columbians can read their magic records?"

    "The Atlanteans can probably bypass their security, but they won't know what they're looking at. The Columbians… Maybe. But they never decoded Melmoth's records, and-"

    A tiny distortion in the light reflected from the golden space station and I reflexively turn my guns and fire. A Sheeda warrior shimmers back into visibility as my beam hits, a hole punched straight through his gut.

    "-why would the Sheeda document things? They weren't planning to leave anyone alive."

    "AhMore magic?"

    The mongoose having completed its deadly work, he dismisses the crate.

    "Might be a good way to get it more accepted." I take x-ionised knives out of subspace and use them as part of a rock drill construct I conjure into being surrounding me, then fly through the opening. A few snakes leap at me and are swiftly torn apart, their handlers following a moment later. "But I'm not sure that their evidence-gathering rules will allow it."

    "I think people will be okay about changing those after this."

    "Flash to Lanterns."

    Jordan and I raise our rings to our helmets.

    "Yes?"

    "We found the prisoners."

    I nod. "Do you need me to administer medical assistance?"

    "No, that-. I've given Kid's potion to the ones who really needed it, and we're both carrying healing rays. But I was thinking that if it's safe to take them to that planet, we could destroy everything except the time drive."

    Jordan nods. "We can do that. But if the Sheeda aren't picking a fight with the locals, then we can't be sure they'll help."

    "They're only using a small amount of their total land area. If we create a camouflage system somewhere out of the way, they don't even need to know."

    "We can do that. Think the Sheeda are running out of ideas."

    "Yeah. Thanks. Flash out."

    Jordan and I turn to look at one another, and he generates a globe construct.

    "How about here?"

    He points to a location… A good distance from any settlements, temperate climate…

    "No, it's on a direct route between these-" I point. "-settlements. Here?"

    He nods. "You think we need to avoid them?"

    "I don't know that we don't."

    "Point." He nods. "Yeah, looks good then. Check it out together, then I'll do ferry duty while you build the camp."

    We turn planetwards, then fly at best conventional speeds towards the ground. The satellite appears to be geostationary, and the site we agreed on will be just over the horizon from it. I don't know if that's necessary, but sometimes people in this position will ignore things that aren't waved in their faces.

    I dim my environmental shield, and after a glance my way Jordan does the same.

    "You're warded, right?"

    "No tattoos, but yeah. It's come in real handy." He pauses, scanning the panorama beneath us. "Not seeing any aircraft or cars."

    "Me neither."

    "You using your magic vision?"

    "No, I'm taking the hint."

    "Probably the smart option. How you wanna handle Malvolio?"

    "Same way I handled Sivana. But since you're the other Green Lantern..."

    "I need to take the lead." He nods. "Diplomacy is an Honor Guard job. I'll handle it, no problem."
     
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  4. Ngamer11

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    For some reason, that doesn't fill me with confidence. What are the odds the next scene will either begin or end with them in deadly combat against Malvolio?
     
  5. hance1986

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    ' is '

    missed ending quotation mark after ' help '

    ' weaken '
     
  6. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    weakened -> weaken
     
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  7. Chojin Patriarch

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    Ah, Hal's love of flying being demonstrated in full swing, eh? And he's smart enough not to need to see where he's making constructs? Improvement!

    Cleanup on aisle five... Er, hangar five. Glorious mess. Super-acid versus magical base in a salty explosion.

    Ah, professional Lanterns at work. Now, if only Hal would use more sensible armour and constructs... Then again, Will. It's quite a bit more style-friendly.

    The really weird stuff is probably off on Harvester Dreadnoughts. They won't have much of the oddball stuff aboard the Castle Revolving, but what they will have are more elite officers, because Queen's flagship and all that.

    Only by a massive show of force. Sheeda are funny that way.

    No doubts about the likelihood of execution, then? I doubt OL does completely remember stuff like 'The Queen is nigh-unkillably immortal...' from Seven Soldiers.

    Send them home? On the same ship they use to travel downtime? Yes, that'll work well. Soon as you get to their era, the Vampire Sun goes to work, you lose what advantage you had over them and bam, fighting!

    Psychometric scrying? Though I doubt most of Humanity will be in too forgiving a mood. Some countries might well demand a blanket death sentence...

    Well, whatever lets Hal get the best effect. But seriously... :rolleyes: A giant Mongoose?And the Columbians might have the best luck with the aura-reading. They at least share the same base kernel code, so to speak.

    Good catch. That sort of shit is so annoying in games... And who knows what the Atlanteans and Columbians can pull off in conjunction.

    Heh, Sheeda paperwork. Or would that be chitinwork? Parchment-work? How does a bureaucracy work without some easy way to casually record things? I mean, we saw they have computer tech of a sort, but how user-friendly is it really? Can you imagine banks of cubicles with Sheeda workers tapping away on their chitinous keyboards? :D

    Like I said, Humanity will not be forgiving. The Sheeda might be better off fighting to the death, because it'll be kinder than what Earth might decide to do to them.

    Still that instinctive phone-gesture. Good way to visually signal to other people that you're receiving a call, at least...

    Well, then. One secondary objective successful. Wonder what shape they're in. :sneaky: I hope they checked them for infiltrators.

    ...Oh, boy. I hope they consider what Malvolio will have to say on that matter...

    Seriously. You know how little of Earth's surface people actually use? The locals don't seem much more advanced than we are...

    Ah, busywork. At least there's no need to escort them to a safe extraction point. Wonder Woman and Flash have that covered.

    A Civilisation player you aren't Hal. Don't assume apparently empty spaces aren't in use by someone.

    Heh, OL with his Strategy game skills to the rescue.

    They might be violently xenophobic. Especially since they seem to be the only sapients other than Malvolio in this 'pocket universe' thing.

    Hmm... I wonder if there's any habitation out of the satellite's sight lines? Do the locals live across the entire planet, or just in sight of their 'god'?

    Given the example OL sets, I should hope so.

    Hmm... Locally, or planetwide? The previous chapter noted them as 'industrial-era' but that's a wide spread of available technology. Anywhere from early industrialisation to late information age, after all.

    I suspect getting whammied again out here might be a little more impressive. Think 'falling like a rock' for a few moments impressive.

    Oh, boy. This is going to be funny.

    Well, things are progressing nicely. Let's hope Malvolio's in a good mood to receive visitors. Because Hal Jordan performing diplomacy? I suspect this will be interesting in every humorous sense of the word.
     
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  8. deccan2008

    deccan2008 Getting out there.

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    How the heck do Jordan's constructs work? Don't they just apply brute physical force or is there something exotic going on in the forms he gives them?
     
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    This is were Paul's changes in others can show. old Hal would have a fight, New Hal will suprise us. Even if Paul is kind of plateaued, everyone he has impacted is still getting better and more creative.
     
  10. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Should that second sentence have been a question?
     
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    Noice!

    ...

    You know what. At least it's obviously effective. Points for creativity if nothing else.
    It's just... why mongoose? Why not wolverine? :p

    !!! What happened to not poking a sleeping dragon?

    That's... under any other circumstances that's a good idea. Take hostages away from the line of fire, then blast away. With metaknowledge however... Why is Paul voting for this idea again?

    Oh well... I guess they are doing the Malvolio plotline sooner rather than later :/

    You're capable of taking a hint? Wow.

    Why not add "What could possibly go wrong?" while you're at it? :D

    Ignoring all of the flags of Malvolio plotline on OL's part aside this is a good chapter. I actually like the casual dialogue he and Hal had while mowing down the Sheeda mobs.

    I find it really annoying for some reason. Same with the greed-portation gesture. It's probably my general annoyance at pointless somatic spell components.
     
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    A mongoose construct...really, Jordan..
     
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  13. Senevri

    Senevri Not too sore, are you?

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    Hold up. Flash doesn't have a subspace pocket and isn't the healing ray kinda large? Plus, how are they powered? Admittedly this is DC, so the answer could be "microscopic nuclear reactors"....

    Edit: apparently not, and there's a precedent too.
     
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    I just noticed. After the word 'job', is that supposed to be an ellipsis or a period?
     
  15. Doccer

    Doccer I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Famous Last Words.
     
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    Zig Not too sore, are you?

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    Yes

    I mean, Malvolio didn't hit on him, Paul only has trouble taking those hints.
     
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    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    As I said above, traditionally constructs behave as a user thinks/imagines they should. Which could in fact add an exotic effect to the construct.

    Or Hal just whips up a badass mongoose.

    Dude...Rikki-Tikki-Tavi?

    He was faced with snake monsters, and generated a snake killer in response.
     
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    Tyrantviewer lord of all I survey

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    Constructs scale in effectivness with the emotion behind them- Green lanterns mostly use basic constructs instead of manifesting high tech weapons and such, because imagining what they want and mustering the will power in a combat situation is mentally trying and time sensitive- Paul can cheat by comparison by just wanting it enough.

    At the core though enough of the right emotion can drastically boost the effectiveness- if a yellow construct scares you enough it can tear through things that would otherwise stop it, if enough hope is behind a blue construct then it can work miracles. Thus the shape not only has to be one you can clearly picture, or want or hope for enough with some colors, but if it is something you can imagine working, especially in the context of the color, then it will be more potent- Thus Hal using fighter jets because he knows them and it is easy to put his believe and will behind it- and Mongoose's are famous for being enemies of snakes...

    Now that I think about it with things like this and the whole boxing glove thing, Hal kind of fights like a looney toon, but scaling to his will power instead of how funny it is, but it being funny might make it easier for him to picture and or will to happen- after all isn't it easy to will for the bad guy to get his comupence in those cartoons?
     
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    Corrected.
     
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    Right. Because wanting a complex tool/weapon into existence is completely different from willing a complex tool/weapon into existence.

    Green clearly requires the would be conjurer to be the most willful hypercongnitive in the Sector.

    Oranges have it easy and just want something until it pops into existence - their understanding of what they conjure (or lack thereof) isn't a factor.
     
  21. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    It's important to note that, canonically, Larfleeze was/is considered to be an entire corps all by himself.

    Meaning that once his greed kicks in, he's as much of a threat as the entire GLC...and that's not even bringing in his assimilation.

    It's telling that even the Guardians chose to give him a wide berth. To say nothing of what happened to the Controllers who poked him.
     
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    I was deeply sarcastic Maxx. Larfleeze was as dangerous as he was because the Plot required him to be so. I seriously doubt that any part of the Spectrum is inherently more powerful than any other.
     
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    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Actually, supposedly they are.

    Fear and Will are in the middle.

    Love and Rage are on the extreme ends. Boasting incredible raw power compared to the middle, but also being horribly altering on the mind AND susceptible to decay. I.E ones love and Rage can fade.

    Hope is powerful enough to fend off the yellow, orange, and red light. But is useless without will. (Yeah I don't get it either.)

    Avarice can nom up will like nothing and ramp up into a nigh unstoppable juggernaut. But also drives the user utterly mad and due to its very nature cannot be shared (until it can I suppose)

    White is supposed to be the most powerful of all and Black is just death so there is that.

    Supposedly the green light of will was chosen simply because it is the balanced middle ground.
     
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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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    MagnumForce Making the rounds.

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    Okay this got a good laugh out of me I mean, but I mean, if it works. :D
     
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    rkyeun Cabbitus Maximus

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    Rikki-Tikki-Tavi. A mongoose with will and ontological inertia.
     
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    You are right about Paul cheating, but wrong about how Paul cheats.

    Paul cheats by not having to do any of the heavy lifting that power rings are supposed to require from their users.

    A relevant quote from the anime series in concerns to this.

    There's not supposed to be any "hey AI do a thing" in concerns to Power Rings, hence why all the really powerful lanterns tend to be various levels of insane or super intelligent.


    That's because, outside of White and Black, they aren't.

    For all it's strengths, the Orange light is supposed to have a crap load of weaknesses to along side them. But while the strengths seem to have made their way into this story, all of the weaknesses were left by the roadside.

    Which, when combined with all the new author created powers Zoat has given the Orange Light, has resulted in the current lack of narrative tension in concerns to any sort of fights in both Paragon and Renegade story lines.
     
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    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I go to this page....and it's blank, not a single post. Thus, I am confused. This vacuum must not exist! I must post!

    So...something related to the story....think man, think!

    Um....

    Lord Malvolio of the Green Flame, a half-human Green Lantern, dressed like Alan Scott, who was hundreds of years old and who manipulated Hal into taking his ring. Malvolio planned to use Hal in his war against the Old Timer. But...you know, that got forgotten.

    When I was a kid, that was always something that struck a cord with me, even though I don't know why. The whole passing on the ring, and how, sometimes, it seemed REALLY important on a personal level.

    Sometimes I wonder if Malvolio was supposed to BE Alan at some point.
     
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    Seems like greens have it harder learning, Oranges have it harder mastering. Its easier to compare your stubborness against someone but much harder to compare greed/desire.GL vs OL rank and file goes to OL's, Honorguard fights the edge goes to GL's in my head.

    And I agree heartily with Maxx Crowley, How a Lantern thinks their constructs will work is how they will even over science that would say otherwise.
     
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    26th June 2012
    16:07 GMT -5


    I exhale, looking out across the United Nations General Assembly. Secretary General Tseng has more or less given up in calling for order as the ambassadors of a dozen countries try to shout over each other. In a way I'm impressed: not one of them is under fifty, and by the sounds of things they're all in fine physical condition. Thankfully, after a brief effort to maintain appearances the representatives of the countries most tightly tied into our uplift project are sitting down, ignoring the provocation from people demanding to know what they knew.

    I hoped they'd handle this better, but after two months the initial gratitude to Lex for saving them has faded and the nations of the Earth… Or perhaps I should say, the leaders of the nations of the Earth, are waking up to some rather unsettling realities.

    "You'd really think they'd have stopped panicking about this by now."

    Sam raises his left eyebrow. "Would you? Lex Luthor has a space fleet."

    "Yeah, but as far as they know he's just a businessman. Most of them don't have a space industry, and he's been openly building ships for months."

    "You do realise that there's a big difference between 'he's building ships' and 'he now has military supremacy over every nation on Earth', right?" He glowers at me, jabbing me in the chest with his right forefinger. "And don't think I'm okay with this, either. You were supposed to be keeping an eye on him!"

    "And I did. I knew at every step of the way exactly what he was doing. These ships will protect the Earth from extra planetary threats, and begin the process of building off-world human colonies."

    "Under whose authority?"

    "Well… Lex is running it as a sole proprietor enterprise… So… Him? I mean, he still needs to get raw materials and employees from somewhere so he's not completely cut off-."

    "Asteroid mining. And-. Is that it? He's tired of Earth so he's going to build his own planet with space ships and ray guns?"

    If he's got any sense.

    But I shake my head, and wave my right hand dismissively.

    "Of course not. He's just one man. People tend to be loyal to their country over their employer. But exactly how it works out depends on how sensible people are prepared to be. As you may surmise, the countries who have been benefiting from Lex's direct investment recently are a lot more willing to help him out than the countries feeling undermined. And not just the US; it turns out that Russia was updating their space infrastructure on the sly. Whereas… Tynanda, for example, isn't feeling slighted in the least and is happy to work with him."

    "All those countries you were launching coups in."

    I frown. "Sam. Those places were shit holes. Tell me I'm wrong."

    He snorts and looks away. "At least the other shoe's dropped. I thought Lex was planning on fleeing the country."

    "A bit mundane for him. Besides, where could he go that I could not find him?"

    "If he doesn't need anything, then why is he here?"

    "He's a businessman. If people-" More people. "-start imposing tariffs against LexCorp, it makes his life difficult."

    Or, rather, it doesn't, but it does make it less easy than it would otherwise be. LexCorp has security, but they're there to ward off criminals. Mostly. Whereas if a government feels sufficiently threatened then there are any number of violent individuals not constrained by civil law who could be instructed to attack him and his, and that sort of thing has 'unhelpful escalation' written all over it.

    "So he wants the same treatment the Justice League got."

    "The Justice League don't need to recruit thousands of people. And they're… Economically inert. And at least pretending not to interfere in international relations. Lex is going to want something a little more generous."

    "Or else?"

    "Or else you don't get the benefits of cheap space travel, or cheap energy-. Have you been keeping an eye on the energy market lately?"

    "If the price goes back up, there'll be rioting in the streets. He's got us over a barrel."

    "He had you over a barrel with spaceships. The civilian energy supply is just making the correct solution even more obvious."

    "And what are you getting out of it?"

    "Galactic peace and stability are everyone's concern. Now there's a human who can meaningfully help me with my wider… Aims." I shrug. "Most of this isn't new technology, you know. Starman worked for the American military during the Second World War. But no one followed up, because… Civilian applications are a distant second place. If that. It's been an ongoing frustration, both for me and for Lex. Bottom line? Get on board or be left behind."

    "How 'on board' does the US have to be to get its own fleet of ships?"

    "You'll have to agree how that's going to work with your counterparts in other Security Council countries. Obviously, the treaties relating to the deployment of weapons in outer space will have to be rewritten."

    "A bit late for that."

    "It was a bit late for that when Alan Scott reached near-Earth space in nineteen forty nine. Once it became apparent that certain types of superhuman could get off the planet under their own steam, it should have been obvious that the treaty was ridiculous."

    "That was before the treaty was drafted."

    "And yet, it got drafted anyway. The problem with stupid laws, Sam, isn't that people have to do stupid things to obey them. It's that they come to believe that all laws are stupid. And while I'm glad that your department is now functioning as opposed to being a deadweight, Lex did this faster, with less legal authority and less access to exotic resources."

    "So you're saying I should give Luthor my job."

    "Ah…" Oh. Would he take it? I suppose it… No, I don't think he would. It would close too many doors, and wouldn't really get him anything. "No. Not unless you can go back in time about fifteen years."

    The sidelong glance he gives me shows that he meant it as a joke.

    "My advice to you is to keep doing what you're doing now, but maybe ramp up the commercial side of things? Lex has made a lot of enemies, but he doesn't worry about them because they're really poor compared to him. But if you can get them something they can exploit in the same way he has, I suspect that you'll find a lot of them only too happy to give you a leg up. In the mean time, I imagine you're got counterparts in the Russian and Chinese military to talk to."

    "You not sticking around? I thought you and the Chinese got on pretty well. You don't wanna have a talk like this with Chairman Jiang?"

    "The thing about not being in first place, is that you don't get quite so offended when someone overtakes you. Though if you end up needing a mediator…"

    Mother Box, hush tube.

    Ping.

    "I know the Equestrian Princess of Friendship."

    His face goes still for a moment, then he smiles.

    "You made that title up."

    I smile back, and stroll into the portal room in Challenger Mountain through the tube -

    26th June 2012
    14:11 GMT -7


    -which shuts down behind me.

    "They're still not dealing with it, are they?"

    Artemis doesn't look around, still staring at our end of the mirror portal. Bethany wanted to know why it wasn't a mirror on this side too, so I made a frame for it. You can't see through it, and I don't… Really know why that is.

    "Do you need to ask?"

    "No, but this… Connection-thing is still kinda weird. The other guys on the team don't understand why I'm okay with it."

    "They think I mind controlled you?"

    "Something like that. So… Ponies?"

    I grin, my eyes widening as I shift my armour into subspace.

    "Ponies."
     
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