1. Due to issues with external spam filters, QQ is currently unable to send any mail to Microsoft E-mail addresses. This includes any account at live.com, hotmail.com or msn.com. Signing up to the forum with one of these addresses will result in your verification E-mail never arriving. For best results, please use a different E-mail provider for your QQ address.
    Dismiss Notice
  2. For prospective new members, a word of warning: don't use common names like Dennis, Simon, or Kenny if you decide to create an account. Spammers have used them all before you and gotten those names flagged in the anti-spam databases. Your account registration will be rejected because of it.
    Dismiss Notice
  3. Since it has happened MULTIPLE times now, I want to be very clear about this. You do not get to abandon an account and create a new one. You do not get to pass an account to someone else and create a new one. If you do so anyway, you will be banned for creating sockpuppets.
    Dismiss Notice
  4. If you wish to change your username, please ask via conversation to tehelgee instead of asking via my profile. I'd like to not clutter it up with such requests.
    Dismiss Notice
  5. Due to the actions of particularly persistent spammers and trolls, we will be banning disposable email addresses from today onward.
    Dismiss Notice
  6. A note about the current Ukraine situation: Discussion of it is still prohibited as per Rule 8
    Dismiss Notice
  7. The rules regarding NSFW links have been updated. See here for details.
    Dismiss Notice
  8. The testbed for the QQ XF2 transition is now publicly available. Please see more information here.
    Dismiss Notice

With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

Loading...
  1. Lazurman

    Lazurman That Others May Fap

    Joined:
    Mar 8, 2015
    Messages:
    7,186
    Likes Received:
    50,684
    I find it hilarious that OL's method of proving his credentials is to summon the rings off of other Lanterns by wanting it more.
     
  2. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    1,082
    Likes Received:
    4,200
    Semicolon should be colon. (The other semicolon in the update is correct.)

    Use the multi-quote feature, and/or edit your posts instead of multi-posting like that. ^^()
     
  3. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2016
    Messages:
    14,841
    Likes Received:
    736,195
    Thank you, corrected.
     
  4. Bramble Thorn

    Bramble Thorn Verified Silhouette

    Joined:
    Dec 9, 2015
    Messages:
    675
    Likes Received:
    4,440
    Barda is the New Goddess of Pass?

    [Word of God: Accepted. Domain: Assigned]

    verb
    verb: pass; 3rd person present: passes; past tense: passed; past participle: passed; gerund or present participle: passing
    1.
    move or cause to move in a specified direction.
    "he passed through towns and villages"
    Similar:
    go
    proceed
    move
    progress
    make one's way
    travel
    drive
    fly
    run
    flow
    course
    stream
    roll
    drift
    sweep
    Opposite:
    halt
    stop
    change from one state or condition to another.
    "homes that have passed from public to private ownership"
    EUPHEMISTIC•NORTH AMERICAN
    die (used euphemistically).
    "his father had passed to the afterlife"
    2.
    go past or across; leave behind or on one side in proceeding.
    "the two vehicles had no room to pass each other"
    go beyond the limits of; surpass or exceed.
    "this item has passed its sell-by date"
    Similar:
    surpass
    exceed
    go beyond
    transcend
    outdo
    surmount
    outstrip
    TENNIS
    hit a winning shot past (an opponent).
    3.
    (of time or a point in time) elapse; go by.
    "the day and night passed slowly"
    Similar:
    elapse
    go by
    go past
    proceed
    progress
    advance
    wear on
    slip by
    slip away
    roll by
    glide by
    tick by
    spend or use up (a period of time).
    "this was how they passed the time"
    Similar:
    occupy
    spend
    fill
    use (up)
    employ
    devote
    take up
    while away
    beguile
    kill
    waste
    fritter
    dissipate
    come to an end.
    "the danger had passed"
    Similar:
    come to an end
    cease to exist
    fade
    fade away
    melt away
    blow over
    run its course
    ebb
    die out
    evaporate
    vanish
    peter out
    draw to a close
    disappear
    finish
    end
    cease
    terminate
    evanish
    happen; be done or said.
    "not another word passed between them"
    Similar:
    happen
    occur
    take place
    come about
    transpire
    befall
    eventuate
    go unnoticed
    go unheeded
    stand
    go
    be accepted
    go unremarked
    go undisputed
    go uncensored
    4.
    transfer (something) to someone, especially by handing or bequeathing it to the next person in a series.
    "your letter has been passed to Mr. Rich for action"
    Similar:
    hand
    let someone have
    give
    hand over
    hand around
    reach
    transfer
    convey
    deliver
    throw
    toss
    chuck
    bung
    be transferred from one person or place to another, especially by inheritance.
    "if Ann remarried the estate would pass to her new husband"
    Similar:
    be transferred
    be made over
    be turned over
    be signed over
    go
    devolve
    be left
    be bequeathed
    be handed down/on
    be given
    be consigned
    be passed on
    (in football, soccer, hockey, and other games) throw, kick, or hit (the ball or puck) to another player on one's own team.
    "his intent was to pass the ball forward rather than knock it back"
    Similar:
    kick
    hit
    throw
    head
    lob
    loft
    put (something, especially money) into circulation.
    "persons who have passed bad checks"
    (especially of money) circulate; be current.
    "cash was passing briskly"
    5.
    (of a candidate) be successful in (an examination, test, or course).
    "she passed her driving test"
    Similar:
    be successful in
    succeed in
    gain a pass in
    get through
    come through
    meet the requirements of
    pass muster in
    qualify
    graduate
    come up to scratch in
    come up to snuff in
    sail through
    scrape through
    Opposite:
    fail
    judge the performance or standard of (someone or something) to be satisfactory.
    "he was passed fit by army doctors"
    be accepted as adequate; go uncensured.
    "she couldn't agree, but let it pass"
    6.
    (of a legislative or other official body) approve or put into effect (a proposal or law) by voting on it.
    "the bill was passed despite fierce opposition"
    (of a proposal or law) be examined and approved by (a legislative body or process).
    "the Bill passed by 164 votes to 107"
    Similar:
    approve
    vote for
    accept
    ratify
    adopt
    carry
    agree to
    authorize
    sanction
    endorse
    validate
    legalize
    put into effect
    enact
    OK
    Opposite:
    reject
    7.
    pronounce (a judgment or judicial sentence).
    "passing judgment on these crucial issues"
    Similar:
    declare
    pronounce
    utter
    express
    deliver
    issue
    set forth
    utter (something, especially criticism).
    "she would pass remarks about the Paxtons in their own house"
    ARCHAIC
    adjudicate or give a judgment on a matter.
    "a jury could not be trusted to pass upon the question of Endicott's good faith"
    8.
    discharge (something, especially urine or feces) from the body.
    "frequency of passing urine"
    Similar:
    discharge
    excrete
    eliminate
    evacuate
    expel
    emit
    void
    release
    let out
    9.
    forgo one's turn in a game or an offered opportunity.
    "we pass on dessert and have coffee"
    (of a company) not declare or pay (a dividend).
    "the company has already passed its interim dividend"
    BRIDGE
    make no bid when it is one's turn during an auction.
    "South bids 1NT. North passes"
    noun
    noun: pass; plural noun: passes
    1.
    an act or instance of moving past or through something.
    "repeated passes with the swipe card"
    an act of passing the hands over anything, as in conjuring or hypnotism.
    a thrust in fencing.
    a juggling trick.
    BRIDGE
    an act of refraining from bidding during the auction.
    COMPUTING
    a single scan through a set of data or a program.
    2.
    a successful completion of an examination or course.
    "a 100 percent pass rate"
    US
    the grade indicating the successful completion of an examination or course.
    BRITISH
    an achievement of a university degree without honors.
    "a pass degree"
    3.
    a card, ticket, or permit giving authorization for the holder to enter or have access to a place, form of transportation, or event.
    "a bus pass"
    Similar:
    permit
    warrant
    authorization
    license
    passport
    visa
    safe conduct
    exeat
    free ticket
    free admission
    complimentary ticket
    laissez-passer
    4.
    (in football, soccer, hockey, and other games) an act of throwing, kicking, or hitting the ball or puck to another player on the same team.
    "his cross-field pass to Giggs"
    Similar:
    kick
    hit
    throw
    shot
    header
    5.
    INFORMAL
    an amorous or sexual advance made to someone.
    "she made a pass at Stephen"
    Similar:
    make sexual advances to
    make advances to
    make sexual overtures to
    proposition
    make a sexual approach to
    come on to
    make a play for
    hit on
    make time with
    put the make on
    make love to
    6.
    a state or situation of a specified, usually bad or difficult, nature.
    "things came to such a pass that these gentlemen sat coldly at the meetings not daring to speak out freely and honestly"
    Similar:
    be in a worrying state
    be in a sad plight
    be in troubled circumstances
    be in dire straits
    be in a pickle/hole
    7.
    INFORMAL•US
    a rejection or dismissal.
    "those who don't like oily food may want to give this a pass"
    8.
    BRIDGE
    an act of refraining from bidding during the auction.
    exclamation
    exclamation: pass
    said when one does not know the answer to a question, for example in a quizzing game.
    "to the enigmatic question we answered “Pass.”"
    INFORMAL•US
    used to express rejection or dismissal.
    "the shepherd's pie looks gross. Pass!"

    Which definition?
    My personal pick would be Noun 7: Rejection or Dismissal.

    She is the one who having been raised by Granny Goodness to be a Fury, was able to reject her upbringing to become something else.
     
  5. Threadmarks: Over Reaching (part 5)
    Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2016
    Messages:
    14,841
    Likes Received:
    736,195
    3rd July 2012
    10:38 GMT -5


    Sounded easy when Dox described it. And I suppose that not giving me any practice at all certainly prevents the Reach from knowing about it.

    The impeller sublight drives all the ships of the strike force have been equipped with make leaving dock and forming up an impressively rapid affair. None of that messing around with gas or plasma thrusters less advanced navies are forced to engage in. And now that I know it's there, I can.. sort of

    feel

    what the archmages have done to the ships to make them compatible. It certainly feels like I should be able to do what Dox asks, and if we can get a smaller ship with this setup it will certainly make it easier for Jade to visit Earth. But I'm slightly worried that he's overestimating me.

    The people on those ships have.. similar desires. And the spells are far more sophisticated versions of the ones which the archmages used to keep themselves safe. That will keep the objects I bring with me whole. There are Orange Lanterns on those ships, and honestly the

    feedback I'm getting

    makes me think that's going to make it easier. Though they might have to recharge their rings immediately upon our arrival.

    Breathe in. Breathe out.

    Feel the Reach planet. That's simple enough; Dox gave me a precise description and I know the general shape of Reach desires. Interesting that they've never thought to include magic defences, but I suppose if the planet is mystically inert it would be rather difficult.

    "Illustres, all ships are in position. Begin."

    I didn't seek Dox out for his winning personal skills. And let's be honest: Hinon didn't seek me out for mine.

    I don't send out filaments, not for this. Instead, the region of space we're in glows orange, and the Lanterns on board raise their now-glowing rings in surprise.

    I focus on the shared desires of the crew, the Lanterns and the links between those things and the desires of the Reach sapients at the far end. I suppose that 'Priest' did give me a little practice, but the magic making the ships work as a single object with their crews makes the whole thing feel quite noticeably… Off. Still, I'm as ready as I'm going to get.

    And we're… In. The crew shouldn't be experiencing anything very much. The Lanterns might, and we'll have to follow up on that to make sure that there aren't any undesirable side effects. Concept to.. concept, shared desires showing the way through metaphorical space. I could make this journey myself in a moment, but making sure that everyone else comes along with me is making me take things a little easier.

    Alright, we're in the general area of the target desire set. Make sure to appear a little way away, because we're going to be jamming hard but need to pick our targets and reorganise at the far end. And quite possibly recover. There's absolutely no way for me to warn people in advance, so

    back into normal space we go.

    I feel a momentary pang of relief as all of the ships reappear, and another as the automatic FTL jammers activate and the ships carrying them move towards the centre of the formation. The ships didn't remain the same distance away from each other, probably due to similarities and differences-

    Dox sends out a request for all ships to report status. It's not directed at me.

    -in their desires. Orange Lanterns begin leaving the ships a moment later and I scan the system.

    Two rocky planets orbiting close to the sun. Two gas giants with numerous large moons a little further out and a ball of ice with delusions of grandeur… Not all that far away from us, actually.

    Ship beam weapons begin firing at the sensor nodes and jammers seeded throughout the system. They're fragile and will be cheap to replace, but destroying them will slightly degrade the Reach fleet's performance. And speaking of the Reach, the ships on patrol of the system are heading in towards the fleet base on the largest of the inner gas giant's moons. The closer ones are trying to head directly away from the L.E.G.I.O.N. fleet in different directions, presumably planning to fly at best sub-light speed to the edge of our jammers to alert other Reach assets as to what's going on.

    Of course, a position going silent is probably going to prompt investigation anyway.

    Lanterns start forming up around the ships, and I can feel their eagerness, their readiness to destroy whatever Reach assets they can get hold of. But… These aren't the highest performing Lanterns. No, those are being left to make attacks of opportunity if openings appear in the outer parts of the Reach defence network. These appear to have been chosen for strength. They're people who would gladly die if it meant taking a Scarab Warrior with them.

    "All ships report readiness. Advance, Lanterns to the van."

    I nod and accelerate towards the fleet base, making sure to remain in the general vicinity of the ships. Out of curiosity I try a minor warp and find that the texture of space is unusually inflexible here. I'm confident that I could overpower the jammers with brute force, but it would certainly consume quite a lot of energy and my speed-

    "Clarissi to Illustres."

    -would be lower than usual.

    "Responding."

    "Are you able to continue participating?"

    "Fit as a fiddle and raring to go."

    "Take a small group of Lanterns and destroy the runners."

    "On it."

    Ring, personnel files.

    Compliance.

    And I'll take a look… Who is nearly overwhelmed with the need to kill Reach citizens right now? Whose self-control is threatened? Who might break discipline and come along anyway if I don’t call them?

    "Lantern Light-Click Quiet-Cough Rasp."

    Shared desires severed as his Darkstar team is slain in combat with a Scarab. He wants that Scarab to be here, but will settle for fighting them later.

    "Lantern Velus."

    Just can't stop killing people.

    "Lantern Brobranbrak."

    Pride. This one hates the Controllers for giving zhe's people shelter almost as much as zhe hates the Reach for putting them in a position where they need it. Zhe desires to rule in the Reach's place once they're destroyed.

    "With me."

    They peel away as the other Lanterns form up into a skirmish line ahead of the fleet, and head in my direction. Lantern Brobranbrak's ring glows brighter as zhe tries to bypass the intervening space in some way, and zhe's spines flex angrily when the jammers prevent it.

    "The Reach has substantial experience in fighting Lanterns. Don't assume that your preferred techniques will work unopposed."

    "Yours did."

    "I didn't get made Illustres for my pretty face. Though I'm perfectly happy to tutor you if you want to try and replicate my feats."

    Pride. Brobranbrak hates an alien offering to help as an act of charity, but assumes that zhe will have to kill me eventually anyway meaning that there's no lasting harm in accepting.

    Dox…

    "We're going after that ship there." I accelerate. "Please let me know if I'm going too fast."
     
    Last edited: Jan 9, 2021
  6. Citizen

    Citizen Well worn.

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2016
    Messages:
    6,513
    Likes Received:
    14,374
    Sounds like particularly stable Lanterns going on this mission.
     
  7. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

    Joined:
    Feb 6, 2019
    Messages:
    1,289
    Likes Received:
    13,038
    Ah, Lantern Freud would have a field day.

    Paul will have to set aside some time to act as the Corps Deanna Troi, huh?

    (Honetly though, the one thing all superhero teams miss is a resident psychiatrist)
     
  8. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2019
    Messages:
    2,921
    Likes Received:
    17,558
    Who's Paul referring to here when he says 'Priest'?

    A problem for another time. I'm honestly kinda amused this person honestly thinks zhe stands a chance of ruling after the Reach is gone, unless zhe's very long lived, or that zhe can take on Paul. Also, is 'zhe' a pronoun for that Lantern's species?
     
  9. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    878
    Likes Received:
    3,644
    of -> in ?
    threaten -> threatened
    Oof, that's going to be a blow to Brobranbrak's pride.
     
  10. DeathlessProficiency

    DeathlessProficiency Know what you're doing yet?

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2019
    Messages:
    190
    Likes Received:
    1,887
    Oh right not every Orange Lantern is like able or even a good guy
     
    Jaron, Silveraith, mauke and 6 others like this.
  11. Shotiegun11

    Shotiegun11 Know what you're doing yet?

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    130
    Likes Received:
    1,378
    The SI has Zero ability to complain here.

    He should have kept recruiting using the Honden to find people this entire time and not left Dox to do it. He shouldn't have left to 'let Dox establish himself'. If Dox can't establish himself as a leader with the SI around then he doesn't deserved to be the leader. Chief Strategist, War Master, Logistics Advisor? Sure.

    Leader of the Orange Lantern Corp? No.

    Of course a Logic Monster is going to just look for people with useful desires to give rings.

    EDIT: The SI should be FAR more involved in the Orange Lantern Corp. In universe.

    Hopefully this is a wakeup call to the SI to take his part in the OLC more seriously.
     
  12. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    878
    Likes Received:
    3,644
    That's certainly how I read it. Safe assumption.
     
  13. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    878
    Likes Received:
    3,644
    I might have missed it, but I didn't read any of that as Paul complaining, or anything indicating that he was unhappy with the situation.
     
    Jaron, vaegrim, Ardy and 6 others like this.
  14. Lone Courier 6

    Lone Courier 6 Wanderer of threads

    Joined:
    Jan 15, 2016
    Messages:
    612
    Likes Received:
    6,520
    It’s almost like Orange Light is something that tends to attract nutjobs or something?
     
  15. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

    Joined:
    Nov 20, 2019
    Messages:
    22,176
    Likes Received:
    321,142
    'journey myself in moments' or 'a moment' not 'moment'

    'a Scarab Warrior with them' needs an orange dot at the end.
     
  16. Queshire

    Queshire Not too sore, are you?

    Joined:
    Jan 26, 2019
    Messages:
    466
    Likes Received:
    2,771
    OL could just be using it in a general nonbinary use instead of being specis specific.
     
  17. Lone Courier 6

    Lone Courier 6 Wanderer of threads

    Joined:
    Jan 15, 2016
    Messages:
    612
    Likes Received:
    6,520
    Useful Desires do not necessarily equal Strong Desires, kinda hoping some of Paul’s recruits fall short because they don’t have the necessary avarice to make the ring work.
     
    TopHatWearer, mauke, Cuchulin and 3 others like this.
  18. Shotiegun11

    Shotiegun11 Know what you're doing yet?

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    130
    Likes Received:
    1,378
    Dox has basically chosen Suicide (Bombers) Lanterns for this mission.

    The fact that any of those exist in the OLC is stupid.

    The SI is perfectly capable of finding people with 'stable' desires and capable of also guiding lanterns towards better ways of realizing their desires.

    Dox just wants people to fight in the war.

    EDIT: Of course, this is if the SI was actually involved with recruiting (other than the like 6 Lanterns he's recruited) and training (he's only done one class a while ago and it's never been mentioned again).


    EDIT 2:
    He wouldn't have found them in the Honden if they weren't at least capable of having strong desires.

    Also, one of the things in this story is that the SI PUSHES is that Strong Desire =/= Good Lantern/Strong Lantern.

    Wanting TOO much or in the wrong (dead end) ways lead to bad Orange Lantern.
     
    Last edited: Nov 29, 2020
    Vorian, TopHatWearer, mauke and 14 others like this.
  19. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

    Joined:
    Nov 20, 2019
    Messages:
    22,176
    Likes Received:
    321,142
    The guy that trapped Malvolio in his prison.

    He's a Green Lantern, or was one.

    He showed up in the last episode.

    Zhe is used as a gender neutral pronoun in the trans community.

    So this Lantern most likely doesn't have a male or female gender.

    It could be either the closest translation in English for how zhe's supposed to be referred as, or OL chose to use it himself.

    At least its better than calling said Lantern 'it'.
     
  20. Alasnuyo

    Alasnuyo I am always here

    Joined:
    Nov 18, 2013
    Messages:
    70
    Likes Received:
    561
    The guy who stuck Malvolio in the pocket universe thingy.

    Edit: Ack! Ninja'd.
     
  21. FreeGod

    FreeGod If you see a God on the road fuck it!

    Joined:
    May 26, 2016
    Messages:
    8,567
    Likes Received:
    15,240
    These are the ones that are both most powerful and most expendable.
     
  22. Shotiegun11

    Shotiegun11 Know what you're doing yet?

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    130
    Likes Received:
    1,378
    Vril Dox in his head where he speaks Coluan slang: 'Imma fuck around till I get me a Larfleeze 2 Electric Boogaloo going.'
     
  23. frommerman

    frommerman Getting out there.

    Joined:
    May 29, 2016
    Messages:
    23
    Likes Received:
    175
    Well...they need those. Lots of them. Given that they can keep creating rings, people with the ability to wield them against the Reach aren't going to be in short supply. This is a war. You can expect casualties. The nice thing about an army of orange lanterns is that all of them want to be fighting it, by definition.
     
  24. Oglymogly

    Oglymogly I trust you know where the happy button is?

    Joined:
    Aug 5, 2017
    Messages:
    577
    Likes Received:
    3,837
    Man, this is a nice reminder that OL had to find a super genius to make his Corps work in a useful amd productive manner. Finding people who want to do what you want them to do isnt easy, much less finding ones who want strong enough to work a ring. Add in the fact that this mission called for power over stability, and you are almost guaranteed that none of them are particularly sane, even by Orange Lantern standards.

    It'll take OL years if not decades to find and train enough people to fight a war who are long term stable. Even then, trying to keep everyone on the same page will be like herding cats. Cats with warp drives.

    I do wonder what OL's long term solution to this will be though. I just hope he doesn't expect Dox to take any criticisms well.
     
  25. Dakkan Sall

    Dakkan Sall Random Encounter

    Joined:
    Apr 25, 2013
    Messages:
    394
    Likes Received:
    2,698
    The first of the bunch wasn't comparatively bad. Doesn't have a long-term healthy outlook, but it's far better than "just wants to kill" and "plans to kill everyone else and rule in their place."
     
  26. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2016
    Messages:
    14,841
    Likes Received:
    736,195
    The retired Green Lantern from the previous episode.
    At least some of them. Not all apparently humanoid species have the same sets of genitals.
    I think that's alright.
    Thank you, corrected.
    Thank you, corrected.
    You are incorrect.
     
  27. Shotiegun11

    Shotiegun11 Know what you're doing yet?

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2016
    Messages:
    130
    Likes Received:
    1,378
    The SI, in story, has said he doesn't want a Lantern Corps of psychopaths. He doesn't want a legion of monsters only obsessed with the destruction of the Reach.

    It's FINE if that's their main desire, if that's their drive, but they need reasons, wants, to not go Orange Light crazy while all of that is happening.

    The SI should never have stopped recruiting or trainings the OLC. (Which are apparently his main jobs in it outside of leading them in the field? Even though he hasn't ever once trained to lead lanterns or with leading Orange Lanterns...ever?) These kinds of 'It's fine if I die I just want revenge' Lanterns are a product of the SI not doing his job and just going back to Earth for SO much of the OLC's inception.

    EDIT: If I haven't made it clear: This is a failing on the SI's part for not continuing his recruiting through the Honden and training all of the Orange Lanterns.
     
  28. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2019
    Messages:
    2,173
    Likes Received:
    33,776
    To be fair, do they know anything about you besides that you exist, and you're good with Orange Light? I mean, they'd probably assume your Greedport is some manner of FTL effect...

    I'm sure Best Snek will be happy to give you all the power you'll need for this. And I'd make sure it's well-tested and tried before you go taking Jade for daytrips through the Honden.

    Probably best to have everyone aligned, desire-wise. Makes the 'envelope' you'll need to work them into much smoother.

    And just how much experience does the Reach have with magic, in general? I mean, we know from canon that magic was able to break an admittedly already-damaged scarab's control programming. That might just be Earth Bullshittm but perhaps the Reach really doesn't encounter mystically active worlds that often. And what few countermeasures they have may be designed solely to break and shatter magic.

    Admittedly, she didn't pick you specifically anyway. It was just pure chance you got involved, because you were unusually in touch with your inner avarice.

    Well, that's not conducive to an easy time. Hopefully the data they gain from this run lets them refine the spells to smooth that out for next time. Because you know Dox expects there to be a 'next time'.

    And that's something else they'll probably look to refine. A travel method that leaves you entirely deaf and blind to what's happening outside is not a good thing for a military operation. Hopefully by then they'll have someone else capable of entering the Honden...

    So, no-one got lost in the Honden, I hope. Lanterns are more likely to have been at risk of that anyway.

    Sounds like a typical filler system in any space game. Now, to see if anyone's going a little tang-crazy.

    Sounds like the Reach have standard procedures for unexpected fleets turning up. Presumably they'd have expected some warning, like a wormhole opening, but good reaction time as is.

    Great. And waste all that time and effort spent training them. I suppose Dox has his reasons. Maybe these are people he can't trust as easily with more sedate operations...

    Not the best idea, this is supposed to be a joint operation, not a solo run. :p

    So the other lanterns might just be able to keep up. If they could manage FTL themselves.

    Thank goodness for ring translation. Can you imagine the confused face Dox would have without idiom equivalency?

    And a solid first challenge for OL: Working with people he hasn't personally recruited and trained. Let's see how well he can mesh with complete strangers.

    Which would be annoying, if only because you'd have to apply discipline in the middle of imminent combat.

    So, out for revenge. At least he isn't being touched by Rage.

    Useful, if you can keep him aimed at the right people. He might be a problem down the line, especially if he can;t control himself.

    I'm guessing from a non-binary or agendered race, this one. And that's a concerning side-desire. One to keep an eye on for unwanted conquering.

    And desperate to prove themself, I see. Zhe's going to have to learn to moderate themself in the name of teamwork.

    "I can cheat." Honestly, I really foresee problems with this one. Ambitiousness and dissatisfaction don't make for a good combination.

    Okay, don't trust this one with your back at any point, especially if they decide they've learnt enough from you...

    Heh. Bet that'll get them fired up to show him what they can do. With any luck, this'll be an easy shakedown for them and the others.

    Well, some interesting personalities showing up already. o_O A Revenge-seeker, a serial murderer and a regular Starscream... Hopefully OL can get some of those rough edges smoothed out and turn them into solid ringslingers.
     
  29. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

    Joined:
    Nov 20, 2019
    Messages:
    22,176
    Likes Received:
    321,142
    I admit Paul needs to take a bigger role in the OLC, and maybe after this he will.

    However I feel the need to point out that OL's actions, which lead to Dox asking him to leave, were taking up the OLC's resources, which they needed for the war, so its not that unreasonable for Dox to want him to leave so they can actually make something organised.

    Also I get the feeling that the OLC recruits tend to want to obey someone if they respect them, and if Dox can't show control over people that are his subordinates then he may lose their respect and their desire to fight for him, which would be very bad.

    Also there aren't a lot of people in the universe that can safely wield orange rings, and they need to start the war before the Reach can prepare further and drag the war on.

    And most of these guys, while strong, don't appear to be all that sane in their desires, like the one who can't stop killing, and this 'I hate everyone no matter what' Lantern, so yeah they may die, but the number of people who can use rings isn't very high in the first place, so Dox can't exactly be picky.

    Now available in space stores.

    But seriously they're much less of a danger than Larfleeze.

    He had a Light Fountain with him and billions of years to absird its light.

    Also his ring didn't have an AI or a connection to the CPB, so they couldn't just shut it down.

    These guys don't have a Fountain and their rings can be shut down.

    True, but maybe having some of them go of on the Reach during the war is acceptable, as long as the majority don't do that, and after the war the police force they make isn't filled with psychopaths.
     
    TopHatWearer, Cuchulin, Ardy and 4 others like this.
  30. w34v3r

    w34v3r Versed in the lewd.

    Joined:
    Jul 23, 2017
    Messages:
    1,617
    Likes Received:
    3,955
    I'm not certain the goal is to be a police force, so far the Orange Lanterns seem to more of a mutual aid society/anti-reach army.
     
Loading...