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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. hance1986

    hance1986 A pitiful excuse for a man.

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    ' generation '

    Also, maybe I wasn't paying attention. When did Diana become more powerful or a demigoddess? Was this during the Sheeda invasion arc? Or in relation to what Paul was stirring up with the Titans and how Diana and Donna were created?
     
  2. Vanbers

    Vanbers Well worn.

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    I mean, I may ahve forgotten in the MASS of content for the story, but, uh, can Paul truly die?

    Like, does the Ophidian have claim on his soul? Would the Ophidian settle for Hades or some other god dictating where he goes?

    Is there some sort of Avarice Afterlife he's unknowingly going to go to if he dies fully, that he doesn't know about because he hasn't fully died yet, and nobody with true Avarice Enlightenment has died/been besties with the Ophidian?

    The lore of this ABSOLUTE BEHEMOTH is tough to keep straight sometimes. :V

    Ehhhh, maybe? Maybe not, though, IIRC guns aren't infallible, and basically twist the meaning of 'innocent'.

    ^^^^ This.
     
  3. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Well, sorta.

    This was ... a way to get rid of the bullet.

    I don't think that'll happen, Ted.

    If she was there the first time then she may have gotten spooked when it didn't work and retreated.

    We saw Diana use more of her powers during the training episode.

    Paul has died and his soul went to an afterlife.

    Granted, him going to an afterlife was a work of a third party, but he can very much die.

    Whether he'll go to Erobus or the Plane of Avarice when he dies is up for debate.

    Heck, he may still go to Heaven or Hell, since according to the angels a person needs to actually participate in the worship and rituals of their gods in order to go to an afterlife that belongs to those gods.

    Paul may not do too much of that, or at least lacks sincerity, so he may also end up in the Abrahamic again.
     
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  4. Vanbers

    Vanbers Well worn.

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    Well, clearly, the next time Paul dies:

    Death: "Right, you're kind of a weird case, so I've gotta bring in a specialist here."

    Paul: "...But you're... Death? Isn't his your entire thing?"

    *Curtain raises, Delirium walks onstage, Audience made up of afterlife representatives claps confusedly*

    Delirium: "WELCOME ONE AND ALL TO THE FIRST ANNUAL AFTERLIFE ROULETTE-"

    Paul: "I'd rather this wasn't annual, to be honest."

    Delirium: "-ROUND AND ROUND THE WHEEL GOES, WHERE IT STOPS, NOBODY KNOWS!"

    Paul: "Then again, considering the world I live in, maybe I could get one of those sundae cards?"

    Delirium: "Ohhhh, and it just passed Plane of Avarice!"

    Ophidian: *HISS!*

    Delirium: "Oops, looks like it's gonna be Hell-"

    Mammon: "Shit, really? Can I just give him away instead? Or sell him, maybe?"

    Delirium: "OH! What an upset! And it lands on... SILVER CITY! Come on up and take your prize!"

    Angels: "...do we have to?"
     
  5. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    So spirit of vengeance trapped inside the guns?
     
  6. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Yeah, best to get the squishy 90-year-old out of there. Target or not, he's the most at risk. Though... Doesn't that behaviour with the construct shield seem familiar? Looks like you might have found that mystery sniper.

    At least he's faster than she can keep up with. Downside is, she's too tenacious to give up, thanks to the Guns' curse.

    Unfortunately, that doesn't mean you're safe.

    Slippery as an eel, with a hell of a bite.

    ...Makes me wonder if she's tried to shoot him at other times, only for him to Exit, Honden Right and causing the shot to miss him...

    Good idea, because I don't think the other ladies have quite the same talent with 'Bullets and Bracelets' that Diana does.

    Long story short? Supernatural assassin with ghost powers... The usual thing.

    The sidearm of choice for American military forces for most of the Twentieth Century.

    They'd kind of have to be, but I suspect the mystical aspects are something else entirely.

    Ah, Adrenaline. Also the Ring's ability to disable pain reflexes.

    I doubt they moved in the same circles. Likely not the same city, either.

    Figures. The bullets aim to do the most damage possible. So a hit to just meat will punch through. But bone? He's lucky it didn't fragment.

    He was in the way. No doubt the Guns have little consideration for collateral damage.

    Hey, if the banana fits, Ook Ook...

    ...Same old OL. No idea of restraint. Good thing Ted has a damn strong stomach.

    So you need to get the Guns away from the cursed wielder. Good luck with that.

    Sounds like he hauled ass to the Embassy.

    ...Maybe her teleportation has a height limit. Or requires something to stand on when landing. Like Reaper from Overwatch.

    And how many of them are still around? I'm guessing not a lot.

    Ow. That says a lot about the bullet's lethality, then. Diana's basically bullet-resistant, isn't she?

    Heh. I'm guessing Alan still hasn't really looked at what his ring can do, has he?

    Sounds like the whole League might get a bulletin about her. Though some might not want to stick around. Looking at you, Barry. Icon and the Hawks probably have a bit of blood on their hands too...

    Ah, old people with new toys.

    Yes, OL. Who else has been shooting at you lately, hmm?

    So, that question's solved. Presumably she assumed she'd only need or get one shot off.

    Almost certainly not. Hell, her origin is using the Guns on a particular asshole she failed to successfully prosecute.

    Sorry, Alan, no time to chat. It looks like she found a vantage point.

    Thankfully, the Ring is still on auto-dodge, right? Right? Still, this could be a lively couple of chapters. And hopefully more than a little frustrating for the spirt of the Guns. Imagine having to try and chase down someone as slippery as OL is. And she's stuck pursuing him until she either kills him, or tries to kill herself (which simply aborts the 'case' she's on...) I wonder which is more likely. :p
     
  7. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Actually, she uses her bracelets to block bullets because they can penetrate her skin. Something about her being tough enough to take blunt attacks, like punches, but not tough enough to stop piercing attacks, like bullets.
     
  8. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    That always felt weird.

    Then again, it's far from the weirdest weakness she's ever had.
     
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  9. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    construct -> constructs
     
  10. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    In the comics, yes, at least until the nineties, where with her death she was turned into an Olympian and gained invulnerability that covered piercing attacks like bullets.

    Here, since that doesn't make sense to Zoat, she is bullet proof, and those guns hurt her anyway.
     
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  11. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    To quote MacBeth, 'Tell me about it.'
    You'd rather it be in a bike?
    Yeah, I'm not using that particular piece of canonically stupidity. Originally, Diana needed to use her bracers because she was only as strong as an peak fitness human woman. As her strength has been constantly amped up they've kept the bracers, but they don't serve the same function any longer.
    I don't think so?
    These particular guns are mystically empowered.
     
  12. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    So she only uses them to control where bullets ricochet, and in case whatever is shot at her is tougher than a normal bullet. Could she one day do that big shockwave attack from the DCEU by slamming her bracers together?
     
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  13. Oglymogly

    Oglymogly I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    If I had to put money on it, I would bet that the guns 'logic' looks for spirits whom died unjust deaths. In the canon Wildcat example, the man was sentenced for a crime he did not commit, to punish the man for other crimes he did. But my guess is that if Wildcat killed the man with his own hands, Crimson Avenger II wouldn't have targeted Wildcat.

    I can think of at least one time OL killed someone for a unjust reason, very early in his career. Sure, Al Ghul got better, but isn't he suspected to be actually factually dead now?
     
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  14. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    I'm not sure whether the guns would consider his killing of Ra's al Ghul to be unjust.
     
  15. nick012000

    nick012000 Gone for Good

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    I think Paul might be getting his just deserts for the Citadelian genocide he committed.
     
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  16. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Paul has committed a lot of other murders that could also qualify.

    The Citadelians are far from innocent, but as we know, the guns don't care about innocence.
     
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  17. Oglymogly

    Oglymogly I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Paul sniped him just so he could find the Lazurus Pit faster. Not for any act Ra ever took, just so he could find something to steal it. Sure, OL expected him to get back up, but rail gun head shots do count as lethal, and the guns' judgment is infamously spotty.
     
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  18. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Mr Zoat, I was rereading, and found some errors. Since there is red coloring due to Red Lantern Paul, I'll mark the errors in orange.
    These should all say 'Tamaranean'.
     
  19. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  20. rkyeun

    rkyeun Cabbitus Maximus

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    He's definitely been doing the work of Eris.
     
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  21. Radiant Knight

    Radiant Knight Phoenix Fire

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    Oi, if you know she's magic, and she's already hit you, get out of the Thaumosphere.
     
  22. webxro

    webxro Benevolent Bystander

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    Goddamn Constantine "avoid me" magic is really good. I mean it not only distracted Paul but it also distracted everybody in the thread too, nobody even remembers that he was the target of the next investigation.
     
  23. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Well worn.

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    Paul is an energy snake inside an organic body, it shoulf take full body destruction to kill him.

    And wow have orange rings been nerfed; whatever happened to the whole eat anything?
     
  24. Michael Vonica

    Michael Vonica Know what you're doing yet?

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    Whenever Paul finally remembers that he has to go find Constantine, someone else remembers that they need to find Paul. In such a chaotic manner that everything from before is forgotten.
     
  25. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    I am reminded of that one fan explanation of why she uses bracers instead of just standing there like Superman, bullets make her boobs jiggle and that causes gunmen to target them to see them bounce instead of trying to kill her.
     
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  26. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Mr Zoat, are we still going to see the follow up on Earth 10 after this business with Crimson Avenger II is finished?
     
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    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Probably.
     
  28. Ardy

    Ardy I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Zoat, I want you to know your story has completely killed my ability to be scared by supernatural horror films.

    Whenever the monster does something scary I just keep flashing back to Dr. Mr. Gotham being this terrifying creature that devours souls and Paul nonchalantly de powering him before reading him his rights and carrying him off to prison.

    Do you know hard it is to take a demon-monster stalking someone through a cemetery seriously when you keep imagining an overweight cop hopping out from behind a bush and tazing them repeatedly while shouting "STOP RESISTING" and then hitting them with a nightstick?

    It's really hard.
     
  29. deimos16

    deimos16 Paragon of Grey

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    The QQ logical explanation for combat distractions.
     
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  30. Threadmarks: Vantavendi (part 7)
    Mr Zoat

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    20th October 2012
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    The image of Alan jerks and then fragments-.

    "Alan?"

    "Call you-. Back."

    The image disappears, and I scan for-

    "Drop me off somewhere."

    -Alan's location.

    "Can't do that. We don't know the range of her teleportation, and she can selectively phase. I don't have anywhere safe to put you. Alan's a perfectly capable Lantern and Diana's right there."

    Alan's just outside the embassy. He was talking to the police, but now he's evading bullets while trying to lead her away from other people. In New York in the middle of the afternoon. And he's trying to talk to her.

    Stop looking, stop looking.

    "Ring, anyone else shot by these bullets recently?"

    Oh. Ah.

    The problem with her using handguns that have been in circulation for about a hundred years is that there aren't exactly a small number of them in wider circulation. And there are… Quite a lot of gun-related deaths in the US each year-.

    Half were people killing themselves?

    "What? What's happening?"

    "Did you know that half of gun deaths in the US last year were people killing themselves?"

    "Ah… No? What's that got to do with Al?"

    "I'm trying to see who else Miss Carlyle might have killed, but it's a common firearm… I mean, I can try limiting it to people of more than human normal toughness or where the bullet passed through something solid…"

    "Try looking to see if there was a change in the death rate after she disappeared."

    "Okay. Arranging my demographic… Do you know anyone who did know Crimson Avenger?"

    "The Seven Soldiers of Victory, but I think they're all dead. Ah… Victor Leong? I never met him, but he was-. Oh, I… Guess he'd be about my age. Last I heard he was a restaurant manager, but he's probably retired."

    "Victor Leong, Victor Leong… Yes, still alive and yes, retired. What was their relationship?"

    "Victor was Vigilante's old sidekick. Greg Saunders?"

    "Yes, Alan mentioned him." And of course I met Desperado. Definitely didn't see a sidekick with him, and he was far too young... "I'll phone him."

    I raise my left hand to my ear, a ringing tone sounding a moment later.

    "Hey."

    "Good afternoon, Mister L-."

    "I've already got a subscription to the Tribune."

    "Good for you. A well-informed population is a requirement for a functioning democracy."

    "Oh. So you're not trying to get me to buy the Times?"

    "Not particularly. I'm Orange Lantern."

    "Orange..? Oh! The cake guy!"

    Behind me, Ted snorts. At least he didn't mention the eyes or the spider-.

    "Yes. Yes, I am. So anyway, I was hoping that you'd be able to help me with an investigation-."

    "I'm a little old for that sort of thing these days. I haven't been able to do a split kick for about thirty years. But if you're desperate, I'll go get my walker-."

    "Someone's using Crimson Avenger's guns."

    "Oh."

    "And you're just-."

    "The only one of the old gang still going, I know. His guns… Ain't exactly normal."

    "Yes, I worked that out from how they shot through my constructs and armour. Blue Lantern's fighting her now, so a succinct explanation would be appreciated."

    "There's some kind of spirit in them. He said they talked to him, sometimes."

    "They talked to him sometimes, or they talked to him all the time and he didn't want to scare you?"

    "Coulda been either. He only really talked about it once, when the guns told him something about a case he couldn't have found out just by his detective skills. They showed him pictures of what the victims went through."

    "Victims..?"

    "Murder victims. He didn't say anything about any other kind. He wasn't big on shooting people-. Not fatally, anyway. But… That one case? It was like the guns wanted to kill the perp and he had to force them not to."

    "Do you know where the guns went after he died?"

    "I don't have the slightest idea. I was Greg's sidekick, not Avenger's. Wing was already dead… I don't really know who else would know anything."

    "Thank you for your help, Mister Leong. I've got your number if there's anything else."

    "If the spirits in those guns are controlling this guy, you can help them, right? Avenger would hate it if someone innocent got hurt."

    "Where evil spirits are concerned, there's no such thing as innocence, only what they can get away with. I won't kill her if there's a reasonable alternative. Good day."

    I lower my left hand.

    "Ted… I hate to ask, and believe me I'm the last person to get on his moral high horse-."

    "I didn't murder anyone. Not ever."

    "Evil spirits, Ted. It's not the same as the definition of murder used by the American legal system. Did you ever cause someone to die without direct and immediate need or cause?"

    "Did you?"

    "Lots of times. So many I'll never know all of their names or faces and I probably won't know if it was actually justified or not. But you joined the Society after the war. And… Besides, if they were having horrific visions of the people I killed, they'd never have time for anything else."

    "Ah. Damn." He looks at me with a good deal of disquiet. "Al told me-."

    "If you want the full breakdown and justification, you can have it after we've saved Miss Carlyle."

    "Well then, I… Pushing the definition a whole long way…" He nods slowly, once. "Yeah. I kinda did."
     
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