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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. BlueMangoAdea

    BlueMangoAdea Alive. For now.

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    Zauriel is a pretty good influence on OL.
     
  2. Bigking321

    Bigking321 Not too sore, are you?

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    Zauriel.

    Good person. Best character.
     
  3. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    What about the porn star who drank the evil potion?
     
  4. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    Good guy, that Zauriel, and good call out on his part too. The Illustres definitely left Siskin as a foot note in that conflict, although he did inform his parents about his passing, I think?

    She's damaged, but I don't think that makes her better understand or utilize fear; it's just that fear is one of the only concrete emotions she herself feels or can understand in other people. In fact, I give it good odds that she might be a city boss right now or already Anti-Life'd. She didn't seem to have a life meaningful enough or the mental fortitude to resist it, but she is ruthless enough to adopt it, I guess.
     
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  5. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    That should say 'thought'.

    That should say 'down'.

    That should say "I'd".
     
  6. Ciber

    Ciber Know what you're doing yet?

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    Remind me why Sinestro is not willing to lend a lantern just to get a favor from Paul.
     
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  7. B00ki5h

    B00ki5h Verified: Oddball, Lurker, and Dabbler

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    Earth is Hal Jordan’s planet Sinestro is not going to approach Earth or anyone from the Sol system until he believes he can either win their argument or turn Hal to his side.
     
  8. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    I mean, some periods of the Joker's career haven't been marked by psychotic murder sprees, psychological torture or lunatic anarchist tendencies. Not many, and mostly from the 50's in the comics. And let's not forget Batman 66's Joker.

    The only way that name could be more on the nose was if his last name was 'O'Kerr' or similar. :p

    Hey, the British villain scene has always been... Mediocre.

    :rolleyes: Still doesn't explain why some disgruntled cop hasn't made him 'trip down a flight of stairs' or something, unless Smilex also makes him too damn tough to die...

    At which point people just go 'Oh, an upper-class twit. Just ignore him.' :D

    At least he was smart enough not to follow the leader that far.

    Nah, that's more Jason Todd's thing than Dick Grayson. Usually.

    And sooner or later, he's going to try a 'prank' on someone who won't hold back because of 'insanity'

    ...Can they revert neurochemistry alterations?

    Pretty sure after this long, it's permanent.

    Though wasting a Panacea on him might seem... Foolish.

    Or a crusader for social justice. Would probably not end well even then.

    ...Speaking of someone who avoided a fate like the Joker's...

    He's not a 'master of Fear', to put it plainly. Nor is he interested in ruling via Fear, which I've seen as a variant...

    Let's put that above the Godzilla Threshold line, shall we? Right behind Big G himself.

    And Hades would probably take a dim view of her being exposed to the Anti-Life anyway.

    ...Not without some persuasion. Something orange-flavoured...

    Especially when the White Light is prone to causing spontaneous resurrections.

    Gonna get an expert opinion on the matter?

    Nor does he need to eat, drink or shower. And anything more horizontal is kind of up in the air too.

    Heh. He's prepared against OL's tendency for unexpected complications, I see.

    Kind of a vague answer there, birdy. Let me guess, it depends on who OL's asking about?

    Honestly, 'killed' is still uncertain. This is still based on OL's assumption.

    ...Let's go with 'stuck in a bad situation.'

    At least, not in a way that the Silver City would recognise or honour...

    OL, that's not really the best choice of words when talking to an Angel.

    No excuse to allow a decline in discipline, mind.

    Still, that's a big gap between a definite 'Yes' or 'No'. And doesn't consider that he may not be dead.

    Hey, he's been a busy guy in the last... Eighteen months or so?

    Good luck with that, Z.

    Still trying to do the job he was assigned after all this time... Good fellow...

    You have to admit, that must have seemed a little peculiar looking at it from the outside. :p

    Guess that settles the matter of going to the Joker or Michael Siskin... Options are rapidly running short, it seems. Fear manipulation isn't exactly a common ability in the first place, and there's a very short list of those who could be trusted to use it responsibly... Hopefully they can find someone to fit their rather limited set of conditions. Or learn to compromise at the cost of their chance of success...
     
  9. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Oh, that is such a burn.

    And thus is why LePaul avoids talking to you.

    Too many uncomfrontable truths.
     
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  10. Duke Long

    Duke Long Glomerulus

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    ‘sown there as’
    or
    ’down there as’
    ‘or not’
    ‘Heaven nor Hell.’?
    ‘I’d’ve’?
     
  11. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  12. Rafin

    Rafin Not too sore, are you?

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    There are multiple regions if the world that are shielded. Some of those regions definitely have organized crime and shit. Or, as I said, recruit an alien.
     
  13. Zig

    Zig Not too sore, are you?

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    Yeah hasn't he stolen multiple people for his corps that were Yellow Lanterns in the comics? Ask one of them. Not really sure what the obsession is with finding an ideal candidate, he's not recruiting for a corps, he just needs someone who can muster enough of the emotion for one blast. Doesn't even need to be good enough to form constructs.
     
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  14. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    "down there as there are"
     
  15. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  16. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    The SI's feeling is that they'd have to be good at it, particularly if he's providing the orange. They also have to be able to function around Anti-Life broadcasters, survive fighting their way to an Anti-Life broadcaster, not be evil and be reliable. If they just wanted someone who could use it at all just about anyone would do.
     
  17. BartlettMagic

    BartlettMagic peekaboo, you fucks you!

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    man i wish there were a way to get to Melinoe. even with everything going on, it could be time for Eris to do a solid and make Melinoe randomly appear in a safe zone for transport. she's the only one i can think of (besides Batman) who could rationally control the light of fear.

    i had also thought of the Shade, but something about the Shade creating light constructs seems dangerous for him.
     
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  18. BlackCoat13

    BlackCoat13 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    If you need to get in contact with Melinoe... can't you just pray? If you can't reach her directly, you might be able to get Eris to at least take a message here for her and Paul should be able to reach Eris through direct prayer. Undoing the current social order here is 'stop the antilife' so Eris would probably be easy to get to back you here, even if she's a bit cowardly.
     
  19. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    The problem with Melinoe, as we know, is that on the Doylist side Mr. Zoat forgot about her. So for the story he most likely already has a character in mind that the characters in-story will eventually find or get in contact; even Watsonian, the Illustres forgets about individuals and allies regularly because he's so busy and has hands in more pies than he has fingers.

    So, if Melinoe was the solution, as we know she's the most appropriate candidate, the Illustres and the others would sort through a few options until they decide to go for her and then explore the most appropriate method available to reach her.

    That would be the bulk of the episode, because getting in contact with her at this time isn't exactly easy; the Thaumosphere is infected with Anti-Life which may interfere with usual evocations and rituals, the gods themselves seem disconnected from the material world right now probably as a consequence of the same infection, no easy gate to Erebos to just wander in and the Dreaming always has its own dangers, though it's most likely the better option considering Melinoe has something of the Dreaming in her by virtue of her domain.
     
  20. Patrick Holt

    Patrick Holt Getting sticky.

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    I like the Amanda Waller idea Splinterface had.

    Another possible character is Jean-Paul Valley, He was Batman's choice for his stand-in while he was injured.

    The Hitman, he is an assassin with a heart of gold, and the heart of a mob boss next to it.
     
  21. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    This continuity doesn't have Taskforce X, so she hasn't developed that particular skill set.
    Currently a Justifier.
    Doesn't have any particular skill with fear.
     
  22. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    If all he needs is "Light Blast", which given he's using the Mask as a stand in is all he can get, why would he need someone who can do anything more then "Light Blast"?

    That's a him problem, and not a particularly big one at that given the limited output of the Mask.

    You already established that there is functionally no difference in Anti-Life strength anywhere within a few dozen mile of a broadcaster.

    You already established that LePaul can keep regular old humans safe getting next to a broadcaster.

    And that's only a limiting factor because of all the other problems with his logic.
     
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  23. RoasterToaster

    RoasterToaster This is fine.

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    With clarification that Amanda doesn't have the skills due to the lack of a Task Force X, my bet has now switched back to Helmut. Zauriel in South America? Where the hell ritual was going to happen and the nazi clone lived? Hmmm. :sneaky: (And I have no clue who else it could be, if it's a pre-existing character and they're not going to use the Joker)

    Depends on if they have the magicians on hand for it. John Constantine isn't available but Doctor Mist is.
     
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  24. boo600

    boo600 Welp

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    THE TEAM IS BACK!!!

    The main characters who this story was originally built around have returned! And they’re being informed and treated as friends! Things are happening!

    I assume that, given Earth’s… situation, even if the White Light resurrects the people beaten to death by Justifiers, blown up by Suicide Jockeys, and other such methods of horrible death, that OL will have to stick around and help clean up… unless he has to run off and fix Hinon & the Controllers. The Reach hasn’t been doing so hot, even with their inner fleets, and that conflict is very Long Term.
     
  25. HeroineRule34Guy

    HeroineRule34Guy Know what you're doing yet?

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    Is Phobia around on Earth-16? I don't think she was one of the Brotherhood guys Grayven splattered, but that doesn't necessarily mean she doesn't exist. I couldn't find her in Zoat's search history. ('Angela' only turns up unrelated characters.)

    Shows what I know, I spent ages conflating her and Psimon, and only just now remembered they were separate characters.
     
  26. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    Looking at the titles, we had 'Prep Time' and are now starting 'Wait Time,' I wonder if the next one (which will clearly be a while, but now is when I'm thinking about it) will be 'Go Time.'
     
  27. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    That's already been asked and confirmed as correct.
     
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  28. Zig

    Zig Not too sore, are you?

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    SI could fight his way there with Orange, then provide the Yellow and have someone else provide the Orange, and that's granting that one person can't provide both. Kon or Mitchel can fight their way to the broadcaster, aren't evil, and are reliable. Hell, they probably both have enough experience with fear at this point with their experience wrangling people under Antilife, though it's reasonable for the SI not to know that.
     
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  29. Threadmarks: War Mastered (part 1)
    Mr Zoat

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    3rd Sigmarzeit 2512
    Early Morning


    The herald hesitates slightly as we reach the door to what appears to be a small dining room, then nods to the footmen manning the doors. The one on the left knocks sharply, then they grasp the handles and open the door. The herald marches in, straight-backed, and steps aside to half turn and face the doorway.

    "Announcing Sir Paolo, Knight of the Orange Lantern."

    I walk in behind him,-. Oh, for-.

    I make eye contact with His Majesty Karl Franz I Holswig-Schliestein, and no one else because the only other occupants of the room are a couple of servants serving as waiters and the looming figures of his Reiksguard bodyguard up against the back wall. He smiles faintly and gives his eyes a small roll.

    Well, at least he gets it.

    I approach to what I judge to be a reasonable distance and then bow at the waist.

    "Your Majesty."

    "Rise, Sir Paolo." A small nod and the herald backs out of the room and the footmen close the doors behind him. The Emperor then motions to the seat a short way down the table from his own seat. "Please, join me."

    "Thank you, your majesty."

    I walk over to the-.

    A servant pulls the chair out for me.

    O… Kay..? I… Sit down, braced, but apparently we're allowed to organise our own napkins.

    The Emperor's smile broadens. "Not the arrangement you have in your lands in Bretonnia?"

    "Even with the recent expansion, it's not even a town yet. We don't have the people for me to have an arrangement like this, and using glowing daemons made people uncomfortable."

    "And the beastwomen aren't house trained?"

    "No, they… Are, with just a few false starts, but they kept making it a competition to serve whoever's in charge, and… It didn't work. And Hierarch Mael of the Cult of Taal isn't keen on the whole 'living inside buildings' thing and I'm trying to avoid having more gods angry with me."

    He nods. "A sound avenue to take."

    "Forgive me for asking, your majesty, but why am I.. here?"

    He offers me a rueful smile. "It isn't usual for notable individuals such as yourself to give reports in open court. Once they've demonstrated a certain level of reliability and trustworthiness, I generally prefer a more informal environment."

    I look around at the four plate-armoured knights and eight servants of other types, and the large oil paintings and wall hangings which decorate the walls. And then up at the currently unlit chandelier, and the frieze decorating the ceiling just beyond it.

    He follows my gaze for a moment, then smiles again.

    "Well. I am the Emperor."

    "Can't argue with that. What did you want to hear about?"

    "How are things going with the canal?"

    "It is now sailable, so long as you only want to sail something the size of a punt."

    "Already?"

    I shrug. "The workforce is large and made up of skeletons and animated statues. They don't need rest, food or water. The real bottleneck was getting enough intelligent undead to coordinate them. Queen Khalida has dealt with that by making alliances with other Tomb Kings along the route, though that… Ah, leaves open the possibility that they may become 'confused' and do something regrettable later, but... We.. judged the extra speed was worth the risk."

    "Have the elves raised any objection?"

    Which is a diplomatic way of saying 'arrowed everyone to death'.

    "No, but I'm not sure that they know about it. It's not easy to send spies into a lifeless desert, and there aren't really any merchants in Nehekharan cities to disguise the presence of nosy people."

    "That will change."

    "Yes, but it's not an especially popular posting, Ulthuan doesn't have the resources that would be required to invade and occupy the whole of Nehekhara to stop it, and… Quite a lot of Ulthuanian princes and princesses owe me for their newly conceived heirs. Not enough to actually thank me, but probably enough to abstain on a vote. Even if the garrison commander of the Fortress of Dawn would like to take aggressive action, they're not going to get any support."

    "And on the other end?"

    "The Pirate Princess didn't take the deal. I'm afraid that extreme measures will most likely be necessary."

    "Assassination?"

    "Throwing the island into an ocean trench. The only issue is that I'm not sure what that will do to the currents around the Tilean coast." I shake my head. "While it might be possible to put a lot of the sailors into service in more legitimate roles, I'm not happy about the… Easy transition between armed merchantmen and outright pirates. I've provisionally marked a few months in my diary after the expected completion date of the canal for eliminating all pirates in the region who attack ships using it, but frankly pre-empting it by destroying the island and everyone on it would probably be more efficient."

    He shakes his head. "Scour the island if you must -the navy's pressgangs will have to look elsewhere for their men- but do not… 'Throw the island into an ocean trench'."

    "As you command." I nod. "Prince Lorenzo might want to take possession of it as a naval dock once the current inhabitants have been culled. And there's little point in building the canal if I end up wrecking all the harbours on this side."

    "And what will you do next? Concentrate on the road network?"

    "No, after that comes the next stage of canal building: the Estalia bypass."

    He hesitates, his eyes briefly moving aside as he considers my meaning. "A canal through the Irrana Mountains? It would save weeks of sailing at the very least, and avoid exposure to the storms coming off the Great Ocean. But the Black Marshes have their own inhabitants that may threaten your work."

    "Yeah, Skavenblight. I'll probably end up destroying that. Depending on its elevation I might flood it, otherwise it'll be orbital bombardment. I'll need to speak with Princess Dolchellata of Miragliano before work starts, though given all the extra trade they'd be getting if I'm successful I doubt that she'll complain."

    "That would be the diplomatic approach." He frowns faintly. "I believe that the Princess is widowed?"

    I nod. "Yes. The late Prince Borgio died nine years ago, and she's ruling as their son's regent. I assume that her control is sufficiently good that she doesn't feel the need for an internal marriage, and that her city's position is secure enough that she hasn't made a marriage alliance."

    Or more likely, no one felt like braving the wrath of her four-times-widowed sister.

    "Anyway, once that's done I can focus on the roads. High Loremaster Teclis threatened to ask his brother to check my working on the logistics, and, um. I'd rather that didn’t happen."

    "Yes, I've met Prince Tyrion and I can well understand your reservation." He looks away for a moment, thinking about something. "I know that you've been travelling, but have you been able to keep up with news of the Empire?"

    I shake my head. "Not really. I check for major invasions every few days but things looked relatively quiet. Is there a problem?"

    "Some minor skirmishes between Ostland and Talabecland. I fear that I'm going to have to intervene before things escalate."

    I nod. "Well, if you need my assistance with anything, I'm happy to help."

    "I may. Tell me, Sir Paolo, you know of Princess Dolchellata's family but I know nothing of your own familial status. May we discuss the matter?"
     
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    Vaermina Well worn.

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    The first wouldn't work.

    The second would get you fucked by a tractorbeam capable of moving the moon.
     
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