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  1. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Firstly, because he tends not to like assimilating people for moral reasons (though he did resolve to try to assimilate some monsters after he got in trouble with that ghost hydra death curse, which I don’t think he has actually followed up on). Secondly, he actually has done this twice. He...
  2. Nephthys8079

    A Pokémon journey

    Lol yea thx for the feedback still tho

  3. A Pokémon journey

    Hey it's all good you're sharing your hardwork and it's really hard to see where pacing can be an issue. As you have a story that you're trying to etch out for others to see/share so what is self evident to your vision and what you understand about your character can sometimes be skipped over...
  4. Xodarap

    My brothers keeper, an OC/SI as the twin of Stalin

    Mikheil actually has turned his minders into assets simply from trusting them always acting out his orders he can explain to Lenin as a collar he willingly puts on while making enough rope for his brother Stalin to come from outside then untie any knots MIkheil makes on his potential Noose.
  5. Nephthys8079

    A Pokémon journey

    Yea should have seen the first design I had was way to fast and even tho I'm trying to slow it down on this 3rd go at this didn't realize I was missing the motivation part of the characters that's why I asked for feedback im probably gonna leave the first few chapters alone as a show of growth...
  6. DaJuggernaut

    [RWBY] RWBY Shorts

    Eh, I think not too badly. He does at least get over it and quits bothering her. Other characters have done far stupider things to gain a crush's attention. And to be fair, story wise it's kind of Weiss's own fault for Jaune's constant flirting attempts.

  7. A Pokémon journey

    The biggest issue I'm seeing is that you're rushing through things and not really enjoying the journey itself, you keep jumping from location to location without really building up the tension, setting, characters etc.... Your story premise is interesting and you did have a good hook to draw...
  8. Nephthys8079

    A Pokémon journey
    Threadmarks: Chapter 9: The Heart of the Forest

    ...thought, Hilda's voice, sharp and urgent, cut through the noise. "Everyone, scatter! Get behind the trees!" We all dove for cover, the deafening *thud* of the stones hitting the forest floor and the thick trunks of the trees right where we had been standing. The ground shook with each...

  9. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    I can’t remember, what happened to the Red Lantern ring after Orion threw it back at Paul?
  10. Nephthys8079

    A Pokémon journey
    Threadmarks: Chapter 8: The Road to Veilstone

    The morning air was cool and crisp, carrying the scent of pine and damp earth. I walked with my new friends, a comfortable rhythm settling into our strides. The road to Veilstone City was not a road at all, but a winding dirt path that cut through a dense, wild forest. The trees stood tall and...
  11. ArsMagna1337

    I'm running on fumes. Coffee isn't working anymore... This is my third cup... Gonna eep soon.

    I'm running on fumes. Coffee isn't working anymore... This is my third cup... Gonna eep soon.
  12. Nephthys8079

    A Pokémon journey
    Threadmarks: Chapter 7: The Road to Eterna City

    The moment the gym official's voice announced my victory, the tension that had been a tight knot in my stomach for the past half hour unraveled completely. I felt a wave of relief so intense it made my knees weak. Rocky, his stony body now still, floated in place, his small eyes gleaming with an...
  13. Sonic4Ever

    WHEN you will continue France Day To Day? T_T

    WHEN you will continue France Day To Day? T_T

  14. Governor's Gambit - Star Wars SI into Imperial Governor

    I would think that since the Sullustan captain was complaining about the booze in Minda, then there will eventually be people from various worlds with experience in making booze eventually deciding to start up distilleries there. Hearing about how there are potential places to build...
  15. Evilhippy

    Doing all right? Been radio silent for a while.

    Doing all right? Been radio silent for a while.

  16. Starborn Smith [Massive Scifi MultiFusion / Celestial Forge]
    Threadmarks: Chapter #50: Maggie

    - - - POV: Kaela Arden. I was silent for a moment. “Alright, but I need some assurances.” The acting captain raised an eyebrow. “Name it.” “This belt has a significant number of high-density asteroids. We were planning on setting up a mining and industrial base.” Jill Pearce narrowed her...

  17. Starborn Smith [Massive Scifi MultiFusion / Celestial Forge]
    Threadmarks: Chapter #49: Glitters Like Gold

    - - - POV: Kaela Arden I shuddered as I stared out the front window. “It glitters like gold…” Re’vok nodded. “Lets hope we actually make it back.” I couldn’t move my eyes away. Arthur had found images of the Pax Magellanic in the Curator archive. They had left me totally unprepared for what...
  18. JBukharin

    Dunno.

    Dunno.
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  19. Serin781

    Her Eternal Excellency (Raiden Ei reborn as Argella Durrandon)

    And that's enough to form a grudge.

  20. hey do you think made digimon too?

    hey do you think made digimon too?
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