Warlord D Thorin
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there was quite a large tone shift in this chapter at the point when he started training with the shapers
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That part makes sense, time skips will do that. Cam is in a very different headspace after months training in different circumstances.there was quite a large tone shift in this chapter at the point when he started training with the shapers
Honestly a lot of the recent chapters kinda feel like Cam is slipping to the dark side more and more. He's not balanced in the slightest, he's just rage and hate that he keeps bottled up inside. I don't like this. To be clear I don't care for the Jedi much either, but both Jedi and Sith are extremes at the opposite ends of a scale, and extremes tend to not be good. Really not liking cams thought processes since... I suppose since he started just bottling everything inside. Eidedic Memory shouldn't make him unable to let got of emotion. That's not how memory works. Time dulls the emotions related to memories after all. Even if he can't forget, over time the rage would lessen. Someone else said this, and I agree, Eidedic Memory is sounding more like it forces him to relive moments again and again, which is not what Eidedic Memory is IRL.
In many ways it is, but even before being reborn, Cam was one who let his emotions get in the way at times. As seen by the mistake that led to his initial death. Eidetic Memory just makes it nearly impossible for him ever recover from everything he's endured.Yeah, this portrayal of Eidetic Memory doesn't sound like what it's named. It sounds more like PTSD but for literally every moment of your life, with more weight the more intense the emotions attached to any given moment.
There won't be NSFW content as it PWP or the like. I'll always stick to the fade-to-black approach.Just a question if your claiming that their might be NSFW content should this be their instead of here just curious is all.
I have some scenes like that in space battles, so I think it is fine here. Same for the horrors.
"Looks like we've only no orbital structures near the planets,"
Get Star Wars'd
The jedi were usually also the chancellor, they more or less had there own armys and many force sensitive bloodlines existed and even ruled star systems.
But after the thought bomb the backbone of that order was wipe out along with the sith.
It really feels like it was more of a coup where the extremely conservative members of the Jedi order and the a group republic senators came together to both strip the Jedi of there powers and slowly trip the mid rim of it's ability to defend its self.
I love your portrayal of Windu. Most people write him as an unrepentant hardass that's completely inflexible. Here he has so much depth and nuance.
Highly unlikely but never say neverIs Raven ever going to get an avatar like a projector with speakers or a Droid body she can control?
going through these in order.He used to take out star ships with TK, he used to phase through attacks to force his opponent to make a mistake, and was the battle of Mtael's gift literally the only reason to give him battle meditation? He has got the active version of it and never used it even when he was fighting two wars where it would have been useful.
Again, Cam has become someone who enjoys the heat of battle, so slicing his way through chaff. (Plus, if they're in his road, that's there bad luck)Why even bother slicing through all of the chaff when you could telekinetically wipe them all out at once instead a few at time? Sure, someone like Maul you have to close with as anything at range will be swatted or dodged but for most lesser threats? Why give them the honor of his blade? They aren't worth it.
Minimap remains, it's just that it's not used as much now either because of the HUD in his armour (which he has superimposed over where the Minimap, appears or it's just not mentioned.Natural Selection, does he still have the mini map? in general, is there a rundown of how NS has affected his powers and abilities?
going through these in order.
He used TK against ships when standing on the bridge of another ship, ignoring everything going on around him. The other time he used it was again from distance. He was stationary and far from battle (the first battle of Mtael's Gift). Since then, he's become more of a front-line fighter than a sit-back and observe commander.
Battle Meditation is a family trait, but one that hasn't suited Cam's fighting style much. That might/will change as he find uses for it as the story progresses.
Again, Cam has become someone who enjoys the heat of battle, so slicing his way through chaff. (Plus, if they're in his road, that's there bad luck)
Balance in the Force isn't truly doable. The most common example of it is Revan, who never really was balanced. He was either Jedi or Sith, and the one time he was balanced, his Force Ghost split in two.I want tobknow if his end goal of understanding the balance of the force is the same or if he has abandoned that,I also want to know what else can he face, like will he face abeloth, the mortis or something like the dark dimension? And what happened to the oneness skill?
You forget how the Force affects someone who uses it. Even before Cam rushed in, which was part of how he died. With the Force now amping up his abilities, and the fact he's got a lightsaber, he's developing an enjoyment of cqc fighting over ranged assaults. Now, he'll have to temper that in the coming decades but for now, he's able to leap into the fray almost at will.[/ISPOILER][/ISPOILER]I guess I just struggle with the thought that a former military would abandon seemingly more effective means for less effective ones but it could happen.
Right thanks for your answer, has he recovered all his lost skills from before the natural allingment update or it is still some ways to go?Balance in the Force isn't truly doable. The most common example of it is Revan, who never really was balanced. He was either Jedi or Sith, and the one time he was balanced, his Force Ghost split in two.
There's a whole philosophical debate to be had about balance, the Force, and what it all means but I'm not going to get into that here. (Done enough of that on the story's Discord to have had my lifetime's fill)
Oneness, in theory, is easier for him to obtain now as the Interface isn't screwing with the Force and Cam. However, it's also harder as the path he's walking isn't one that allows it. As for the other things mentioned, there are plans that go beyond The Clone Wars but those are rough as heck right now. ]