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20. Blood and Tears of the Rosiers New
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I woke up as early as seven, and I wasn't the only one. All my roommates were getting ready to go home, as the train was departing at nine. Sallow managed to get into a fight with Nott over some trifle, while Zabini just smirked contentedly, watching their circus. While they packed manually and struggled with their clothes, I once again thanked my foresight. A few quick hygiene spells and one casual wave of my wand – thanks to memorized formulas, I was packed in seconds.

After a quick breakfast with Agnes, we moved to the platform. We claimed an empty compartment on the Hogwarts Express, and I cast a particularly strong Colloportus on the door just in case. I didn't want anyone bothering us during the journey.

On such a long trip, we naturally discussed everything possible. Well, Agnes did ninety percent of the talking while I just nodded with a slight smile. In this regard, she reminded me incredibly of my girlfriend from the previous world – she could also talk non-stop. Later, Agnes beat me soundly in chess a few times. She looked like a cat that had just caught the ultimate treat; a sense of triumphant satisfaction literally radiated from her.

When the Hogwarts Express finally screeched to a halt at Platform 9 ¾ after hours of travel, London welcomed me with its bleak December atmosphere. Steam from the locomotive mingled with the fog, and a crowd of parents rushed eagerly toward the carriage doors.

Finally, we were in London. Agnes and I had agreed to exchange gifts back at Hogwarts. She gave me a brief hug and then disappeared into the crowd to find her father. I headed toward the platform exit. I knew Vespera wouldn't be pushing through the masses of people. Like me, she would prefer to wait somewhere off to the side.

I was right. She was leaning against one of the massive stone pillars near the entrance. She wore a long black robe stitched with gold thread and a high, elegant collar. She looked comfortable yet incredibly noble. I had to admit she was an attractive woman – if I had been older in my past life and we weren't family, I would definitely have asked for her number. I mean, if I were single!

As soon as she noticed me in the chaos, her cold and distant posture melted instantly. The stern aristocrat vanished, leaving only a gently smiling witch with kind eyes. Who wouldn't grow fond of such a woman? When I reached her, she hesitated for a fraction of a second but then hugged me tightly.

After a moment, she let me go. With one graceful flick of her wand, she shrunk my luggage and tucked it effortlessly into the folds of her robe.

"Ready to go? Have you ever Side-Along Apparated before?" she asked, pulling me away from the noisy platform without waiting for an answer.

"No, never," I admitted, trying to keep up with her energetic pace.

We climbed the stairs to the street outside the station. Muggles hurried everywhere, heads bowed against the December wind. Vespera gave another subtle wave of her wand – I felt an invisible layer of magic settle over us, something like a Disillusionment Charm that cut us off from the perception of our surroundings.

"Hold on tight to me, Patrik. Don't let go," she commanded in a serious tone.

I gripped her hand firmly. A sharp crack echoed in my ears, like a whip snapping through the air, and in the next second, I felt as if an immense force were squeezing me into a tiny ball. My stomach did a somersault, my lungs tightened, and the world turned into a blurred smear.

Suddenly, the pressure stopped. I gasped for air, trying to keep my balance on the snow-covered ground.

"Welcome to Rosier Estate," Vespera announced, her voice filled with undisguised pride.

I had expected some elegant townhouse or a modern villa in the suburbs, but certainly not this. Before us, a massive stone structure with towers and high windows reflecting the setting sun towered into the winter sky.

My jaw literally dropped. The castle was surrounded by high, massive walls with battlements, upon which I could see stone gargoyle statues. I could feel magic radiating from the castle.

"Welcome to Rosier Estate," Vespera repeated, watching my shock with blatant satisfaction. "Our family has always believed that security and privacy are the foundation of freedom. Originally, this castle served as a defense against raids by the Irish, Normans, and Vikings. Muggles tried to conquer it for centuries, but in vain."

We walked across the courtyard, where snow swirled in the cold wind, and her voice echoed between the stone walls.

"We didn't acquire it from Muggles, though. We took it from an unnamed magical house in a cruel, bloody war. The founder of our branch of the family dominated the last living heiress. Together, they sired a son who inherited the estate and the power of both houses, and our branch has only grown since then. No one remembers the name of that original house today – we erased it from history. However, it should be noted somewhere deep in our family grimoire, should you be interested."

We crossed the threshold, and the heavy oak doors closed behind us with a muffled thud, definitively cutting off the howling winter wind. The interior of Rosier Castle was neither cold nor inhospitable, as one might expect from a stone fortress. The air was thick with the scent of old wood polished with beeswax, and somewhere in the background, I detected the faint, refreshing aroma of lemons.

Vespera led me through the main hall, its walls telling a story of strength and violence. Dozens of weapons and shields hung there – some were lavishly decorated with precious metals and gems, clearly intended for ceremonies, but others looked chillingly pragmatic. They were pieces of steel forged purely for killing, bearing the marks of ancient battles.

We walked on carpets so thick and soft they muffled every step, turning our movement into a near-ghostly silence. Finally, we arrived at a smaller, private salon that felt much cozier.

"We will have peace here," she remarked, lighting the massive black marble fireplace with a single wave of her hand.

"And what about enemies? Do we have any historical ones?" I asked curiously as soon as we sat down. History and strategy had always interested me, and in this world, they were more important than ever.

"In the sense you mean, no," Vespera replied. "Throughout history, our house, along with our allies, destroyed many competitors. Namely, for example, the Thorns, the Veyrons, or the Aldwyches – those were the more significant houses. However, if you ever meet someone from the Sayre family, be very careful."

"Why the Sayres specifically?" I frowned.

"It is a branch descending directly from Salazar Slytherin," Vespera explained, respect and hatred mingling in her voice. "While we had relatively neutral relations with the Gaunts, we were at odds with the Sayres to the death. We nearly destroyed their house. Only one woman and a small child survived, managing to escape to America..."

She paused for a moment, as if flipping through old chronicles in her mind to find the right words.

"Hm... as I tell it to you, it all sounds a bit too good, doesn't it? Victories and power," she said bitterly, her gaze drifting to the frost-burned battlements. "The truth is, we ourselves were twice on the brink of total extinction. And now we are close to it again. We are the last two members of our line. The French branch died out, and we merely inherited their empty estates. Actually, we are three... if I count your father, who is rotting away for life in Azkaban. Blood and tears, dear nephew. That is the true history of the Rosiers."

"Our house must have been truly powerful if it could destroy so many enemies," I remarked. It was a bitter subject, but I felt a dark pride stir deep in my chest.

"We weren't alone in it, Patrik," Vespera corrected me, staring into the dancing flames in the fireplace. "Magical houses have alliances bound by blood and ancient oaths. That is why so many houses fell by our hand, and together with our allies, we had a hand in a significantly larger number of extinctions."

It was fascinating to listen to her, though I could see that reminiscing about the past stirred a mixture of anger and melancholy within her. Our history clearly didn't sit well with her – perhaps because we were the last of the line.

"So who was our main ally? And where are they all now?" I asked curiously.

Vespera sighed bitterly and gazed into her glass as if searching for lost centuries within it.

"Our greatest ally was the House of Black," she began in a low, awe-inspiring voice. "You see, our house, the Rosiers, was always high nobility in France. But the Blacks? They were originally something entirely different. They were mercenaries. They led the bloodiest mercenary company on the entire continent. They loved battle, death, and blood... they literally lived for them. It is said that wherever their black banners appeared, the earth turned blood-red, and not even grass grew there for years."

She paused briefly to let the information sink in.

"We are talking about a period from a thousand years ago. Our French branch regularly used their services for dirty work. However, when our branch moved here to Wales, their company no longer existed. They were almost completely wiped out in endless wars until only two people remained. A man and a woman. As you correctly assume, they were the last survivors, but even then, they were respected as battle mages who bloodily massacred anyone who stood in their way."

Vespera smiled faintly at the irony of history.

"The founders of the House of Black realized they couldn't survive forever with just a wand in hand. Since the man was actually the third son of a noble house, they decided to establish a new, titled house. Our house helped them during those difficult beginnings – with money, influence, and our name. They repaid us with strength and loyalty. Thus was born our blood alliance, which functioned symbiotically for centuries. We were the brains and the elegance; they were our blade in the dark."

She paused for a moment, observing me to see if I was absorbing the information, then continued.

"To explain it to you in more detail... our house excels in Mind Arts. By pure-blood standards, we were of average magical power. Whereas the House of Black excelled in combat and Dark Arts – they were the most magically powerful. We obtained information directly from the enemies' minds and stood in the second line, while the House of Black was right in the first. That is why everyone respects our houses, even if we are weakened now. We have the money, the power, and the history."

Vespera fell silent for a moment, watching the flames.

"Currently, the House of Black is in a similar position to us. Their Head of House, Sirius Black, is in Azkaban for life and has no heir. Their house will likely die out... and then there's you."

"Me? Why me?" I asked curiously.

"We must go back to your grandfather, my father. His sister was named Druella, born Rosier, married Black. She had three daughters. One was disowned, Andromeda Black, now Tonks. Then there is Narcissa Black, now Malfoy. It is thanks to her and her son, your cousin Draco, that I know of your existence. And finally, there is Bellatrix Black, now Lestrange," she explained, eyeing me searchingly.

"Sure, I understand the family ties. But what does that have to do with me? Shouldn't Draco Malfoy be the heir?" I asked matter-of-factly.

In my head, however, other thoughts were racing. If I remembered correctly from the books, Sirius Black would later leave everything to Harry Potter. But gold in Gringotts is one thing, and a true family heritage is another. I strongly doubted Harry would have the right mental state for the Black family ring. Even if a blood adoption took place, that ancient, dark magic would probably kill him instantly given his personality.

"This is where it gets a bit complicated... You see, over the ages, the House of Black became significantly radicalized. Originally, family was everything to them, just as it is to us. But old Cygnus took it as a personal insult if someone married a Muggle-born, or if someone who wasn't a wizard appeared in the family," she paused, as if searching for the right words for the rest of the story.

After a moment, she continued, though in the back of my mind, I was already beginning to suspect where she was heading.

"Cygnus and Druella actually had four daughters, not three. Bellatrix had a twin. While Bella was an exceptionally powerful witch, her sister Carina showed no magic by the age of ten. She was a Squib, and she represented a huge shame to Cygnus. He threw her out of the house immediately and blasted her off the family tapestry. But Druella loved her daughter, so our house secretly took her in. Carina grew up here, with us at the castle."

"So Carina Black was my mother?" I asked. It would explain my craving for battle and blood. Was this the famous Black madness waking up inside me?

"Yes. I suspected it the moment I first saw you. You share features... but I wasn't sure. Your father despised your mother and mocked her at every opportunity. It was Evan who finally confirmed your true origin to me."

My throat tightened at those words. I fervently hoped that Evan hadn't raped my mother and that my existence wasn't just the result of his cruelty toward a magicless woman.

"So what did Evan tell you?"

Vespera immediately noticed that I hadn't called him 'father,' but only by his first name. However, her gaze remained understanding.

"You don't have to worry, Patrik... it's quite simple and perhaps even a cliché. Your mother may have been a Squib, but she was extremely kind, gentle, and couldn't hurt a fly. She accepted every insult or humiliation with quiet pride and a smile. No one managed to break her spirit. She was beautiful and radiated pure goodness," she explained with a slight smile.

She paused for a moment and then continued: "Evan, however, was a spoiled brat from childhood. He had everything he could think of, and a Squib in the house? He gave her a hard time until my father caught him once. After that thrashing, he couldn't sit on his backside for two weeks. But Carina never told on him, even though he hurt her. And as it goes, the older they got, the more he noticed her. Her beauty and unyieldingly kind nature eventually won him over completely. Evan Rosier, who until then respected almost no one, fell head over heels in love with her."

I was instantly relieved, but I had to ask: "Did my mother die during my birth, then?"

Vespera frowned at the question and slowly shook her head.

"Aurors led by Moody stormed the castle back then. They were looking for your father. My father – your grandfather – let them in, while Evan was hiding. To be clear, Aurors are forbidden from just using magic in old family estates, but Moody ignored that, and my father misjudged him. His wand pointed exactly to where Evan was hiding, and a fight broke out instantly. My father fell in that clash, and your mother was hit by one of the area-of-effect curses. It killed her on the spot. Eventually, Moody overpowered your father and got him into Azkaban."

But I felt the castle's protections – that ancient family magic that had welcomed me since I entered. It felt exceptionally powerful.

"How is it possible they got him? I can feel the castle's defenses; they're incredibly strong," I countered.

Vespera looked at me in surprise, but after a moment, she replied: "Since they were officially invited into the castle, a large part of the defensive magic remained inactive. Once the fight broke out, the castle could no longer fully stop them, only slow them down. Every spell they cast back then cost them double the magical power. Thanks to that, only Moody survived from that unit, and even he lost a leg and part of his nose. Fourteen Aurors died here that day. They didn't get your father for free."

Mentally, I added Moody to my list. One day, I would get him into his grave. I owed it to my family.

"And how is it possible I ended up in an orphanage? You were here," I asked. That last part had been bugging me the most.

I saw Vespera look down in shame. After a moment, however, she braced herself and began to explain: "I had no idea of your existence, Patrik. You see, I hadn't returned home for more than three years before that incident. I didn't even know about your parents' relationship. I ignored my father's messages because he wanted to force me into a marriage with the Lestrange family. If I had known you existed, you wouldn't have spent a single day in that orphanage."

A tomb-like silence followed for a moment, interrupted only by the crackling of the wood in the fireplace. After a while, however, my aunt continued: "During the fight, Evan ordered a house-elf to take you to safety. But the elf left you at the orphanage with only your name embroidered on a blanket. Before I could return home and find out what happened, the elf died. He was already old and... muddled."

It made sense, and I wasn't angry. Perhaps the original Patrik would have felt wronged, but this situation essentially suited me.

"I see," I replied briefly. "What now, then?"

"Now you should go to sleep. We have a long day ahead of us tomorrow! I can feel that you have active shields in your mind, so we'll test them tomorrow and then figure out what to do next."

She didn't even wait for my reaction. "Jobo!" she called out into the empty room.

Silently, almost as if he materialized from the shadows by the fireplace, a house-elf appeared. He bowed deeply and remained motionless, waiting for an order.

"Are you hungry?" my aunt asked me.

I just nodded silently.

"Jobo, prepare dinner for Patrik and then lead him to Evan's old room," she commanded him. Then she turned her gaze back to me. "The room underwent a complete renovation back in October. It belongs to you from now on. I already ate before I came to get you, so we'll meet in the morning at breakfast."

I walked behind Jobo, and in my head, pieces of the mosaic Vespera had just revealed played like an old film. I thought about my parents and the bloody history of the house I was born into.



Author's note:

We finally have the bloody history of House Rosier and the explanation of how Patrik ended up in Wool's Orphanage—it turns out Moody and a muddled old house-elf were to blame. I bet no one expected his mother to be a Black family Squib and Bellatrix's twin sister. Did I let you down?

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21. Storms Within New
I woke up automatically at exactly seven o'clock. It seemed my internal clock was already firmly set to a routine. I quickly got myself together and summoned Jobo to find out when breakfast would be served.

When he briefly informed me that my aunt expected me in the dining room at eight, I gained an hour to my advantage. I didn't waste time. I loosened my stiff joints and went through an intensive thirty-minute workout – shadowboxing, followed by several sets of push-ups, squats, and crunches. I needed to feel my own body while simultaneously improving my fitness.

After the brief exercise, I cleaned myself up again. Magical hygiene spells were incredibly practical and saved me precious time. A simple flick of my wand and the sweat was instantly gone. When I was ready, I let Jobo lead me to the dining room. A quick Tempus spell confirmed that I had arrived exactly to the second.

Vespera was already waiting for me in the dining room. With a slight smile, she folded her newspaper and looked at me: "Good morning, Patrik. How did you sleep?"

"Excellently. Honestly, I feel as if I've lived here my whole life," I replied, and it wasn't just politeness. It was the truth. I felt the ancestral magic of the castle literally embracing me and accepting me as its own. I felt perfect here.

"I'm glad to hear that. We'll have breakfast and then test your Occlumency. By the way, are you familiar with Legilimency as well? I can feel your shields, but I'm not sure if you even know what Legilimency entails."

I served myself some omelette, sausages, and red beans in sauce with a fresh loaf of bread. A properly hearty breakfast. After taking a bite, I answered: "Yes, I know it. I'd say I have quite a talent for it. I came across a certain book in Knockturn Alley."

Vespera raised an eyebrow in surprise, but immediately asked: "What on earth were you doing in Knockturn Alley?"

"Since I was little, I've had the ability to read people; I could sense when they were lying to me and what they were feeling. I didn't know what it was, and in Diagon Alley, a shopkeeper curtly told me they didn't sell such books because they were banned by the Ministry. So, I went to Knockturn Alley, where I got lucky. Borgin was exceptionally pleasant," I noted with a slightly sarcastic undertone.

Vespera laughed softly. "Borgin and pleasant? A dragon is more likely to start singing opera. That old fox can scent an opportunity from miles away. Be careful around him, Patrik. He has lived a very long time and has a finger in every pie."

I nodded in understanding but continued to focus on breakfast. It was great. Have I mentioned that I love house-elves?

We continued eating without unnecessary words. Vespera watched me with a gentle smile; apparently, my appetite was proof enough for her that I felt comfortable here. As soon as I put down my cutlery, she spoke up: "Are you finished? Was it enough?"

"Yes, thank you. I've never had a better breakfast," I threw an honest compliment into the room.

Suddenly, there was a soft pop, and for a fraction of a second, the air blurred to my right. It was likely Jobo clearing the empty plates.

Vespera stood up and signaled for me to follow her. We returned to the same cozy room with the massive black marble fireplace where we had sat the night before. The flames within it quietly licked the logs, casting long shadows on the walls. We sat in armchairs directly opposite each other.

For a moment, she measured me silently with her gaze, as if trying to gauge my strength before even drawing her wand. Then she spoke seriously: "The moment I break through to your memories, I will stop immediately. You don't have to worry; I will respect your privacy."

I only nodded silently. There was no time for idle talk. I relaxed my body, took a deep breath, and focused on my inner self. It was high time to test the strength of my defenses.

Vespera pointed her wand at me. "Legilimens!" she cried, and a grey beam hit me directly in the chest.

I immediately felt her presence within me. I forced myself to remain calm and watch what she was doing. In my mind, I was the master – while I saw her clearly, as if it were a bright summer day, she was fumbling in perfect nothingness. She found herself in darkness where she couldn't see even a meter ahead. She was surrounded by thick fog, an all-consuming cold, and the roar of a stormy sea. I felt her begin to drown for a moment in my cold waves; it pulled her under the surface, deep into my defenses. After a moment, however, she recovered and surged upward. She levitated over the sea, and her soaked clothes dried in a second.

Suddenly, a small sun appeared in my mind, growing larger every second and scorching the darkness. I immediately crushed it to dust with a thought. At that moment, pure shock was mirrored on Vespera's face. She levitated for a while longer, but then aggressively waved her hand. Flames erupted from her palms. They transformed into bloodthirsty fire monsters that began to devour everything around them. My fog was torn apart, and the sea began to evaporate under that fire. However, it wasn't ordinary steam; her fire was hungry and consumed my defense without residue.

For a moment, the attack caught me off guard, but then I took the initiative. By the force of my will, I began to shrink the fire and forcibly restore both the fog and the sea. If it were Fiendfyre in reality, I might have been helpless... but in my own mind? Here, I set the rules.

Not a trace of the fire remained. And my levitating aunt?

My affinity belonged not only to water but also to lightning. I forced my mind to summon a lightning dragon – Kirin. The inspiration from Sasuke proved to be genius at this moment. In my world, it was "easy peasy." The blue-white dragon descended from the heavens with a deafening roar and shot Vespera straight down into the black water. At that same moment, I felt her consciousness vanish from my mind for good.

"Successfully repelled," I thought contentedly. "Mental combat is truly fun."

I slowly opened my eyes and returned to the reality of the drawing room. Vespera sat opposite me, her face ashen and her eyes still filled with genuine shock. It took several long seconds before her breathing steadied enough for her to speak.

"What was... by Salazar," she exhaled and paused for a moment, as if needing to organize in her head what had just happened. "I wanted to test you, Patrik, not experience a life-or-death struggle! Where did you come by such hellish defenses? I felt like I was in Azkaban – fog, hopelessness, a cold sea I was drowning in... And just when I felt I was making progress and getting to your thoughts, my fire vanished and suddenly a lightning dragon shot me down!" At that memory, she visibly shuddered and gripped the armrests of her chair more tightly.

"What do you mean, life-or-death?" I asked with genuine surprise. "That's my standard defense. You're actually the first person who has tried to cast Legilimency on me."

"Most people build castles, labyrinths, halls of mirrors, and the like," Vespera continued with undisguised pride. "Truth be told, you're the first I've heard of who has an entire elemental ecosystem in his head that actively drowns and eliminates intruders. If I hadn't just experienced it firsthand, I wouldn't have believed it was even possible."

"Why? It's quite logical, isn't it?" I asked with sincere curiosity. "Everyone must have castles."

"People usually choose places where they feel best – something familiar where they are at the helm. But for what you demonstrated, a huge affinity for both Occlumency and elemental magic is required. Not just anyone can do this. Perhaps Dumbledore, Grindelwald, or the Dark Lord. I can't do it... and neither Evan nor my father could," she explained, still appearing slightly shaken.

She slowly exhaled, and her gaze cleared. "Your mind is completely safe. We can move straight to Legilimency. As for your Occlumency, continue exactly with what you're doing. Feel free to ignore any books you find in our library; they might actually degrade your progress."

Vespera leaned back comfortably in her chair, closed her eyes, and relaxed her shoulders. "Now let's switch roles. I want you to attack me. My defense isn't as... exotic as yours, but I've been building it for decades. You'll certainly recognize what I based it on."

"Legilimens!" I shouted and focused my entire mind on a single goal: to break through into her memories.

In an instant, I found myself in front of a castle. If you guessed it was our ancestral seat, you'd be right. However, the gates were sealed tight, and stone gargoyles were waking up on the ramparts with a terrifying screech. Their claws scraped the wall, making a sound that filled me with a foul sense of uncertainty. I simply ignored it.

I immediately sent out a mental battering ram. The impact on the gate shook my entire presence in her head. The gate shrieked but held, and I felt it immediately regenerating with magic.

"Fine then, let's try it differently," I thought and "stepped on the gas."

It was high time because gargoyles began jumping at me from the ramparts. With a sharp wave of my hand, I sent a massive tsunami against the castle. The water hit the ramparts with such force that it swept away the stone monsters like insignificant plush toys. While they were still in the air, I forced the water around them to freeze, lifting them high into the sky in icy prisons. Then I abruptly withdrew my support – the gargoyles shattered against the hard ground into thousands of pieces with a dramatic crash.

I fed the surrounding water with my magic, and its volume grew menacingly. Vespera suddenly materialized on the ramparts and once again conjured Fiendfyre. However, with a part of my mind, I immediately smothered it before it could grow. She tried again and again, but I didn't give her the slightest chance. There was already a massive amount of water, and I was starting to feel the increasing pressure on my own consciousness. The moment of release came. The enormous tsunami rolled over the castle walls and gate with a crushing roar. It literally swept away the entire estate like a blade of grass. The defense was crushed.

I stepped forward with a slow, triumphant pace. But I wasn't naive enough to think this was the end. Water stood everywhere around me, but I didn't control it – I felt it rapidly draining into the underground. Chambers were hidden deep beneath the ruins of the castle, and I assumed that was where Vespera had hidden her library of memories. I sent a part of the current to explore the darkness beneath the ground. It was a labyrinth. I focused on mapping it, searching for a path deeper into her consciousness... but Vespera had no intention of giving up without a fight.

While I focused on exploring her corridors, she managed to conjure Fiendfyre in a corner of my attention. And there was plenty of it. I had made a huge mistake – I had left her unsupervised, and she used that time to gather strength for one massive counterattack. I immediately sent the rest of the water against the flames while I myself ran into the already mapped labyrinth. However, I felt that my water was losing. It was evaporating rapidly, and instead of extinguishing the fire, it was only feeding it with energy. My divided focus was only enough to prevent the fire from growing, but I no longer had the strength to shrink it.

I literally flew through the corridors of her mind. At the end, heavy oak doors carved with the Rosier crest awaited me. I burst through them and stormed inside. My water was definitively gone. I didn't have time to search. I quickly grabbed the first "book" that came to hand. It was only a short, fleeting memory. I saw Vespera in the dark, passionately kissing a person with long hair... That was all I managed to catch.

In the next second, her fire consumed me. I felt the flames burning me to ash, and in that unbearable heat, I suddenly found myself back in the drawing room.

I gasped for breath and shook. Being burned to death, even if only on a mental level, hurt almost unimaginably. Every nerve in my body screamed as if those flames were real.

Vespera was no better off. Although she hadn't experienced the agony of burning, her face was ashen and her hands trembled slightly from the exhaustion of maintaining such a massive counterattack. For a few minutes, we just sat in silence, trying to return to the reality of the room until our breathing calmed.

"You have incredible talent, Patrik," she finally began, her voice sounding muffled. "I really didn't expect you to get as far as my memories... but you made several schoolboy errors. You shouldn't have ignored me. In Legilimency, slower is often better. You crushed my defense with brute force, but that gave me enough time for a counterattack that proved fatal for you." She paused for a moment and then gave a pale grin. "As you can feel for yourself now, a mental duel hurts. I can still feel that drowning and that lightning strike even now."

In her eyes, however, I saw undisguised pride. That look warmed my heart more than any healing spell.

"I'll be afraid of being burned alive until I actually die," I grinned back at her, even though a shiver still ran down my spine.

"We can train your Legilimency every day so you can avoid similar mistakes," Vespera suggested. "Now we'll have lunch, rest for a bit, and then we can move on to spells."

"I appreciate you wanting to help me like this," I said, looking at her with interest. "Do all families do it this way? Do they teach their children like this?" I was curious. I felt great that I was growing thanks to her, but the idea of someone like Crabbe, Goyle, or Draco experiencing equally intense Christmases seemed unlikely to me.

Vespera laughed with amusement. It was a laugh from the heart, as if she really needed it lately. I let her calm down, but after a moment it overcame her again and she burst into another round of laughter. By then, I was looking at her a bit uncertainly, wondering if she was alright.

When she finally controlled herself, she wiped the tears from the corners of her eyes and spoke: "Yes, Patrik, all the old families teach their children. They pass down spells and family secrets. But I'm laughing because while other children your age are perhaps struggling right now to learn a simple Everte Statum, you are literally leapfrogging me in mind magic. The image of Draco Malfoy trying something similar is... simply comical."

She paused for a moment, and her face grew serious. Her smile was replaced by a stern, almost protective expression. "Patrik, honestly – you are exceptionally talented. I had great concerns for your safety, and those persist. The problem is that you are still young. Even with your talent, an experienced group of wizards could put you in the ground before you even have time to draw your wand. We are the last members of the family, and believe me, there are those who would like to see us dead. For example, the Mulciber family... they would profit most from our fall." She came over to me and placed a hand on my shoulder. Her grip was firm. "Child lords are the end of their line. I will not allow us to die out. I will teach you everything I know. Every spell, every technique, white and dark magic."

Could I have wished for more? An amazing aunt, a talented witch who sincerely supported me and cared about my success. I felt we were on the same wavelength.

I nodded enthusiastically in agreement, but immediately after, I had to set the record straight: "The Mulcibers are not our enemies, Aunt. I spoke with Alexander Mulciber directly at Hogwarts," I explained calmly.

Vespera almost lost her breath. "What do you mean, Patrik? I told you to avoid them! They are dangerous," she blurted out, shocked.

"Well... I was curious. And of course, I won't leave you in this alone; you are my favorite aunt, after all," I said with my most charming smile. Then I turned serious: "Alexander was very willing to explain the whole situation to me. And Legilimency was more than helpful during that conversation, so I'm sure of my conclusions. The Mulcibers are not a threat."

Vespera fixed a stern gaze on me. The tension in the room was thick enough to cut. "Tell me everything," she commanded in a tone that allowed for no delays. "To the last word."

"Well... as soon as you told me there was a problem with them, I tried to connect with Mulciber. But every time he saw me, he vanished along with Rookwood," I began, watching Vespera press her palms to her temples as if she were getting a headache. She didn't interrupt me, so I continued. "During the Halloween feast, I followed them to an abandoned classroom. Actually, they were waiting for me there, the clever rascals. Originally they didn't know what I was after... I gave Alexander a chance to tell me everything the easy way, but he was a bit reluctant."

Vespera just shook her head silently, but she still gave me space, so I continued cheerfully: "They attacked me, even though I only innocently wanted to talk. I had to defend myself, defeat them, and only then was Alexander willing to talk. It turned out that old Lord Mulciber was a loyal friend of my father's and still remembers him fondly. The problem is his brother Gregor – he is greedy, ambitious, and dangerous. Alexander himself is in danger from him. It turned out that while Gregor is focused on you, old Alexander at least doesn't have to worry about his heir. If Gregor were to have some kind of... accident, the Mulcibers wouldn't take it badly. Quite the opposite."

"A second Evan," she muttered under her breath, but in the sudden silence, it rang out clearly as if she had shouted it. "That is good to know. I've avoided their family for the last few years. The Mulcibers aren't exceptionally powerful magic-wise, but they have many members and influence in the lower levels of the Ministry," she informed me, pacing the room. A silence fell, which she broke after a while with a firm voice: "Leave Gregor to me, though. I'll take care of him."

I just shrugged indifferently. I didn't care. Either she would put him in the ground or I would later. The result was what mattered, not who carried out the sentence.

We went to the dining room, where the table was groaning under mountains of food – from sweet to savory. Steaks, roasted chickens, meatballs, roasted potatoes, rice, and bowls full of fresh vegetables. Again, I felt gratitude for this magical world and the wealth associated with it. Although it wasn't any special holiday, the table was bursting at the seams. We ate in silence, and after a short rest, it was time for spells.

Vespera led me to the lower parts of the castle. We stopped in a dead end with bare walls and no doors. However, I felt magic radiating from the stone. Vespera simply placed her hand against the wall, and the wall disappeared into the ground with a quiet thud.

"Simple private protection. The wall reacts exclusively to our family's magic," she explained briefly.

We entered a spacious, pragmatically furnished room. Ancient runes were carved into the walls. Tables and chairs for sitting stood along the sides, but the center of the room remained completely empty.

"Our training hall. Duels and magic practice have always taken place here," Vespera informed me. "No unauthorized person can get in. The room is protected by absorption and dampening spells. No one from the outside will sense the type of magic we'll be using here. We can even practice Unforgivable Curses here – to the outside, they will feel like ordinary Alohomora. Only extremely powerful elemental spells could possibly damage the room."

"Is there anything specific you'd like to learn?" Vespera asked as she prepared her wand.

"Well, definitely Dark Arts," I said without hesitation. "I had a bit of a problem with Alexander. I basically had to drown him using Aguamenti to get him to start talking. So... some of those torturing curses?"

Vespera stopped mid-motion. She slapped her hand loudly against her forehead and almost angrily cried out: "You didn't say you had to torture him, Patrik!"

"Oh, don't worry, he took it sportingly! He's not angry at all," I put on my most soothing smile, as if we were talking about me eating his lunch at school and not about me almost drowning him in a classroom.

Vespera frowned at me for a moment, a mix of horror and resignation in her eyes. But my innocent expression clearly worked, because she just let out a loud huff and shook her head in resignation. "What do you actually know about Dark Arts?" she asked me next.

"Well, honestly, not much," I admitted. "Only that I have to use negative emotions for the spells to work reliably."

"And do you know anything about its negative effects on a wizard?"

"Basically nothing. It's hard to get hold of such books at Hogwarts. But I assume that if someone constantly uses Dark Arts, feels non-stop hatred, and wants to cause harm, sooner or later it will take a toll on their psyche," I finished my reasoning.

Vespera nodded approvingly. "Yes, exactly. However, the Occlumency you already master sufficiently can help you with this. The shields in your head don't just protect your memories from others, but also your sanity from yourself. But you must be careful. Your Aunt Bellatrix fell deep into madness because of Dark Arts. The Blacks often had trouble with Occlumency; you have a huge advantage over them in that."

She paused for a moment as if searching for the right words. "You must balance magic – dark, white, and neutral. That is the only way to remain truly powerful while maintaining your sanity," Vespera continued, walking slowly through the middle of the room. "Dark magic is immensely tempting because it requires less of your own magical energy than white or neutral magic. Negative emotions act as a catalyst; they give the spell raw, destructive power, making the result much more brutal." She stopped and fixed a warning gaze on me. "If, however, you are unable or unwilling to balance the spells, you must take regular breaks from Dark Arts. You must allow your soul and mind to cleanse themselves. Otherwise, it will consume you before you even realize you've lost yourself. We Rosiers have always been pragmatists, Patrik. We use dark magic as a tool, not as a master."

It made sense, so I nodded. I certainly didn't plan on becoming a slave to my own negative thoughts. The idea of sitting somewhere on a sunny beach, sipping a chilled Gin and Tonic while hatred burned in my mind, seemed highly unattractive to me. I wanted power, but I also wanted to enjoy it in peace and luxury.



Author's note:

So, what do you think about Legilimency and Occlumency in practice? Did you find the depiction interesting? In many of the stories I've read, I always felt that true mental combat was missing, so I wanted to bring that to life here.

Vespera is incredibly kind and helpful—I think she's won over not just our MC, but hopefully you guys as well! To be honest, I originally planned for this chapter to be shorter so I could move the plot along faster, but once I started writing, it took on a life of its own. I just couldn't bring myself to cut any of it.


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After a moment, Vespera spoke again: "We shall begin with a Hogwarts classic—at least according to your father's stories. It is a simple Dark Arts spell. It isn't directly life-threatening, but it is certainly unpleasant and humiliating for the victim. The spell is called Furnunculus. It causes painful acne and boils at the point of impact; their size and extent depend on your will and magical power. The beam is a deep gold color."

With a wave of her wand, she summoned a rune-covered mannequin from the corner of the room, which looked chillingly realistic. Vespera stepped toward it and, with a swift, routine motion of her wand, made a small nick on her finger. When the first drop of blood appeared, she smeared it onto the wooden surface of the dummy.

The wood soaked up the blood instantly. The runes on its chest flared with a bright light, and the mannequin jerked as if life had entered it. After a brief tremor, it finally settled into a fighting stance.

"This is our family training tool. Any damage you deal to it will regenerate almost instantly. On this dummy, you will see the exact same effects you would see on a living person," she explained, stepping aside with a solemn expression. "Go ahead, Patrik."

I aimed my yew wand at the mannequin. In my mind, I vividly conjured the most repulsive, boil-ridden face I could imagine, and shouted with concentration:

"Furnunculus!"

A deep gold beam shot from the tip of my wand and hit the mannequin with a smack. It stumbled slightly under the impact. At that same moment, disgusting, festering boils and swollen acne began to erupt across its face. However, I had accidentally overpowered the spell—within seconds, clusters of enormous blisters formed on the mannequin, growing over one another until its features were completely deformed. It looked more like some mutated plague than mere teenage breakouts.

Vespera watched the carnage in silence for a moment, then looked at me out of the corner of her eye.

"Unless your goal is to kill someone outright through shock or suffocation, use a bit less magic next time, Patrik," she remarked dryly, though there was a hint of approval in her voice.

It took only a few seconds for the mannequin to fully regenerate, its surface becoming smooth once more.

"Furnunculus!" I cast again, but this time I made sure to put significantly less will and power into the wand.

The dummy stumbled again, and pussy blisters began to form on its face. The result was much more realistic—it looked like an unfortunate fifteen-year-old lad with exceptionally aggressive acne. It was no longer the deadly mutation from the previous attempt.

"You have a natural talent for the Dark Arts," Vespera stated flatly, though a spark of recognition flickered in her eyes. As soon as the mannequin pulled itself together, she moved to the next step: "Next is the stinging jinx, Aculeus. It causes sharp pain and swelling, like a bee sting. Naturally, the extent of the damage changes according to your focus. It's another Hogwarts classic, mostly used by students to practice reflexes during duels."

"Aculeus!" This time, a bright purple beam erupted from my yew wand. It hit the mannequin square in the chest, and a red, angry swelling immediately began to form at the point of impact.

Vespera remained silent for a moment, watching the dummy regenerate. "Hm... every spell on the first try?" she asked, seemingly more to herself than to me, her voice tinged with respect.

"We shall move on to something more difficult now. We have Os Frangere. A white-grey beam that breaks the bone exactly at the point of impact," Vespera announced, stepping back.

I didn't wait around. My confidence was at an all-time high after my previous successes. I aimed and gave my wand a sharp flick.

"Os Frangere!"

The promised white-grey beam shot from the wand's tip and struck the mannequin with a dull thud. It knocked it back a meter, but in the silence of the training hall, I didn't hear that expected dry snap of breaking bone. As soon as the dummy mechanically stood back up, it was clear to me that the spell had failed. The wood remained intact.

"Os Frangere!" I tried again. Again, just a dull impact, nothing more.

"Os Frangere!" A third failure.

"Os Frangere!" "Os Frangere!" "Os Frangere!"

For more than an hour, I unsuccessfully attempted the Os Frangere spell. Meanwhile, Vespera sat peacefully in the corner of the room with a slight smile on her face, as if she had all the time in the world, while I fought a desperate battle with my own magic. First, I focused purely on the image of a broken bone; later, I tried hatred and the desire to cause pain. Nothing worked.

After two hours, I felt like slapping my forehead out of frustration. Sweat trickled down my temples, but I refused to give up. Suddenly, it clicked—with more demanding spells, it isn't enough to fix the mind on just one thing.

I took a deep breath and fused both emotions together: the image of the physical break and the burning desire to hurt. "OS FRANGERE!" I yelled, now genuinely angry.

A white-grey beam shot from the wand and slammed into the mannequin with a dull smack. In the silence of the hall, the dry, loud crack of wood echoed instantly.

Finally! Although some spells took me considerably longer at Hogwarts (mainly due to limited magical capacity), here I had my aunt, who forced me to go to the very limit. With a triumphant smile, I turned to her: "Right, what's next on the list?" I asked confidently.

Vespera, however, just laughed with amusement and shook her head.

"No more spells, Patrik. You haven't mastered it yet. Your blast had raw power, but the break wasn't clean... the bone was crushed, not broken. You must improve your will and precision. Again!"

I spent the rest of the day trying to master this spell. The reality was that I was putting too much magical power into it, but my will wasn't precise enough, which is why such a detailed effect was giving me such a hard time. I realized that the more power I wasted unnecessarily, the faster I would exhaust myself. I had to learn precision. It was fine for now, but in the future, I would pay the price if I had to use excessive amounts of magic for every demanding spell.

By dinner time, I felt my magical capacity was nearly at its end. I marveled at Vespera, how she just sat there and patiently watched my efforts. I would certainly have been bored—watching someone drill a single spell for hours. However, it warmed my heart.

Vespera finally interrupted me with a cough: "That's enough, Patrik, that will do for today. Let's have dinner." With a wave of her wand, she deactivated the mannequin and sent it back to its place.



Over dinner, Vespera explained how wizards perceive Yule and Christmas. It turned out that Muggle Christmas traditions had partially seeped into our community, and the more pragmatic pure-blood families didn't have a problem with it. Since I grew up in a Muggle orphanage, she didn't want to overwhelm me right away with unfamiliar terms tied to the solstice celebrations.

Most pure-blood families celebrate Yule between December 21st and 31st. Each family usually has a private celebration to honor their ancestors. Originally, gifts weren't given, but when Christmas customs spread, the pure-bloods adopted some of them—like gift-giving. The heads of the families liked the idea of being able to give presents to their loved ones, and so the custom became established in history.

At the same time, we received an invitation to a formal ball held on December 31st at the Malfoys'—meaning at the home of my Aunt Narcissa and cousin Draco. It was funny to realize that Draco was my actual cousin, not just some distant relative twice removed. However, I didn't feel like going to a ball and showing off while I was still aware of my weaknesses. I was still young, inexperienced, and undertrained in the wizarding world. Furthermore, there was still a Trace on my magic. Although it wouldn't be active within the Malfoy manor, if something went south and I had to disappear suddenly, I didn't want to take unnecessary risks.

Vespera was visibly pleased by my decision. She took it as me wanting to spend time only with her, and she was glad that after all these years, she wouldn't be honoring our ancestors alone. We planned to go Christmas shopping in Diagon Alley tomorrow. As if it were nothing, she handed me a thousand Galleons to buy gifts. I couldn't help it and had to ask about the family finances. She explained that as an underage member of the house and heir, I had an annual limit of a thousand Galleons—money intended for fun and trifles. All major expenses, such as robes, books, or other equipment, are covered by the adult members of the house directly from the family vault.



After dinner, I decided on some self-study; the Codex Ritualis had been drawing me in for a long time. However, the translation from Old English was problematic and, in the case of rituals, downright extremely dangerous. Why? To put it simply: rituals are, so to speak, an exchange. A ritual will grant you permanent effects, but in an uneven exchange, it can kill you, disfigure you, or otherwise harm you for life. A tiny mistake is all it takes, and the consequences are staggering. At least, that's how the world-renowned author of the book, Morgana Le Fay, explained it.

I translated the theoretical part four times just to be safe. I had to be absolutely sure; I certainly didn't plan on letting myself get killed through my own carelessness. In the book, Morgana discussed the theory and listed several rituals she had invented herself. They weren't any extremely dark practices, no sacrificing kittens or children... An adult Muggle? Yes, but I didn't view that as particularly tragic. After all, there were some very bad Muggles who deserved to die in pain.

I also came across an interesting thought: Morgana Le Fay was convinced that Parseltongue was acquired through a ritual. According to her, it wasn't a case of some ancestor of a house founder deciding to hook up with a magical snake. She theoretically noted that all it takes to gain this ability is a magical snake, the right ingredients, and precise Arithmancy calculations.

She acknowledged, however, that the founders of Parselmouth families certainly didn't sacrifice just one reptile. They managed to bind this ability directly to the family blood. They must have sacrificed countless snakes—both magical and ordinary—and undoubtedly humans as well. It must have been a bloody and monumental ritual to have maintained itself in the bloodline for entire millennia.

According to the history I studied, Morgana had the ability to speak with various animals in their own tongue, so I had no reason to disbelieve her. Muggles might have thought Merlin or Morgana were just myths, but in our world, they were written into history in blood.

The very first ritual in the book seemed perfect for my needs: Clǣnsung sāwle and līchaman. In Latin, I identified it as Ritus purgationis animae et carnis—The Ritual of Purification of Soul and Body.

In case you're wondering what exactly this ritual does, it's exactly what I was looking for: a complete cleansing of the body, mind, and magical core from foreign traces of magic. It was the key to shaking off that foreign spell that hit me during the traditional boat ride to Hogwarts. I assumed it was a form of tracking—the so-called "Trace"—so the Ministry would know about every use of magic by young wizards in the Muggle world.

If you're interested in the difficulty and ingredients? Ha! It's completely simple and commonly available in every household. According to Morgana, everyone should master this ritual and perform it every year as a preventive measure.

Nothing more is needed than a wooden bowl of clean water, a pinch of salt, a white candle, and a wand.

Since it was a basic ritual, no special day or specific hour was required. Why was it so simple? Because the effect was a one-time thing and really everyone had the ingredients at hand at home. I decided to perform it immediately. Why wait? I was sure I had translated the text correctly, and since the ingredients were nothing exceptional, I saw no risk in it.

"Jobo!" I called the house-elf.

He appeared in my room an instant later with a soft pop, bowed low, and waited for instructions.

"Jobo, please bring me a wooden bowl with clean water, a pinch of salt on a tray, and one white candle," I commanded. As soon as the elf heard the word "please," his eyes glistened with emotion, and he bowed even lower until his ears touched the floor.

"Right away, young master," he blurted out and vanished.

It didn't even take a minute before Jobo was back. I motioned for him to place the items directly on the desk.

"Thank you, you may go," I said with a smile. Have I mentioned that I love elves? They were the most useful beings in the world.

Jobo bowed deeply once more and vanished with a soft pop. I had everything I needed, and you know what the best part was? My room was huge and luxuriously furnished. I had my personal library, a large high-quality desk for studying, and a brutally comfortable chair to go with it. And the bed? A double king-size, which will definitely come in handy in the future. I also had free space in the room for whatever I set my mind to. That space was probably originally intended for children's toys, since my room was for heirs, but now it served me. Overall, it was about the size of my apartment in my previous life. Seriously luxurious. The only thing I was missing was a computer and World of Warcraft, which won't be in circulation for another thirteen years. At least, I think that's when Vanilla came out... but I digress!

Let's get to the ritual. We have the space, we have the ingredients, and we have the know-how.



Author's note:

In this chapter, Patrik finally begins his practical training under Aunt Vespera's watchful eye. I've tried to capture the fine line between his natural talent and his lack of experience, which becomes evident during his struggle with the Os Frangere curse.

We are also diving into the theory of rituals, which in this story aren't just about "wand-waving," but involve real costs and risks as defined by Morgana Le Fay.


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I tossed a pinch of salt into a wooden bowl of water. I stirred the water three times counter-clockwise with my wand, exactly as the codex dictated. I placed a white candle on the ground right next to the bowl. I didn't need my wand; a short, wandless Incendio from my fingertip was enough, and the wick caught fire instantly.

I dipped the tip of my wand into the salt water and began the first incantation: "Ritus purificationis animae et corporis, magiae internae auxilium peto, ut negativum ex me fluens purgetur et pax interior restituatur."

Immediately, I felt the air in the room begin to vibrate and hum with magic. The ritual had successfully begun.

I set my wand aside on the ground. Cupping my palms, I scooped water from the bowl and splashed it onto my face. I could feel the magic from the water soaking through my skin directly into my body. The second part of the incantation followed: "Pax intus fiat, gratias ago Matri Magiae pro lumine et protectione, et ut purgatio mea plenam harmoniam restituat."

The candle flared up violently, the flame turning bright blue for a brief moment. Then, the ritual's magic suddenly faded, and the air in the room cleared. I, however, immediately burst into uncontrollable, intense laughter. I felt an incredible euphoria. Joy, happiness, pure dopamine—it was an almost orgasmic sensation.

When I finally calmed down after several long minutes, I focused inward, metaphorically inspecting my magical core. That foreign trace from Hogwarts was gone. My core was mine once again.

That euphoric, perfect feeling was a pure byproduct of the ritual; it triggered an unbelievable rush of happiness in me. It was as if I'd taken cocaine. Well, at least that's how I imagined it—I'd never actually tried it—but after completing the cleansing, I simply felt invincible. However, a warning signal flashed immediately. I didn't want to become addicted to rituals, and I could vividly imagine that with more powerful ones, this effect would be even more devastatingly intense.

"I have to be careful," I told myself mentally, trying to steady my racing heart. I certainly didn't plan on becoming a slave to magic. I wanted to control it, not be controlled by it.

It struck me as odd, though, that Morgana hadn't mentioned the ritual euphoria. Why would she leave out such a powerful side effect? Either she considered it an insignificant detail, or my body was reacting to the cleansing differently than she had anticipated.

I called Jobo one last time to clear away the used items and, tired but satisfied, I lay down. I fell asleep with an intoxicating sense of success. The lingering euphoria from the ritual still warmed me pleasantly, and the knowledge that the foreign magic in my core was definitively gone was the best possible lullaby.



The morning after breakfast, Vespera and I headed to Diagon Alley for Christmas shopping. I didn't need anything special for myself; I decided to buy gifts only for Agnes, Draco, and Vespera. I hadn't socialized with anyone else enough for it to be worth the effort. Although Snape had been acting strange toward me, I didn't feel we were close enough for me to buy him anything.

I had to spend a while persuading my aunt to let us split up. She finally agreed, but only after I solemnly promised her that I wouldn't go to Knockturn Alley without her.

My first stop wasn't at the cauldron shops, but at Gringotts, where I exchanged some of my Galleons for British Pounds. I immediately headed into the Muggle world to the nearest large bookstore. It might amuse you, but in my opinion, anyone who hasn't read Tolkien's classic The Lord of the Rings trilogy is uneducated. It was a great gift for both Agnes and Draco. And since I wanted to get them properly hooked, they'd each receive The Hobbit to start with.

I decided not to hold back and bought them the illustrated Deluxe collector's editions in hardcover.

While in the bookstore, it occurred to me that I could buy a little something for Jobo as well. I settled on a children's puzzle featuring a picture of some Muggle landscape.

"At least it's going to be fun," I thought with a smile.

When it came to Vespera, I had to think for much longer. A wealthy pure-blood witch has enough gold to buy anything she can think of. I really had no idea what might surprise her; I didn't know her well enough yet to know exactly what her heart desired. But I genuinely cared for her, so I decided to put real effort into choosing her gift.

The problem was my promise not to set foot in Knockturn Alley without her. A man should keep his word, so I planned to stick to it, even though I knew I might find something "more interesting" there. Instead, I headed straight for the most renowned jewelry store in Diagon Alley.

However, nothing there caught my eye. They were all attractive pieces, sure, but purely aesthetic, which felt like a boring and shallow gift in a world of magic. I decided to head to a less frequented part of the alley, where smaller, less visited shops were located.

I went through them one by one until I finally stumbled upon the last shop on the very edge of the street. Beyond it, the path led into another section of Knockturn Alley. There was no name or opening hours on the storefront; truth be told, if I hadn't been desperate, I wouldn't have even stepped inside. From the outside, it looked like a total dump.

As soon as I entered, however, I stopped in surprise. Where I expected a shabby, half-empty junk shop, a pleasant surprise awaited me. The shelves were full, the shop was clean, and the space felt relatively inviting—I didn't smell even a hint of mustiness or dust. But magic radiated from the items on the shelves, and quite strongly at that. The inventory was incredibly diverse: clothing, jewelry, vessels, wand shafts, flower pots, glasses, cabinets, pouches... I could honestly go on forever.

I stood there for a moment, taking it all in from a distance, when suddenly an elderly, stern voice spoke up: "Only looking, no touching," a grey-haired old man declared with a perfectly serious face.

I slowly began to walk between the shelves, examining the displayed items. Magic radiated from every single one. With those that had fewer runes, I could roughly feel what they were for and how they worked, but with the more complex pieces, I couldn't sense their function at all.

About halfway through the shop, I suddenly stopped at a silver necklace. It was attractive specifically because of its simplicity; no unnecessary, gaudy nonsense. Although I hadn't mastered ancient runes yet, I could see them engraved on the surface of the metal. It emitted strong magic and a strange, calming sense of protection. Since none of the items had a price tag, I decided to call over the shopkeeper.

I returned to the counter at the front of the shop. As soon as I arrived, the old man looked at me casually, with an air of indifference as if he had all the time in the world. "Yes?" he asked uninterestedly.

"Could you tell me the price and effects of that necklace in the middle of the center shelf? It looks like rune-covered silver, and I assume it's for the wearer's protection," I requested matter-of-factly.

His indifferent expression instantly stiffened and shifted into pure interest. "Oh? You're knowledgeable in runic magic?" he probed immediately, his gaze piercing through me.

"I'm interested in the price and the effects," I repeated without answering his question.

The old man just gave a silent shrug, stood up, and headed toward the necklace. I followed him. He took the jewelry from its pedestal, looked it over for a moment, and then spoke: "This necklace has a protective function, as you correctly noted. The main thing, however, is that if someone with negative emotions and an intent to harm the wearer is nearby, the jewelry will warm up slightly. If someone directly casts a spell with negative emotions at them, the necklace will heat up more and attempt to physically pull the wearer away to dodge the spell. The price is 1,500 Galleons. I put a lot of work into it."

I couldn't read anything from his voice; it was clear he had active Occlumency. Although I had plenty of money, 1,500 Galleons was a staggering sum. I decided to negotiate a bit, but first, I was interested in the technical details.

"Where does it draw its magic from?" I asked curiously.

"Ah, so magical sensitivity? Interesting," the old man remarked. I immediately shot him a surprised look. I wanted to keep my abilities a secret, but he had seen right through me in a matter of seconds. He saw my expression and just gave a short laugh: "Don't be so surprised... Runes for gathering magic are the basics; the protective ones come later in your studies. A simple conclusion."

He paused for a moment and then continued: "But to answer you—this necklace is exceptional because it gathers ambient magic from the surroundings, not from the wearer. It is constantly recharging itself. Half of the runes serve exactly this purpose, which ensures it isn't a burden to anyone. It could even help a Squib."

It would be the perfect gift for Vespera. I cared about her being safe, and right now, there was a real risk in the form of Gregor Mulciber—at least until I put him in the ground. I decided I would buy it for her, but I couldn't just let the price slide.

"Couldn't we agree on a slightly better price? Say, five hundred Galleons would be great!" I suggested with an innocent look.

The old man burst out laughing immediately. "Certainly not. Every item in my shop is a masterpiece. Three times lower price? No way," he shut me down in a second.

But I wouldn't be brushed off.

"How about seven hundred then? I'm an orphan and I only have my aunt, who is in danger," I tried to play on his emotions. But honestly? I was a pretty shitty actor.

"Certainly not. Since you amused me, one thousand four hundred and fifty Galleons, and not a single one less..." the old man proposed with a smirk.

"That's way too much! Don't you have even a shred of pity for an orphan? A thousand Galleons!" I suggested again.

The old man gave a dry, amused snort. "Orphan? Your father is rotting in Azkaban, and I don't believe for a second you don't have enough gold for this necklace. Your house is wealthy. One thousand four hundred and fifty!"

"Fuck, I should have taken this ring off before I walked in," I thought to myself. The old man must have sensed what was going through my head because he corrected my assumption immediately.

"You look quite a bit like your grandfather, and your ring only confirms it," he added, shrugging as if it were nothing.

But I wasn't about to give up.

"Then at least one thousand three hundred Galleons. I don't have access to the entire family fortune, and I assume you and my grandfather were friends!" I blurted out as soon as I recovered from the next surprise.

The old man thought for a moment, but then just shrugged and nodded.

I immediately pulled out one thousand three hundred Galleons. I'd saved at least two hundred, and I finally had a gift for Vespera that was worth it. I was already on my way out when his voice called after me again:

"If you ever get an 'O' in Ancient Runes and Arithmancy on your NEWTs after your time at Hogwarts, try stopping by here. We'll see if you'd make a good apprentice," he suggested. He paused for a moment and then added with a slight smirk: "By the way, your grandfather and I were more like enemies... but with age, one remembers Hogwarts days fondly, no matter what they were like."

I wondered what this master enchanter's name was. It also occurred to me that a similar necklace would be useful for me, too, but after this purchase, I didn't have enough gold left for a second one.

"What is your name?" I asked curiously.

"Cillian Vane," the old man introduced himself with a slight, almost imperceptible bow of his head.

"Patrik Rosier," I replied in turn, giving a full bow. Old masters deserve respect.

I found myself back on Diagon Alley and headed toward Gringotts, where we had agreed to meet. It looked like I'd arrived just in time; Vespera was already waiting for me, standing on the marble steps with several bags in her hands.

At her invitation, I handed her my shopping bag. With a simple flick of her wand, Vespera shrunk it and tucked it effortlessly into her pocket.

"Do you have everything? Can we go home?" she asked.

I nodded: "Yes, I have everything."

She gestured for me to take her arm. As soon as I gripped her hand, the world around us dissolved, and with a typical crack, we apparated directly back to our family estate. This time, it was significantly easier than before.

In the castle, Vespera returned my bag, enlarging it back to its original size. It was just in time for lunch. She ordered Jobo to take our purchases to our rooms, and we sat down at the table.

Lunch was once again excellent and hearty. During the meal, we engaged in casual small talk and agreed to continue our magical training immediately. Os Frangere was still giving me a headache. Even though I could now break the bone on every attempt, my magical precision still wasn't perfect. With the simple spells I had already mastered, my power naturally amplified their effect, but the bone-breaker required absolute focused precision and a specific amount of energy. It was the perfect spell for honing control over my own magical core.



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The rest of December was spent in intense training. Although I still hadn't achieved absolute precision with the Os Frangere spell, I was getting better. I managed to break bones every time, but Vespera noted that it was still far from ideal. She warned me sternly to avoid this spell in common duels—unless my life was on the line, it wasn't worth the risk of an unintended consequence.

However, this drill helped me immensely in a magical sense. I possessed great power for my age, but I came to realize that precision was just as vital. If I were to overexert every spell unnecessarily, I would run into serious trouble with core exhaustion during longer duels in the future.

I grew to respect Vespera more and more. I felt her genuine support and interest in my development. She was exactly the kind of pragmatic and powerful woman I admired: cold and inaccessible to strangers, yet sensitive and protective toward family.

Os Frangere, however, wasn't the only spell she taught me at the end of the year. When I showed her the dagger I had taken from the family vault, she knew its purpose immediately. Because of this, she decided to initiate me into blood curses—and more importantly, to teach me the counter-curse.

We began with the Blood-Boiling Curse, the incantation of which was: Sanguinem ardere sinite. The beam was a deep, rich red. Due to the extra word, it was relatively slow in a wizarding duel and significantly more demanding in terms of concentration. I must admit... before I fully mastered my power, the dummy literally exploded under my hands a few times.

Practicing this curse took longer than I had anticipated. It required immense mental stability, so Vespera and I decided to leave the teaching of the counter-curse until January.

On the thirtieth of December, the day before New Year's Eve as it's known in the mundane world, Vespera and I began preparing for the Yule celebration—the winter solstice and the honoring of our ancestors. This celebration followed a precise procedure that had been a tradition in our family for centuries.

First, we selected and felled a tree in the garden. Its size didn't matter; the main thing was that it had to be healthy and not rotten. We needed it to create a ritual log.

Toward evening, we placed the log into the fireplace, beneath which we had situated a large steel basin. If you're wondering why, the explanation was simple: the log had to burn for exactly twenty-four hours. The fire in the grate had to be regulated and cooled precisely so that the wood would smolder and burn for the designated time. Honestly, it felt like a ritual with strictly defined ingredients, and I could hardly wait for the celebration.

We agreed to skip Dark Arts practice on the final day of the year. Instead, I devoted my time to translating Morgana's Codex Ritualis, physical training, and light exercises in elementary magic—just enough to stay in shape without exhausting myself. Vespera looked at me a bit strangely as I ran outside in the garden in that freezing cold, but she only shrugged silently and let it be.

For the festive dinner, I naturally "dressed up" a bit. I chose a more elegant robe stitched with silver thread, and as soon as I entered the dining room, it proved to be a good choice. Vespera was already waiting for me in a form-fitting, elegant black dress that hugged her figure perfectly.

The festive table groaned under the weight of the food, which differed from our usual fare. In the center sat a large silver tray with a roasted boar, an apple in its mouth. As soon as I caught its scent, my mouth began to water. Decanters with various alcohols were arranged around it. Without unnecessary words or prayers, we took our seats. Suddenly, a massive knife rose into the air and began to carve the boar with surgical precision.

Generous portions of juicy meat landed on our plates. I immediately added roasted potatoes and a fresh vegetable salad. Wishing each other a good meal, we dug in.

"Patrik, will you have beer or mulled wine with your meal? The beer is bitter, while the wine is relatively sweet, so I would recommend that to you instead," Vespera said suddenly, already pouring a deep red liquid from a decanter.

"Hm, I don't really feel like having alcohol with my food," I replied honestly.

"You must choose, it is tradition. I don't usually drink much myself, but this serves a purpose," she commanded with a playful yet firm smile.

"What purpose does it serve?" I asked curiously. "I'll have the beer then."

I didn't even have to pour it myself; the second decanter immediately levitated over my glass and began pouring a sparkling yellow liquid into my chalice. "I hope it's at least chilled," I thought to myself.

"By drinking wine and beer, we honor the gods who had a great influence on our lineage. With wine, we pay respect to Odin; with beer, to Thor. With the boar, we honor Freya, so she may bring us luck in love, war, and magic," Vespera explained with undisguised joy. She paused for a moment to take a sip of her wine and added with a melancholic smile: "At least, that's how my mother used to explain it to me."

Once we had eaten our fill, I expected the food to vanish immediately, as was custom. Today, however, was the opposite. Vespera noticed my inquisitive look and explained: "We leave the leftovers on the table all night in honor of Odin's horse, Sleipnir."

After a moment, she spoke again: "It's time for gifts, Patrik!" Her voice clearly betrayed her excitement and impatience.

"Of course," I replied dryly. I hadn't genuinely looked forward to gifts in a long time; I always bought everything I needed myself. I was more interested in the good food and the peaceful family atmosphere.

Vespera completely ignored my dry tone and pulled me into the drawing room, where a fire was already crackling in the fireplace. The room was filled with a pleasant dimness and the intoxicating aroma of burning wood. The gifts were already piled on the table, and I must admit, there were quite a few of them.

I quickly called Jobo to bring the gift I had for Vespera. He knew exactly which one I meant. It wasn't that I had shared my plan with him, but I simply couldn't wrap a package manually to save my life. It always ended in a disaster. In the past, a girlfriend had always handled it for me, but now I had to rely on Jobo. With a snap of his fingers, he did a perfect job. He couldn't suggest any spell for it, though—he used his magic instinctively and without any incantations.

A standard child would likely have rushed to the pile of gifts under the tree immediately, but I preferred to hand the package to Vespera first. She looked at me with surprise, but after a moment, I saw her eyes begin to glisten. She was clearly moved—ever since her only brother, my father, had been locked in Azkaban, she hadn't received anything from anyone who shared her blood.

I was curious to see what she would say. After a moment, she pulled herself together and immediately tore the paper like an impatient child. it was a funny contrast to her usual behavior. She opened the box and looked searchingly at the necklace. I must have hit the mark with her taste, as she smiled and carefully pulled it out. Then, she paused.

When she held it up against the light, she saw the other side, which was engraved with ancient protective runes. She immediately flipped it over and began to decipher them with the professional interest of a witch.

After a moment, she had to ask: "I see protective runes here, but I don't quite understand everything. I must admit, runes were never my strong suit. What exactly does it do, and where did you get it?"

"It's from Cillian Vane in Diagon Alley," I replied calmly. "The necklace ambiently absorbs magic from its surroundings. It warms up slightly if someone with negative emotions toward you is nearby. And if someone casts a spell at you, it gets even hotter and tries to pull you gently so that you dodge it. Naturally, it's only a gentle nudge; it won't get you out of the line of fire entirely on its own."

She looked at me in shock, but recovered after a moment. "Wow, that must have been incredibly expensive from Master Vane. I certainly didn't give you that many Galleons for your shopping," she reacted with a pleased smile and a spark of suspicion in her eyes.

"You are my favorite aunt, after all. Only the best for you," I replied with a slight smirk.

Vespera hesitated for a second, then grabbed me and gave me a tight hug. It was the kind of hug where you feel like your aunt is about to suffocate you, but at the same time, you feel that you are the only family she has left on the outside. When she finally let go, she looked lady-like again, though her eyes betrayed her.

"Alright, enough of that," she said, nodding toward the gifts on the table. "It's your turn now."

There were quite a few of them, so I set about unwrapping them immediately. Agnes and I had agreed to exchange gifts back at Hogwarts, so I was curious who all these packages were from. Most of them, understandably, were from Vespera. I received black leather gloves, a scarf with our family crest, and a formal robe that was a bit too ornate for my taste, though I didn't intend to criticize her for it. What struck me most, however, was another gift—a luxury silver watch. On the back, the family crest was engraved, and the sides of the dial featured detailed roses with thorns. They looked pragmatic and elegant, without any unnecessary decoration. There were various buttons on the sides; pressing the first one revealed a crescent moon on the dial. It was clearly a lunar phase indicator for the next full moon. I decided to explore the other functions later, but it was already clear to me that this was "top-tier."

"Thank you, this watch definitely outdid my gift, Aunt," I admitted appreciatively.

She shook her head with a smile. "Honestly, that watch has been in our family for centuries. Usually, it's worn by the Head of the House or the heir. It originally belonged to Evan, so it's actually a gift from your father as well."

Only three smaller packages remained on the table, so I unwrapped them quickly. The first was a luxury emerald quill and a pile of sweets from Draco Malfoy. I'd have to write to him; I hadn't expected him to send anything, otherwise I would have made an arrangement with him similar to Agnes. What surprised me more, though, were the gifts from Tobias Yaxley and Theodore Nott. They sent only sweets and a brief Christmas greeting. I remembered how they had watched me with interest at school and talked to Agnes, but they had never approached me directly. Strange.

"Finished, Patrik? We need to start preparing soon," Vespera said suddenly.

"Yes, finished," I nodded and followed her back into the dining room.

The steel basin rose from the fireplace, containing the ashes from the log after its full twenty-four hours of burning. Vespera then took the decanters of wine and beer from the table and, with ritual solemnity, poured them into the basin. With a snap of his fingers, Jobo appeared and handed her seven roses with thorns. With a single sharp wave of her wand, Vespera chopped them into small pieces, which she immediately mixed with the ashes.

Jobo handed her a wooden spoon, and my aunt began to mix all the ingredients by hand: the pieces of roses, the ashes, the wine, and the beer. A thick, dark mixture formed.

"The log burned for twenty-four hours for our protection against darkness and misfortune. We have added an offering to the gods and the symbol of our house—the roses with thorns," Vespera explained as a strange, spicy aroma began to rise from the basin.

Next, Jobo handed us two wooden bowls, and Vespera divided the resulting mixture evenly between them. We stepped out through the back entrance, where a vast expanse of our lands stretched before us in the moonlight, starting with the well-kept garden.

I walked behind Vespera to a massive tree at the very edge of the garden. There she stopped and, with a deadly serious expression, began to explain: "At exactly midnight, I will begin to sing a song to honor the ancestors. You must not interrupt me. When I finish singing, do exactly as I do." She took a small pocket watch from her bodice to check the remaining time.

As soon as she saw that it had struck midnight, she began to sing unhurriedly in a pleasant, melodic voice:

Sub radicibus arborum vetustarum stamus,

ubi terra nomina maiorum spirat.

Gressus eorum adhuc in pulvere sentimus,

vox eorum est ventus qui nos tantum tuetur.



Da nobis vim, cum nox longa est,

et fortunam quae non perit.

Sit cras vultu claro,

et praeteritum nos consecret.


With the first note of the song, I felt the air suddenly tremble. An intense, almost tangible magic began to swirl around us, intensifying with every verse. When Vespera finished singing, she emptied her bowl onto the exposed roots of the tree. I followed her without hesitation. She scraped the rest of the mixture out with her fingers and gently smeared it on her forehead. As soon as I marked my own forehead with the mixture, Vespera definitively concluded the ritual with the final verses:

Ex sanguine et memoria ardet flamma tacita, quam nos ipsi porro ferimus.

At that moment, an unexpected sensation flooded me. It was as if I were suddenly surrounded and embraced by my ancestors; I felt their palms on my shoulders, a sense of protection, safety, and boundless love. It was a warm, deep peace. I knew the ritual had been successful. Unlike Morgana's ritual, which left me feeling a wild euphoria, this one left me with a quiet certainty and stability.

I felt Vespera's gaze on me. She watched me with that melancholic smile of hers, and it was clear to me that her thoughts were returning somewhere to her childhood. For years, she had to honor the ancestors all alone, and my presence clearly meant a lot to her.

After a while, we brought it to a close. Without many words, we said our goodnights and went to our rooms. It was an experience that will stay in my head. I knew that from now on, it was my duty as well, and I would gladly repeat this ritual every year.



The rest of the holidays passed in a flash. I more or less mastered the Blood-Boiling Curse; according to Vespera's estimate, a victim without the counter-curse would survive barely thirty minutes. Naturally, my aunt made sure that I mastered the counter-curse one hundred percent as well. It was significantly simpler, and I had it "nailed down" within an hour.

By the end of the break, I felt more powerful and precise, so I considered them a huge success. I was interested in reading the family grimoire, but only the Head of the House had access to it. It is unlocked by the Head's ring, which my father still has in Azkaban. The common practice was for the Head of the House to teach family spells and techniques from the grimoire at their own discretion under oath, so that secrets would not leak outside the family.

Vespera admitted to me that it was a tradition in our house to teach children Legilimency and Occlumency from a very young age. However, my grandfather had cut her off from the other family spells and techniques. At first, according to him, she didn't have enough magical power, and later she pointedly avoided him. He died before he could teach her more than mind magic, so she remained self-taught in many respects, relying on what she learned on her own or what she brought back from Durmstrang.

Not all houses were so foresighted; some were foolish enough to sell family secrets when they ran into financial or political trouble.

I didn't choose anything from the family library this time. Not because there was nothing interesting in it, but I decided to focus fully on precision, speed, and aim. Expanding my repertoire didn't make sense to me yet, not until I could use the spells I already knew with absolute accuracy.

On the morning of the seventh of January, we apparated to Platform 9 ¾. Honestly? I didn't feel like going to school at all. Training with Vespera had taken a lot out of me, and although we hadn't dueled, I felt much more magically confident than before. I liked it at the castle—after these holidays, I already considered it home.

As soon as we stepped through the barrier, the noise and steam from the Hogwarts Express hit me in the face. Vespera immediately gave me a firm squeeze. I had to promise her that I would write about every little thing that happened at school and that I wouldn't slack off on my training.

"Take care of yourself, Patrik," she whispered into my ear. It was obvious that my departure saddened her. Her smile was clearly forced, but there was a glint in her eyes that said everything.

"I will, Aunt. I'll write to you soon," I replied and gave her hand one last firm squeeze.

I waved goodbye for the final time and set off to find Agnes.


Author's note:

I'll be honest, I struggled with this chapter quite a bit, but I'm happy with how the ritual scenes turned out. I really hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I eventually enjoyed finishing it! Did the Yule traditions intrigue you, or was it too much lore? I'd love to hear your feedback.


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25. Cousins and Choices New
I walked through the train looking for Agnes, but so far without success. I didn't see anyone I knew, and the older students ignored me – it would have been pointless to even ask them if they had seen her.

In the middle of the train, I came across a compartment where Draco sat with Crabbe and Goyle. I knocked and walked straight in, without waiting for an invitation. Crabbe and Goyle had clearly put on a few pounds after the Christmas feasts; I had to smirk—they shared my love for food, though certainly not for exercise.

On the way, I realized I had forgotten to send Draco an owl with a thank-you note. It was convenient that I ran into him now – at least I wouldn't have to give him a gift in front of the whole house.

"Hey, guys," I greeted them, turning immediately to Draco. He looked colder than usual. "I didn't expect you to send me a gift, Draco. I had agreed with Agnes that we'd exchange them at school. I forgot to send you an owl, you know how it is—too much magic, too little time."

I didn't wait for an answer. I opened my trunk, pulled out the wrapped books, and handed them to him. So many emotions flickered across Draco's face from the moment I arrived that I didn't need to be a Legilimens to see how pleased he was.

"Thank you!" he blurted out, his ears turning red, and immediately began tearing the paper. I was genuinely curious about what he would say about the books.

As soon as he unwrapped them, he began to examine them inquisitively. The collector's items I bought him were expensive and richly illustrated. In the wizarding world, books usually contain simple sketches, but these looked truly luxurious.

"I wonder how the battle of good versus evil will affect him," I thought to myself with amusement.

"What kind of books are these, cousin?" Draco asked after a moment. "Why aren't the pictures moving?"

"Tolkien's fantasy world, Draco. A perfect story. Read them and then tell me what you think."

"Are these Muggle books?" I expected disgust, but there was more curiosity and interest in his voice. It probably helped that the bindings looked so expensive.

"Yes, the pinnacle of Muggle literature," I nodded. Without a word, I reached out my hand and summoned a bright flame in my palm. It was a total flex. "At the same time, it's great inspiration for the world of magic."

Draco stared fascinated at my hand, where the flame still danced, but after a moment, his gaze determinedly slid back to the books. I was sure he would read them; I was genuinely interested in his opinion.

"Thank you, cousin. I appreciate your gift," he said with a smile. I sensed a slight hint of shame from him. I wonder why? The emerald quill he sent me was luxurious and likely in a similar price category as my books.

"You're welcome, your gift was great too," I replied with a slight smile.

"Mother helped me with it," he admitted after a while.

Ah, so it was clear to me now. Mommy's boy.

"Your mother has good taste," I remarked matter-of-factly. "Have you seen Agnes by any chance? I need to find her."

"She's sitting in the last compartment," Crabbe replied surprisingly. It was probably the first time I had heard him speak in my presence outside of class.

"Thanks." I nodded a goodbye and headed off to find her.

It didn't take long before I found her. She was so engrossed in her reading that when I opened the door, she literally jumped.

"Hi, Agnes," I greeted her, but immediately after, I used Colloportus and drew the curtains so we wouldn't be disturbed by curious onlookers in the corridor.

"Patrik! Hi. Where have you been all this time? I thought you weren't even coming," Agnes blurted out in one breath.

"If it were possible to be a magical Animagus, she would definitely be a dragon," I thought amusedly.

"I stopped by Draco's on the way, I was bringing him a gift," I replied and immediately followed up: "How was it in the Austrian Alps? Did you enjoy the skiing?"

"Amazing, Patrik, amazing! The atmosphere, the magic, the shops... tons of snow everywhere, great people, and mulled wine. I even saw dwarves! Skiing was okay, I wasn't very good at the start, but then I got the hang of it." She took a breath and continued immediately: "Would you believe that Muggles have something called a snowboard? It's a large piece of wood they slide down the slope on."

Dwarves? I thought there weren't any dwarves in Harry Potter.

I had to ask about it immediately: "Dwarves?"

"Yes, you know... Gringotts' competition," Agnes replied as if it were a completely common thing.

"No, Agnes, I don't know. Tell me more about them."

"You really don't know?" she threw me a puzzled look. Then a flash of understanding appeared in her eyes—she remembered I grew up in an orphanage and missed out on a lot of wizarding history. With slightly red cheeks, she began to explain: "Dwarves are competitors to Gringotts and actually their enemies too. Gringotts are powerful because they control the gold in most major wizarding communities. From what I know, dwarves control the gold in Austria, Switzerland, China, Eastern Europe, and parts of Africa. After the last war between wizards and goblins, some families moved their wealth into the hands of the dwarves, which jumpstarted their growth. As long as there is a balance between them, they don't have a monopoly, so we don't have to fear another rebellion," Agnes explained in her own words. "At least that's how my father explained it to me, if I remember correctly."

"Interesting. And wise," I noted. "If Gringotts had all our gold, it could be seriously problematic in the future. In the case of another rebellion, definitely."

Agnes nodded her head: "And how was your holiday? It was your first time at the family estate, right?"

"Perfect. Rosier Castle is a truly magical place, and from the first moment, I felt like I was finally home. Vespera is a great aunt, and I must admit that I've progressed magically; she taught me a lot. Also, the Yule celebration and the ritual of honoring ancestors were truly exceptional experiences."

"Patrik, don't mention your ancestors' ritual just in front of anyone," Agnes warned me in a serious voice. "Most pure-blood families, except for blood traitors, honor their ancestors. But traitors like the Weasleys consider it dark or blood magic, and you could get into trouble for it. Better keep it to yourself or only for someone you completely trust. The Ministry is strictly against it."

"How can it be dark or blood magic?" I asked in surprise.

"I assume your celebration wasn't bloody or sacrificial, otherwise you wouldn't be asking. However, some families sacrifice animals or humans to their ancestors. At least that's how it used to be; today, all families keep their rituals secret for their own safety..." she paused for a moment and then continued: "I also celebrated our ancestors for the first time this year. I understand your feelings and just like with you, we didn't sacrifice anything living either."

A heavy silence followed. I didn't care about the Ministry; fortunately, I lived in a world where a powerful wizard meant more than bureaucracy and corrupt politicians. However, I had to grow up so that one day I could happily give them the middle finger.

I decided to cheer up the atmosphere, and what's better for that than a gift? I pulled a package out of my trunk and handed it to her with a small smile. It was the exact same gift that Draco received. I was curious what she would say about it.

Agnes accepted the gift but first set it down beside her. She opened her trunk and took out a package wrapped in dark green paper with a silver ribbon. She handed it to me with a smile. We didn't wait any longer and both started unwrapping.

I got a black sweater made of incredibly pleasant fabric, soft and form-fitting. It had subtle lines embroidered with emerald thread, giving it an elegant look. Along with it, she packed some Toblerone chocolates—she had noticed well what I liked.

Agnes looked over the Tolkien books with interest. After a moment, she set them aside contentedly. "Thank you, Patrik. I'd love to read them."

"Thank you too. I really like the sweater," I replied.

We sat contentedly for a while, but then I thought to ask about her friends. "By the way, I got some sweets from Yaxley and Nott. Do you know why? I've never talked to them; they always only sought you out," I mentioned curiously.

Agnes turned completely red and looked away.

"What the fuck kind of reaction is that?!" I thought worriedly. She reacted more than strangely to my normal question. She said nothing at all, just avoided my gaze.

"Agnes?" I prompted impatiently.

"Well... um, I don't know... I don't know how to tell you," she stared at the ground, her face practically burning.

"Honestly is best. Just spill it."

She struggled with herself for a moment before finally making up her mind: "Remember how you helped me in the common room with Rookwood, right?"

I nodded silently.

"They wanted to join us for magic training. I... discouraged them a bit."

"How did you discourage them?"

"Well... I thought if they joined, you would ignore me and ditch me. So I told them I asked you, but that you refused for now." She paused for a moment while I looked at her in surprise. "I just wanted to show you that I'm good and that I'm worth it!" she added quickly with fear in her voice.

I was still silent. I was surprised, but I understood her. If I ditched her, she would be alone again. Since I was silent, she started again: "I'm sorry, Patrik. I'm sorry... that's why they sent you those little things for Christmas."

"Hm, so they want to join, huh?" I asked conversationally. Agnes waited for my reaction silently and with fear.

"Calm down, Agnes, it's fine. I wouldn't ditch you. But next time you tell me everything immediately—if something concerns me and you keep secrets, I'll be seriously angry," I paused for a moment when I saw how relieved she was. "You'll confess and apologize to Yaxley and Nott. Tell them they can join us," I commanded.

Agnes was no challenge for me in a duel. We'll see how those two are doing... in any case, it would be a good experience if all three of them stood against me. They definitely aren't more powerful than Mulciber and Rookwood, but three wizards can fire spells faster, even if perhaps weaker. It would be good training.

"Yes, thank you. It won't happen again," Agnes promised me with full seriousness. She looked remarkably mature, except for those chubby child cheeks of hers.

For the rest of the journey, Agnes enthusiastically told me about her experiences in Austria and her holiday with her father. When she finally finished her stories, she opened The Hobbit, which I had given her. Meanwhile, I immersed myself in reflections on the current situation.

I learned a lot this holiday and experienced even more. Originally, the name of my mother, Carina Black, didn't mean much to me—it was just a name on paper. While family history was pleasant to hear and I was proud of it, I didn't perceive alliances as important. Except for Vespera, I didn't care about anyone in the family; after all, I didn't even know them. Although I swore I would get Moody underground—blood demanded it, and if it weren't for him, the original Patrik might still be living in the safety of his home. Instead, he died in an orphanage and I replaced him.

The family castle and ancestral magic were amazing, but my perspective was definitively changed only by the ritual of honoring ancestors. I could still vividly feel them embracing and protecting me. It was a perfect feeling. Suddenly, I cared about them. I understood that I would help the House of Black—not because my mother came from there (they disowned her as a Squib), but because the Blacks had been our allies for centuries. I knew of one single Black who desperately needed my help. And I was in a position where I could provide it to him.

He could also be a valuable ally, and I would thus gain access to one of the best libraries of dark and combat magic in England. I had nothing to lose. At most, Voldemort might notice me, but I wasn't afraid of him. Until he rises again, I have enough time to grow stronger.



We arrived at Hogwarts exactly for dinner. As always, it was great and hearty, but after what I had experienced at home at the castle, it somehow lost its charm. Of course, I ate everything and even had seconds.

Later, we all moved to the common room. Agnes immediately sat on the couch with The Hobbit; she couldn't tear herself away from it and was literally devouring the story with her eyes. Draco was funny. When he saw her so immersed in the book that he had also received, he immediately and competitively headed to the bedroom for his copy. A moment later he was back and sat on the adjacent couch, determined not to be outdone.

I watched them with a smile, but after a moment I stood up. I needed a quill and parchment. It was time to take the first step toward helping the House of Black. I returned to the common room and sat at a writing desk in the corner, where I had peace to write.

Dear Master Vane,

I am writing to you regarding a situation that is extremely important and discrete for me. I ask you and at the same time appeal to your confidentiality—the content of this message must remain strictly between us.

It concerns the life and safety of a person whom I have decided to help. Since you are a master in your field, I require your services in creating a specific magical item.

I need an enchanted cage designed so that an Animagus in the form of a rat cannot escape it. It must be secured with runes and charms that will prevent escape, even if he attempts to transform back into a human. I leave the technical details to your expertise, but the result must be one hundred percent.

I emphasize that this matter is dangerous. I trust that you will maintain a professional approach. If anyone unauthorized were to learn of this order, it would jeopardize not only my plans but potentially you and your family as well.

I need the cage in the shortest possible time. Please send me a price quote by return.

Respectfully, Patrik Rosier


I tied the parchment and placed it in an envelope, which I sealed with the family crest. I walked past Agnes; she wasn't even breathing, she was so engrossed in her reading. I considered taking her with me for a moment, but I didn't feel like explaining why.



The way to the Owlery was short. The enchanted stairs probably sensed my destination because they moved willingly so that I would be there as quickly as possible. The Owlery was full of owls; most of them were awake and watching me with interest. There were owls of all kinds and colors—I even noticed that snow-white one that belonged to Potter.

However, I decided on the most ordinary owl I saw there. She was nothing special, but she looked young and strong—she would be able to defend herself against potential predators.

"I need this message delivered to Cilian Vane in Diagon Alley. You must wait for a response by return," I asked her. She didn't look too enthusiastic about my request, so I added: "If you bring me an answer, I'll buy you the best premium owl treats that can be found!"

That clearly convinced her. With an approving hoot, she offered me her leg. I quickly attached the envelope, the owl said goodbye with another hoot, and in an instant, she disappeared into the night sky.

On the way back to the Slytherin common room, I thought about the next steps. I needed to get into Gryffindor Tower, and I also needed the Marauder's Map so that the rat wouldn't be able to escape me. However, I had no idea if the Weasley twins already owned it this year... and certainly not how I would get into their common room. I needed an ally.

I dismissed the first years immediately; they didn't have enough respect, and I couldn't rely on them. Perhaps the Weasley twins themselves would be the answer to my problems—with both the map and the rat hunt.

And when I finally catch him, I'll figure out what's next—Vespera can help me with that. I didn't trust any professor except Snape, but as a former Death Eater, he wasn't the right choice in the case of Wormtail.



Author's note:


Patrik is back at Hogwarts with a mission, a mysterious letter to a Master Vane, and a certain rat in his sights. The stakes are getting higher, and his alliances are getting more complex. Do you think the Weasley twins will be willing to help a Slytherin? Let me know your theories in the comments!


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26. The General in Training New
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The following day went by quite fast, even though the classes were a bore as usual. We had our last period of History of Magic with Binns. As always, most of the class was asleep, while I was intensely thinking about the best and simplest way to free Sirius Black.

In the background, Binns lectured in his dry, dull, and absent voice: "...goblins... as you surely... all know... never... accepted... the supremacy... of wizards... Their... constant... desire... for... equality... led... to repeated... armed... conflicts... The first... recorded... rebellion... took place... in the year... 1192... and ended... exactly... like... all the others... In failure... The reason... was... their mistaken... notion... of ownership... and their... inappropriate... interest... in using... wizarding... wands... Take... notes... on this... chapter... it will be... on the... test..."

To be honest, I wasn't surprised that no one was listening to him. His jerky and absent speech was absolutely shit; even the biggest history fans couldn't pay attention... Well, except for Granger, who was diligently writing down every single word.

Agnes sat next to me, as always. Of course, while I was thinking, she was sleeping. I nudged her to wake her up and whispered: "Agnes, wake up. The lesson is almost over."

"Uuuugh... I'm waking up, stop poking me," she muttered.

She woke up with a yawn, rubbed her eyes, and slowly started packing her things.

"Agnes, duel after class?" I suggested.

Agnes yawned again and just gave a tired nod.

"Call Yaxley and Nott too and bring them to the room. I'll wait there," I commanded.

Finally, the gong sounded, announcing the end of the lesson. Interestingly, this gong only rang during History of Magic. Other teachers kept track of time and always ended the lesson verbally, whereas Binns would go on forever without it... Foolish Dumbledore. History is important, and I bet Binns taught even my grandfather.

I quickly dashed out of the classroom and headed for our training room. However, I felt a gaze on my back that practically burned. Ever since our confrontation, Granger had been watching me like a hawk.

The first thing I did after arriving in the classroom was stretch and loosen my joints to avoid injury. I did some shadow boxing to warm up, a few quick jump squats, and once I felt my muscles were ready, a series of short sprints followed.

I ran from corner to corner—sharp stop, touch, and an immediate start to the next one. The classroom wasn't large, but it was enough for agility and conditioning training based on HIIT principles. When I had run across the room ten times and Agnes and the others were still nowhere to be seen, I moved on to push-ups.

I started with classic ones, but after a while, I switched to clap push-ups. People think it's hard, but honestly? It's just about fear. You just need to push off hard and not be afraid. It was great explosive training for the chest muscles. I was just finishing a set when the door opened and a trio in robes with embroidered snakes entered.

Finally. On the last push-up, I pushed off sharply, tucked my legs forward, and stood up gracefully. With a thought, I summoned my wand into my hand and removed the sweat from myself with a short wave.

While Agnes was already used to my physical training, Nott and Yaxley stared at me like I was a ghost, completely surprised.

"Hey. Agnes told me you wanted to join us for training. Correct?"

They both nodded silently; they probably didn't know what to expect.

"What specifically would you like to train, and for what purpose?" I asked curiously.

"Magic and combat spells," Nott replied immediately, while Yaxley just shrugged as if he didn't care. Nott didn't answer the "for what" part, so I kept staring at him intently. Yaxley was clearly only here because of Nott.

After a moment, Theodore couldn't stand my gaze anymore and forced out: "I want to be powerful enough so that I don't have to bow to anyone."

That was understandable. His father was a Death Eater, and Theodore had likely heard stories about how Voldemort treated his followers. He wanted power to maintain his freedom.

"I understand. You have an ambitious goal," I replied with a smile. His motivation was essentially the same as mine—to gain enough power to be completely free. I liked him immediately.

Nott just nodded silently, while Yaxley and Agnes watched our conversation with interest.

"He doesn't say much," I thought to myself, amused. After a moment, I decided to test them.

"Alright then. You two against me—a duel. Let's see where you stand."

As soon as I said the word "duel," they both turned pale. I quickly added: "Don't worry, I won't hurt you. Relax." I didn't need to boost my ego; I needed to pull the others up high enough so that I could constantly progress myself.

I waited for them to calm down and then moved to the end of the room opposite them.

"Ready?" I asked. They both nodded hesitantly.

"Agnes, start us on three," I ordered the redhead. She had an amused smile on her face. She probably knew exactly how it would end and was glad she finally wasn't the only one losing.

"One... two... three... START!" she shouted.

"Flipendo!" "Petrificus Totalus!" they fired at me immediately, while Yaxley just waited to see if they would hit me.

With a simple dodge to the right, I avoided both spells, which flew harmlessly past me. I immediately returned fire: "Flipendo! Expelliarmus! Everte Statum!"

Nott managed to jump away from my spells and countered instantly: "Everte Statum!" Yaxley, however, wasn't so lucky. He was hit by both my Flipendo and Expelliarmus. The first spell threw him back three meters, which only set up the disarming charm; it slammed him hard against the wall, and his wand flew toward me. But I had no time to catch it; I had to dodge Nott's orange beam, which almost hit my left hip.

Now it was just between us. Yaxley was without a wand and still hadn't picked himself up from the floor.

"Flipendo! Petrificus Totalus!" Theodore yelled angrily. The spells were accurate, but I decided to show a bit of power.

"Protego!" I poured more magic into the shield. The blue outline pulsed, and both the blue and white beams splashed harmlessly against it. I immediately dropped the shield and fired: "Everte Statum! Aculeus! Incarcerous!"

Nott knew he couldn't dodge, so with the last of his strength, he attempted one final attack: "Everte Statum!" A rich orange beam shot from his wand; I could feel he put everything into it. I calmly watched as my Statum slammed him against the wall. The purple Aculeus narrowly missed him, but Incarcerous hit precisely—ropes wrapped tightly around him, and his wand fell from his hand. His spell was aimed at my shoulder, but with a simple change of stance, I pulled back, and the beam flew past me.

"Accio wands!" I called out. I concentrated so that Yaxley's wand flew around me from behind directly into my palm, while I caught Nott's from the front.

The duel was won. Agnes clapped enthusiastically with a smile like a cat that had just eaten a treat. Nott sat bound on the floor, scowling, while Yaxley finally started to pick himself up. A little longer and I would have sent him away... combat training isn't for the weak.

"Finite!" I waved my wand toward Nott. The ropes vanished, and a scowling Theodore stood up. I levitated both their wands into their hands and waited for them to come to me.

"Both of your stances and movements are shit. Honestly, I wasn't even trying to hit you, and I didn't use any strong spells, just the basic ones. Theodore, you were more mobile and didn't wait for the spell to hit but kept firing. If you had a better stance and movement, you'd be a better duelist. Power comes with time, as does spell-casting speed. Right now, though, you're far too slow—I could literally dance around you," I began with honest criticism.

Then I turned to the other one.

"Tobias, what are you even here for? After one ordinary, weak spell, you didn't get up for the rest of the duel. If this were something serious, your friend would have been left alone! You watch to see if the spell hits, you move like a block of wood, and you don't dodge at all... Either start working hard or just give up and leave," I criticized him much more harshly. There was no point in beating around the bush. If they didn't accept honest criticism, they would never be able to improve enough for me to get anything out of them.

Nott was still scowling angrily but nodded in understanding. Yaxley looked as if I had killed his puppy, but after a moment, I saw he had found his resolve. "I want to get better. I have to learn how to fight," he spoke up.

"Fine then," I nodded and immediately turned to Agnes. "Show them how they should stand and how they should move," I commanded. I could feel that it pleased her.

For a moment, I felt like Voldemort with Bellatrix, but I immediately dismissed the thought. Agnes isn't insane like my aunt, and I don't want to rule the world.

Agnes got to work right away. She enthusiastically explained the stance and dodges to them and cheerfully added that this style was invented by Muggles. Tobias curled his lip in disdain but copied her, while Theodore didn't care at all. He was seriously trying to get stronger.

I waited a few minutes until they grasped the basics of movement and spoke with a smile: "Now, all three of you against me. It will be good training, and at least you'll have room to dodge."

Agnes immediately put on a determined expression and took charge like a general. She pulled them to the end of the classroom opposite me and whispered instructions. I couldn't hear what she was saying, but I saw them spread out evenly so they wouldn't get in each other's way and to eliminate the risk of being hit by a spell flying nearby.

"Smart girl," I thought contentedly. I was truly proud of her.

"Ready?"

All three nodded determinedly.

"START!" I shouted.

By the time I started, they were already casting.

"Petrificus Totalus!" "Flipendo! Everte Statum!" Tobias and Theodore fired, and Agnes immediately followed up: "Locomotor Mortis! Everte Statum! Incarcerous!"

While I dodged the boys' spells without any problems, Agnes was more experienced. A purple beam flew to my left side, an orange one to the right, and conjured ropes aimed directly at the center. Through this cannonade, I had no time to return fire; the only thing I could manage was to dodge lightning-fast and register what was flying at me.

At the same time as the ropes, Theo managed to send another "Flipendo!". Tobias was visibly slower in his casting. However, Agnes and Theo had me cornered, and I had only a fraction of a second to defend myself.

"Depulso! Protego!" I violently repelled the ropes back at Agnes, while Theodore's blue beam splashed harmlessly against my shield.

I immediately countered and targeted Tobias: "Flipendo! Expelliarmus!" But I had to throw myself to the side right away. An orange Statum from Agnes flew past me by a hair, followed immediately by a white beam. I was losing track of who was casting what, but I noticed that Tobias had managed to dodge my spells.

"Everte Statum! Flipendo! Petrificus Totalus! Locomotor Mortis!" Agnes shrieked in a rush of adrenaline. Theo added an "Everte Statum!" and Tobias another "Flipendo!".

I knew I wouldn't be able to dodge; it was too many spells at once.

"Protego!" I yelled, and an overpowered blue shield flashed before me. The colored beams began to splash against it one by one; I felt like I was in a fairy tale, with a pure rainbow before my eyes. I didn't even have time to think about a counter-attack before another volley flew at me, crowned by Agnes's "Incarcerous!". It was an incredibly annoying spell—physical and animated. The ropes wrapped around my shield, and I felt them trying to crush it. The pressure was building, and my shield was starting to crack under it. I had to feed it more and more magic; I had no choice.

Two more orange beams hit the shield, followed immediately by a purple one. The cracks were widening. I knew there was no point in continuing this way; those ropes would drain me to the point of complete collapse.

I decided to get rid of the weakest link. "Depulso!" I blasted the ropes away from me and immediately sent my own combination: "Everte Statum! Flipendo! Expelliarmus! Aculeus!" Without waiting, I jumped away, dodged the beams, and targeted Theodore: "Furnunculus! Flipendo! Stupefy!"

I immediately jumped to the right again.

It was a mistake, though. In the middle of the jump, a blue beam hit me. It threw me back and rotated me ninety degrees. As I landed, I managed to tuck my chin to my chest so I wouldn't hit my head on the stone floor. It hurt, but I immediately did a backroll—just in time for an orange beam to splash on the floor where I had been lying a second ago.

"Protego!" I called out again. The shield pulsed a bright blue; I didn't plan on losing. While I was getting to my feet, a white beam and then a blue beam splashed against the barrier.

When I finally stood up, I saw the result of my work. Only Agnes was still standing against me. She was breathing hard, she was tired, but the determination was still in her eyes. Tobias was leaning against the wall, holding his face, which was swollen from my Aculeus spell. Theo was lying unconscious on the floor, his face covered in prominent acne.

"You were close," I acknowledged with a smile, but immediately started casting: "Flipendo! Everte Statum! Aculeus!"

Agnes dodged the first two spells, but the purple beam hit her in the shoulder, causing her to hiss painfully like a snake. However, she immediately returned fire: "Locomotor Mortis! Expelliarmus!"

I didn't know that purple spell, but I knew I didn't want it to hit me. I dodged it, while the red Expelliarmus flew way off—that Aculeus had clearly messed up her aim.

I didn't wait: "Expelliarmus! Everte Statum! Aculeus! Petrificus Totalus!" Agnes tried to surprise me and yelled: "Protego!" Her shield flashed in front of her, but I knew it wouldn't hold. The frustration of barely keeping up in this duel forced me to put more power into the spells than usual.

My assumptions were confirmed. The red beam splashed against the shield, which immediately cracked, and the orange beam shattered it completely an instant later. Agnes was thrown back a little. The purple beam hit her in the stomach instead of the chest, and immediately after, the white beam of the Petrificus hit her too. I only heard a short hiss, and Agnes fell to the ground like a felled tree.

"Lok'tar ogar!" I whispered victoriously to myself.

Once I had thoroughly enjoyed the sweet victory, I cast "Finite!" on Agnes and "Enervate!" on Theodore.

Nott sat up abruptly with a deep breath and looked around in surprise, while Agnes immediately jumped to her feet and started cursing.

"Did you seriously have to use Aculeus? I can't feel my shoulder, and I feel like I'm going to puke any second from that hit to the stomach!"

"Hard in training, easy in battle," I replied with an amused smile. After a moment, I added: "Don't worry, you'll stop feeling it soon."

Theodore was worse off. His face was covered in rashes, and he would have to use a potion to get rid of them. Tobias's face was swollen from the Aculeus—but that would go away on its own.

Most people who started combat sports lasted training on the bags, but after a while, when they moved on to sparring, they quit. The pain completely discouraged them. I was curious to see how these two would behave. I had no doubts about the "she-dragon" Agnes, though.

"Theodore, you should go to the hospital wing with that face," I informed him. After a moment, I added: "Just don't tell anyone about us or our training."

He nodded with a serious face and asked curiously: "When are we training again?"

"Tomorrow," replied the now-calm Agnes.

Theodore took Tobias, and after saying goodbye, they headed to the hospital wing.

"Do you think they'll train with us tomorrow too?" Agnes asked while smoothing her messy hair.

"Nott probably will; as for Tobias, I have absolutely no idea," I replied honestly. "Dinner?" I suggested.

"Yes, but if I can't eat with my right hand, I'll stab a fork into your hand with my left!" Agnes threatened.



To my luck, it turned out that Agnes could eat normally, albeit more slowly. It would have been funny, but also painful, if she had seriously stabbed a fork into my hand.

I was enjoying a proper steak with roasted potatoes and green beans in butter. I washed it down with plain water and felt quite satisfied. The training had taken a lot out of me, but I had improved. I was more powerful. My physical preparation was also progressing great; I was in good shape conditioning-wise, and honestly, nothing was bothering me. I was happy…

Those duels showed me that technically I could handle three wizards at once, even though I deliberately kept myself at their level. If I had gone all out, they wouldn't have stood a chance. I would simply have swept away their spells with elemental magic and drowned them in it. They weren't powerful enough yet to be a real challenge for me. However, I knew Agnes had potential for elemental spells. Like a true "Dragon," she would likely lean toward fire.

To finish, I had a strawberry cupcake that was on the table. Yum.

I was blissfully enjoying the good food while Agnes sat silently beside me, eating chicken and rice. When she first started sitting with me, she had a habit of talking even while eating, but I ignored her, so she learned that I like to enjoy my food in peace.

I had just finished eating when that familiar owl I had sent to Master Vane yesterday descended toward me. It didn't look very happy when it held out its leg. I quickly took a smaller chicken steak from the table and cut off a nice piece for it. Let it be satisfied; it deserves it.

I quickly untied the envelope from it and said thanks: "Thank you very much for the quick handling, dear owl. Those treats I promised you will be delivered as soon as I buy them. Which will be soon."

It eyed me suspiciously to see if I was lying, but after a moment, I must have convinced it because it said goodbye with a hoot and flew away. I immediately opened the envelope, pulled out the parchment, and eagerly started reading:

Rosier,

The sum for the cage you described will be 200 Galleons.

As soon as I receive the money, I can manufacture it immediately—it is nothing complicated for me. I guarantee the quality and assure you that no one will know about this transaction. In the interest of our mutual safety.

Sincerely, Cilian Vane


Now only a few steps remain: get hold of the Map, find out the password to the Gryffindor common room, and find a capable older ally from Gryffindor. Then Sirius Black will finally be free, and my ancestors will be satisfied.



Author's note:


Ha! Who would have guessed we'd get two new faces instead of just one? We're officially a team of four now. It makes perfect sense that Nott seeks power while Yaxley backs him up like a loyal friend.

Agnes definitely stole the show by stepping into that "General" role during the duel. And her threat with the fork after the training? Picturing that scene while writing actually made me laugh out loud :D.

I'm also curious—what are your thoughts on the 1v3 duel? Was it well-written? Our MC was holding back quite a bit by not using any elemental spells, but since he limited himself to their level, Agnes's tactics and skill made the fight a genuine challenge. Let me know what you think!


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Just found and binged this, it's great. Very nice so far, and I like that he's building up a bit of a friend group over time with Agnes, and now Nott, and Yaxley.

An outright Slytherin SI that isn't obnoxious or comically evil or angsty is a somewhat rare find, so it's nice to read a solid story like this one.
 
Just found and binged this, it's great. Very nice so far, and I like that he's building up a bit of a friend group over time with Agnes, and now Nott, and Yaxley.

An outright Slytherin SI that isn't obnoxious or comically evil or angsty is a somewhat rare find, so it's nice to read a solid story like this one.

Wow, binging 90,000 words in one go is quite a feat! I'm really glad the story kept you hooked.

I'm happy you're enjoying the dynamic with Agnes, Nott, and Yaxley. I really wanted to move away from the 'Lord and minions' trope and instead show a group of peers who actually respect each other and work together to get better.

Writing a Slytherin SI that isn't over-the-top evil or obnoxious was exactly my goal—I felt like that kind of grounded story was missing from the fandom, so I decided to write it myself! Thanks for the support! :D
 
27. SaD: Shadows of the Past New
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POV: SEVERUS SNAPE

I sat in the darkness, where only a restless candle flame danced. It was Christmastime, and I was alone once again. My only companions were firewhisky and cruel memories. My closest friend was rotting in Azkaban, the woman I loved was dead, and her children were adding years to my face.

I had been expecting Harry Potter. I knew exactly when he would arrive and what I needed to prepare for. Dumbledore hadn't forgotten to instruct me, like his obedient slave, to keep an eye on him. Perhaps I would have even resented him for it, were it not for the knowledge that Lily's death was entirely my fault.

"Curse that prophecy," I spat through gritted teeth. I didn't blame him for seizing the opportunity and enslaving a young Death Eater with an oath. Without it, would I have stayed in this cursed castle? From a broken home straight to Hogwarts—from one prison to another. A place that caused me nothing but suffering and constantly reminded me of every single lost memory.

I remembered vividly the first time Evan stood up for me. How he duelled all four of those Gryffindor cowards just to help me. He showed me that I had to defend myself. Since then, I was no longer afraid to stand my ground. In the beginning, we only nodded to each other in passing; I wanted to be his friend, but then again, who wouldn't?

Evan was the proud heir of a pure-blood house—attractive, charismatic, popular, and powerful. He had everything he desired. What could a bullied "half-blood" possibly help him with? Absolutely nothing.

Over time, our encounters in the corridors and the Slytherin common room changed. The nods of greeting turned into short conversations, which later grew into long debates. Thanks to him, I was able to join the others: Regulus Black, Barty Crouch Jr., and occasionally other pure-bloods. The Gryffindor cowards no longer dared to bully me once they saw that Evan could handle them all by himself. I felt free.

But here, the irony of fate revealed itself. While I hated Muggles and my father—that brute who beat and insulted both me and my mother—Evan, Barty, and Regulus didn't have a problem with Muggles. They simply weren't interested in them. However, other pure-bloods outside our circle were escalating their attacks against "mudbloods." There were whispers of a Dark Lord who would return power to the hands of the pure-bloods.

I liked the idea. The power of wizards, an end to the abuse from my father... I wanted to join him. I began to listen to Lucius more. The others listened with one ear and let it out the other, but me? I hung onto his every word. And when I returned home?

I immediately started defending myself against Tobias. I talked back, I even struck back—though only once. I didn't stand a chance. My father was twice my size, and I often woke up on the floor with a bloody nose. If not for my mother, I probably wouldn't be alive. Only the potions she secretly gave me kept me on my feet.

Why did a proud member of the Prince family marry a Muggle? We both suffered. When I was fifteen, my family heritage manifested: an affinity for mind magic. At first, I wasn't sure what was happening at all. I perceived foreign feelings in my head that didn't belong to me, and occasionally I saw flashes of memories. Only after some time did I understand the nature of my power.

Then came the fateful turning point and that cursed day. I unintentionally used Legilimency on Evan, who deflected my attack instantly and coldly. For a moment, he was suspicious, but then he explained what was happening and warned me to be careful whose mind I tried to penetrate. Other pure-blood houses would consider it a direct attack, and I could live to regret it bitterly.

Of course, I was afraid. I literally begged him for help; he knew what I was struggling with, while I had no idea how to control my power.

In time, he allowed himself to be convinced. He saw my desperation and decided he would lead me. Many things could be said about Evan—about his vindictiveness, his occasional coarseness, or his cruelty in duels—but no one could ever deny that he was loyal and helpful to his friends and family.

And so, he began to teach me Legilimency directly on himself. We regularly engaged in mental duels, during which it became clear that I had an extraordinary talent. I saw recognition in his eyes. Only then did I admit to him that my mother was a born Prince.

After that, he wasn't surprised. He briefly summarized the family history for me and explained that the Princes were a noble information-gathering house, whose primary art was espionage and intelligence. Looking back after all these years, it is a bitter irony of fate. I became a spy, exactly according to family tradition. Even after the fall of the Dark Lord, I still inform Dumbledore of every step his former servants take.

But I've digressed a bit... Since I was exceptionally talented, we quickly moved on to Occlumency. According to Evan, I had to know how to defend as well, not just attack. Both sword and shield.

We swapped roles, and that was when the cursed moment happened. Evan saw all my childhood memories, which until then had meant nothing to me. He saw all my suffering caused by my Muggle father. From his initial indifference, his attitude toward Muggles shifted to pure hatred. And I, like a complete fool, supported him in it and fanned his inner flame of anger.

I dragged my closest friend into the darkness with me, and his charisma took Barty from Ravenclaw and Regulus along with him. They were no longer indifferent; they began to actively hate Muggles, and their resentment soon spilled over toward Muggle-borns. Because of my memories, Evan began to perceive them as animals. Back then, I was happy. We joined the Dark Lord contentedly.

All I had left now was a bitter hatred for myself. I was directly responsible for the death of my love and for the imprisonment of my best friend. I didn't even dare to visit him in Azkaban—I was that ashamed.

While I expected Potter, I certainly didn't expect a perfect copy of Evan. As soon as I saw Patrik for the first time, my heart was gripped by ice. Self-hatred returned with a breath-taking intensity. I regretted my actions and sins so much... and it was even worse when I found out he grew up in an orphanage just because I had deprived him of a father through my stupid mistake.

Why was I so dense? Why didn't I explain to him that not all Muggles are like that? There was the Evans family, after all... But as if by a cruel twist of fate, he only saw Petunia and her insults directed at magic. Or did I subconsciously hide the better memories?

I took a sharp swig of firewhisky. I hoped its burn would, at least for a moment, drive away the searing hatred I felt for my own existence.

Not only did he look like him, he acted like him too. Originally, I thought I would have to intervene to protect DeMille and stop the bullying. But I couldn't do it prematurely—it would have jeopardized my standing in the eyes of the Death Eaters. As long as everyone thought I was still loyal to the Dark Lord, Harry Potter was safe. Patrik, however, stood up for her himself and demonstrated his power in the common room even as a first-year. The memories and words of Farley revealed the extent of his talent to me. He undoubtedly got that from Evan, but the strength? Evan was above average, but what Patrik displayed must have been the result of the union of Rosier and Black blood.

I vividly remembered Evan admitting to us in our circle that he had fallen in love with a Squib from the House of Black. Barty and I laughed at him—but only once. We woke up in the Hospital Wing; beaten, swollen, and with broken bones. It turned out Regulus had dragged us there, and fortunately, he was wise enough to keep his mouth shut.

Since then, we didn't dare poke fun at his feelings. He was head over heels in love, and we had to respect that. Regulus supported him quietly. And what did it turn out to be in the end? That even in this, Evan had excellent judgment. The heir of the House of Rosier has the potential to become one of the most powerful wizards of all time. How stupid and reckless we were in our youth...

And of course, Patrik inherited the Black madness as well. Images of the beaten and tortured Mulciber and Rookwood in an abandoned classroom constantly swirled in my mind. I couldn't bring myself to punish him. How could I, when I owed him so much?

At least he wasn't alone; he had DeMille with him. A Death Eater's daughter, yet significantly softer and more childlike than him. For a moment, an image of Lord Voldemort with Bellatrix flashed before my eyes, but I immediately suppressed the thought.

I took another sip of firewhisky, trying to drown in self-pity. If not for that cursed oath, would I still be here? For a moment, I allowed myself to dream of what would have been if I hadn't dragged Evan into the darkness and if Lily stood by my side. Would I have my own children now? Would I be spending Christmas surrounded by family?

My heart overflowed with self-hatred, and I continued to dream.



POV: ALBUS DUMBLEDORE

I had been under pressure the entire school year. The Philosopher's Stone, Lord Voldemort hidden in Quirrell, the boy from the orphanage in Wool's, and the constant danger looming over Harry Potter. I felt that although I was pulling the strings, I was barely keeping pace with events.

Quirrell's behavior had become increasingly erratic, bordering on pure madness. Many students and staff members had noticed him muttering to himself in the corridors, looking utterly unhinged. I wanted to step in, but I realized Severus was already closely monitoring his every move. Seeing Severus stay so vigilant confirmed my belief that my investment in his freedom—and my faith in second chances—was the right call.

I was certain that Tom was at the end of both his strength and his sanity. He wouldn't have acted so foolishly in the past. I believed that nothing would happen if I let him fall quietly into the prepared trap. Harry was safe. Even in the International Confederation of Wizards (ICW), peace reigned before Christmas—aside from the werewolves in Hungary and vampires in Romania, there were no serious problems. Even that fool Fudge was leaving me alone for now.

I was honestly looking forward to Christmas. I hoped that once the students went home, I would find a moment to relax. Before the holidays, however, I decided to test both Harry and Patrik using the Mirror of Erised. But Patrik was leaving for Christmas, I didn't have enough time for thorough preparation, and so I had to cast a weaker compulsion on him. I expected him to resist at least a little—his family was, after all, famous for the art of the mind—but he yielded.

Only later did I realize what a fool I had been. The mirror harmed him psychologically; I saw him break down mentally. I naively thought that as a first-year, he wouldn't realize the compulsion, that he wouldn't be powerful enough for that. But he felt it—and he yielded to it on purpose. How did I figure that out?

Honestly? Not until long after his words had shattered my heart into a thousand pieces and reminded me of every single mistake in my life. I wasn't surprised that he knew my family history, the story of my dead sister, or my love for Gellert. It wasn't a secret, just a truth buried deep under layers of respect for my person. But for those who wanted to look, it was there to be found.

Although I saw hatred in his eyes, I didn't feel it coming from him. Because of that, I realized his mind is as strong as his magic; his Occlumency remained firm even in the midst of a psychological breakdown.

But another question troubled me: had I created another Dark Lord through my stupidity and arrogance? His anger was palpable and his words sincere. He truly believed the world needed a Dark Lord. He believed that I was responsible for the lack of progress. Like many others, he thought I was omnipotent and controlled everything and everyone. But power must be used responsibly—I cannot force people into what they do not want. I can only gently guide them.

Did he expect a confrontation? Did he consider me his enemy? It was logical; otherwise, he wouldn't have dug into my bloody history. Ariana was an open secret, but only a minimum of people knew about my love for Gellert and our relationship.

I looked toward the future with concern, wondering what awaited us. What if he was right? What if it was my own ambition and Ariana's death that drove Gellert to attempt to conquer the world and enslave Muggles? What if my suspicion and cold caution toward Tom guided his steps onto the path of dark magic and death? And what if this latest mistake of mine created a Dark Lord more powerful than all the others before him?

These thoughts burned within me throughout Christmas and January. I felt the blood of millions on my hands and feared that if I were responsible for another rise of darkness, my heart would no longer be able to bear it. However, his last sentence constantly echoed in my memory and calmed me in a strange way:

"But it won't be me. The position of Dark Lord involves way too much work, and I'm more interested in personal power and a Tequila Sunrise somewhere on a beach. Happy holidays, Dumbledore."

I sipped my firewhisky and watched with concern as the flames in the fireplace contentedly licked the logs. My fears were at least softened by Fawkes; his song filled me with a hope without which I would probably no longer be able to sleep.

Just then, an owl tapped sharply at the window. It was the same one I had bought for Mrs. Figg so she could inform me about the conditions at the Dursleys'. With a heavy sigh, I waved my wand and let it into the room. For a moment, I hesitated to open the envelope and read the contents of the letter, but finally, I overcame it. Years had taught me that unpleasant matters should not be put off until later. I immediately began reading:

Dear Professor Dumbledore,

I am writing to you this late because I was visiting a friend whose cat just had seven beautiful kittens. You wouldn't believe how adorable and sturdy they are! Wouldn't you like one? One of them reminded me of your twinkling eyes because of its fur color.

When I returned home, however, the neighbors informed me of a great scandal. Muggle Aurors were at the Dursleys'! Would you believe it? They say Vernon was taken away and an investigation is underway. No one knows exactly what's happening, but the neighbors say no one has seen him for a month.

Petunia doesn't look so stuck-up anymore, and young Dudley can be heard all down the street shouting that he isn't some slave to shovel snow and that they should call that weirdo Potter to do it for him.

Sincerely, Arabella Figg

P.S.: If you should be interested in that cat after all, don't hesitate to get in touch.


After finishing the letter, I sighed heavily and pressed my palms to my throbbing temples.

"What the fuck happened now?" I wondered, feeling my age as never before.

Tomorrow, I will have to go to Petunia's to finally find out what is going on there. And on top of that, I have to figure out how to smooth things over with young Rosier. How to establish a better relationship with him? Perhaps if I offer to teach him some advanced spell or technique as an apology, it might calm him down.

Fuck my life



Author's note:

Were you surprised by how I wove Evan into Snape's story? Honestly, I can vividly imagine that pragmatic pure-blood families couldn't care less about Muggles, so Severus's hatred just dragged them down right along with him. And of course, poor Dumbledore.

The big question is: what will Dumbledore offer our MC, and what will he choose?



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POV: THEODORE NOTT

"Expelliarmus!" "Everte Statum!" "Flipendo!" "Petrificus Totalus!" "Incarcerous!" "Aculeus!"

All three of us were firing spells in rapid succession, locked in absolute focus. Finally, we could feel that long-awaited victory over Patrik within our reach. He still stood firm against us, his shield shimmering with every color of the rainbow, but the end was in sight.

Ever since Tobias and I joined Rosier and DeMille, we had lost duels more than a hundred times. At first, he wrecked us all at once. Since he claimed we moved like blocks of wood and were only getting in each other's way, Agnes took over our training. It was unbelievable to watch the magical progress she had made since joining him. While we were clumsy, Agnes could defeat us all by herself at the beginning, with complete composure.

I admit, I had my doubts when Patrik ordered her to teach us. I worried whether she'd take it seriously and give it her all. My fears were for nothing. Just as I wanted to grow stronger, she craved Patrik's recognition, so she pushed herself to the limit.

We reached a level where Tobias and I could usually beat Agnes. And when all three of us went against Patrik? Sure, we lost every single time, but now it was fucking close. I could already taste the sweet flavor of victory on my tongue. I didn't care at all that it was three against one... a proud pureblood can only lose so many times before his ego hits rock bottom.

We had lost so often that we knew exactly what was coming: his shield would drop any second, he'd dodge, and then transition into a counterattack. We started firing spells more intensely to the sides as well, cutting off his escape route. He was ours!

Through the flashes of magic, I saw him smile. It was a look of genuine pleasure.

"He's happy to lose?" the thought flashed through my mind, but my hand didn't waver as I sent another "Expelliarmus!" It took me a fucking long time to master this spell. Tobias still hadn't quite got the hang of it, but it had enough power that Patrik's shield couldn't ignore the attacks in our barrage for long.

It was here. I felt it, and I wasn't wrong. Patrik dropped his shield, but instead of dodging, he instantly roared: "Aguamenti!"

A massive tidal wave erupted from his wand, sweeping away all our spells like toys and surging directly toward us.

"Protego!" Agnes screamed. We immediately huddled behind her because Tobias and I hadn't mastered this shield yet.

Her shield held for a moment, but then the wave swept us away like ragdolls and slammed us hard against the wall. I felt every bone in my body. My lungs were filling with water, and in that second, I truly thought I was going to drown.

It only lasted a minute, though. As quickly as the water had swept us away, it vanished. We remained lying on the floor, gasping for air. I blinked in disbelief, refusing to accept reality. I thought we were finally going to win, but in the end, it turned out that all that hard training and every single one of his previous wins were just a little game. From the start, we didn't stand a ghost of a chance.

"Is this what you meant, Grandfather?" I asked myself mentally as I recalled our conversation during Yule within our family circle.

***

"Grandfather, there's a Rosier in my year who uses wandless magic and masters every single spell on the first try. He defeated a fourth-year in a duel in front of the whole common room—he even used lightning!" I paused for a moment to absorb my grandfather's unreadable expression before continuing: "How is it possible he's so powerful? Shouldn't we all be equals as members of the Ancient Houses? In the Book of Houses you wrote, they aren't any more than we are."

"Theodore," my grandfather began in a low, gravelly voice, "equality is an illusion for Muggles and weak wizards. The Book of Houses speaks of blood purity, not core strength. The fact that both our families are in the Sacred Twenty-Eight only means we haven't dirtied our lineage. But magic? Magic is like fire—some can barely keep it in the hearth, and others can burn down cities with it."

He paused for a moment and tapped his finger on the cover of his book.

"The Rosiers never had a wizard this powerful at such a young age. Talented? Of course, many. Unfortunately, Mother Magic loves some people more than others. They feel magic differently; they think about it differently; they breathe and live it. It's not about the house or the purity of blood. One of the most powerful wizards of all time was in my year—my friend. He was the strongest, even though he was only a half-blood. While we struggled with basic spells, he had already mastered the most difficult ones. You may know him by the name Lord Voldemort. Before the madness of the Dark Arts consumed him, he was a great man."

He fell silent again, took a sip of mulled wine with his eyes fixed on the fire, and continued: "From my own experience, I advise you: do not compare yourself to young Rosier. You will only suffer. The main thing is to be better than you were yesterday. Don't ask why you aren't like him, and don't try to fight him. He would destroy you before you even had a chance to draw your wand."

"Above all, be careful, Theodore. Every House is watching Rosier. Everyone expects great things and is preparing for the future. Ever since he showed that massive affinity for fire in the Great Hall, dark circles have been expecting change from him. For many Houses, it was a gauntlet thrown directly into Dumbledore's face. You are the heir to our House, and I know you aren't as stupid as your father. Bow to no one."

***

"Hah, bow to no one. That's fucking easy to say. He swept us away like blades of grass," I thought as I heavily pushed myself up from the floor.

I felt my wet robes grow heavy on my shoulders as water dripped down my collar. My pride was as devastated in that moment as my lungs, which burned with every breath. I looked at Tobias—he was still crouching on his knees—and Agnes was brushing hair from her face with trembling hands. We were all at our breaking point, while Patrik stood there completely calm. The contrast was insulting.



Heh, it was a good feeling. Agnes, Tobias, and Theodore had improved so much that they not only mastered new spells but learned to fight as a unit. Their barrage with slight delays was excellent—they repeatedly backed me into a corner. They were so annoying that eventually, my nerves snapped, and I swept them away with water magic. It felt amazing to let loose for a moment and feel the element.

But I had other things to do. While they were picking themselves up from the floor, I headed toward the Hogwarts kitchens with a brief farewell. I really hoped to finally catch the Weasleys there. According to Dudi, the house-elf, they went there regularly, but I hadn't had any luck with them so far.

I already had the cage from Vane hidden under my bed in my room. All I was missing were the Weasleys and their map. I planned to smuggle the cage out of the castle on my birthday. I had a few days left to capture Pettigrew. I had arranged for Vespera to come and congratulate me in person—it would be the perfect time for her to do me a favor and deliver that rat directly to the Ministry. Ideally straight into Bones' hands.

Eagerly, I tickled the green pear and entered the kitchen. Bingo! The Weasleys were sitting in my usual spot. Finally.

The house-elves noticed me immediately, but most went back to their work. Except for one who ran toward me with an excited cry: "Master Patrik, Master Patrik! Fruit tart? Straight from the oven, oh yes, straight from the oven! And some cold milk too?"

How could I refuse him? Honestly? I couldn't. I nodded immediately; after all, it suited me quite well. I headed straight for the Weasleys while Dudi was already magically preparing the tart behind my back.

The red-headed twins watched me with interest as I calmly sat down across from them. They didn't stay quiet for long, though. One of them started immediately:

"Oh, your Dark Lordship, have you grown hungry?" he said with a wide grin, clearly taking the piss.

"Oh, Fred, this is just his appetizer. His usual dinner is considerably bloodier!" declared the other, probably George.

"Exactly. Everyone knows a young virgin is required for dinner," I replied, nose in the air. I took inspiration from Draco—that was exactly the face he made whenever he declared he'd tell his father about something.

"That makes sense, Fred," one of the twins declared. Of course, they'd swapped names somehow...

After a while, having drunk the cold milk and devastated the tart, I got down to business.

"And you? What are you doing here? Planning some mischief?" I asked with a fleeting smile.

Both immediately shot me surprised looks.

"Mischief? I don't know what you're talking about," they blurted out at once, determinedly trying to look sincere. But I could feel they were lying. Legilimency is priceless in moments like these.

"Guys, I have a high opinion of you, and that's why I'm going to be completely honest. That map was created by four students here at Hogwarts, and one of them was a member of my family. I need it. You could say it's my inheritance... and of course, I'm going to need your help too."

I paused for a moment. I saw their incredulous stares. They were just about to get up angrily to leave, so I quickly continued:

"If necessary, I can pay you. Of course, as proper Gryffindors, you should help me of your own accord, out of pure conviction. You'll be saving an innocent man from a fate worse than death and, more importantly... you'll be protecting your own family from a danger they've lived with for a decade."

They sat back down heavily. "What are you talking about? You'd better explain quickly," one of them ordered with a scowl, while the other watched me with undisguised tension.

I pulled out my wand while they watched me suspiciously. "Muffliato!" I waved, and a soft buzzing immediately filled the room. Now we had privacy.

"What do you know about the Potters and the fall of the Dark Lord?" I asked.

"Probably what everyone else knows. You-Know-Who came, attacked the Potters, and only Harry survived," one explained while the other nodded grimly. They were still too young to know the details. I doubted their home conversations revolved around who betrayed whom, so I began to explain.

"What not everyone knows is that the Potters were hidden under a powerful Fidelius Charm. That hid them from the entire world. The Secret Keeper had the secret of their location hidden in his soul. Even if Voldemort stood directly in front of their door, he would see nothing and couldn't attack them. Are you starting to guess where I'm going with this?" I asked with a raised eyebrow.

They stared at me scowling for a moment until I suddenly felt their realization.

"The Secret Keeper... he must have betrayed them," one of the twins blurted out.

"Exactly. He betrayed them. The Dark Lord entered the Potters' house, tried to kill Harry, and failed. But what matters is what followed."

"Who betrayed them? And what does it have to do with the map?"

"The public thinks it was Sirius Black. He's been in Azkaban for over a decade, suffering every single day. But the truth is, he's rotting there wrongfully. He didn't betray them." I saw their disbelieving looks, but I continued: "The four who created this map are James Potter, Sirius Black, Peter Pettigrew, and Remus Lupin. It was an open secret that Sirius was James's best friend, so no one questioned that he was the Keeper. Except there was a catch."

I made a short pause for them to absorb the gravity of the situation.

"They thought it would be smart to draw attention away. Sirius had dangerous roles in the war; it was expected they'd go after him. It wouldn't occur to anyone that they'd entrust the secret to the cowardly and weak Peter. And so Pettigrew became the Keeper and immediately betrayed them. When Sirius, mad with the pain of losing his friend, tracked him down, Peter blew up the street. He killed Muggles, cut off his own finger, and vanished. The Aurors captured Black and threw him into Azkaban without a trial. And I, as a member of his family, cannot leave him there a day longer."

I concluded my monologue. Their disbelieving looks didn't bother me—what I said was far too easy to verify.

"It's a nice story, but what does it have to do with us and our family being in danger?" one asked, while the other immediately followed up: "And why should we believe you?"

I calmly took a sip of milk and placed the glass on the table with a soft click.

"You should believe me because it's easily verifiable. And secondly—after Pettigrew fled, where do you think he hid?" I asked with mockery in my voice and a wider smile.

They looked at me puzzled, so I threw in: "You've been in great danger for an entire decade because you have the Potters' betrayer and a dangerous Death Eater with you." And as if that weren't enough, I added one last question: "What do you think that old Death Eater has been doing in your house for the last ten years? Just eating and sleeping? Or something worse?"

They went pale instantly. My hypothetical closing question worked, because the twin on the right immediately started fumbling in his bag and then pulled out the map, which he eagerly threw onto the table between us.

"Here's the map. You have five minutes to prove your talk, otherwise your own family won't recognize you and you'll suffer until you graduate from Hogwarts," the angry redhead hissed through his teeth.

It didn't bother me. I wasn't afraid of them, though it would be annoying to have to constantly look over my shoulder. I knew I was right. I pulled the map toward me, opened it, and said aloud: "I solemnly swear that I am up to no good."

Thin ink lines began to spread from the tip of my wand like a spiderweb. They crawled across the parchment, joining into corridors, staircases, and rooms until those familiar words appeared at the top: Messrs Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs…

"Watch closely," I said, tracing my finger across the map toward the Gryffindor common room. Pettigrew wasn't there.

"Fuck. Was I wrong?" the thought occurred to me, but I immediately dismissed it. Neither Granger, nor Potter, nor even young Weasley were in the common room.

Where could they be? The library came to mind instantly, and they were exactly there. Granger was running between the shelves, Potter was sitting next to Weasley, and right on top of him, the name glowed: "Peter Pettigrew."

The twins leaned in so close their heads almost touched the parchment. I saw a vein in Fred's (or George's) temple begin to pulse uncontrollably. The ink name was there, clear and undeniable. Pettigrew hadn't moved a millimeter.

"So, as you can see, I was telling the truth. I need your help, also for the sake of your family's safety."

"What do you need from us?" "What's the plan?" they blurted out at once. After a moment, one of them followed up: "How is it we never noticed him? The map shows him, but we never saw him."

"Oh, you saw him. Peter is a rat. He's an Animagus, just like McGonagall," I replied to the last question. One of them immediately growled under his breath: "Scabbers!"

"But to the point. I need the map to track where he is and then catch him. I have an enchanted cage ready that he won't get out of. Catching him will be your job. You have to get him away from your brother. I'll provide the cage and arrange for him to get to the Aurors. Safely and surely. Thanks to that, an innocent man will get out of Azkaban."

They nodded in understanding, but then one of them asked: "Why not go to Dumbledore or McGonagall with this?"

I shook my head in disagreement. "I don't trust Dumbledore or McGonagall. This concerns a member of my family, and I have no intention of relying on their incompetence. They had plenty of time to notice that rat... In the end, I have to do it myself."

I immediately added: "I trust you. You have no reason to betray me, because this helps your family too—you'll finally be safe. And besides, Sirius Black is your distant family too. Your great-grandmother was of House Black. I will trust in your honor."

"You have our word," promised Fred (or George), while the other nodded in agreement. I felt they meant it. I nodded too. I was glad my trust in their character was well-placed. It's easy to ask for help, especially if it's a theoretically mutually beneficial deal.

"And in case you didn't want to do it just from the goodness of your hearts—Sirius will be a very wealthy man once his name is cleared," I threw in with a promise of reward, but both immediately shook their heads in disagreement.

"No, we don't need a reward. The main thing is that our family is safe and that Death Eater is in Azkaban," one replied, and the other immediately asked: "So when do we catch Scabbers?"

"Tomorrow will be ideal. We'll meet here, let's say at five PM, with the map and the cage, and go on the hunt. We'll see where he is and then catch him together. Sound good?"

"Sounds good." "Deal."

As soon as we agreed, I stood up to leave. Before I cancelled the Muffliato, though, I had to warn them: "Whatever you do, don't show that you suspect anything. Please, avoid them at least for today. He must not be warned. I'll prepare everything necessary in the meantime."

I had no choice. I hadn't expected to meet the twins today, and after those duels, I was feeling considerable fatigue. I had spent a large part of my power and I needed to be alert and one hundred percent ready for tomorrow's capture. Even if Pettigrew was a coward hidden in the skin of a rat, I couldn't underestimate him.

I needed the twins mainly as insurance. Ron would defend his rat, and I'd have to deal with their whole "Golden Trio." That wouldn't be a problem, but during the chaos, that rat might manage to escape. And I couldn't risk that.

As soon as they nodded, I said my goodbyes, cancelled the Muffliato, and headed for the exit. But not before remembering to praise that "supposedly" most amazing fruit tart. It wasn't quite up to the one from my girlfriend, but it was still great, and it pleased me to see how genuinely the elves rejoiced at the praise. If I can improve someone's mood with such a small thing, especially if they were so helpful to me, why not pay it back? A little kindness never killed anyone.

As soon as the kitchen entrance closed behind me, I headed toward the Slytherin common room.



Just as I got into the dungeons near the Slytherin common room, Snape stopped me.

"Mr. Rosier." I stopped immediately and turned toward him. "Yes, Professor?"

Snape was looking at me with an expression I couldn't quite decipher; there was a hidden emotion in his face. After a moment, he spoke:

"Headmaster Dumbledore wishes to see you in his office. Has something happened that I should be aware of?"

"I don't know of anything, Professor," I replied. There was no point in explaining anything. Even though Snape was acting strangely, I still had no reason to trust him fully.

His gaze darkened for a moment, yet simultaneously softened in a strange way. "Strange," I thought.

"You have the same look as your father when he was hiding something," he paused, and after a short silence continued: "If I don't know what's going on, Mr. Rosier, I cannot help you if it becomes necessary."

I studied him inquisitively and couldn't resist a jab: "Are you in the habit of helping students, Professor? Longbottom leaves every one of your classes in tears."

He ignored my jab entirely.

"When it is possible, yes. You can rely on the fact, Mr. Rosier, that I care about your safety. I will not pry, but if you should need help, I am here for you," he answered matter-of-factly, and together we headed toward the Headmaster's office.

"Hm, you must have had a close relationship with my father," I remarked aloud.

Snape only nodded silently, but completely ignored my unspoken question about the nature of their relationship. We walked through the silent corridors, and doubts swirled in my head.

"What does that old fool want from me? I hope I haven't drawn his attention to myself again," I thought bitterly. After today's duels and the plan with the twins, a meeting with Dumbledore was the last thing I needed.


Author's note:

"Equality is an illusion."

In this chapter, I wanted to show the gap between magical titans and those who are just... fundamentally incompetent (looking at you, Lockhart and Umbridge). It's not about blood; it's about the core.

Finally, we've involved the Weasleys. I never understood why so many protagonists insist on doing everything alone. Sometimes, a little honesty and cooperation is just a shortcut to getting things done.

And of course, fucking Dumbledore is back.


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Getting the Twins to help him is a smart move. Given their experience in setting up and pulling off pranks, they're well-suited to keep it secret long enough to pull it off, and cunning enough to get it to work out. The fact it's to help their family just means they'll work even harder on it than usual.
 
Getting the Twins to help him is a smart move. Given their experience in setting up and pulling off pranks, they're well-suited to keep it secret long enough to pull it off, and cunning enough to get it to work out. The fact it's to help their family just means they'll work even harder on it than usual.

Exactly! Without them, it would be significantly harder. We'll see how it all turns out in the next chapter (Tuesday), though! :)
 
29. The Phoenix’s Verdict New
In absolute silence, Snape and I walked through the corridors of Hogwarts all the way to the Headmaster's office. We stopped in front of a stone gargoyle; it looked quite historically interesting, but Snape didn't let my curiosity linger for long. He immediately barked the password: "Lemon sherbet."

The gargoyle leaped aside instantly, revealing a spiral staircase. Snape took off upstairs with a brisk pace, while I took my sweet time. I had no reason to rush after someone I didn't respect.

With a knock, Snape entered and left the door slightly ajar. After a moment, I followed him inside.

I surveyed his office with interest, completely ignoring the Headmaster and Snape's clearing of his throat. On the wall hung portraits of former Headmasters—powerful and politically influential people. It immediately occurred to me what kind of knowledge they must hide. If they remembered spells, rituals, and techniques, they would be an excellent source of information. I'll have to find out how it works with them. Are they real paintings with memory, or just ordinary fakes? I hadn't seen any moving paintings at Rosier Castle. Why? There was surely a reason for it.

Snape cleared his throat again, but by then I was already looking the other way—at a perch and a phoenix. A legendary creature whose tears heal, who can survive even the killing curse, and who can teleport across the world regardless of wards. I was curious how he would react to me, so I moved toward him immediately. Fawkes watched me curiously but didn't sing.

I felt Snape's sharp gaze on me, but Dumbledore's as well. It was full of expectation. I think he was also curious about the phoenix's reaction. Would the phoenix approve of me and my soul, even though I already had one life on my conscience? That poor soul in the Knockturn Alley?

The phoenix was still staring at me intently, piercing me with his gaze, but I felt no emotion from him. I returned his look expectantly.

Slowpoke. He was taking too long, and I didn't intend to wait two years for his approval. I reached out my hand to scratch him. I approached slowly. He didn't look like he wanted to pull away, and I had apparently judged him correctly. He let me touch his feathers without any trouble. I felt extreme heat coming from him; he didn't burn me, but he was truly hot to the touch. His feathers were exceptionally soft and pleasant.

While those two wizards stared at me, I calmly scratched the phoenix. I liked animals; they were great. For a moment, I felt a pang of longing for my cat from my previous life... Fawkes must have sensed my sadness because he gave a mournful trill and pressed his head against my hand.

Strange creature. I must admit, I was afraid of his rejection. I didn't feel evil, even if I was tough, uncompromising, and had no problem causing harm. But I never hurt the innocent. I felt relieved. So even a killer could have a clean soul.

I scratched him for a while longer, but then I finally turned toward Dumbledore's desk.

Dumbledore was smiling at me; his face looked as if he had aged backwards twenty years. At least compared to when we met by the Mirror of Erised—there he looked like he was on the verge of death. Snape was scowling at me, likely due to my insolence, but thanks to my father, he was certainly kinder to me than he would be to other students.

"Yes, Professor Dumbledore?" I asked matter-of-factly. I wanted him to finally tell me what this was about. I needed to sleep and get myself together for tomorrow's hunt.

Without answering me, the Headmaster turned to Snape: "Severus, could you leave us alone? Thank you," he requested, as if it were nothing.

But I had no intention of staying alone with the old fool. He was very powerful, and although he believed in the good, what if he became convinced that the best thing he could do was kill me? I believed he wasn't a bad person, but I wasn't going to risk it. I'd rather have Snape with me, so I stopped him immediately.

"No way, Dumbledore. I want Professor Snape here. After your attack, I don't feel safe in the same room as you," I went immediately into a hard counterattack. I needed to paint him in the worst possible light in Snape's eyes so he wouldn't accidentally obey him. At the same time, it was a chance for Snape to show me how much he cared about my safety.

Snape didn't let anything show on his face, but I was more observant. I noticed how his shoulders stiffened and that he didn't immediately start screaming at me for not addressing the Headmaster with respect. He silently awaited Dumbledore's reaction.

The smile vanished from the Headmaster's face instantly, and he suddenly looked like a kicked puppy. Regardless—trust, but verify. I didn't trust him.

"As you wish, Patrik," he agreed in a sad voice. After a moment, he continued: "I didn't want to involve Professor Snape in the issues between us. I honestly wanted to apologize to you. I'm sorry for what happened."

I shook my head in disagreement. "An apology won't do anything, Professor. It was a mental attack on my person that left me in a genuinely bad psychological state. Probably much like the one you had when you looked into that mirror yourself. If I kill someone, an apology won't bring their life back."

He had to admit I was right. He nodded in agreement, and I saw him thinking intensely.

"Honestly, Patrik, I am sorry. In some things, you were right—sometimes it really is better to let things take their course," he paused for a moment, then continued: "Fawkes is an excellent judge of character, and it seems he likes you. Since my apology is just an empty word to you, how about we make a deal in Slytherin style?"

"I'm listening, Professor," I replied with my arms crossed. Snape continued to watch our conversation with an unreadable expression.

"As you surely know, I am considered a powerful wizard with knowledge gathered from decades of studying various branches of magic. I have contacts, rare books, and special spells," Dumbledore suggested with false modesty. I didn't blame him for being proud of his strength; he must have worked hard for it like any powerful wizard.

"Yes?" I asked with feigned lack of interest. Of course, he saw through me immediately and answered with a smile.

"Yes. Within reason and according to your choice, I am willing to share some book, knowledge, or spell."

He knew right away, the bastard, that he had me. I needed power. Dumbledore certainly wasn't the only strong wizard I had to consider. Grindelwald was still in Nurmengard, Voldemort was alive, and Rasputin was active in Russia. There were also various dark mages in Africa—a war was still going on there, and who knows what will happen in the coming decades. China? There were brutally powerful mages there too, and a solid communist regime. The problem was that the British Isles were completely cut off from worldwide magical news. They were so arrogant that they didn't report on events outside at all.

He saw how intensely I was thinking. He saw that I was on the edge, so he added: "You don't have to choose now, take your time to think. My apology is sincere, and within reason, you will get what you choose," he promised me with a smile.

"Fine, agreed, Professor. But I'm taking you at your word—within reason, I get exactly what I ask for," I wanted his promise confirmed.

"Yes, you have my word. When you decide, you can contact me through Professor Snape."

I nodded and turned to leave. I looked questioningly at Snape to see if he was coming with me, but he just shook his head. So I headed for the door alone. I hadn't even reached it when Fawkes demanded my attention again. I returned to him to scratch him once more before leaving.

He sang a short melody that immediately improved my mood. For a moment, he pulled away from me, caught one of the feathers on his chest with his beak, jerked his head sharply, and handed it to me.

I stared at him in surprise. Weren't phoenix feathers supposed to be extremely rare? Wasn't it a feather like this that was at the core of both Voldemort's and Potter's wands? But I definitely didn't plan on using it for a wand.

After a moment of hesitation, I took it and quietly thanked him. Neither Dumbledore nor Snape reacted in any way, so I left without another word.

Tomorrow will be tough.



The next day dragged on incredibly slowly. I couldn't wait for classes to finally end and for it to be five o'clock. My impatience was so obvious that even Agnes and Tobias asked me what was going on. I wasn't myself, but this was a serious matter for me.

In all those years in this body, I had truly grown into the identity of a wizard. Since the visit to the family estate and the Yule ritual, my bloodline had begun to mean a lot to me. Was it the effect of the ritual, or what exactly was it? It was strange, but definitely not unpleasant. I felt pride in my ancestors, and it mattered to me to help our allies. Specifically Sirius Black, who was basically my cousin.

Since my mother was disowned because she was a Squib, I didn't have the best relationship with the rest of the family. I had no idea how her sisters viewed my mother. I was sure Aunt Andromeda and cousin Nymphadora would treat her well, as would Sirius. Regarding Narcissa, I wasn't sure, and Bellatrix? She would probably kill her and then try to eliminate me too—according to the books, she was totally insane.

Of course, I didn't know for sure since I didn't know them personally; it was useless to speculate.

We were just having our last Potions class, where we were once again brewing that annoying Boil-Cure Potion.

Who was supposed to enjoy this? The recipe was simple, it stank, but it was apparently necessary for the hospital wing since almost everyone from the second year up knew the Furnunculus curse. But I needed to learn advanced potions—more demanding and complex ones. I had business plans for an extremely successful company, and I'd just need to invent one revolutionary potion. Unfortunately, my knowledge wasn't sufficient yet, and I didn't enjoy potions at all. I only cared about that one goal.

Considering that wizards ate absolutely everything, there were an awful lot of fat people among them. They had a high body fat percentage and weren't in the best physical shape, which was actually understandable—they didn't even have to get off the couch to summon whatever they wanted. Do something in the garden? A flick of the wand. Wash up? A flick of the wand. Do the dishes? A flick of the wand. Pack up? A flick of the wand.

Well, in short, a flick of the wand was the answer to every physical activity. And they looked the part. They ate unhealthy things, and the negatives that would plague any Muggle were solved with potions. But the fat? That stuck to them. You just had to walk through Diagon Alley, and almost every second wizard was obese.

A fat-reduction potion? That would be a massive hit. But for that, you need knowledge, and if I asked the older students, I'd be afraid they'd steal the idea. Plus, I don't even have enough capital for legal services right now.

I couldn't wait for summer. I had big plans with Vespera and her support in the area of Dark Arts.

Finally, the Potions class ended. Fortunately, Longbottom didn't melt his cauldron today; I don't understand how he could be such an anti-talent when Herbology was no problem for him. Luckily, after months of toil with the most basic mixtures, he could at least brew the simpler potions now.

We packed up and went to hand in our samples. If you're wondering how it worked, it was quite simple: when someone finished their work, they stepped before Snape. He graded the sample, and if the grade was at least an "A" (Acceptable), we left the potion in the cauldron on the spot. If the result was worse, we had to get rid of it.

I admit that in the beginning, I had a bit of trouble with potions. My preparation of ingredients was catastrophic—the pieces I cut were all different. I used to cut the ingredients like someone preparing chicken breast for a stir-fry... basically every piece different, even if they were similar in shape. Now, however, like most Slytherins, I was getting at least A's. In this regard, Snape was fairly objective. He couldn't very well give a fake grade to a potion that was headed for the hospital wing. That would end very badly.

We immediately headed to our common room to quickly write our essays. It was already our habit—first fulfill duties and then focus on spell practice and duels.

Finally, we finished that annoying theory on Transfiguration for McGonagall. I finished roughly at the same time as Agnes. She was more the studious type; grades mattered to her much more than they did to me. I couldn't care less. I didn't plan on working in some boring, ordinary position. So while I breezed through the essays just enough to get by, Agnes wrote them like a professional. Her father really cared about results.

"Classroom, Patrik?" Agnes asked. Nearby, Theodore and Tobias were still working hard on their assignments. Both were striving for good grades; apparently, it was common in pure-blood families. But I had no one to preach to me, and Vespera taught me how to be powerful rather than how to write essays... thank God for that.

"No, Agnes. Not today. I have something to do."

A quick Tempus told me I still had half an hour to spare. I decided to head out early—at least I'll have one more cake in the kitchen.

Agnes was used to me keeping certain things to myself, so she just nodded understandingly. I nodded to the guys and left the common room.



I sat contentedly in the Hogwarts kitchen, enjoying a cake again. This time, however, it wasn't apricot but blueberry. It reminded me of my great-grandmother—it was the type of cake that was common during the communist regime. I think it was called a "cup cake", but I wouldn't bet my life on it. Actually, all I wanted to say was that although it was simple, it was refreshing and amazing. I didn't have milk this time, though... it would be a really bad idea if I crapped myself during the confrontation with the rat.

I was finishing the last piece when the twins walked into the room. They seemed tense and serious, as if they were going into an actual battle. It was a change from their usual grinning behavior, but it was definitely better than if they were to slack off.

"Hello, Patrik," they spoke at the same time. Perfectly timed. For a split second, I wondered if twins had some kind of amplified effect when casting magic together, but I immediately dismissed the thought.

"Hey. Ready? Do you have the map?"

"Of course, we couldn't even sleep! We've been watching him nonstop!" shouted the one on the left.

But the second one immediately shut him down: "Don't lie, Fred, you slept like a baby! I was the one watching him all night!"

"I'm Fred, you're George!"

"Are they out of their minds?" I asked myself internally, but I saw they were just trying to lighten the mood because of their nerves. I chose to ignore it.

"Gred and Forge, the map, please," I requested calmly. Fortunately, they didn't fool around, and one of them slapped it onto the table immediately. I opened it at once and touched it with my wand: "I solemnly swear that I am up to no good."

I started looking for Peter. Coincidentally, he was in the library again with Ron and the others. We'll have to get him out of there somehow.

"Guys, we'll have to lure him out along with Ron. Discreetly. Madam Pince could give us trouble if we were too loud, or God forbid, if we had to get a little rough," I remarked toward them.

"What do you mean by rough?" one of them blurted out. "Ron has to be safe."

"Yes, he's our brother!" the other added.

"Of course he will be. A Stunning Spell, Disarming, and so on. You don't have to worry," I promised immediately, though in my head I already had harsher scenarios if that rat decided to transform and run.

They nodded silently, satisfied for now, and so we headed for the library. I had the cage hidden on me, and one of them was constantly checking the map. The plan was clear.

They'll get Ron out discreetly—just him. They'll make up some private family matter, and then we'll simply throw the rat into the cage. Easy peasy. I was to wait outside the library so as not to arouse suspicion that something bad was happening if they saw me with them.

"Everything will go like clockwork," I whispered as they went inside. I held the map now and watched as their dots on the parchment approached the Golden Trio.

I saw them stop. I watched them with tension for a moment, and after a short while, Ron did indeed head out of the library with them.

"Fuck," slipped out of my mouth. The name Peter Pettigrew didn't move on the map at all. It was still glowing right next to Granger and Potter.

The redheads just walked out. The twins were looking at me full of expectation, while Ronald immediately cried out in surprise: "What is he doing here?!"

"Stupefy!" I stunned him instantly. He was hooting like a madman, and I didn't intend to risk the rat getting spooked and running if he heard him. But what was worse—the twins, in a defensive reflex, pulled their wands on me.

"Gryffindor morons," I thought. They knew I'd stun him if necessary. Before they could attack, I started explaining.

"Guys, Pettigrew is still in the library, Ron doesn't have him in his pocket. His yelling could have warned him. Put those wands away," I ordered immediately. We didn't have time for their single-cell reasoning.

They tucked their wands away instantly and shrugged apologetically. "What now? Are we going in for him?" one of them asked.

I thought for a moment and then nodded. "One of you has to go in as if nothing's happening. Make up a story that Ron was running after Percy, for example, and forgot Scabbers. Say you came to get him. We'll wait for you here with the cage open."

They nodded, and one of them headed inside right away; they didn't even have to discuss it. Were they telepaths or something?

I saw that Fred went in, while George watched the map with me. I waited tensely to see if something would get fucked up, if Scabbers would sense something unusual and make a run for it. It didn't happen. Fred stopped for a moment at their table and after a while headed back to us with Scabbers in his hand.

Ron was still lying on the ground, stunned. We only have a few seconds before someone notices something suspicious. Enough time for it to get complicated, but also enough for it to work out smoothly. It was a simple plan, and those are the best. You could cut the tension in me with a knife.

Fortunately, as soon as the door opened, Fred immediately put the rat into the cage and closed it. The runes glowed for a second and then went out. Scabbers immediately began to squeal.

You've realized it now, haven't you, you piece of shit? You're fucked!

"We have him! Thank you," I turned to them with a smile. Now I just had to wait for Vespera, who would arrive by my birthday at the latest. Pettigrew will go to Azkaban where he belongs, Sirius will be free, and I will have fulfilled my duty to an allied house. Of course, I was also counting on a financial bonus, some family secrets, and books... but that can wait.

"As soon as I leave, wake your brother up and make something up. Pettigrew will be in Azkaban soon, and I'm sure it'll be in the Daily Prophet shortly," I paused for a second, then added: "Black will be free, and I'll definitely mention your names. A monetary bonus would surely come in handy for you."

As soon as they nodded in agreement, I headed happily to the common room.

"Simple plans are fucking best," I thought contentedly.



Author's note:


So, what do you guys think about Dumbledore? It looks like he's actually developed a bit of a conscience... or at least he's trying to make amends. What do you think Patrik is going to ask for in return?

Fawkes is such a legend, and that feather is definitely going to come in handy later on ;).

As they say, simple plans are the best—and Peter is absolutely screwed.



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Great fic, but bro, you need to stop trying to force this Agnes=dragon stuff down our throats. Instead of constantly telling us this shit maybe try showing instead? And if finding some dragon traits to attribute to her is hard remember that cats are effectively tiny, furry, wingless dragons so cat-like traits would do in a pinch.

You've realized it now, haven't you, you piece of shit? You're fucked!
NIce. Now all that is left is to not fumble the delivery.
 
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Great fic, but bro, you need to stop trying to force this Agnes=dragon stuff down our throats. Instead of constantly telling us this shit maybe try showing instead? And if finding some dragon traits to attribute to her is hard remember that cats are effectively tiny, furry, wingless dragons so cat-like traits would do in a pinch.


NIce. Now all that is left is to not fumble the delivery.

Thanks!

Hmm, I actually feel like I am showing it through her behavior and why I see her as a little dragon. Who else is so combative, possessive, caring, and protective, yet also fierce and threatening? Threatening to stab someone with a fork is pretty much the same energy as when Norbert bit Ron in canon 😄

I have a cat at home who is a literal black Satan, so... No, Agnes is way too sweet for that comparison. 😈

Anyway, let's just hope that something unexpected doesn't get messed up along the way, as happens in every fanfiction!
 
Thanks!

Hmm, I actually feel like I am showing it through her behavior and why I see her as a little dragon. Who else is so combative, possessive, caring, and protective, yet also fierce and threatening? Threatening to stab someone with a fork is pretty much the same energy as when Norbert bit Ron in canon 😄

I have a cat at home who is a literal black Satan, so... No, Agnes is way too sweet for that comparison. 😈

Anyway, let's just hope that something unexpected doesn't get messed up along the way, as happens in every fanfiction!
As someone whose closest brush with writing experience are school essays I really shouldn't argue with you, buuut I kinda don't see anything dragon-like about Agnes(sorry).
Soon I was joined by a shorter ginger-haired girl with blue eyes, that tall boy with dark skin, and a slightly stout, shorter boy with a haughty look. No one introduced themselves, everyone was silent, and that suited me just fine.
Her first appearance kinda paints her as someone quiet and reserved and her second mention during the sorting is as basic as it gets. We don't learn anything about her as a person beyond "her dad's a traitor".
I have to admit, the first two weeks were utterly boring.
Agnes DeMille, however, had a real problem. She became the target of bullying for a large part of Slytherin. In the common room, they'd regularly pour ink over her essays, a Diffindo spell would periodically slash her bag, and her hair was constantly changing color. On top of that was a ton of insults about her being a blood traitor and how she should just die. Honestly, it was truly cruel.
Then we have a two weeks timeskip during which Agnes is performing the Dorian Martell Special Move, which is to say she is doing fuck all, seemingly content to be bullied into eventual suicide(not my words, that's what MC sees in her situation)
"You filthy blood traitor! You shouldn't even be here. You'd be doing the entire magical community a favor if you threw yourself off the Astronomy Tower!" Rookwood roared at Agnes DeMille in the area designated for spell practice. I didn't understand her. She knew how Slytherin perceived her, and yet she stayed right in their sight. Classic. Rookwood and his gang. Coincidentally, Alexander Mulciber was standing there too. Everyone watched the spectacle with interest, but no one stood up for Agnes. Even the prefect, Gemma Farley, who was supposed to oversee order, just sat there silently.

It was truly annoying. An eleven-year-old girl under the fire of the entire common room's hatred, and above her, fourteen or fifteen-year-old boys bullying her. I knew it wasn't my problem and theoretically, I shouldn't intervene... but a question gnawed at my mind: could I live with myself if I stayed silent and the girl actually committed suicide? I felt pure anger toward Farley and Snape for not stopping this filth
So far the dragon like counter is at firm, nice zero. In fact, she couldn't be less dragon if she tried. But hey, it gets better, right?
I was nearly finished when Agnes sat down next to me with a quiet greeting. I could feel her tension, and the dark circles under her eyes suggested she hadn't slept much. Was she afraid of rejection?

"Good morning, Agnes," I replied in a calm tone.

"Thank you for standing up for me yesterday, Patrik," she whispered, her voice tinged with relief, yet still heavy with fear.
Nope, unless dragons are supposed to behave like an abused dog and I simply got the wrong memo
She let out a derisive snort and spoke with an ironic smirk: "Of course. Because they'll surely be more tolerant of a Death Eater's daughter. Please, don't take me for a fool, Patrik. You didn't stand up for me just out of the goodness of your heart," she said with surprising courage, looking me straight in the eye.

"Honestly?" I asked, with undisguised amusement in my eyes.

She was more interesting than I had originally thought. Despite the cruelty she faced, she wasn't broken.
Oh-ho? Is it finally happening?
"Agnes, you are a witch," I told her in a firm voice. "Money and power are within reach of every wizard. You just have to be willing to take them."

I looked into her eyes and saw it—she was mine. It's the simple mathematics of power: offer food to the hungry, water to the thirsty, company to the lonely, and power to the powerless... Agnes was both lonely and powerless. For a moment, I felt like a devil handing her a contract for her soul.

The difference, however, was that I didn't mean her harm. Realistically, she didn't have many chances with the other students in this school. It was a deal from which we would both profit. I would gain a training partner I could trust, and she would gain a teacher of magic, power, and perhaps something she had lacked until now—true friendship
Sike! I'm not a dragon expert, but "lonely" and "powerless" don't seem to be the right choice of words to describe a dragon.
"Agnes, we have Potions first," I said, starting to get up from the table.

She followed me without a word. I felt her presence right behind me as we descended the stone stairs into the cold corridors of the dungeons.
And now she's tailing him like a puppy.

I'll admit, I'm too lazy to quote the rest, but overall her interactions with MC could be summarized with words "follower", "admirer", "pity case" and the like. The only time she exhibited any sort of initiative was when she lied to Nott and the other guy, and I'll admit trying to monopolize something is dragon-like, except dragons would probably do it by force, not by easily disproven deceit.

There is another part that really stood out to me - when MC asked Agnes which spells she knew she admitted to knowing only the stuff they were taught in class(so lumos, very basic transfiguration and maybe wingardium leviosa). So not only she was willing to endure bullying for weeks, but she also didn't even try to learn anything for self-defence either. Canon Snape fought against the Marauders 4-to-1, somewhat successfully even, now that is something you expect from a dragon, not whatever the fuck Agnes was doing lol. Speaking of Snape, your Snape draws clear parallels between himself and Agnes, but that's kinda makes it worse because your Snape didn't fight back against anyone until the strong, charismatic Rosier swept him off his feet and protected him from bullies.

And then we have Nott's PoV of Agnes, where he correctly guesses that her primary motivator is MC's approval. What kind of dragon unironically goes "notice me senpai, uwu" lmao?

Overall, I'd like to reiterate that I really like your fic, bro, but the constant "tell but not show" nature of Agnes "dragonness(is that a word?)" makes her look like Megumi.

MEET POTENTIAL DRAGON!
"She has the potential to become MC's own Bellatrix!"
"She'll grow a spine too eventually"
"Just wait until she learns what pride is"
Give me liberty, give me fire
Give me senpai's approval or i retire
0 dragon-like traits shown
0 times pushed back against someone
7 times author tried to force "little dragon" nickname
IF and WHEN but never IS
 
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As someone whose closest brush with writing experience are school essays I really shouldn't argue with you, buuut I kinda don't see anything dragon-like about Agnes(sorry).

Her first appearance kinda paints her as someone quiet and reserved and her second mention during the sorting is as basic as it gets. We don't learn anything about her as a person beyond "her dad's a traitor".


Then we have a two weeks timeskip during which Agnes is performing the Dorian Martell Special Move, which is to say she is doing fuck all, seemingly content to be bullied into eventual suicide(not my words, that's what MC sees in her situation)

So far the dragon like counter is at firm, nice zero. In fact, she couldn't be less dragon if she tried. But hey, it gets better, right?

Nope, unless dragons are supposed to behave like an abused dog and I simply got the wrong memo

Oh-ho? Is it finally happening?

Sike! I'm not a dragon expert, but "lonely" and "powerless" don't seem to be the right choice of words to describe a dragon.

And now she's tailing him like a puppy.

I'll admit, I'm too lazy to quote the rest, but overall her interactions with MC could be summarized with words "follower", "admirer", "pity case" and the like. The only time she exhibited any sort of initiative was when she lied to Nott and the other guy, and I'll admit trying to monopolize something is dragon-like, except dragons would probably do it by force, not by easily disproven deceit.

There is another part that really stood out to me - when MC asked Agnes which spells she knew she admitted to knowing only the stuff they were taught in class(so lumos, very basic transfiguration and maybe wingardium leviosa). So not only she was willing to endure bullying for weeks, but she also didn't even try to learn anything for self-defence either. Canon Snape fought against the Marauders 4-to-1, somewhat successfully even, now that is something you expect from a dragon, not whatever the fuck Agnes was doing lol. Speaking of Snape, your Snape draws clear parallels between himself and Agnes, but that's kinda makes it worse because your Snape didn't fight back against anyone until the strong, charismatic Rosier swept him off his feet and protected him from bullies.

And then we have Nott's PoV of Agnes, where he correctly guesses that her primary motivator is MC's approval. What kind of dragon unironically goes "notice me senpai, uwu" lmao?

Overall, I'd like to reiterate that I really like your fic, bro, but the constant "tell but not show" nature of Agnes "dragonness(is that a word?)" makes her look like Megumi.
MEET POTENTIAL DRAGON!
"She has the potential to become MC's own Bellatrix!"
"She'll grow a spine too eventually"
"Just wait until she learns what pride is"
Give me liberty, give me fire
Give me senpai's approval or i retire
0 dragon-like traits shown
0 times pushed back against someone
7 times author tried to force "little dragon" nickname
IF and WHEN but never IS

Wow, what a long comment! I can see you really put a lot of thought into it. Thank you!I completely understand where you're coming from and you're right about certain parts, BUT...

My "little dragon" starts off weak, defenseless, and fearful. Her entire House was against her. Given the environment she grew up in, it's only natural that she was afraid to speak up or fight back. However, as time passes, we can see her behavior shifting and her confidence growing—like during the duels, where she fought with determination and didn't let pain stop her. She is fiercely trying to improve. She immediately starts "generaling" Nott and Yaxley in a competitive way to secure a win. She's becoming fiery and slightly edgy—in a friendly way, like with the fork incident.

Our MC playfully thinks to himself that she's acting like a "dragonling." He senses that fiery, combative nature in her. It's his subjective impression, and as the author, I only mentioned it as a joke in the author's note. It's my subjective take on how I imagine a young, adolescent dragon growing up. Just like someone can be "lazy as a panda," "slimy as a snake," or how Snape has "bat-like" mannerisms... does Snape actually act like a literal bat? Probably not.

I'd use Ginny Weasley from the canon as a similar example. She's quite a "dragon" too, but with a different start. She grew up in a loving, supportive family with people to lean on, so we eventually saw her fiery side emerge—even though in the early books, she was just a fangirl and a poor, manipulated girl.

That being said, I'm still a developing author and I truly appreciate your constructive criticism and the fact that you took the time to write "SHOW, don't tell!" I'll try to improve on that in the future so the character development stands out even more!
 
30. Pragmatism and Kindness New
There were only two days left until my birthday, and I couldn't wait for Vespera's arrival. At the same time, I was constantly on edge, worrying that something would go wrong and Pettigrew would vanish from the cage in my room. I kept watching the parchment incessantly, as if Peter could evaporate simply because I stopped looking at him. While my reason whispered that no one in the Slytherin common room rummages through other people's things, logic carries little weight in moments like these. The rules here were strict and breaking them was unforgiven—everyone had something to hide, and everyone knew it.

It played into my hands, but the restlessness didn't leave me. I had no intention of risking even a mistake, so I preferred to skip the group training sessions with the others. Agnes watched me with concern; she probably thought I was ill. However, I didn't plan on confiding in her as long as there was still a chance the whole thing would get fucked up. Thanks to that, I at least had time to immerse myself in Morgana's Codex Ritualis. My first ritual had been euphoric, and I saw great potential in them.

Rituals could be the key to gaining power—a way to catch up to the other magical titans who had decades to build their strength. Voldemort certainly mastered some rituals. I assumed that even the Horcruxes were created ritually; surely a simple murder couldn't be enough. If it were, every other person in the wizarding world would probably have a Horcrux.

I diligently translated the rest of the book, but honestly? I was getting less cautious. I decided to speed it up—find a ritual that interested me based on a rough translation, and then translate it four or five times to be sure I understood everything correctly.

Through this, I discovered that the vast majority of rituals were currently unsuitable for me. It was mainly because serious and powerful rituals provided permanent effects. As a soon-to-be twelve-year-old kid, I was weak, slow, and lacked endurance compared to a grown, trained man. So, if I multiplied zero by two, I'd still just be a slightly larger zero.

Another problem was the ingredients for the more demanding rituals. To achieve permanent effects, magical or blood components were usually required. Morgana wrote that I could just buy those ingredients normally, but according to her, Mother Magic listens and watches. The permanent effect would be significantly weaker if I didn't put in the effort. The takeaway? If I need a dragon heart for a ritual, I must hunt it myself for the best effect. If I need a unicorn horn, it would be ideal if the creature gave it to me willingly... Of course, since I'm a guy and no longer innocent (though technically I am in this life, but who knows how the horse would take it), a gifted horn was out of the question.

Remarkably, the maximum number of rituals was individual for every wizard. Some speculated the limit was three; others claimed seven, as it is a magical number. According to Morgana, however, these guesses dated back to the times before Hogwarts, even back to the Roman Empire. She admitted to undergoing more than ten rituals and claimed that every powerful wizard must feel their own limit. She considered those talks to be pure bullshit.

It meant I could perform any ritual, but the actual benefit was what mattered. The book contained rituals for speed, stamina, and strength... but 0 x 2 = 0. There were even various combinations, but except for one single ritual, all the others seemed useless for now.

If you're wondering what ritual that was, it was a ritual to increase resistance and improve regeneration. It increased resistance to blows, weapons, and spells. It also accelerated the healing of injuries.

The ingredients? Troll skin, troll bone, and a phoenix feather. Morgana created this ritual out of love for her son, the legendary Mordred, son of King Arthur. Truthfully, I didn't know her story in detail, but I knew that during the times she lived, the church burned wizards at the stake. They weren't safe times at all. I could feel a genuine concern for her son's health in her words.

So far, I had one ingredient—directly from Fawkes. A feather he gave me voluntarily and of his own accord. Could he perhaps see the future? Was it my destiny to perform this ritual?

More questions than answers. However, I decided to go for it. I already have the hardest part to obtain, and since I received the feather voluntarily, the ritual will be all the more powerful. All that's left is to hunt a troll. I was firmly determined.

"In the future, I'll be hard to kill," I thought to myself with satisfaction.

Vespera would also surely appreciate a ritual that would help keep me alive. I believe that in the summer, she won't have a problem going on a hunt with me. And the troll? Even if it's magically resistant and has tough skin, water gets everywhere. I'll simply drown it.

Finally, my birthday arrived. It was Saturday, and Vespera was due to arrive in half an hour. I had been ready for a long time after a relaxing bath, and honestly? I was pacing nervously in my room.

Sallow and Zabini watched me suspiciously from their beds, where they were cramming for some subject, while Theodore was wandering somewhere with Tobias and Agnes.

"Tempus!" I conjured the clock again. Only two minutes had passed.

"Goddammit, what is wrong with me? I shouldn't be this nervous. Is it puberty?" I thought angrily.

I immediately started my breathing ritual. Inhale for four seconds, hold for four seconds, exhale for four seconds. I repeated it about ten times. When my heart rate finally settled, I realized I still had the family watch buried in my trunk. I hadn't worn it since Christmas, which is why I had to keep casting Tempus like an idiot.

I pulled it out and strapped it to my left forearm. It looked truly majestic—a visually captivating piece, and its functionality was simply top-notch. Besides the standard time, it featured a magical stopwatch, a moon phase indicator, and the precise astral time of the planets. In short, it had everything a wizard needed for rituals, brewing complex potions, or alchemy.

For the more demanding rituals, it was essential to track lunar phases and the positions of the stars. Especially when it came to the darker ones that required absolute precision.

When the watch finally showed fifteen minutes until the meeting, I pulled the cage from under the bed, covered by an old robe. As soon as I yanked it off and stood up, Sallow spoke up: "Since when do you have a rat? You should have at least informed us! What if he damaged our things?!"

I didn't intend to waste time on him, so I just snapped back curtly and quickly: "I don't have one. And he hasn't damaged anything; he hasn't even moved from the cage. Today is the first and last time you'll see him."

Without further explanation, I headed out of the bedroom and hurried straight to the Great Hall.

I arrived a minute earlier than we were supposed to meet, but Vespera was already waiting for me. She sat poised, proudly straight, and elegant as always. She was surveying the Diggorys, who were sitting nearby, with a cold gaze. I headed straight for her. As soon as she noticed me, her look—which could freeze hell itself—melted into something like a gentle tropical island.

She stood up and hugged me tightly.

"I missed you, nephew. The castle is boring without you," she whispered to me with a smile.

"I missed you too, Aunt Vespera," I replied. As soon as she stepped back, I flicked my wand: "Muffliato!"

She looked at me in surprise, but from my serious expression, she immediately understood this was no joke.

"I need your help, Aunt," I said quietly.

She didn't wait a second and nodded gravely: "Anything, Patrik."

"I killed an older student," I spoke with a completely serious face. "How do I clear my wand of the history of used spells?"

Vespera didn't hesitate for a second. Without a hint of judgment or shock, she immediately began explaining: "You must cast ten spells, even the same one repeatedly. That will reliably cover all traces. Ten is a hard limit; even the most powerful wizard cannot conjure more. Five is the common limit. So, just to be safe, Patrik, clear your wand as soon as we say goodbye. Don't wait for anything."

She paused for a moment, clearly running complex calculations in her head, and then continued: "Who did you kill, what did you do with the body, and are there any witnesses? If it's an influential and powerful family, I'll need to contact my acquaintances at Durmstrang immediately."

"God, this woman is amazing," I thought, my heart burning with pure love for her.

"I'm joking, Auntie. I haven't killed anyone, but we still have a serious situation ahead of us," I replied with laughter in my voice. After a moment, I turned serious: "In the cage you see is an Animagus. He is responsible for the deaths of twelve Muggles and a wrongfully imprisoned wizard. It's Peter Pettigrew, a Death Eater. We need to get him to the Aurors, who will ensure Sirius Black is set free."

Vespera immediately fixed her eyes on the rat scurrying in the cage. He had visibly lost weight; a few days without food had clearly done him good. She immediately noticed his front paws, which were missing one joint.

"Are you sure about this, Patrik? Evan supported the Dark Lord, and many of us believe he is still among us somewhere. By taking this step, we would be going directly against him, which could have fatal consequences in the future," she warned me carefully.

"I am sure. The House of Black has always been our ally. We cannot let the head of their house rot in Azkaban because of one cowardly rat..."

"Are you really sure? You're exposing yourself to immense risk, and Black must be long insane after so many years in Azkaban."

"Yes, Aunt. I have no plan to bow to any wizard, and I'm willing to accept the risk of future consequences," I replied determinedly. After a moment, I had to ask: "Are you in this with me?"

"Don't ask such a stupid question. Of course, I am," she replied sharply with a stone face. After a moment of silence, she felt the need to add: "Even unto death, Patrik."

Even before I planned on catching Peter, I knew I could count on her. I was immensely glad I wasn't wrong.

"We need to get him to the Ministry, to someone who is incorruptible. From what I've learned, Amelia Bones could be the key to his release. She has a reputation for being a fair woman. Do you know her?"

"I know her family and her personally. Her grandparents fell in the fight against Grindelwald, and the rest of her family was slaughtered by the Dark Lord. We have more of a neutral relationship, but I believe she would receive me if I came to her with such a problem."

"Then I'll ask you to go to her and arrange a fair trial for Black. As far as I know, he didn't have one and they just threw him into Azkaban. If Fudge stops you, remind him that he can benefit from this in his future campaign. It will be another blow against Crouch, and at the same time, he can prove himself as a just leader of magical Britain. He just needs to hurry the trial along. The other pureblood families will surely appreciate it."

"I see you've thought this through," she said appreciatively. After a moment, she looked at me intently: "Is it really just about Black's innocence, or is there something else? Because if you're pursuing another goal, just say so. I'll try to help you."

"Honestly? I care about our house. The Blacks have long been our allies, and deep in my soul, I feel I should help him," I paused for a moment to gather my thoughts, then continued: "Also, not counting my father, who bowed to Voldemort, we're all alone. Sirius Black is practically family thanks to my mother, and at the same time, he's dark enough to actually be of help to us."

I cleared my throat slightly and immediately followed up: "Our family assets are currently tied to my father. If Voldemort were to suddenly return, it represents a huge risk for us. With the right approach, Sirius Black can be neutral, and access to his finances will remain open to us. And money means freedom. Also, since I'm half Black, I believe he wouldn't have a problem sharing family secrets."

There was silence for a moment, so I added: "Besides... it's the right thing to do. He was loyal to his friend and deserves something much better than death in Azkaban and the mockery of wizards who aren't fit to lace his boots."

"You blend our house's pragmatism and your mother's kindness in a strange way. But so be it, I will help you. From Hogwarts, I'll go directly to see Bones," she promised with a slight smile.

"Thank you, I appreciate it, Auntie."

"Don't mention it. And now, enough about the others," she waved her hand, definitively closing the Pettigrew topic. "How are you? How's the training going? And actually... happy twelfth birthday! I wish you much happiness, health, and love, Patrik. May everything you set your mind to come true, and we'll celebrate it properly together over the holidays! Anyway, here's your gift."

Vespera immediately relaxed. She launched a barrage of questions at me and then added a heartfelt greeting. She handed me a package in green paper with a silver ribbon—a classic Slytherin combination. Based on the shape, it was clear to me that it was a book.

"Can I unwrap this book in front of everyone?" I asked with a raised eyebrow.

My aunt wasn't the type to give children's fairy tales. I assumed the content would be dark enough that I wouldn't want to bring it to light in the middle of the Great Hall before the eyes of teachers and curious students.

"Of course, no problem. It's not a standard book sold in bookstores. I started preparing it as soon as you returned to Hogwarts. I've written down more demanding and powerful curses there—what they do, what they look like, how to cast them, and so on. I trust they'll be useful to you. I also added some shields and techniques, for example, how to defend against combat transfiguration. Simply put, there are curses and spells that I commonly use and that have helped me many times," she paused for a moment, then continued: "Naturally, you'll find black, white, and neutral magic in there. Since it's not a commercial copy, it's impossible to ban it," she concluded with a satisfied smile.

I didn't hesitate for another second and tore off the wrapping. I opened it eagerly—it was quite thick.

Right at the beginning, shields were described. I didn't read them in detail, but I quickly noticed Protego and its variations, even something named Aegis Aurum. Further on, I saw offensive curses like Reducto, Confringo (where the word "lethal" was underlined), and Bombarda and its stronger variants.

I skimmed the book only briefly, but I immediately knew that this was the perfect gift.

We talked for a few more minutes about small things—school, food, training, and my friends. Vespera boasted that a friend from Durmstrang was coming to visit her. I could see that she was genuinely looking forward to it, and though I was curious, I didn't want to pry into her privacy too much.

We said goodbye with a promise to write to each other regularly. She didn't forget to hug me tightly and promise to keep me informed of any news regarding Sirius Black. She also added that if necessary, she would contact Ranrok so we could involve our family lawyer in the whole process.

Finally, I headed to my usual classroom. I had an incredible urge for training—finally, I didn't have to be nervous because of that fucking rat.



Author's note:


So, thanks to Morgana, we've expanded our ritual lore while setting the stage for the next one. One thing that always bothered me in fanfiction is when a character performs a random ritual at a young age and suddenly becomes a demigod... it just never made sense to me. My take is a bit more grounded—logic still applies, even in magic. What do you guys think about this approach?

On another note, Vespera is proving once again why she's the ultimate "ride or die." She didn't even flinch at the mention of murder. A true Dark Witch and the best aunt anyone could ask for—she actually took the time to hand-write a book of powerful magic just for our MC!



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31. Water Whips and Secret Truths New
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I spent the rest of the day training, specifically focusing on water manipulation. While practicing the spell Os frangere—the Bone-Breaker—I realized that I was using magic too much like a butcher, when I needed to become a surgeon. I had already gained some precision while training common spells and hexes, but it hadn't yet reflected in my elemental magic.

Aside from drowning things and using brute force—where I simply swept away everything in my path with a wave—I had to learn how to conserve energy. At least as preparation for the future...

I could vividly imagine assassination attempts on my person. How do you kill a powerful mage, directly or indirectly? Plenty of indirect ways came to mind, but what if they wanted to take me out directly? They could just send waves of weak wizards. Someone wealthy would have no problem paying for them. Since there would be many of them, I'd be forced to sweep them away with brute force every time, which drains too much magic. So, how could I optimize energy output for elemental spells? And what if I encountered another powerful elementalist?

Borgin's book only contained the basics. I had to either get my hands on more advanced texts or invent my own techniques. And that was exactly what I was attempting.

"Aguamenti!"

I sent out a weaker stream of water, which formed into a water whip in a fraction of a second. It lashed violently against the opposite wall. There was a wet slap, followed by the cracking of stone and a dull thud. It had immense power, but the swing itself was still too slow. For actual combat, I definitely needed to speed it up.

"Aguamenti!" "Aguamenti!" "Aguamenti!"

By the end of the day, just before dinner, the speed of the whip was substantially higher, though it still wasn't ideal. In terms of pure impact, this spell was probably the strongest direct attack I currently had in my repertoire. It consumed less energy than Os frangere, and thanks to physics and dynamics, it had become a truly powerful weapon. I decided I would invest much more time into this technique.

I automatically tried to optimize the speed while developing other possibilities in my mind: "If I could cool the water instantly, it would turn into ice. What if I created a water dragon, let it petrify into ice mid-flight, and slammed it directly into the target?"

I recalled Hitsugaya from Bleach and his techniques.

A technique like that would be truly devastating. Hectoliters of water and ice would hold massive power, but the casting speed would have to be perfectly polished. I also had to think about the risks. What if I met an earth elementalist? They would be a direct counter to me. Flying using water would be inefficient, but what if I turned the water beneath me into an icy surface? I could fly through the air on ice platforms.

However, I was looking too far into the future; in terms of my actual current abilities, I was still just an amateur. But I certainly didn't compare myself to ordinary students. Power is freedom.

Just as I began to feel completely exhausted—both magically and mentally—I decided to end the session and headed for dinner.



With a feeling of immense satisfaction, I entered the Great Hall. Honestly, at that moment, absolutely nothing bothered me. Everything was going according to plan. My... friends, I guess? Yes, friends—were already sitting at the Slytherin table. I spent a lot of time with them, though I probably considered only Agnes a true friend.

With a smile, I sat down with them and immediately started piling food onto my plate. I skipped the meat today. Not that I planned on becoming a vegetarian; I just had a massive craving for sweets, and those pancakes looked divine. I immediately took a generous portion. There were bowls of maple syrup, chocolate, strawberries, and whipped cream on the table. Have I mentioned that I love the wizarding world? At least for the food, definitely.

As you can probably tell, I'm quite a "foodie." I'll have to invent a fat-burning potion sooner rather than later!

Theodore, Tobias, and Agnes were looking at me with surprise. I didn't blame them. Over the last few days, I had seemed nervous and chaotic, whereas now I was beaming with satisfaction, humming appreciatively with every bite. Agnes was used to me not talking while eating, but she clearly couldn't take it anymore.

"Okay, Patrik, spill it," she started right away. "What was up with you these last few days? I can see by your face that everything is perfectly fine now."

Theo immediately nodded in agreement, while Tobias continued to focus silently on his portion.

"Mm-hmm," I hummed with my mouth full, but I conceded that they deserved at least a brief explanation. I swallowed the bite, washed it down with plain water, and began to speak quietly.

"There was a dangerous Animagus hiding at Hogwarts, responsible for several lives. I figured him out and, with a little help from two other students, I captured him. I locked him in a cage, and today my aunt took him directly to the DMLE."

"Wait!" Theodore blurted out. "You had a dangerous wizard in our room? Sallow has been complaining non-stop in the common room for the last two hours! He was telling anyone willing to listen about some rat of yours!"

"Well, yes. I had nowhere else to put him. I don't really trust the teachers right now, and I wanted to make sure he got to the Ministry safely. Don't worry, he didn't have the slightest chance of escaping. That cage was a masterpiece."

He didn't look like that reassured him, but before he could respond, Agnes spoke up.

"Who was it? And how did you even find out that the rat was an Animagus?"

Before she could finish the question, I stuffed another piece of pancake into my mouth and chewed contentedly while Agnes shot me murderous glares. I intentionally dragged it out until she couldn't stand it.

"Patrik!" she shrieked and threateningly raised her fork. I didn't want it stuck in my hand, so I obediently swallowed and began to explain.

"Hmm... as for who it was, you'll find out very soon. I believe it'll be on the front page of the Prophet shortly. And how did I find him?" I asked, stretching out the answer a bit longer on purpose. I took a sip from my glass and finished with a satisfied smile: "That's a secret."

Agnes literally growled and waved her fork at me threateningly, but fortunately, she didn't actually dare to stab me with it.

"But why did you keep him in the room if he was a dangerous wizard? An Animagus, even! Not just anyone can do that. Why didn't you trust the teachers? I don't believe they wouldn't hand a criminal over to the Aurors. Dumbledore certainly would!" Theodore spoke up again.

"The point is exactly who that 'guilty' wizard rotting in Azkaban for life is. If it were anyone else, it wouldn't be a problem. But he's an important person with many enemies, and I wasn't going to take any risks. I know of at least two professors who wouldn't be thrilled if he were set free."

Maybe Dumbledore—so that Harry Potter would stay with the Dursleys and not pass under the protection of Sirius Black. Though I had probably already disrupted his stay with the Muggles with that echo-message to the police. Then there was Snape, whom Black had bullied in his youth. I wasn't going to risk his childhood bitterness burying Black's exoneration.

And what about the Malfoys? What if they were eyeing the Black family estate? They have no idea that, in terms of blood, I am in the same position as Draco. Or Crouch, who might want to cover up his own old failure in the case? He might not have as much power as he once did, but an old, experienced politician always has his contacts. Plus dozens of other families... It was simply too dangerous a situation.

"You could tell us, Patrik. No one will find out from us," Agnes pried. I could feel she was genuinely curious, so I didn't hold it against her.

"No, dear Agnes. You'll have to wait for the newspapers. There's still a high risk that something might go wrong. You'll know soon enough."

"Let it go, Agnes. It looks like he has big plans for that person in Azkaban," Theodore cut in. After a moment, however, he added with a frown: "But I don't like the fact that there was a dangerous wizard in our room at all! Next time, please let me know. At least so I know I'm in danger!"

"Mhm," Tobias agreed curtly.

"Anyway, what were you guys up to? I didn't see you in the classroom today," I brought up a new topic.

All three of them replied with a smile at the same time: "That's a secret!"

I confess, I quickly slipped into Agnes's mind. I saw that they were learning spells in a different room in the castle—presumably, they wanted to surprise me in our next duel.

"Hmm, and can you tell me something that isn't a secret?" I asked with a laugh.

"Next year, I'll have to start teaching Agnes Occlumency at the very least," I commanded myself mentally.

"Well, I was thinking," Tobias started cautiously. "That I might start learning how to heal. Honestly, I don't enjoy fighting that much, though I want to be able to defend myself."

He looked as if he expected me to dismiss him immediately. Of course, he was wrong. Every party needs its "healer." He's a valuable team member. In an MMO, I would be an extremely powerful tank and "carry," while Agnes and Theo would be lower DPS. Tobias as a healer would complete the lineup perfectly. In the real world, it was a great contact, so I supported him immediately.

"Excellent choice, Tobias. We can adapt your training to healing. We'll focus on defensive and neutral magic," I suggested without hesitation. "Do you need any help with that?"

He looked surprised, but after a moment, he smiled with relief: "No, no, I have everything. The foundation is biology and the Episkey spell. I can heal your bruises and injuries during training; it'll be good practice."

"I told you he wouldn't have a problem with it," Theo said, while Agnes nodded in agreement.

"I have no reason to have a problem with it; everyone's talent lies elsewhere... some are great at Potions like Draco, some at combat magic, some at runes and charms... others at transfiguration. The main thing is for everyone to improve in what they enjoy. And honestly? A healer is really useful to us. We already know almost all the common spells; so far we haven't used many spells that cause actual injuries, which is a mistake... real fighting hurts."

While Theo had no problem with that, I could see a slight worry about the future in Agnes. So, I decided to calm her down.

"Relax, Agnes. You're talented, and pain only hurts at the beginning. In time, thanks to the adrenaline, you won't even notice it."

It didn't seem like that calmed her much, though.

"How is it possible that you don't have a problem with pain? Who hurt you?" she paused for a moment, but immediately added: "Was it there?" I knew she meant the orphanage.

I couldn't tell her I was a grown man in a child's body. My mind was used to pain from a completely different life.

"It's not that anyone intentionally hurt me, but in the Muggle world, I did combat sports. They teach a person to accept pain as part of the game. It's completely normal and safe; you don't have to worry, Agnes."

Before Agnes could reply, an owl descended toward me. Without hesitation, it dropped an envelope into my lap and immediately, without waiting for a treat or rest, flew back into the night.

I immediately recognized our family crest. It was a message from Vespera. Without hesitation, I tore the envelope open and started reading.

The letter was brief but packed with information. I quickly scanned the lines:

Dear nephew,

The rat has been delivered. Bones received me neutrally. It was the right choice; she went to work immediately and the investigation has begun. She approved of your strategy and immediately called the Minister. He was persuaded and will use the Black case to consolidate his power and demonstrate the incompetence of the former administration. Expect news of Black's new trial and the discovery of Peter Pettigrew in the Daily Prophet soon.

By the way, Bones is interested in meeting you. She's curious about how you discovered his existence and how you captured him. She saw through me instantly—she knew it wasn't I who captured him, so I had to admit it was your work. Since she is someone I consider trustworthy, I had no problem with it, and I believe you can handle it. In case you find out when she's coming and need me, send me a message immediately and I will be there without hesitation!

With love, Vespera Rosier.


As soon as I finished reading the good news, a second owl arrived. It was curt, boring, and bland—I knew instantly that this was a bureaucratic owl. The envelope was adorned with a simple seal: a purple letter M and crossed wands. The symbol of the Ministry of Magic.

Without hesitation, I started reading:

Dear Mr. Rosier,

Expect me on Wednesday at 5:00 PM. We require additional information regarding the investigation of Peter Pettigrew, which your aunt was unable (or unwilling) to provide.

Sincerely, Amelia Bones Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement


I had no plan to write to Vespera. I could handle Bones myself without any issues. I would justify finding Pettigrew with magical sensitivity, which was essentially the truth—as a wizard, he radiated a completely different energy than ordinary owls or rats.

I could see that the others were burning with curiosity, but no one dared to pry after I had closed the subject. So we finished our meal in peace and headed to the common room. While they started a game of chess, I decided on a relaxing bath. Later, once in bed, I wanted to focus on Vespera's book in peace. I was immensely curious about everything she had written in it; the book was impressively thick.



I quickly flipped through the entire book. It contained spells from white, black, and neutral magic, supplemented with practical tips and tricks. There were guides on how to handle combat transfiguration, descriptions of various shields, and even legendary spells. Vespera had written it purely practically—no unnecessary theory. Just the effect, common usage, and specific situations where a given spell was more suitable than others.

She had even included Protego Diabolica and Fiendfyre.

While for Fiendfyre she provided the exact procedure, warnings, and theoretical usage scenarios, the instructions for Protego Diabolica were missing. She only noted that few wizards had ever managed to use it, the last being Gellert Grindelwald, who famously used it in Paris, which nearly burned down. It was an extraordinarily difficult spell; many wizards who attempted to cast it were consumed by their own flames.

The book further offered advice on how to destroy transfigured monsters, how to take control of them using Legilimency, or how to simply end the transfiguration.

The more I flipped through the book, the stronger the feeling grew that Vespera had put it together in a hurry. It felt like insurance in case something bad happened and she was no longer here to teach me these things personally. It was her way of ensuring my power in the future, even if she remained only a memory.

Immediately, I felt a dark, burning rage. If anything happened to her, I would slaughter entire responsible families down to the last member. I had no choice but to grow powerful as quickly as possible and become the shield of my house. Let everyone think twice before they dare to attack. I would have to deal with Gregor as soon as possible; clearly, he wasn't as simple an obstacle as I thought if Vespera had real concerns.

Perhaps she didn't want to burden me? Did she still see me as just a kid—capable, but a child nonetheless? Hmm…

With restless thoughts, I finally fell into a deep sleep.



Author's note:

I've always found it strange how Fudge is often portrayed in fanfiction as someone desperately trying to get rid of Black. Sirius's case didn't happen during his time in power, so any halfway decent politician would jump at the chance to use the situation to their advantage. It's the perfect opportunity to consolidate political power and demonstrate "Justice" while cleaning up a mess left by the previous administration.

Then we have Vespera. Even though she doesn't show it, she's clearly worried about the future, which is why she decided to prepare a proper grimoire for our MC. What do you think about her motives? And more importantly—do you think she'll survive the coming events, or is she destined for a fate straight out of a G.R.R. Martin novel? :D

Patrik has a meeting with Amelia Bones coming up soon. Things are about to get interesting.



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