So, yes. I'm writing a Worm SI.
This is going so well already.
Anyway, there's a list of...
This is going so well already.
Anyway, there's a list of...
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Presumably they used their ability to target the connection to the shard to effectively kill the Siberian, they're fundamentally disconnected from Manton though so he should still be fine and able to recreate her but the actual projection was likely just disconnected. The power they took doesn't have precedent of anything like this though and can be easily argued to be planet destroying depending on how you feel like deciding their undefined limits so it's possible it actually killed Manton or the power somehow.... how exactly did he take down Siberian?
Also, to do invisi-text, set 'color' to 'invisible'.
Presumably they used their ability to target the connection to the shard to effectively kill the Siberian, they're fundamentally disconnected from Manton though so he should still be fine and able to recreate her but the actual projection was likely just disconnected. The power they took doesn't have precedent of anything like this though and can be easily argued to be planet destroying depending on how you feel like deciding their undefined limits so it's possible it actually killed Manton or the power somehow.
Transparent is what I always used.
Invisible actually works?
EDIT: Setting text color to invisible seems to do nothing, I suggest using transparent instead as that did work as seen by the fact you can't see the text I made transparent.
... how exactly did he take down Siberian?
Also, to do invisi-text, set 'color' to 'invisible'.
Presumably they used their ability to target the connection to the shard to effectively kill the Siberian, they're fundamentally disconnected from Manton though so he should still be fine and able to recreate her but the actual projection was likely just disconnected. The power they took doesn't have precedent of anything like this though and can be easily argued to be planet destroying depending on how you feel like deciding their undefined limits so it's possible it actually killed Manton or the power somehow.
Transparent is what I always used.
Invisible actually works?
EDIT: Setting text color to invisible seems to do nothing, I suggest using transparent instead as that did work as seen by the fact you can't see the text I made transparent.
Not sure if you wanted to use that exact phrasing.
Wait, why does he need a cover story to buy groceries? Nobody should know he's with the Nine, who could have seen him fighting them? :-\The story we made up was that I had a microchip installed in my head, making me the deadliest butler in the world, and their first task was to make me follow a grocery list and buy stuffs on it, surprisingly mundane after I killed three of their members in like 5 minutes
Wait, why does he need a cover story to buy groceries? Nobody should know he's with the Nine, who could have seen him fighting them? :-\
Also I'm confused as to whether the members of the 9 he killed are still dead or not :-\
Dragon isn't from New Zealand, she's from the Canadian provence of Newfoundland.
Oh that reminds me.
Using "House" as shorthand/nickname for the Slaughterhouse 9 just seems weird to me. Just using Slaughterhouse or even S9 makes much more sense to me.
Considering you rewrote 1.2 you might consider changing it so it links from 1.1 and links to 1.3.
Just insert links then. Like, at the bottom of 1.1, put at link labeled "Revised 1.2", then link from the new 1.2 to 1.3.The threadmark system doesn't really work that way, I can't change it.
Flesh out
Flesh out
There're dense verb issues, particularly the use of "have" instead of "has" for singular nouns, all throughout.
Also, [.",] isn't a thing. It needs to be [,"]. [?",] should just be [?"]. This shit is just a matter of memorization, though there're few enough rules that learning after childhood is reasonable: http://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/
What?"Why is there fanart of me already!? Why is there r34 fanart of me and the Nine!?!? AND WHY ARE THEY SO FUCKING HIGH QUALITY!?!?!?" I screamed, clawing at my eyeballs.