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Along a Fading Path (Naruto/SI)[Quest Story]

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Leekz01, May 13, 2020.

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  1. Index: Synopsis
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    Synopsis: My Life as a newly Reincarnated "Sasuke Uchiha"

    Story started out as a Personalized Quest that my buddy NotSoLostGhost commission for me. The story was originally in second person, but I edited it to be first person.

     
  2. Index: How wish points work
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    (Si)Sasuke gains a "Wish Points" every year. Yue essentially crystallized my hopes and dreams, forming them inside her body and then consumes said hopes and dreams.

    The things that mater for cost are "scale" and "weight"

    The more people it'll effect, the more it costs.

    The bigger changes to the "natural order" of the world, the more it costs.

    So something like changing my eye colour would be really cheap. Something like changing everyone's eye color would be more expensive.

    But changing my Sharingan so that no one notices it costs more than that, because "naturally" that's one of the Sharingan's weaknesses.

    Esentially, the further my wish goes from Canon, the more it costs.


    Examples:

    Change How Mangekyo is activated - (5-10~ points)
    Remove Mangekyo downsides (10~20) points
    Make myself a Genius (15-20~) points
    Change Hair Color (1 Point)
    Summon a Car! (7 Points)
    Grow wings! (6 Points)
    Become A Tailed Beast! (40-100 points?)
    Gain like a sage of 6 path mode or something? (40-100 Points)
     
  3. Index: Stat Sheet (Prologue End)
    Leekz01

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    Name: Sasuke Uchiha
    Age 12 Years~

    Stats
    (10/11) Strength 5d6 (-1: Trait)
    (10) Dexterity 11/5d6 + 6d6 (Sharingan T1)
    (10) Agility 11/5d6 + 6d6 (Sharingan T1)
    (10) Charisma 5d6
    (12) Cunning 6d6
    (6) Luck 3d6
    (18) Soul 9d6 (+2: Trait)

    Injury Thresholds: 10/20/30/40
    +When total damage surpassed a threshold, you gain 1 Injury.
    +Reach max injuries and you begin to die.

    Chakra: [64] = +32 [Soul*2] + 10 [STR] + 10 [Dex] + 12 [Cun]

    Hit Roll: 8/14d6 = +4d6 (Agi) +6d6 (Sharingan) + 4d6 (Taijutsu/Interception Fist)

    STR DMG: 8 = (STR (8) x Unnarmed DMG Mod (1.2 + .3 (Hakkyokuken) )

    Skill Points: 0 | +2 / Year
    Wish Points: 0 | +1 / Year
    Money: 550 Ryo

    Clone (Normal) [1/10]: The basic art of making illusionary clones.
    +Chackra Cost: 4
    +1d6 to your next combat roll.

    Fireball [3/10]: The basic jutsu of your clan. "It burns!!!"
    +Chackra Cost: 20/40
    +4d6+2 + Soul DMG if it connects. Or 4d6 + Soul *1.1 DMG if charged

    Basic Genjutsu (Sound) [1/10]: A simple genjustu that produces a sound at your desired location. Limited to simple and rudimentary sounds at the moment.
    +Chackra Cost: 5
    +Cun/Soul DC: 10

    Substitution [3/10]: Move swiftly and replace yourself with a log.
    +Chackra Cost: 12
    +2d6+4 to your next dodge roll.

    Transformation [1/10]: Cover yourself in an illusion made of Chakra.
    +Chackra Cost: 20
    +1d6 to your next disguise roll.

    Sharpening [2/10]: Coat your weapon in Chakra, making the edge slightly sharper.
    +Chackra Cost: 13
    +Add +5 DMG to your weapon.

    Strengthening [3/10]: Coat your muscles in Chakra, making you slightly stronger.
    +Chackra Cost: 22
    +Temporarily gain +4 STR.
    Yue (Obsidian Crystal Gift): Supposedly, the fairy was born from your crystal?
    {Combat}

    Taijutsu [3/10]: The basic art of fighting with one's body. +3d6 to Combat rolls | 1.2 toward Unarmed DMG Mod.
    +Hakkyokuken [3/10]: A particular fighting style that focuses on striking power. +.4 to Unarmed DMG Mod. (Total = 1.6) (Naruko Knows This)
    +Intercepting Fist [5/15]: The Uchiha clan's fighting style. Excels when used with the Sharingan. +7d6 to combat rolls. Gains extra dice per 3 Tomoe. (+2d6 Already included in total)
    Throwing [4/10]: The basic art of lobbing pointy bits into other's bodies. You can hit slow-moving things! +4d6 to Combat rolls.
    One-Handed Swords [3/10]: How to use one-handed swords. +3d6 to combat rolls.



    {Utility}
    Stealth [3/10]: Ninja Vanish! +3d6 to rolls.
    Seduction [1/10]: Both male and female ninja make use of this skill. You made sure to ask your mom more about it. +1d6 to rolls.
    Meditation [1/10]: A calm mind is a sharp mind. Increases your resistance to mental attacks by +1d6


    {Life}
    Dancing [2/10]: Your mom's a really good dancer. You kinda want to try it out. +2d6 to rolls.
    Singing [2/10]: You've apperantly got a really good singing voice. Still, being called adorable by your mom's a bit humiliating... +2d6 to rolls.
    Cooking [1/10]: It doesn't hurt to pick up a few cooking skills here and there. +1d6 to rolls.
    Breathing [1/10]: A simple technique to calm yourself down. +2 to all non-combat rolls for the remainder of the day.
    Enduring Soul: All soul related rolls gain an extra +2!
    Sharingan (6/6 Tomoe):
    Your Sharingan has reached full maturity at the age of 6. Truly, others would consider you a prodigy if they knew. All that's left to do is train with it.
    +Chackra Cost: 8 Per Turn
    +Dex/Agi rolls gain 6d6!
    +Copy Cat +1: You can make a Soul or Cun Roll to try and memorize a Jutsu you've seen. This gain 1 bonus dice.
    +Chackra Cost +2: Lowers The cost of keeping the Sharingan active by 10%
    +Shift: You can decide whatever your Sharingan 'looks' like. This makes hiding them easy, as you can make them look like your normal eyes.

    Mangekyo Sharingan: A powered-up version of your eyes that has some special ability. Using it supposedly makes you blinder.
    +Image Gate: It seems you can forge manifestation of people you know a lot about? These shades can also use their abilities?
    +Tier 1 Shade Cost: 25 Chakra + 4/ Round.
    +Tier 2 Shade Cost: 50 Chakra + 5/ Round.


    The Price Of Power: Using the Mangekyo is not a good idea. It'll leave you blind.
    +[1/300]

    Chakra Nature: Everyone has one, though some have more.
    -???: You're not sure what your original one is.
    -Lightning (100%): You've got the hang of Lightning Element chakra. (Lighting Jutsu gain bonuses | Higher Tier Lightning Jutsu Can be Learned)
    -Fire (50%): Huh, fire really comes fast for you.

    Scarred: You've been through some hardships. The experience has left marks on your body and soul.
    +2 Soul!
    -1 STR

    Lady Killer: Amusingly enough, charm can be a real killer.
    +You deal 10% increased damage to females.
    +You also gain +5 to all speech rolls against females.

    Genius: You've wished to make yourself incredibly good at learning and picking up new things. Some might call it cheating, you call it being smart. Though, being a genius doesn't actually make you any wiser. It just means you can learn things much faster than others.
    +All training-related rolls gain a 2.5x Modifier.
    Yue: Your wish-granting fairy. She seems... odd, but nice.
    +Medium House Replica: A gift you gave her. He table-sized house she lives in. It has a pool!
    Itachi: Your 'big' brother. He's prety cool.
    Fugaku: Your stern, but kind father.
    Mikoto: Your mom. Love with a face.
    Naruko: Your friend? Why is she a girl?
    Saeko Uchiha? The name you chose if your new sibling is a sister!
    +2 Years old!

    Acquaintances
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    Mila: The leader of the cat contract.
    Jubei: Your partner for the cat contract.
    Family!
    -1 Action (Personal Phase) | This is after the school/free action thing. You usually have 2.
    +1 Extra SP per year.
    +1 Extra Stat Point Per Year
    +1 Jutsu Point Per Year
    +1 Life Skill Point Per Year
    +1 Technique Point Per Year
    Elite Smoke Bomb X1: Adds +50 to stealth rolls.

    Mugetsu: An "exotic" straight sword that's uncommon in the hands of ninja. Its edge is sharp and untested, but you can see the great potential it holds.
    +Adds Dex (10) or STR (10) to hit rolls (Highest)
    +Base DMG: 55
    +DMG Mod: 1.9
    Straight Sword Damage: [74] = +19 (Dex/STR x DMG Mod [x1.9] + 55 (Mugetsu Base DMG)
     
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